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【期中考點突破】專題09 書面表達15篇（含答案）--仁愛科普版 2024-2025學年八年級英語下學期專項復習訓練
1．每個人在生活中不可能事事順心，因此保持良好的心態顯得非常重要。請你根據表格提示，以“How to Stay in a Good Mood”為題，寫一篇短文，詞數80左右。
Why do we need to stay in a good mood Health
What can affect our moods Environment, weather
What should we do to stay in a good mood Sports, music
注意事項：
1. 必須包含所提示的信息，可適當發揮；
2. 意思清楚，表達通順，行文連貫，書寫規范；
3. 請勿在文中使用真實的姓名、校名及地名。
How to stay in a good mood
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2．武夷山是位于福建省的風景旅游區。假如你是李華。你的英國筆友Steve想知道你今年暑假的安排。請你根據以下圖示，給他寫一封回信，說說你暑假時打算前往武夷山的四天旅行計劃。詞數80左右。
Hope: … Plans: Day 1: arrive, 14:20, July, 22th; Day 2: Jiuqu River, boat on; Day 3: climb; the hills Day 4: leave, 9:45, July, 25th Mount Wuyi Location (位置): northwest, Fujian Transportation (交通): by train Cost: 2,000 yuan Preparations: book a room…
注意事項:1. 必須包含所有提示信息，可適當發揮，格式和開頭已給出，不計入總詞數；
2. 意思清楚，表達通順，行文連貫，書寫規范；
3. 請勿在文中使用真實的姓名、校名和地名。
Dear Steve,
As we all know, Mount Wuyi is a wonderful place to visit. Now I will tell you something about my trip plan to Mount Wuyi this summer vacation.
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Yours,
Li Hua
3．隨著疫情時代的結束，人們的旅游熱情高漲。假設你是李華，在寒假期間，你和你家人一起去了武夷山游玩。請根據下列表格的提示寫一篇短文介紹一下此次旅行的情況，可以適當發揮，字數80詞左右。
Before the trip the way of transportation (交通)
During the trip go mountain climbing take the bamboo raft (竹排) watch Impression Da Hong Pao Show (印象大紅袍) ...
After the trip feelings
In the winter holiday, I went on a two-day visit to Mount Wuyi for a holiday with my parents.
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4．假定你是李華，寒假期間你和家人一起去平潭游玩。請你結合以下圖示，用英語給筆友John寫一封信，分享此次旅游的經歷和感受。
要求：
1. 必須包含所有提示信息，可適當發揮；詞數80左右，開頭和結尾已給出，不計入總詞數；
2. 意思清楚，表達通順，行文連貫，書寫規范；
3. 請勿在文中出現真實姓名和學校名稱。
Dear John,
How are you doing I’d like to tell you something about my travel experiences.
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Yours,
Li Hua
5．讀萬卷書，行萬里路。年少的你一定有讓你記憶深刻的旅行經歷。請以“A Special Trip”為題，寫一篇短文。
要求：（1）圍繞題目要求展開寫作，可適當發揮。
（2）詞數：80詞左右。（注意：文中不能出現考生真實的姓名、校名和老師名，否則不得分
A Special Trip
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6．假如你校英文?？陂_展“Travelling”的主題征文活動。請你根據下面提示，用英語寫一篇短文投稿，談談你難忘的(unforgettable)一次旅行經歷和你對旅行的看法。
注意：
1. 語句通順，條理清晰，適當發揮，書寫規范；
2. 詞數90左右，文中不得出現真實姓名、校名和地名等。
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7．請從下面描述心情的詞中選擇一個，以“I Feel ______ These Days”為題，寫一篇小短文。
寫作要求：
1. 可選詞匯為: lonely, upset, happy, unhappy, angry, disappointed, excited, frightened, worried
2. 意思連貫、通順，詞數在80—90之間；
3. 適當發揮，注意寫出為什么、怎么樣以及后來怎么樣等。
I Feel ______ These Days
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8．為了進一步增強中學生的安全意識，提高自我保護能力，某校開展了以“安全”為主題的英語演講比賽，請你根據以下要點提示，寫一篇演講稿。
1、慎重交友； 2、遇險報警；3、安全飲食；4、其他（1—2點）
注意：1. 內容必須包括所給的全部要點，可以適當發揮；
2. 表達清楚，語句通順，意思連貫，書寫規范；
3.詞數80左右，文章開頭已給出，不記入總詞數。
參考詞匯：be careful, online, danger, call... for, healthily and safely
How to Keep Safe
As teenagers, we should always keep safe in mind. But how can we keep safe
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9．良好的情緒是保持身心健康的重要因素。一個人情緒的好壞決定著他的生活質量。請你根據以下要求，用英語寫一篇發言稿，向同學們分享保持良好情緒的方法。
寫作要求:
1.分析部分學生在校情緒差的原因；
2.給出保持良好情緒的方法；
3.文中不得出現考生的真實姓名和學校名稱:
4.詞數100左右（開頭和結尾已給出, 不計入總詞數）。
Dear schoolmates,
I’m honored to share some of my ways to keep in good moods with you.
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That’s all. Thank you.
10．旅行是一種學習和體驗，能給我們帶來身心的愉悅。
學校?？⒄Z專欄以“Travel”為主題舉辦了一場征文比賽。請你根據下面的圖示信息，用英語寫一篇短文，向專欄投稿。
注意：（1）文中須包含上圖提示的所有信息，可適當發揮。
（2）文中不得出現真實的地名、校名和人名。
（3）詞數80個左右（開頭已給出，不計入總詞數）。
Travel
Travelling ten thousand miles is as good as reading ten thousand books. Travel is good for us in many ways.
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11．假如你是李華，一年一度的端午節即將來臨，你校打算針對交換生推出一期中國傳統美食欄目，請你寫一篇短文投稿，介紹制作粽子的方法并弘揚中國美食文化。
提示：
（1）材料：大米，粽葉 (reed leaves) ，紅棗 (red dates) ，蜂蜜，糖；
（2）步驟：洗凈所有食材；將大米和紅棗放入粽葉中，加一些糖；把粽葉折疊 (fold) 好；然后放入鍋里，烹調約一小時；根據需要加一些蜂蜜。
提示詞：first, ingredient, put, pot, add注意事項：
（1）必須包含提示里所有內容，可適當發揮；
（2）不少于80詞，開頭已給出，不計入總詞數。
I would like to introduce a kind of traditional Chinese food to you. As exchange students, you may not know how to make zongzi.
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12．假如你是李華，你打算在即將到來的“五一”假期和家人去杭州旅游。請根據導圖提示，向你的筆友Jack寫封信介紹你的旅行計劃。
注意事項：
1. 必須包含思維導圖所列要點，并適當發揮，使內容充實，行文連貫；
2. 字跡工整，語言精練，表達準確，條理清晰；
3. 要求 80 詞左右，開頭已給出，不計入總詞數。
Lingyin Temple：靈隱寺
Dear Jack,
I’m very happy because May Day is coming.
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13．提示：在你所有的旅行中，總有一次讓你最難以忘懷。請以“An unforgettable trip”為題，用英語寫一篇短文，介紹你最難忘的一次旅行。
1.你去了哪里旅行；
2.你都做了些什么；
3.你有什么感受。
要求:
1.語言流暢、書寫規范、卷面整潔，詞數不少于80個；
2.文中不得使用真實姓名、校名，否則以零分計。
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14．一場有意義的旅行不僅可以開闊我們的眼界，還能讓我們收獲良多。請以An Unforgettable Trip為題，記錄一次令你難忘的旅行經歷。
要求：
1. 語言流暢，書寫規范，卷面整潔，可適當發揮，詞數不少于80；
2. 文中不得使用真實姓名、校名，否則以零分記。
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15．你決定做她的向導，和她一起從上海出發去北京旅行。請你根據以下表格內容及要求，用英語給Sally寫一封郵件，向她介紹這次出行的安排。
Travel plan
Time 4月27號到29號
Way to travel 坐火車 (需要4個小時左右)
What to take ……
What to do 游覽名勝古跡；品嘗美食……
Hotel 標間 (有空調、免費的早餐) ￥328一晚
Feeling ……
寫作要求：
1.語句通順，意思連貫，語法正確，書寫工整；
2.內容包含所有提示要點，可適當發揮；
3.80詞左右 (開頭和結尾已給出，不計入總詞數)。
Dear Sally,
I’m glad that we are going on a three-day visit to Beijing. To have a wonderful trip, I’ve made a travel plan for us. Now let me tell you something about it.
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Yours,
Li Hua
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《【期中考點突破】專題09 書面表達15篇（含答案）--仁愛科普版 2024-2025學年八年級英語下學期專項復習訓練》參考答案
1．例文
How to Stay in a Good Mood
As we know, everyone can’t be happy all the time. If we are always in a bad mood, we may become sick. So it is important for us to stay in a good mood. But many things round us can affect our feelings, such as the environment, colors or weather. What should we do to stay in a good mood Here are my opinions.
First, listening to music can make us relaxed. Second, don’t keep silent. If we have some problems, we can tell our friends, parents or teachers. They will help us deal with them. Third, doing sports will let us forget something unhappy.
In a word, it’s necessary for us to stay in a good mood.
【詳解】[總體分析]
①題材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②時態：時態以“一般現在時”為主，“一般將來時”為輔；
③提示：寫作要點已通過表格給出，考生寫作時需涵蓋需要保持好心情的原因、影響心情的因素、保持好心情的做法等要點，根據實際情況可適當添加細節，并突出寫作重點。
[寫作步驟]
第一步，開頭點題，說明保持好心情對健康的重要性，引出影響心情的因素；
第二步，針對如何保持好心情，從聽音樂、傾訴、做運動等方面給出具體建議；
第三步，書寫結語，總結強調保持好心情的必要性。
[亮點詞匯]
①all the time 一直
②be/stay in a good mood 保持好心情
③keep silent 保持沉默
④deal with 處理
⑤in a word 總之
[高分句型]
①If we are always in a bad mood, we may become sick. (if引導的條件狀語從句 )
②So it is important for us to stay in a good mood. (含有It特殊句式：It’s+形容詞+for sb.+to do sth. )
2．例文：
Dear Steve,
As we all know, Mount Wuyi is a wonderful place to visit. Now I will tell you something about my trip plan to Mount Wuyi this summer vacation.
I plan to have a four-day visit to Mount Wuyi. Mount Wuyi is in the northwest of Fujian. So, I decide to go there by train. The whole trip may cost me about 2,000 yuan. Before I go there, I should book a room first. And I’ll take a hat and a camera of course. I plan to arrive there at 14:20 on July, 22th. On the second day, I’m going to go boating on Jiuqu River. It must be interesting. The next day, I’ll go to climb the hills. And I plan to leave there at 9:45 on July, 25th.
I hope I can have an exciting trip. And what’s your plan for your summer vacation
Looking forward to your early reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
【詳解】［總體分析］
①題材：本文是一篇書信作文；
②時態：本文的時態“一般將來時”和“一般現在時”；
③提示：注意要點已給出，注意要點銜接自然，順暢。
［寫作步驟］
第一步，向好友介紹自己的計劃目的點是武夷山；
第二步，詳細介紹自己的旅行計劃；
第三步，表達期待并詢問好友如何度假。
［亮點詞匯］
① a four-day visit 一次四天的參觀
② decide to do sth決定做某事
③ looking forward to期待
［高分句型］
①Before I go there, I should book a room first.（時間狀語從句）
② I hope I can have an exciting trip.（賓語從句）
3．例文：
In the winter holiday, I went on a 2-day visit to Mount Wuyi for a holiday with my parents.
It is located in the north of Fujian Province, China. We planned to take the train for this trip because high-speed rail is very convenient and fast now.
On the first day, we went mountain climbing. When we reached the top of the mountain, we ccould see the whole picture of Mount Wuyi, which is very beautiful. The next day, we took the bamboo raft at Jiuqu Creek. It was very exciting and fun. In the evening, we also watched the live show of Impression Da Hong Pao. It takes Mount Wuyi tea culture as its theme.
The two-day trip quickly came to an end. Although I felt a bit tired, I had a great time and gained a lot.
【詳解】[總體分析]
①題材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②時態：時態為“一般過去時”；
③提示：以李華的身份，根據表格提示寫一篇短文，介紹一下此次去武夷山游玩的情況，可適當發揮，寫作中注意動詞過去式的變化。
[寫作步驟]
第一步，借用文章已給開頭，點明主題；
第二步，詳細介紹旅行中的行程安排以及交通；
第三步，表達旅行后的感受。
[亮點詞匯]
①locate in位于
②the whole picture of ……的全貌
③come to an end結束
[高分句型]
①We planned to take the train for this trip because high-speed rail is very convenient and fast now. (because引導的原因狀語從句)
②When we reached the top of the mountain, we can see the whole picture of Mount Wuyi, which is very beautiful. (when引導的時間狀語從句)
4．例文：
Dear John,
How are you doing I’d like to tell you something about my travel experiences.
On February 15th, my family and I took a train to Pingtan, a beautiful island in Fujian Province. On the first day, we had a picnic by the sea and saw the magical “blue tears” at night. The next day, we went cycling along the coast. The breathtaking views made me feel relaxed and happy.
I truly enjoyed the trip.
Yours,
Li Hua
【詳解】[總體分析]
①題材：本文是一封書信，分享旅游經歷；
②時態：以“一般過去時”為主，描述已完成的旅行活動；
③提示：需包含圖中所有關鍵信息 (時間、地點、活動、感受)，適當擴展細節。
[寫作步驟]
第一步：問候+表明意圖。用開頭句自然引出主題；
第二步：按時間順序敘述。清晰交代行程 (首日野餐/藍眼淚，次日騎行)；
第三步：總結感受。簡短表達對旅行的喜愛。
[亮點詞匯]
①take a train to... 乘坐火車前往
②have a picnic 野餐
③magical “blue tears” 神奇的“藍眼淚”
④go cycling 騎行
⑤breathtaking views 令人驚嘆的景色
[高分句型]
①On February 15th, my family and I took a train to Pingtan, a beautiful island in Fujian Province. (同位語結構a beautiful island...補充說明Pingtan)
②The breathtaking views made me feel relaxed and happy. (make sb. do sth. 結構+形容詞并列作補語)
5．范文：
A Special Trip
Last summer, I went to Dalian with my family. I have never been there before. I was very excited. We began our trip first from the sea park. We saw many different kinds of fishes there. We also saw a dolphin show. Then we went to the beach, and we all enjoyed ourselves on the beach. However, one of the most unforgettable things was that we had sea food. It was very delicious. By the way, during this trip, we took a lot of photos. We had a good time there. I really want to travel there again.
【詳解】[總體分析]
① 題材：本文是一篇記敘文，講述一次難忘的旅行經歷。
② 時態：時態為“一般過去時”，描述的是已經發生的事件。
③ 提示：寫作時結合個人的真實旅行經歷進行描述，強調旅行的亮點和感受，注意細節描寫。
[寫作步驟]
第一步，簡要介紹旅行的時間和目的地，引起讀者的興趣；
第二步，具體敘述旅行中遇到的景點和活動，特別是最難忘的部分；
第三步，表達自己從這次旅行中獲得的感受或收獲，表達自己對旅行的喜愛或期待。
[亮點詞匯]
① different kinds of 不同種類的
② dolphin show 海豚表演
③ by the way 順便說一下
④ a lot of 許多
⑤ enjoyed oneself 玩得開心
[高分句型]
However, one of the most unforgettable things was that we had seafood. (表語從句)
6．例文
I like travelling very much.
So far, I have travelled to Beijing, Hong Kong, New York and many other places. But my favouriate place is Hong Kong, which is an international modern city with many beautiful places of interest. We can enjoy delicious food there. Last summer, we visited Hong Kong Disneyland. We watched a parade of Disney characters there and I couldn’t stop taking photos with them. I had a good time there. What an unforgettable experience!
Travelling is really a good way to open our minds and learn more about the world.
【詳解】[總體分析]
①題材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②時態：時態主要為“一般現在時”和“一般過去時”；
③提示：寫作要點已給出，注意不要遺漏要點，可適當添加細節，并突出寫作重點。
[寫作步驟]
第一步，表明寫作意圖，介紹自己去過的地方；
第二步，具體介紹自己難忘的一次旅行經歷以及感受；
第三步，表達自己對旅行的觀點。
[亮點詞匯]
①places of interest名勝古跡
②take photos拍照
③have a good time玩得開心
[高分句型]
But my favouriate place is Hong Kong, which is an international modern city with many beautiful places of interest.（which引導的非限制性定語從句）
7．參考例文:
I Feel Unhappy These Days
Last Sunday, Lin Tao and I went to the gym. When we did exercise, I fell down on the ground. I got hurt so badly that we couldn’t go on exercising. So we had to go back. Because I was hurt, I couldn’t walk, and we had to take a bus. When I got off the bus, I fell down once again. Oh, my God! In the end, I had to go to the hospital. The doctor told me that I must stay in bed for three days. My classmates came to visit me, and they brought me some flowers. They also helped me with my study. Their coming pleased me, and now I am feeling much better.
【詳解】[總體分析]
①題材：本文是一篇記敘文，為話題作文；
②時態：時態為“一般過去時”；
③提示：介紹這段時間的心情如何，并說明為什么會這樣；注意闡述清楚導致該心情的事件發生的原因、過程和結果；注意適當發揮，突出寫作重點。
[寫作步驟]
第一步，補全標題；
第二步，具體介紹導致這一心情的事件，發生的原因、過程和結果。
[亮點詞匯]
①fall down 摔倒
②go on 繼續
③get off 下車
④stay in bed 躺在床上
[高分句型]
①I got hurt so badly that we couldn’t go on exercising.（so ... that引導的結果狀語從句）
②The doctor told me that I must stay in bed for three days. （賓語從句）
8．例文
How to Keep Safe
As teenagers, we should always keep safe in mind. But how can we keep safe Here are some of my suggestions.
First, we should be careful when we make friends, especially online. Second, if we are in danger, we must call the police for help in time so that we can keep ourselves safe. Also, we ought to eat healthily and safely. Eating food that goes bad will do harm to our health. Last but not least, summer is coming, and we must remember it’s dangerous to swim in the river. In short, safety must come first!
【詳解】[總體分析]
①題材：本文是一篇應用文，為講稿；
②時態：時態為“一般現在時”；
③提示：寫作要點已經給出，考生注意不要遺漏要點；注意適當發揮，突出寫作重點。
[寫作步驟]
第一步，總述安全的重要性，并提起下文；
第二步，結合要點提示，介紹中學生應如何保證自己的安全；
第三步，總結全文。
[亮點詞匯]
①make friends 交友
②in danger 處于危險中
③in time 及時
④do harm to 對……有害
[高分句型]
①Second, if we are in danger, we must call the police for help in time so that we can keep ourselves safe.（so that引導目的狀語從句）
②Last but not least, summer is coming, and we must remember it’s dangerous to swim in the river.（賓語從句）
9．例文
Dear schoolmates,
I’m honored to share some of my ways to keep in good moods with you.
As we all know, it’s important for us to have good moods. But some students always have bad moods in school. Some students couldn’t make friends with others and they feel lonely. Some students often do badly in their tests. They feel sad. All of these make them in bad moods.
I have three suggestions for this. First, exercise and relax every day. You can do sports about an hour every day to relax yourself. Second, eat healthy food and have a good sleep. An apple a day keeps the doctors away. You should eat vegetables and fruits everyday. Remember not to stay up late. Last but not least, don’t keep silent. Talk with your friends, parents or teachers often. Tell them about what you think and how you feel. I hope these suggestions can help you.
That’s all.Thank you.
【詳解】［總體分析］
①題材：本文是一篇發言稿；
②時態：時態為“一般現在時”；
③提示：寫作要點已給出，考生應注意不要遺漏題目要求中每一項內容，適當添加細節，并突出寫作重點。
［寫作步驟］
第一步，表明寫作意圖。開門見山介紹本文主題是保持良好情緒的方法；
第二步，具體分析部分學生在校情緒差的原因；
第三步，給出保持良好情緒的方法。
［亮點詞匯］
①make friends交朋友
②Last but not least最后但同樣重要的
［高分句型］
①I hope these suggestions can help you.（賓語從句）
② Remember not to stay up late.（祈使句）
10．One Possible Version:
Travel
Travelling ten thousand miles is as good as reading ten thousand books. Travel is good for us in many ways.
First, by travelling we can see many places with our own eyes. We can enjoy the beauty of nature and learn the customs in different areas. Second, travel will not only help us to get knowledge of geography, history and so on but also help us get relaxed and keep healthy. What’s more, we will meet people with different interests and see different things when we travel. We can communicate with them, enjoy different foods and local tastes if we like. In this way, we’ll learn how differently people live in other areas.
So dear guys, let’s go travelling and learn more about the world!
【詳解】[總體分析]
①題材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②時態：時態以“一般現在時”為主；
③提示：寫作要點已經給出，考生注意不要遺漏要點；注意適當發揮，突出寫作重點。
[寫作步驟]
第一步，總述旅行在很多方面對我們有益；
第二步，具體介紹旅行帶來的好處；
第三步，號召大家去旅行、了解這個世界。
[亮點詞匯]
①be good for 對……有好處
②and so on 等等
③keep healthy 保持健康
④communicate with sb. 與某人交流
[高分句型]
①Second, travel will not only help us to get knowledge of geography, history and so on but also help us get relaxed and keep healthy.（not only ... but also引導的并列句）
②We can communicate with them, enjoy different foods and local tastes if we like.（if引導的條件句）
11．例文
I would like to introduce a kind of traditional Chinese food to you. As exchange students, you may not know how to make zongzi.
To make this special food, we need to have rice, reed leaves, red dates, honey and sugar. First, wash all the ingredients carefully. Next, put the rice and red dates into the reed leaves and add some sugar lightly. Then fold the leaves well. After that, put them into the pot slowly and cook for about an hour. Finally, add some honey if you like.
Chinese food is popular all over the world. You are welcome to taste more delicious Chinese food. I believe you will enjoy it.
【詳解】[總體分析]
①題材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②時態：時態為“一般現在時”；
③提示：寫作要點已給出，注意不要遺漏要點，可適當添加細節，并突出寫作重點。
[寫作步驟]
第一步，引出“如何制作粽子”的話題；
第二步，介紹制造粽子的材料和步驟；
第三步，書寫結語，總結全文。
[亮點詞匯]
①ingredient材料
②popular受歡迎的
③all over the world全世界
[高分句型]
①To make this special food, we need to have rice, reed leaves, red dates, honey and sugar. (to do不定式作目的狀語)
②I believe you will enjoy it. (賓語從句)
12．例文
Dear Jack,
I’m very happy because May Day is coming. I’m going to travel to Hangzhou with my family. We’ll go there by plane. I will stay at Rua Jia Hotel and plan to spend three days in Hangzhou.
First, we will visit Lingyin Temple on the first day. I think it will be very interesting. We are going to the West Lake the next day. I can’t wait to see this beautiful lake. It is very famous, and many poets wrote poems here. On the third day we are going to taste the food of Hangzhou. Then we’re going to go shopping. Finally in the evening we will go home.
Yours,
Li Hua
【詳解】[總體分析]
① 題材：本文是一篇書信作文；
② 時態：時態為“一般將來時”；
③ 提示：寫作要點已給出，注意不要遺漏“信息提示”中每一項內容，適當添加細節，并突出寫作重點。
[寫作步驟]
第一步，整體介紹自己要去杭州旅行；
第二步，介紹自己和家人如何去、住在哪里以及玩幾天；
第三步，最后具體介紹在杭州要做什么。
[亮點詞匯]
① plan to do sth計劃做某事
② can’t wait to do sth迫不及待做某事
③ go shopping購物
[高分句型]
I think it will be very interesting.（賓語從句）
13．例文：
An Unforgettable Trip to China
My most unforgettable trip was to the beautiful city of Beijing, China.
I visited the wonderful Forbidden City and Summer Palace, climbed the Great Wall, and walked through Tiananmen Square. What’s more, I watched the raising of the national flag in the early morning. The food in Beijing was also amazing. I liked delicious Peking duck and lamb hotpot.
My trip to Beijing was an unforgettable experience that I will cherish for a lifetime. It was a journey that not only filled my eyes with wonder but also touched my heart.
【詳解】[總體分析]
①題材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②時態：時態為“一般過去時”；
③提示：寫作要點已給出，考生應注意不要遺漏信息提示的內容，適當增加細節，并且突出寫作的要點。
[寫作步驟]
第一步，表明寫作意圖。直接說明要介紹一次難忘的旅行；
第二步，具體闡述寫作內容。重點介紹去了哪里旅行和做了什么；
第三步，談談自己的感受。
[亮點詞匯]
①the raising of the national flag國旗的升起
②cherish珍視
③fill充滿
[高分句型]
①My trip to Beijing was an unforgettable experience that I will cherish for a lifetime. (定語從句)
14．例文
An Unforgettable Trip
I like taking trips to different places and I used to pay attention to the scenery. But one unforgettable trip changed me.
One month ago, I went climbing with my friends. On the way up to the top, we met two old men. We decided to go together. They were experts in plants and they told us what each plant was along the way and something interesting about some plants. It was quite fun. They also told us their experiences of going to different places to do research when they were young. We admired them so much.
The experience told me trips were not only about enjoying the scenery, but also knowing something more about nature and other people’s life stories.
【詳解】[總體分析]
①題材：本文是一篇話題作文；
②時態：時態為“一般過去時”；
③提示：根據所給話題完成寫作，不能遺漏信息，可適當發揮，確保語句通順。
[寫作步驟]
第一步，整體說明自己有一個難忘的旅行；
第二步，具體介紹旅行過程；
第三步，最后表達感受。
[亮點詞匯]
①used to do sth過去常常做某事
②decide to do sth決定做某事
③not only...but also...不但……而且……
[高分句型]
We decided to go together. They were experts in plants and they told us what each plant was along the way and something interesting about some plants.（賓語從句）
15．例文：
Dear Sally,
I’m glad that we are going on a three-day visit to Beijing. To have a wonderful trip, I’ve made a travel plan for us. Now let me tell you something about it.
Our trip is from April 27th to 29th. You just need to bring your daily necessities. It will take us about four hours to get there by train. We will visit many places of interest, such as the Great Wall, the Forbidden City, the Summer Palace, and so on. We will also enjoy some local delicious food. I’ll show you around Beijing hutongs because you are interested in Beijing culture. I have booked a standard room online with air-conditioning. It includes breakfast and costs 328 yuan per night.
I hope we can have a pleasant trip.
Yours,
Li Hua
【詳解】[總體分析]
①題材：本文是一封電子郵件；
②時態：時態以“一般將來時”為主；
③提示：材料表格所給內容不得遺漏，可適當增加細節；注意郵件格式。
[寫作步驟]
第一步，借用文章已給開頭，寫明郵件意圖；
第二步，闡述旅行計劃詳情；
第三步，書寫結語，表達期望。
[亮點詞匯]
①place of interest名勝
②show sb. around帶某人參觀
③such as例如
④have a pleasant trip旅途愉快
[高分句型]
①I’ll show you around Beijing hutongs because you are interested in Beijing culture.（原因狀語從句）
②I hope we can have a pleasant trip.（賓語從句）
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