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專題01 邀請信+求助信+投訴信（講義）原卷版
目錄
01考情透視·目標導航 2
02知識導圖·思維引航 3
03核心精講·題型突破 4
題型一 邀請信 4
【真題研析】 4
【核心精講】 7
【命題預測】 8
題型二 求助信 11
【真題研析】 11
【核心精講】 13
【命題預測】 14
題型三 投訴信 17
【真題研析】 17
【核心精講】 18
【命題預測】 19
重難點突破 “盼望你的回復”一句多譯 22
考點要求 目標要求 考題統計 考情分析
邀請信 能夠使用適當的語言和表達方式來寫邀請信。 2022年新課標卷，給外教Caroline寫郵件邀請她做一次校廣播站英語節目訪談 2022年北京卷，邀請英國好友Jim為你們班做一次英語寫作的線上經驗交流 2022年6月天津卷，校圖書館新開設“小組學習室”邀請留學生同學Michael體驗 2020年1月浙江卷，發一封郵件邀請英國朋友參加George外國學生中文演講比賽 2019年全國III卷，寫一封郵件邀請你的英國朋友Allen參加你校將舉辦音樂節 一、邀請對象為英語外籍教師，英美國家好友或者學校外籍交換生； 二、內容緊貼生活，貼近時代，貼近學生； 三、命題形式上更加開放，以提綱式為主。 四、最近五年頻繁考查，應重點備考。
求助信 能夠使用適當語言和表達方式寫求助信。 2020年全國III卷，給外教Miss Evans寫郵件請她幫忙指導根據課文改編的短劇 2016年全國I卷，給外教Ms Jenkins 寫信請她幫你修改所附材料的文字和格式 一、每隔幾年會考查一次，應該引起重視； 二、注意求助別人語氣要客氣委婉真誠。
投訴信 能夠使用適當語言和表達方式寫投訴信。 2008年湖北卷，購買一部外國公司生產的手機，因有質量問題，要求該公司更換 一、高考考查頻率不高，屬于了解類型； 二、注意三段式結構，體現投訴者意愿訴求。
一句 多譯 多元選擇提升單句表達效果。 盼望你的回復。 從簡單到復雜，從基礎到高級，深入淺出，舉一反三，好學易用。
題型一 邀請信
一、高考考情
目錄 內容提要
2022年新課標卷 給外教Caroline寫郵件邀請她做一次校廣播站英語節目訪談
2022年北京卷 邀請英國好友Jim為你們班做一次英語寫作的線上經驗交流
2022年6月天津卷 校圖書館新開設“小組學習室”邀請留學生同學Michael體驗
2020年1月浙江卷 發一封郵件邀請英國朋友參加George外國學生中文演講比賽
2019年全國III卷 寫一封郵件邀請你的英國朋友Allen參加你校將舉辦音樂節
2017年全國I卷 發郵件邀請外教Henry參觀中國剪紙(paper-cutting)藝術展
2015年全國II卷 邀請外教和同學去敬老院(nursing home)陪老人們過重陽節
二、高考考向
邀請信分為兩種：一種是個人信函，如邀請某人參加觀看展覽、電影、出席典禮等。另一種屬于事務信函，如邀請參加會議、學術活動等。寫作時語氣應真摯熱情，在信件的結尾都應表示出希望對方參加或出席的愿望。
三、高考真題
1. ( 2022·新課標卷)假定你是校廣播站英語節目“Talk and Talk”的負責人李華，請給外教Caroline寫郵件邀請她做一次訪談。內容包括：
1. 節目介紹；
2. 訪談的時間和話題。
注意：
1. 寫作詞數應為80左右；
2. 請按如下格式在答題卡的相應位置作答。
Dear Caroline,
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
2. (2022·北京卷)假設你是紅星中學高三學生李華。你打算邀請英國好友Jim為你們班做一次關于英語寫作的線上經驗交流。請你用英文給他寫一封電子郵件，內容包括：
1．建議交流的具體內容及其原因；
2．交流時間和其他相關事項。
注意：1．詞數100左右；
2．開頭和結尾已給出，不計入總詞數。
3. (2022·浙江6月卷)假定你是李華，你校圖書館新開設“小組學習室”，請你給你的留學生同學Michael寫一封信，邀請他一同體驗，內容包括：
1.位置與開放時間； 2.室內設施和功能。
注意：1. 詞數80左右；
2. 可適當增加細節，以使行文連貫。
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4. (2022·天津卷)假設你是晨光中學英語口語社的成員李津。為招募新成員，口語社請你用英語為社團納新活動錄制一段短視頻。請按照以下提示，撰寫視頻的文字稿：
1.向同學們發出入社邀請；
2.介紹口語社的主要活動(如英語演講比賽、觀看英語電影等活動)；
3.分享本人入社以來的收獲。
注意：1.詞數不少于100；
2.可適當加入細節，使內容充實、行文連貫。
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5. (2019·全國III卷)假定你是李華，你校將舉辦音樂節。請寫封郵件邀請你的英國朋友Allen參加，內容包括：
1. 時間；
2. 活動安排；
3. 歡迎他表演節目。
注意：
1. 詞數100左右；
2. 可以適當增加細節，以使行文連貫。
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高考英語邀請信滿分技巧
一、用三段式結構
首段先自我介紹（用于陌生人）或問候對方（用于熟悉人），再開門見山表達邀請這一寫作意圖。
次段清楚地表達邀請的目的和原因，讓對方明白為何被邀請以及參加活動的具體安排。句子之間應有恰當的過渡詞或邏輯信號詞，使文章讀起來連貫、有條理。
尾段照應主題，如果收到邀請，應盡快回復，表明是否出席。如果無法參加，應提前告知并說明原因，表現出誠意。
二、表達熱情真誠
邀請信的語言應該熱情、友好，體現出對對方的尊重和期待，使用恰當的稱呼和結束語，避免使用生硬的表達。
三、提升表達效果
使用恰當的詞匯和句式 ：注意詞匯的準確性和句式的多樣性，使文章表達更加豐富和流暢。文章結構應有邏輯性，句子之間應有恰當的過渡詞或邏輯信號詞，使文章讀起來連貫、有條理。
一、邀請信首段金句：①問候語/②自我介紹+③寫信意圖
1. Hi, Jack, how is everything going 嗨，杰克，一切都好嗎？
2. I'm Li Hua, chairman of the Student Union of Xinhua Middle school. 我是新華中學學生會主席李華。
3. I'm Li Hua, a Senior Three student, who is in charge of the paper-cutting club in our school. 我是李華，一名高三學生，是我們學校剪紙俱樂部的負責人。
4. Knowing with delight that you are interested in Chinese traditional culture, I'm writing to invite you to participate in a paper-cutting art exhibition. 得知你對中國傳統文化感興趣，我寫信邀請你參加一個剪紙藝術展。
5. There's a live concert this Saturday evening at Xinhua Concert Hall, so I'm sincerely writing to invite you to go with me on behalf of our whole family. 本周六晚上新華音樂廳有一場現場音樂會，所以我代表全家真誠地寫信邀請你一起去。
二、邀請信中段金句：①活動內容+②邀請原因+③注意事項
1. The details concerning the English Speech Cometition are as follows. 關于英語演講比賽的詳細信息如下。
2. The following is the detailed information with regard to this activity. 以下是關于這項活動的詳細信息。
3. I wonder if it is convenient for you to deliver a lecture in the lecture hall at 3:00 pm. 我想知道你下午3點在演講廳演講是否方便。
4. The lecture is due to start at 9:00 am on the playground and last for two hours, from 3 pm to 5 pm. 講座將于上午9:00在操場開始，持續兩個小時，從下午3點到5點。
5. If you are interested in table tennis, please sign up for our school team by July 20th.如果你對乒乓球感興趣，請在7 月 20 日前報名參加我們的校隊。
三、邀請信尾段金句：①照應主題表示感謝+②期待回復
1. We’d be very grateful if you could let me know whether to participate by September 25. 如果您能在9月25日前告訴我是否參加，我們將不勝感激。
2. I’d appreciate it if you could confirm your participation at your early convenience. 如果你能盡早確認參加，我將不勝感激。
3. I sincerely hope that you will accept our invitation if it is convenient for you. 如果方便的話，我衷心希望您能接受我們的邀請。
4. Our whole family and I would feel much honored if you could come.如果你能來，我們全家都將感到不勝榮幸。
5. Your early reply would be highly appreciated. Thank you in advance! 你的盡早回復不勝感激。提前謝謝您！
考向1 邀請參加自然文化研學活動
（24-25高三上·甘肅酒泉·期中）假定你是李華，你班下周末將組織一次以“來北京看中國”(See China in Beijing)為主題的自然文化研學活動，為期一天。請你用英文寫一封信邀請你校國際部交換生Jim來參加活動。內容包括：
1.寫信目的；
2.活動時間、地點、活動安排；
3.期盼得到回復。
注意：
1.詞數80左右；
2.可適當增加細節，以使行文連貫。
參考詞匯：natural cultural study tour(n.)：自然文化研學活動
Dear Jim,
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Yours,
Li Hua
考向2 邀請參加肢體語言重要性講座
（24-25高三上·吉林長春·期中）假定你是李華，你校下周五將舉辦一場主題為“The importance of body language”的講座。請你給交換生Alex寫一封郵件，邀請他參加，內容包括：
1.講座的時間和地點；
2.講座的內容；
3.發出邀請。
注意：
1.寫作詞數應為80個左右；
2.請按如下格式在答題卡的相應位置作答。
Dear Alex,
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Yours,
Li Hua
考向3 邀請參加機器人設計比賽
（24-25高三上·河南·階段練習）假定你是李華，你校機器人俱樂部即將舉辦機器人設計比賽。請你給筆友Peter寫封郵件，邀請他參加競賽。內容包括：
1. 寫信目的；
2. 活動時間、地點、內容、意義等。
注意：
1. 詞數80左右；
2. 可適當增加細節，以使行文連貫。
Dear Peter,
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Yours,
Li Hua
考向4 邀請參加文化歷史展
（24-25高三上·重慶沙坪壩·階段練習）假定你是李華，下個月國慶節市博物館將舉辦一場文化歷史展，請給你校的英國留學生 Alex 寫一封郵件邀請他一起觀展，內容包括：
1. 活動內容、時間；
2. 活動意義；
3. 邀請一同觀展。
注意：
1. 寫作詞數應為80個左右；
2. 請按如下格式在答題卡的相應位置作答。
Dear Alex,
_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
考向5 邀請參加我心目中的中國征文大賽
（24-25高三上·河南·階段練習）假定你是李華，你校正在籌備“China in My Eyes”征文大賽，請你邀請英國交換生Wiliam參加此活動，要點如下：
1. 投稿時間；
2. 內容要求；
3. 誠邀參加。
注意：
1. 寫作詞數應為80左右；
2. 請按如下格式在答題卡的相應位置作答。
Dear William,
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Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
題型二 求助信
一、高考考情
目錄 內容提要
2020年全國III卷 給外教Miss Evans寫郵件請她幫忙指導根據課文改編的短劇
2016年全國I卷 給外教Ms Jenkins 寫信請她幫你修改所附材料的文字和格式
2013年全國II卷 給開網店的美國朋友Tom寫一封信請他代賣自制的中國結
2011年全國卷 在英國學習暑期課程遇到困難向學校輔導中心求助書面預約
二、高考考向
求助信是當個人遇到一些自己無法解決的問題或困難時請求別人幫助所寫的信件。高考的求助信包括請求幫忙修改作品、解決學習問題等。寫信人希望收信人能提供幫助或者解決方案，所以語言要簡明扼要，符合說話人的身份；語氣要真誠委婉，不能強人所難。
三、高考真題
1.（2020年全國III卷）假定你是李華，你和同學根據英語課文改編了一個短劇。給外教Miss Evans寫封郵件，請她幫忙指導。郵件內容包括：
1. 劇情簡介；
2. 指導內容；
3. 商定時間地點。
注意：1. 詞數80左右；
2. 可以適當的增加細節，以使行文連貫。
Dear Miss Evans,
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Yours ,
Li Hua
2.（2016年全國I卷）假定你是李華，暑假想去一家外資公司兼職，已寫好申請書和個人簡歷(resume)。給外教 Ms. Jenkins寫信，請她幫你修改所附兩份材料的語言和格式(format)。內容包括：
1.寫信目的；
2.求助內容；
3.表示感謝。
注意：
1.寫作詞數應為80左右；
2.開頭與結尾已給出，不計入總詞數。
Dear Ms. Jenkins,
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3.（2013年全國II卷）假定你是李華，自制了一些中國結。給開網店的美國朋友Tom寫封信，請他代賣，要包括：
1.外觀（尺寸，顏色，材料）；
2.象征意義；
3.價格
注意：1.100詞左右；2.可以適當增加細節，以使行文連貫，3.開頭為你寫好
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4．（2011年全國卷）假定你是李華，正在一所英國學校學習暑期課程，遇到一些困難，希望得到學校輔導中心(Learning Center)的幫助。根據學校規定，你需書面預約，請按下列要點寫一封信：
1.本人簡介；
2.求助內容；
3.約定時間；
4.你的聯系方式 (Email: lihua@1236 com; Phone: 12345678)。
注意：1.詞數80左右。
2.可以適當增加細節，以使行文連貫。
Dear Sir/Madam:
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Yours,
Li Hua
高考英語求助信滿分技巧
一、用三段式結構
首段先自我介紹（用于陌生人）或問候對方（用于熟悉人），再開門見山表達求助這一寫作意圖。
次段清楚地表達求助的內容（分條陳述）和原因，讓對方明白為何被求助以及活動的具體要求。句子之間應有恰當的過渡詞或邏輯信號詞，使文章讀起來連貫、有條理。
尾段照應主題，如果收到，應盡快回復，表明是否愿意。如果無法參加，應提前告知并說明原因，表現出誠意。
二、表達真誠友好
求助信的語言應該真誠、友好，體現出對對方的信任和期待，使用恰當的稱呼和結束語，避免使用生硬的表達。
三、提升表達效果
使用恰當的詞匯和句式 ：注意詞匯的準確性和句式的多樣性，使文章表達更加豐富和流暢。文章結構應有邏輯性，句子之間應有恰當的過渡詞或邏輯信號詞，使文章讀起來連貫、有條理。
一、求助信首段金句：介紹自己，表明寫作意圖，提出請求。
1. I'm Li Hua, a Chinese student taking a summer course in your university. 我叫李華，是一名在貴校修暑期課程的中國學生。
2. I’m sorry to trouble you but I do have some problems and I badly need your guidance. 很抱歉打擾你，但我確實有一些問題，我非常需要你的指導。
3. I would feel obliged if you could do me the favor of finding my camera left in your hotel. 如果您能幫我找到我留在酒店的相機，我將不勝感激。
4. I was wondering if you could spare some time for removing the following doubts from me. 我想知道你是否能抽出一些時間來消除我的以下疑慮。
5. I’m writing to you in the hope that you could do me a special favor and polish the application letter up for me. 我寫信給你，希望你能幫我一個特別的忙，幫我把申請信潤色一下。
二、求助信次段金句：詳述提出請求的原因及內容。
1. On arriving home, it struck me that I had left my English dictionary at your house. 到家時，我突然想到我把英語詞典忘在你家了。
2. But I have some trouble with note-taking and I have no idea how to use the library. 但我記筆記有點困難，我不知道如何使用圖書館。
3.The dictionary means a lot to me as it is a precious gift from my American teacher on my 18th birthday. 這本詞典對我來說意義重大，因為它是我18歲生日時美國老師送給我的珍貴禮物。
4. Will you be kind enough to offer me some advice on how to learn English words by heart more efficiently 你能給我一些關于如何更有效地背英語單詞的建議嗎？
5. It won’t be better if you can look through my resume for some possible mistakes and polish them up for me. 如果你能瀏覽我的簡歷，找出一些可能的錯誤，并為我潤色一下，那就更好。
三、求助信尾段金句：表示感謝、期盼對方早日回復。
1. I would appreciate it if you could offer me a hand. 如果你能幫我一把，我將不勝感激。
2. If you need further information, please feel free to inform me. 如果您需要更多信息，請隨時通知我。
3. Thanks for your kind consideration and I look forward to your earliest reply. 感謝您的善意考慮，我期待著您的盡早回復。
4. I would be highly grateful if you could find back my csuitcase and mail it to me. 如果您能找到我的簡歷并郵寄給我，我將不勝感激。
5. Your early response and warm-hearted assistance would be highly appreciated. 非常感謝您的及時回應和熱心協助。
考向1 求助航空公司尋找遺失行李
（2024·重慶·二模）假設你是李華，去紐約旅游，從機場乘一輛黃色的出租車去假日飯店(Holiday Inn)，到達酒店后發現遺失了一件行李箱。在失物招領處，工作人員要求你用英文寫一份書面材料。
內容包括：
1.行李遺失的過程；
2.行李箱的概況；
3.聯系電話: 1-703-3543269。
注意：1. 字數80左右。2.文章中不能出現個人真實信息。
Dear Sir/Madam,
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
考向2 求助外籍心理教師解決壓力和睡眠問題
（2024高三下·全國·專題練習）假定你是高三學生李華，最近你遇到了一些學習壓力問題和睡眠問題導致無法集中精力學習。于是你給你校的外籍心理老師 Bob寫一封求助信尋求幫助。要點如下：
1.存在的問題；
2.希望得到幫助；
3.表示感謝。
注意：1.詞數80左右；
2.可以適當增加細節，以使行文連貫。
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
考向3 求助大學解決學費和生活費
（24-25高三上·重慶·階段練習）假如你是李華，是新加坡國立大學（NUS）的一名國際交換生，因最近家庭經濟狀況出現變故，現無法承擔全部的學費（tuition）和生活費用，因此你決定給輔導員Paul Black寫一封求助信。內容包括：
1.個人情況；
2.求助內容。
注意：1.寫作詞數應為80左右；
2.可適當增加細節，使行文連貫。
Dear Mr. Black,
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
考向4 求助外籍教師潤色修改稿件
（24-25高三上·云南大理·階段練習）假設你是李華，是你校英文報“中國傳統文化”欄目的負責人。你寫了一篇介紹中國功夫（Chinese kung fu）的英文宣傳稿。請給你的外教老師Mr. Roger寫一封電子郵件，請他幫助修改、潤色你的稿件。內容包括：
1. 寫信事由；
2. 求助內容；
3. 表達感謝。
注意：1. 詞數80 左右；
2. 可適當增加細節，以使行文連貫；
3. 請按如下格式在答題卡的相應位置作答。
Dear Mr. Roger,
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
考向5 求助交換生指導英文歌曲大賽
（23-24高三下·內蒙古赤峰·期中）假定你是李華,你準備參加學校舉辦的英文歌曲大賽。請給你班交換生Anna寫一封郵件,請她給予指導。內容包括:
1. 說明比賽要求；
2.請她推薦歌曲；
3.請求陪同練習。
注意:
1.詞數80左右；
2.可以適當增加細節,以使行行文連貫。
Dear Anna ,
______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
題型三 投訴信
一、高考考情
目錄 內容提要
2008年湖北卷 購買一部外國公司生產的手機，因質量問題要求該公司更換
二、高考考向
投訴信是向有關部門反映所購買的某種商品或某項服務/環境不能達到要求，以期望對方退換或向對方索賠。投訴信一般包括以下要點：寫信目的、反映問題、提出解決方案、期待解決。其措辭要客氣，但語氣要堅定，這樣才能達到投訴效果。
三、高考真題
（2008湖北卷）假設你是卜曼宜，你購買了一部某外國公司生產的手機，因有質量問題，要求該公司更換。請根據下列要點，用英文寫一封電子郵件。
要點：
1. 問題：手機不響鈴，不能發短信；該產品已售完，無法更換；型號新，無配件，無法維修。
2. 要求：公司應盡快予以更換。
　　注意：1. 詞數為100左右；
　　2. 參考詞匯：配件-- spare part;
　　3. 電子郵件的開頭和結尾已為你寫好（不計入你所寫詞數）
或
高考英語投訴信滿分技巧
一、用三段式結構
首段先自我介紹，再開門見山表達投訴某一產品、糟糕服務等寫作意圖。
次段清楚地表達投訴產品、服務等發生的時間、地點以及所存在的諸多問題。句子之間應有恰當的過渡詞或邏輯信號詞，使文章讀起來連貫、有條理。
尾段照應主題，希望重視投訴盡快給予回復。同時，給對方提出完善整改建議或要求退款等。
二、表達熱情真誠
投訴信的語言應該禮貌、客氣，體現出對對方的尊重和期待，同時有禮有節，不夸大不虛假，實事求是陳述事情的經過、存在的問題或受到的不公正待遇等。
三、提升表達效果
使用恰當的詞匯和句式 ：注意詞匯的準確性和句式的多樣性，使文章表達更加豐富和流暢。文章結構應有邏輯性，句子之間應有恰當的過渡詞或邏輯信號詞，使文章讀起來連貫、有條理。
一、投訴信首段金句：首段開門見山表明投訴意圖
1. My name is Li Hua, a regular customer of your website. 我叫李華，是貴公司網站的常客。
2. I’m a Chinese passenger who took your Flight NYZ369 from Beijing to London on August 8. 我是一名中國乘客，于8月8日乘坐貴公司NYZ369航班從北京飛往倫敦。
3. Here I am writing to complain about the shoes I bought last week. 我寫信來投訴我上周買的鞋子。
4. This letter is a complaint concerning the actions of one of your salespersons. 這封信是投訴你們一位銷售人員的行為。
5. I feel bad to trouble you but I am afraid that I have to make a complaint about the cellphone. 很抱歉打擾你，但恐怕我得投訴一下手機。
二、投訴信次段金句：分條陳述投訴內容和事實
1. In the first place, the cellphone powers off at least twice a week. 首先，手機每周至少關機兩次。
2. When I opened the parcel, I was disappointed to discover the front coverwas damaged. 當我打開包裹時，我失望地發現封面損壞了。
3. Surprisingly, it was not until two weeks later that the book was delivered to me. 令人驚訝的是，直到兩周后，這本書才投遞給我。
4. He said since it was an old model, it was impossible to fix it without the right spare parts. 他說由于這是一款舊車型，沒有合適的備件是不可能修好的。
5. The last straw was that several pages of the newly published book were missing. 最讓我受不了的是這本新出版的書缺少了幾頁。
三、投訴信尾段金句：表明自己的訴求或要求（退款、賠償、道歉等）
1. Unless you give back my money within three days, I intend to take further action. 除非你在三天內把錢還給我，否則我打算采取進一步行動。
2. So I demand that you should apologize to me, for your mistake, preferably compensating for my loss. 所以我要求你為你的錯誤向我道歉，最好是賠償我的損失。
3. This incident indicates there is still room for improvement concerning your customer service. 這一事件表明，您的客戶服務仍有改進的空間。
4. I believe you will take my case seriously and I am looking forward to your positive reply. 我相信你會認真對待我的案件，我期待著你的積極答復。
5. Thank you for your consideration and your early reply would be highly appreciated. 感謝您的考慮，如能早日回復，我們將不勝感激。
考向1 投訴網購電子詞典筆
（24-25高三上·河南南陽·階段練習）假定你是李華，你發現上周網購的電子詞典筆(electronic dictionary pen)有問題，請給客戶服務中心寫一封電子郵件進行投訴，要點如下：
1.進行投訴；
2.說明問題；
3.說明解決方案
注意：1.詞數 80 左右；
2.可適當增加細節，以使行文連貫。
Dear Sir/Madam,
I am Li Hua, a devoted customer of your online store.
__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
考向2 投訴航空公司行李問題
（24-25高三下·四川德陽·階段練習）假定你是李華，乘飛機從北京到倫敦旅行，到達目的地取行李時發現行李箱破損，部分物品丟失。你與相關人員交涉無果，于是給該航空公司寫一封投訴信。內容主要包括：
1.說明個人相關信息(航線/航班：MMYZ577/時間：August 28)：
2.反映情況；
3.希望盡快解決。
注意：
1. 詞數約為 80 字左右;
2. 可以適當增加細節，以使行文連貫。
Dear sir or madam,
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
考向3 投訴博物館收藏書籍英文介紹錯誤
（24-25高三上·河北石家莊·階段練習）假定你是李華，在美國某博物館參觀時，購買了一本介紹該館所收藏文物的書籍，閱讀后發現書中對一些中國文物(artifacts)的英文介紹有誤。請你就此向博物館寫一封信，內容包括：
1. 投訴問題；
2. 提出建議。
注意：
1.詞數 80 左右；
2. 可以適當增加細節，以使行文連貫。
Dear Sir or Madam,
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
考向4 投訴網購圖書問題
（2025·廣東江門·模擬預測）假設你是李華，兩周前你網購了一套叢書，昨天才到貨，還存在其他問題，請就此向網店客服寫郵件投訴。要點如下：
1. 陳述寫信目的；
2. 投訴內容；
3. 提出你的要求。
注意:
1. 詞數80詞左右；
2. 可適當增加細節，使行文連貫；
3. 開頭結尾已給出，不計入總詞數。
Dear sir or madam,
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
考向5 投訴網購圖書問題
（24-25高三上·安徽合肥·期中）假定你是李華，在某海外購物網站上訂購了一款智能手表作為新年禮物送給母親，但是收貨之后出現了一些問題，請你給該網站客服寫一封郵件，內容包括：
1. 投訴內容；
2. 你的訴求。
注意：1. 寫作詞數應為80左右；2. 開頭和結尾已給出，不計入總詞數。
Dear Sir or Madam
I’m writing to express my dissatisfaction with the smartwatch I recently purchased from your online store.
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
重難點突破 “盼望你的回復”一句多譯
1.期待您的回復。
2.熱切期待您的及時回復。
3.期待盡快與您進一步討論。
4.我真誠地期待著你出席演講比賽。
5.如果您能及時回復我的信，我們將不勝感激。
6.如果你能盡快回復我，我將不勝感激。
7.如果您能及時關注這封信，我們將不勝感激。
8.如果你能早點給我一個積極的反饋，我將不勝感激。
9.如果您能考慮我的邀請，我將不勝感激。
10.如果您能在方便的時候盡早回復我，我們將不勝感激。
21世紀教育網(www.21cnjy.com)專題01 邀請信+求助信+投訴信（講義）解析版
目錄
01考情透視·目標導航 2
02知識導圖·思維引航 3
03核心精講·題型突破 4
題型一 邀請信 4
【真題研析】 4
【核心精講】 10
【命題預測】 11
題型二 求助信 19
【真題研析】 19
【核心精講】 25
【命題預測】 26
題型三 投訴信 33
【真題研析】 33
【核心精講】 34
【命題預測】 36
重難點突破 “盼望你的回復”一句多譯 43
考點要求 目標要求 考題統計 考情分析
邀請信 能夠使用適當的語言和表達方式來寫邀請信。 2022年新課標卷，給外教Caroline寫郵件邀請她做一次校廣播站英語節目訪談 2022年北京卷，邀請英國好友Jim為你們班做一次英語寫作的線上經驗交流 2022年6月天津卷，校圖書館新開設“小組學習室”邀請留學生同學Michael體驗 2020年1月浙江卷，發一封郵件邀請英國朋友參加George外國學生中文演講比賽 2019年全國III卷，寫一封郵件邀請你的英國朋友Allen參加你校將舉辦音樂節 一、邀請對象為英語外籍教師，英美國家好友或者學校外籍交換生； 二、內容緊貼生活，貼近時代，貼近學生； 三、命題形式上更加開放，以提綱式為主。 四、最近五年頻繁考查，應重點備考。
求助信 能夠使用適當語言和表達方式寫求助信。 2020年全國III卷，給外教Miss Evans寫郵件請她幫忙指導根據課文改編的短劇 2016年全國I卷，給外教Ms Jenkins 寫信請她幫你修改所附材料的文字和格式 一、每隔幾年會考查一次，應該引起重視； 二、注意求助別人語氣要客氣委婉真誠。
投訴信 能夠使用適當語言和表達方式寫投訴信。 2008年湖北卷，購買一部外國公司生產的手機，因有質量問題，要求該公司更換 一、高考考查頻率不高，屬于了解類型； 二、注意三段式結構，體現投訴者意愿訴求。
一句 多譯 多元選擇提升單句表達效果。 盼望你的回復。 從簡單到復雜，從基礎到高級，深入淺出，舉一反三，好學易用。
題型一 邀請信
一、高考考情
目錄 內容提要
2022年新課標卷 給外教Caroline寫郵件邀請她做一次校廣播站英語節目訪談
2022年北京卷 邀請英國好友Jim為你們班做一次英語寫作的線上經驗交流
2022年6月天津卷 校圖書館新開設“小組學習室”邀請留學生同學Michael體驗
2020年1月浙江卷 發一封郵件邀請英國朋友參加George外國學生中文演講比賽
2019年全國III卷 寫一封郵件邀請你的英國朋友Allen參加你校將舉辦音樂節
2017年全國I卷 發郵件邀請外教Henry參觀中國剪紙(paper-cutting)藝術展
2015年全國II卷 邀請外教和同學去敬老院(nursing home)陪老人們過重陽節
二、高考考向
邀請信分為兩種：一種是個人信函，如邀請某人參加觀看展覽、電影、出席典禮等。另一種屬于事務信函，如邀請參加會議、學術活動等。寫作時語氣應真摯熱情，在信件的結尾都應表示出希望對方參加或出席的愿望。
三、高考真題
1. ( 2022·新課標卷)假定你是校廣播站英語節目“Talk and Talk”的負責人李華，請給外教Caroline寫郵件邀請她做一次訪談。內容包括：
1. 節目介紹；
2. 訪談的時間和話題。
注意：
1. 寫作詞數應為80左右；
2. 請按如下格式在答題卡的相應位置作答。
Dear Caroline,
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【滿分范文】
Dear Caroline,
This is my first time that I have invited you to attend our program —Talk and Talk. It is ten years since Talk and Talk was established. This is an amazing program where you can share your ideas with students.
Now, when having trouble in learning English well, plenty of students urge to know how to deal with it. As our distinguished foreign language teacher, your aid can help us a lot. If you are available on this Sunday, I together with the whole Talk and Talk staff am waiting for your coming.
I’d appreciate it if you take my invitation into consideration.
Yours,
Li Hua
【解題導語】本篇書面表達屬于應用文，假定你是校廣播站“Talk and Talk”的負責人李華，請給外教Caroline寫郵件邀請她做一次訪談。
【思路詳解】1.詞匯積累
建立：establish→set up
了不起的：amazing→fabulous
幫助：aid→assistance
許多：plenty of→a lot of
2.句式拓展
簡單句變復合句
原句：As our distinguished foreign language teacher, your aid can help us a lot.
拓展句：You are our distinguished foreign language teacher, whose aid can help us a lot.
【點睛】[高分句型1]This is an amazing program where you can share your ideas with students.(運用了where引導的限制性定語從句)
[高分句型2]Now, when having trouble in learning English well, plenty of students urge to know how to deal with it.(運用了狀語從句的省略)
2. (2022·北京卷)假設你是紅星中學高三學生李華。你打算邀請英國好友Jim為你們班做一次關于英語寫作的線上經驗交流。請你用英文給他寫一封電子郵件，內容包括：
1．建議交流的具體內容及其原因；
2．交流時間和其他相關事項。
注意：1．詞數100左右；
2．開頭和結尾已給出，不計入總詞數。
【滿分范文】
Dear Jim,
How’s everything I’m writing to invite you to give us an online talk on English writing. Our classmates seem to be weak in organisation. Would you please give us some suggestions on how to connect sentences logically, how to develop a paragraph, and how to structure an essay
The talk will last about an hour, and you can decide on a date at your convenience. Please let me know which platform you’ll use. It would be great if we could have a 10-minute question and answer session at the end of your talk.
Looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
【導語】本篇書面表達屬于應用文。要求考生寫一份電子郵件，邀請英國好友Jim為班級做一次關于英語寫作的線上經驗交流
【詳解】1.詞匯積累
最近好嗎：How’s everything → How’s it going
提供、給予：give → offer / provide
不擅長：be weak in → be bad at / be poor in
建議：suggestion → advice
2.句式拓展
簡單句變復合句
原句：I’m writing to invite you to give us an online talk on English writing.
拓展句：I’m writing to ask if it is convenient for you to offer us an online talk on English writing.
【點睛】【高分句型1】Would you please give us some suggestions on how to connect sentences logically, how to develop a paragraph, and how to structure an essay (運用了疑問詞+不定式作賓語)
【高分句型2】It would be great if we could have a 10-minute question and answer session at the end of your talk.(運用了if引導的條件狀語從句)
3. (2022·浙江6月卷)假定你是李華，你校圖書館新開設“小組學習室”，請你給你的留學生同學Michael寫一封信，邀請他一同體驗，內容包括：
1.位置與開放時間； 2.室內設施和功能。
注意：1. 詞數80左右；
2. 可適當增加細節，以使行文連貫。
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【滿分范文】
Dear Michael,
Good news! Recently, a newly-furnished section, consisting of eight Group Learning Rooms, has been open to us students in our school library.
Located on the third floor beside the online reading rooms, it can be accessible from 8 am till 9 pm throughout the weekdays. Those rooms are equipped with modern electronic facilities, all of which are linked to the Internet. It’s really convenient for us to do some group projects. Why not ask our group members to go and experience it
Early reply and we can reserve one room for our project.
Yours,
Li Hua
【導語】本篇書面表達屬于應用文，假定考生是李華，你校圖書館新開設“小組學習室”，請你給你的留學生同學Michael寫一封信，邀請他一同體驗。
【詳解】1. 詞匯積累
由……組成：consist of→ be made up of
位于：be located on→ be situated on
與……相連接： be linked to →be connected to
預定：reserve→book
2. 句式拓展
合并簡單句
原句：Recently, a newly-furnished section, consisting of eight Group Learning Rooms, has been open to us students in our school library.
拓展句：Recently, a newly-furnished section, which consists of eight Group Learning Rooms, has been open to us students in our school library.
【點睛】[高分句型1] Those rooms are equipped with modern electronic facilities, all of which are linked to the Internet.（of which引導的非限制性定語從句）
[高分句型2] Located on the third floor beside the online reading rooms, it can be accessible from 8 am till 9 pm throughout the weekdays.（過去分詞作狀語）
4. (2022·天津卷)假設你是晨光中學英語口語社的成員李津。為招募新成員，口語社請你用英語為社團納新活動錄制一段短視頻。請按照以下提示，撰寫視頻的文字稿：
1.向同學們發出入社邀請；
2.介紹口語社的主要活動(如英語演講比賽、觀看英語電影等活動)；
3.分享本人入社以來的收獲。
注意：1.詞數不少于100；
2.可適當加入細節，使內容充實、行文連貫。
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【滿分范文】
Hello, everyone! I’m Li Jin, a member of the Spoken English Club of our school. I’m here to invite you to join us. This will be a good chance for all English lovers.
The club offers various interesting activities. We can participate in English speech contests, watch classic English movies, sing English songs and attend inspiring lectures. All of them help to stimulate our interest in learning English and make our school life much more enjoyable.
The club activities have benefited me a lot. I have not only improved my spoken English, but also made a lot of friends. Now, it’s your turn to join us. We are looking forward to having you in the club!
【解析】
【導語】本篇書面表達屬于應用文。要求考生為英語口語社的納新視頻寫一段文字稿，向同學們發出邀請，并介紹口語社的主要活動，分享入社以來的收獲。
【詳解】1.詞匯積累
機會：chance →opportunity
參加：participate in →take part in →join in
愉快的：enjoyable →joyful
激發：stimulate →motivate →activate
2.句式拓展
簡單句變復合句
原句：The club activities have benefited me a lot.
拓展句：The club activities which I have joined in have benefited me a lot.
【點睛】【高分句型1】We are looking forward to having you in the club!（運用了動名詞作賓語）
【高分句型2】I have not only improved my spoken English, but also made a lot of friends.
（運用了not only…but also…連接并列結構）
5. (2019·全國III卷)假定你是李華，你校將舉辦音樂節。請寫封郵件邀請你的英國朋友Allen參加，內容包括：
1. 時間；
2. 活動安排；
3. 歡迎他表演節目。
注意：
1. 詞數100左右；
2. 可以適當增加細節，以使行文連貫。
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【滿分范文】
Dear Allen,
How is everything going Our school will hold a music festival next Sunday morning in the school hall. And I’m writing to invite you to join us.
The opening ceremony will start at 9:00 am, and the schoolmaster will deliver a speech. Then there will be various fantastic performances played by talented students. You are definitely welcome to show up on stage, which will add color and fun to our festival.
Looking forward to your early reply.
Li Hua
【分析】今年的書面表達要求考生寫郵件，告知英國朋友音樂節的情況。
【詳解】首先確定提綱。先介紹寫作目的，之后介紹音樂節的時間、活動安排等具體信息，最后歡迎他表演節目。
第二，根據提綱，確定關鍵詞語，如：How is everything going a music festival，in the school hall，The opening ceremony等。
第三，注意選用合適的連接詞將各要點串聯起來。
【點睛】本文內容完整，詳略得當。并使用了高級句式。如：You are definitely welcome to show up on stage, which will add color and fun to our festival.定語從句。提升了文章檔次。
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高考英語邀請信滿分技巧
一、用三段式結構
首段先自我介紹（用于陌生人）或問候對方（用于熟悉人），再開門見山表達邀請這一寫作意圖。
次段清楚地表達邀請的目的和原因，讓對方明白為何被邀請以及參加活動的具體安排。句子之間應有恰當的過渡詞或邏輯信號詞，使文章讀起來連貫、有條理。
尾段照應主題，如果收到邀請，應盡快回復，表明是否出席。如果無法參加，應提前告知并說明原因，表現出誠意。
二、表達熱情真誠
邀請信的語言應該熱情、友好，體現出對對方的尊重和期待，使用恰當的稱呼和結束語，避免使用生硬的表達。
三、提升表達效果
使用恰當的詞匯和句式 ：注意詞匯的準確性和句式的多樣性，使文章表達更加豐富和流暢。文章結構應有邏輯性，句子之間應有恰當的過渡詞或邏輯信號詞，使文章讀起來連貫、有條理。
一、邀請信首段金句：①問候語/②自我介紹+③寫信意圖
1. Hi, Jack, how is everything going 嗨，杰克，一切都好嗎？
2. I'm Li Hua, chairman of the Student Union of Xinhua Middle school. 我是新華中學學生會主席李華。
3. I'm Li Hua, a Senior Three student, who is in charge of the paper-cutting club in our school. 我是李華，一名高三學生，是我們學校剪紙俱樂部的負責人。
4. Knowing with delight that you are interested in Chinese traditional culture, I'm writing to invite you to participate in a paper-cutting art exhibition. 得知你對中國傳統文化感興趣，我寫信邀請你參加一個剪紙藝術展。
5. There's a live concert this Saturday evening at Xinhua Concert Hall, so I'm sincerely writing to invite you to go with me on behalf of our whole family. 本周六晚上新華音樂廳有一場現場音樂會，所以我代表全家真誠地寫信邀請你一起去。
二、邀請信中段金句：①活動內容+②邀請原因+③注意事項
1. The details concerning the English Speech Cometition are as follows. 關于英語演講比賽的詳細信息如下。
2. The following is the detailed information with regard to this activity. 以下是關于這項活動的詳細信息。
3. I wonder if it is convenient for you to deliver a lecture in the lecture hall at 3:00 pm. 我想知道你下午3點在演講廳演講是否方便。
4. The lecture is due to start at 9:00 am on the playground and last for two hours, from 3 pm to 5 pm. 講座將于上午9:00在操場開始，持續兩個小時，從下午3點到5點。
5. If you are interested in table tennis, please sign up for our school team by July 20th.如果你對乒乓球感興趣，請在7 月 20 日前報名參加我們的校隊。
三、邀請信尾段金句：①照應主題表示感謝+②期待回復
1. We’d be very grateful if you could let me know whether to participate by September 25. 如果您能在9月25日前告訴我是否參加，我們將不勝感激。
2. I’d appreciate it if you could confirm your participation at your early convenience. 如果你能盡早確認參加，我將不勝感激。
3. I sincerely hope that you will accept our invitation if it is convenient for you. 如果方便的話，我衷心希望您能接受我們的邀請。
4. Our whole family and I would feel much honored if you could come.如果你能來，我們全家都將感到不勝榮幸。
5. Your early reply would be highly appreciated. Thank you in advance! 你的盡早回復不勝感激。提前謝謝您！
考向1 邀請參加自然文化研學活動
（24-25高三上·甘肅酒泉·期中）假定你是李華，你班下周末將組織一次以“來北京看中國”(See China in Beijing)為主題的自然文化研學活動，為期一天。請你用英文寫一封信邀請你校國際部交換生Jim來參加活動。內容包括：
1.寫信目的；
2.活動時間、地點、活動安排；
3.期盼得到回復。
注意：
1.詞數80左右；
2.可適當增加細節，以使行文連貫。
參考詞匯：natural cultural study tour(n.)：自然文化研學活動
Dear Jim,
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Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】
Dear Jim,
I hope this message finds you well. I’m writing to invite you to our one-day natural & cultural study tour with the theme of “See China in Beijing” next weekend.
We’ll start at 8:00 am next Saturday and gather at our school playground. First, we’ll pay a visit to the Forbidden City to admire the magnificent ancient architecture and rich cultural heritage. Then, we plan to have a delicious lunch in a local restaurant. In the afternoon, we will be led to Beihai Park, where we can enjoy the beautiful natural scenery.
I really hope you can come. Looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
【導語】本篇書面表達屬于應用文，要求考生用英文寫一封信邀請你校國際部交換生Jim來參加“來北京看中國”(See China in Beijing)為主題的自然&文化研學活動。其內容包括：寫信目的、活動時間、地點、活動安排以及期盼得到回復。
【詳解】1.詞匯積累
開始：start→begin
首先：first→to begin with
欣賞：admire →appreciate
美味的：delicious→tasty
2.句式拓展
簡單句變復合句
原句：I’m writing to invite you to our one-day natural & cultural study tour with the theme of “See China in Beijing” next weekend.
拓展句：I’m writing to invite you to our one-day natural & cultural study tour next weekend, whose theme is about “See China in Beijing” .
【點睛】【高分句型1】In the afternoon, we will be led to Beihai Park, where we can enjoy the beautiful natural scenery.（運用了where引導的定語從句）
【高分句型2】 I really hope you can come.（運用了省略that的賓語從句）
考向2 邀請參加肢體語言重要性講座
（24-25高三上·吉林長春·期中）假定你是李華，你校下周五將舉辦一場主題為“The importance of body language”的講座。請你給交換生Alex寫一封郵件，邀請他參加，內容包括：
1.講座的時間和地點；
2.講座的內容；
3.發出邀請。
注意：
1.寫作詞數應為80個左右；
2.請按如下格式在答題卡的相應位置作答。
Dear Alex,
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Yours,
Li Hua
【滿分范文】
Dear Alex,
I’m writing to tell you that there will be a lecture on “The importance of body language” in our school next Friday. It will be held in the school hall at 2 p.m.
The lecture will be given by a famous professor. It will mainly focus on how body language affects communication and daily life. We will learn how to interpret different body language and use it effectively in various situations, such as in interviews, business meetings and social gatherings.
I sincerely invite you to attend it. I believe you will find it very interesting and beneficial. It will surely broaden your knowledge and help you better understand people’s true intentions.
Yours,
Li Hua
【導語】本篇書面表達屬于應用文寫作中的邀請信。要求考生給交換生Alex寫一封郵件，邀請他參加學校舉辦的一場主題為“The importance of body language”的講座。
【詳解】1.詞匯積累
著名的：famous→ well-known
專注于：focus on→ concentrate on
影響：affect→ influence
各種各樣的：various→ a variety of
2.句式轉換
原句：The lecture will be given by a famous professor. It will mainly focus on how body language affects communication and daily life.
拓展句：The lecture will be given by a famous professor, which will mainly focus on how body language affects communication and daily life.
【點睛】【高分句型1】I’m writing to tell you that there will be a lecture on “The importance of body language” in our school next Friday.（運用了that引導的賓語從句）
【高分句型2】It will mainly focus on how body language affects communication and daily life.（運用了how引導的賓語從句）
考向3 邀請參加機器人設計比賽
（24-25高三上·河南·階段練習）假定你是李華，你校機器人俱樂部即將舉辦機器人設計比賽。請你給筆友Peter寫封郵件，邀請他參加競賽。內容包括：
1. 寫信目的；
2. 活動時間、地點、內容、意義等。
注意：
1. 詞數80左右；
2. 可適當增加細節，以使行文連貫。
Dear Peter,
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Yours,
Li Hua
【滿分范文】
Dear Peter,
I hope this email finds you well. I’m pleased to invite you to participate in the upcoming Robot Designing Competition hosted by our school’s robot club. It will take place in the school hall at 2 p.m. on January 25 and last about 2 hours. The competition aims to spark student creativity and innovation, providing a platform to showcase your robotic skills. Participation would be a great opportunity for you to engage with like-minded peers and expand your horizons.
I believe this competition will be an enriching experience for you. Hope you can join us! .
Yours,
Li Hua
【導語】本篇書面表達屬于應用文。考生所在校機器人俱樂部即將舉辦機器人設計比賽。請你給筆友Peter寫封郵件，邀請他參加競賽。
【詳解】1.詞匯積累
高興的：pleased→delighted
參加：participate in→take part in
舉辦：host→hold
機會：opportunity→chance
2.句式拓展
簡單句變復合句
原句：I’m pleased to invite you to participate in the upcoming Robot Designing Competition hosted by our school’s robot club.
拓展句：I’m pleased to invite you to participate in the upcoming Robot Designing Competition that will be hosted by our school’s robot club.
【點睛】[高分句型1] The competition aims to spark student creativity and innovation, providing a platform to showcase your robotic skills. (運用了現在分詞作狀語)
[高分句型2] I’m pleased to invite you to participate in the upcoming Robot Designing Competition hosted by our school’s robot club. (運用了過去分詞作定語)
考向4 邀請參加文化歷史展
（24-25高三上·重慶沙坪壩·階段練習）假定你是李華，下個月國慶節市博物館將舉辦一場文化歷史展，請給你校的英國留學生 Alex 寫一封郵件邀請他一起觀展，內容包括：
1. 活動內容、時間；
2. 活動意義；
3. 邀請一同觀展。
注意：
1. 寫作詞數應為80個左右；
2. 請按如下格式在答題卡的相應位置作答。
Dear Alex,
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Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【滿分范文】
Dear Alex,
I hope this letter finds you well. As the National Day holiday approaches, I would like to extend a warm invitation to you to join me in visiting an exhibition.
The exhibition, titled “Timeless Treasures: A Journey Through Chinese History and Culture,” will showcase a remarkable collection of artifacts, paintings, and calligraphy from various historical periods of China. Scheduled from October 1st to October 7th at the National Museum of History, it will provide a fantastic experience for both of us, not only to appreciate the beauty and depth of Chinese culture but also to immerse oneself in our country’s rich heritage. I am planning to visit on the morning of October 3rd, and I would be thrilled if you could accompany me.
Please let me know if you are available on that day. I am looking forward to your positive response.
Yours sincerely,
LiHua
【導語】本篇書面表達屬于邀請信。要求考生以李華的身份給英國留學生Alex寫一封郵件，邀請他一起參觀市博物館即將舉辦的文化歷史展，并說明活動的內容、時間以及活動意義。
【詳解】詞匯積累
臨近：approach → draw near
展示：showcase → display/exhibit
沉浸：immerse → plunge/indulge
激動的：thrilled → excited
句式拓展
簡單句變復合句
原句：The exhibition, titled “Timeless Treasures: A Journey Through Chinese History and Culture,” will showcase a remarkable collection of artifacts, paintings, and calligraphy from various historical periods of China.
拓展句：The exhibition, which is titled “Timeless Treasures: A Journey Through Chinese History and Culture,” will showcase a remarkable collection of artifacts, paintings, and calligraphy from various historical periods of China.
【點睛】[高分句型1] As the National Day holiday approaches, I would like to extend a warm invitation to you to join me in visiting a splendid cultural and historical exhibition. (運用了從屬連詞as引導的時間狀語從句)
[高分句型2] Scheduled from October 1st to October 7th at the National Museum of History, it will provide a fantastic experience for both of us, not only to appreciate the beauty and depth of Chinese culture but also to immerse oneself in our country’s rich heritage. (運用了過去分詞作狀語和復合連詞not only...but also...連接的并列結構)
[高分句型3] Please let me know if you are available on that day. (運用了從屬連詞if引導的條件狀語從句)
考向5 邀請參加我心目中的中國征文大賽
（24-25高三上·河南·階段練習）假定你是李華，你校正在籌備“China in My Eyes”征文大賽，請你邀請英國交換生Wiliam參加此活動，要點如下：
1. 投稿時間；
2. 內容要求；
3. 誠邀參加。
注意：
1. 寫作詞數應為80左右；
2. 請按如下格式在答題卡的相應位置作答。
Dear William,
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Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【滿分范文】
Dear William,
How are you doing lately I’m writing to inform you of a writing contest titled “China in My Eyes” and invite you to participate in it.
Since you’re keen on Chinese culture and economic development, I’m sure it will be a piece of cake for you to write about this topic. You are required to write about your experiences and perspectives of China regarding its economy, tourism or culture. The deadline for the submission is by October 28th. You can email your entry to IloveChina@.
I’m eagerly expecting your participation.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【導語】本篇書面表達屬于應用文。要求考生給英國交換生Wiliam寫信，邀請他參加“China in My Eyes”征文大賽。
【詳解】1. 詞匯積累
最近：lately → recently
通知：inform you of → tell you
參加：participate in → take in
喜愛：be keen on → be fond of
2. 句式拓展
簡單句變復合句
原句：You are required to write about your experiences and perspectives of China regarding its economy, tourism or culture.
拓展句：It is required that you should write about your experiences and perspectives of China regarding its economy, tourism or culture.
【點睛】【高分句型1】Since you’re keen on Chinese culture and economic development, I’m sure it will be a piece of cake for you to write about this topic. (使用了since引導的原因狀語從句)
【高分句型2】I’m writing to inform you of a writing contest titled “China in My Eyes” and invite you to participate in it. (使用了過去分詞充當后置定語)
題型二 求助信
一、高考考情
目錄 內容提要
2020年全國III卷 給外教Miss Evans寫郵件請她幫忙指導根據課文改編的短劇
2016年全國I卷 給外教Ms Jenkins 寫信請她幫你修改所附材料的文字和格式
2013年全國II卷 給開網店的美國朋友Tom寫一封信請他代賣自制的中國結
2011年全國卷 在英國學習暑期課程遇到困難向學校輔導中心求助書面預約
二、高考考向
求助信是當個人遇到一些自己無法解決的問題或困難時請求別人幫助所寫的信件。高考的求助信包括請求幫忙修改作品、解決學習問題等。寫信人希望收信人能提供幫助或者解決方案，所以語言要簡明扼要，符合說話人的身份；語氣要真誠委婉，不能強人所難。
三、高考真題
1.（2020年全國III卷）假定你是李華，你和同學根據英語課文改編了一個短劇。給外教Miss Evans寫封郵件，請她幫忙指導。郵件內容包括：
1. 劇情簡介；
2. 指導內容；
3. 商定時間地點。
注意：1. 詞數80左右；
2. 可以適當的增加細節，以使行文連貫。
Dear Miss Evans,
__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours ,
Li Hua
【滿分作文】
Dear Miss Evans,
I am Li Hua from your English class. I’m writing to ask for your guidance on adapting a short play for the English Festival next month. We’re interested in one story from our English textbook, The Million Pound Bank Note by Mark Twain. It is about the adventure of a poor young man who was given a million pound bank note by two rich gentlemen. Could you please give us some advice on how to make dialogues based on the story
Would it be possible for us to meet in our classroom at 5 p. m. this Friday Thank you for your kindness!
We are looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
【導語】本篇書面表達是一篇應用文。要求考生給外教Miss Evans寫封郵件，請她幫忙指導自己和和同學根據英語課文改編的一個短劇。
【詳解】1.詞匯積累
對……感興趣：be interested in→take an interest in
給某人某物：give sb sth→offer sb sth
建議：advice→suggestion
可能的：possible→probable
2.句式拓展
簡單句變復合句
原句： I’m writing to ask for your guidance on adapting a short play for the English Festival next month.
拓展句： I’m writing to ask for your guidance on adapting a short play which is prepared for the English Festival next month.
【點睛】[高分句型1]It is about the adventure of a poor young man who was given a million pound bank note by two rich gentlemen. （運用了who引導定語從句）
[高分句型2]Could you please give us some advice on how to make dialogues based on the story （運用了“特殊疑問詞+動詞不定式”結構作賓語）
2.（2016年全國I卷）假定你是李華，暑假想去一家外資公司兼職，已寫好申請書和個人簡歷(resume)。給外教 Ms. Jenkins寫信，請她幫你修改所附兩份材料的語言和格式(format)。內容包括：
1.寫信目的；
2.求助內容；
3.表示感謝。
注意：
1.寫作詞數應為80左右；
2.開頭與結尾已給出，不計入總詞數。
Dear Ms. Jenkins,
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Sincerely yours,
Li Hua
【滿分范文】
Dear Ms Jenkins,
I’m writing to seek your help. I’m applying for a part-time job in an overseas-funded corporation. I think it’ll be both an opportunity and a new challenge to me. By doing the part-time job I can get some precious experience so that I can better adapt to my future career.
I’ve already written the application and resume. But I’m afraid that there may be some mistakes about the words and format. So could you please correct any mistakes in the material I attach to the letter
I’d appreciate it if you could do me the favor.
Sincerely yours,
Li Hua
【導語】本篇書面表達屬于應用文，要求考生給外教 Ms. Jenkins寫封信，請她幫你修改所附兩份材料的語言和格式。
【詳解】1.詞匯積累
尋求幫助：seek one’s help→ask for help
寶貴的：precious→valuable
糾正：correct→rectify
適應：adapt to→fit in with
2.句式拓展
簡單句變復合句
原句：I’m applying for a part-time job in an overseas-funded corporation.
拓展句：I’m applying for a part-time job in a corporation which is overseas-funded.
【點睛】[高分句型1] By doing the part-time job I can get some precious experience so that I can better adapt to my future career. (運用了so that引導的目的狀語從句)
[高分句型2] So could you please correct any mistakes in the material I attach to the letter (運用了that/which引導的限制性定語從句，省略了that/which)
3.（2013年全國II卷）假定你是李華，自制了一些中國結。給開網店的美國朋友Tom寫封信，請他代賣，要包括：
1.外觀（尺寸，顏色，材料）；
2.象征意義；
3.價格
注意：1.100詞左右；2.可以適當增加細節，以使行文連貫，3.開頭為你寫好
Dear Tom,
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【滿分范文】
Dear Tom,
How are you doing I wonder if you could sell some Chinese knots for me.
I made them myself with red silk threads, cloth and other materials. They look really beautiful in the shape of a diamond, about 5 inches long and 4 inches wide. In China, these knots stand for friendship, love and good luck. People can either give them as gifts to friends or hang them in their houses.
They are only 12.99 US each. If anyone wants to know more about the knots, let them write to me. Also,do let me know if you need further information. Thank you！
Yours,
Li Hua
【導語】本篇書面表達屬于應用文，要求考生給美國朋友Tom寫封信，請他代賣，要包括：1.外觀（尺寸，顏色，材料）；2.象征意義；3.價格。
【詳解】1. 詞匯積累
漂亮的：beautiful→pretty
運氣：luck→fortune
禮物：gift→present
了解：know→learn
2. 句式拓展
合并簡單句
原句：They look really beautiful in the shape of a diamond, about 5 inches long and 4 inches wide. In China, these knots stand for friendship, love and good luck.
拓展句：In China, these knots, which look really beautiful in the shape of a diamond, about 5 inches long and 4 inches wide, stand for friendship, love and good luck.
【點睛】[高分句型1]I wonder if you could sell some Chinese knots for me.(運用了if引導的賓語從句)
[高分句型2]If anyone wants to know more about the knots, let them write to me.(運用了if引導的條件狀語從句)
4．（2011年全國卷）假定你是李華，正在一所英國學校學習暑期課程，遇到一些困難，希望得到學校輔導中心(Learning Center)的幫助。根據學校規定，你需書面預約，請按下列要點寫一封信：
1.本人簡介；
2.求助內容；
3.約定時間；
4.你的聯系方式 (Email: lihua@1236 com; Phone: 12345678)。
注意：1.詞數80左右。
2.可以適當增加細節，以使行文連貫。
Dear Sir/Madam:
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
【滿分范文】
Dear Sir/Madam:
I’m Li Hua, a Chinese student taking summer courses in your university. I’m writing to ask for help.
I came here last month and found my courses interesting. But I have some difficulties with note-taking and I’d like to know how to use the library. I was told the Learning Center provides help for students and I’m anxious to get help from you. I have no class on Tuesday mornings and Friday afternoons. Could you tell me which day is OK with you It would be great if you email or phone me. Here are my email address and phone number, lihua@ 1236, and 12345678.
I’m looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
【導語】這是一封申請信。要求考生以李華的身份，就你正在一所英國學校學習暑期課程，遇到一些困難，希望得到學校輔導中心(Learning Center)的幫助，但根據學校規定，你需書面預約一事，寫一封申請信對你的預約進行申請。
【詳解】1.詞匯積累
尋求幫助：ask for help→ seek assistance
有趣的：interesting → fascinating
知道：know→ be acquainted with
使用：use→ employ
2.句式拓展
同義句替換
原句：I came here last month and found my courses interesting.
拓展句：Last month, upon my arrival here, I discovered that my courses were indeed captivating and engaging.
【點睛】【高分句型1】I’m Li Hua, a Chinese student taking summer courses in your university.（使用了現在分詞短語作定語）
【高分句型2】It would be great if you email or phone me.（使用了連接詞if連接的條件狀語從句）
高考英語求助信滿分技巧
一、用三段式結構
首段先自我介紹（用于陌生人）或問候對方（用于熟悉人），再開門見山表達求助這一寫作意圖。
次段清楚地表達求助的內容（分條陳述）和原因，讓對方明白為何被求助以及活動的具體要求。句子之間應有恰當的過渡詞或邏輯信號詞，使文章讀起來連貫、有條理。
尾段照應主題，如果收到，應盡快回復，表明是否愿意。如果無法參加，應提前告知并說明原因，表現出誠意。
二、表達真誠友好
求助信的語言應該真誠、友好，體現出對對方的信任和期待，使用恰當的稱呼和結束語，避免使用生硬的表達。
三、提升表達效果
使用恰當的詞匯和句式 ：注意詞匯的準確性和句式的多樣性，使文章表達更加豐富和流暢。文章結構應有邏輯性，句子之間應有恰當的過渡詞或邏輯信號詞，使文章讀起來連貫、有條理。
一、求助信首段金句：介紹自己，表明寫作意圖，提出請求。
1. I'm Li Hua, a Chinese student taking a summer course in your university. 我叫李華，是一名在貴校修暑期課程的中國學生。
2. I’m sorry to trouble you but I do have some problems and I badly need your guidance. 很抱歉打擾你，但我確實有一些問題，我非常需要你的指導。
3. I would feel obliged if you could do me the favor of finding my camera left in your hotel. 如果您能幫我找到我留在酒店的相機，我將不勝感激。
4. I was wondering if you could spare some time for removing the following doubts from me. 我想知道你是否能抽出一些時間來消除我的以下疑慮。
5. I’m writing to you in the hope that you could do me a special favor and polish the application letter up for me. 我寫信給你，希望你能幫我一個特別的忙，幫我把申請信潤色一下。
二、求助信次段金句：詳述提出請求的原因及內容。
1. On arriving home, it struck me that I had left my English dictionary at your house. 到家時，我突然想到我把英語詞典忘在你家了。
2. But I have some trouble with note-taking and I have no idea how to use the library. 但我記筆記有點困難，我不知道如何使用圖書館。
3.The dictionary means a lot to me as it is a precious gift from my American teacher on my 18th birthday. 這本詞典對我來說意義重大，因為它是我18歲生日時美國老師送給我的珍貴禮物。
4. Will you be kind enough to offer me some advice on how to learn English words by heart more efficiently 你能給我一些關于如何更有效地背英語單詞的建議嗎？
5. It won’t be better if you can look through my resume for some possible mistakes and polish them up for me. 如果你能瀏覽我的簡歷，找出一些可能的錯誤，并為我潤色一下，那就更好。
三、求助信尾段金句：表示感謝、期盼對方早日回復。
1. I would appreciate it if you could offer me a hand. 如果你能幫我一把，我將不勝感激。
2. If you need further information, please feel free to inform me. 如果您需要更多信息，請隨時通知我。
3. Thanks for your kind consideration and I look forward to your earliest reply. 感謝您的善意考慮，我期待著您的盡早回復。
4. I would be highly grateful if you could find back my csuitcase and mail it to me. 如果您能找到我的簡歷并郵寄給我，我將不勝感激。
5. Your early response and warm-hearted assistance would be highly appreciated. 非常感謝您的及時回應和熱心協助。
考向1 求助航空公司尋找遺失行李
（2024·重慶·二模）假設你是李華，去紐約旅游，從機場乘一輛黃色的出租車去假日飯店(Holiday Inn)，到達酒店后發現遺失了一件行李箱。在失物招領處，工作人員要求你用英文寫一份書面材料。
內容包括：
1.行李遺失的過程；
2.行李箱的概況；
3.聯系電話: 1-703-3543269。
注意：1. 字數80左右。2.文章中不能出現個人真實信息。
Dear Sir/Madam,
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Sir/Madam,
I’m Li Hua, a tourist from China. This morning, I arrived at New York airport and took a yellow taxi to Holiday Inn. Unfortunately, on reaching the hotel, I discovered one of my suitcases lost in the taxi. What was worse, I took no notice of the plate number.
The suitcase is a black plastic one, about 60cm by 40cm by 16cm. There is a video camera, two pairs of pants and some books for children in it. The camera has recorded all my experience in this country, which means a lot to me.
When you have got ANY information of my suitcase, please contact me at 1-703-3543269.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【導語】這是一封求助信。要求考生以李華的身份，就你去紐約旅游，從機場乘一輛黃色的出租車去假日飯店(Holiday Inn)，到達酒店后發現遺失了一件行李箱，在失物招領處，工作人員要求你用英文寫一份書面材料一事，寫一封求助信。
【詳解】1.詞匯積累
到達：arrive at → attain the destination of
注意：take notice of → be mindful of
大約：about→ approximately
得到：get→ obtain
2.句式拓展
同義句改寫
原句：This morning, I arrived at New York airport and took a yellow taxi to Holiday Inn.
拓展句：This morning, upon my arrival at New York airport, I embarked on a journey in a yellow taxi, which conveyed me to Holiday Inn.
【點睛】【高分句型1】Unfortunately, on reaching the hotel, I discovered one of my suitcases lost in the taxi.（使用了介詞短語作狀語）
【高分句型2】The camera has recorded all my experience in this country, which means a lot to me.（使用了關系代詞which引導的非限制性定語從句，先行詞為前面一整句話表示的內容）
考向2 求助外籍心理教師解決壓力和睡眠問題
（2024高三下·全國·專題練習）假定你是高三學生李華，最近你遇到了一些學習壓力問題和睡眠問題導致無法集中精力學習。于是你給你校的外籍心理老師 Bob寫一封求助信尋求幫助。要點如下：
1.存在的問題；
2.希望得到幫助；
3.表示感謝。
注意：1.詞數80左右；
2.可以適當增加細節，以使行文連貫。
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【答案】Dear Bob,
I am Li Hua, a Senior 1 student. I’m writing with the intention of asking for some help, for I can’t devote myself to study for a long time, which confuses me a lot.
I’ve met some problems which trouble me a lot. To begin with, I have to spend so much time on my tons of homework that I hardly have time to do exercise. Additionally, the high expectation from the teachers and my parents makes me feel stressed because I don’t want to let them down. What troubles me most is that it’s difficult for me to fall asleep every night. Faced with the problems above, I’m anxious to get your help. Could you please offer me some suggestions on how to solve these problems
I’d appreciate it if you could offer me some constructive proposals.
Yours
Li Hua
【導語】本篇書面表達屬于應用文。要求考生給外籍心理老師 Bob寫一封求助信，就最近遇到的一些學習壓力問題和睡眠問題導致無法集中精力學習向他求助。
【詳解】1.詞匯積累
目的：intention→aim
除此之外：additionally→besides
困難的：difficult→tough
建議：suggestion→tip
2.句式拓展
簡單句變復合句
原句：Could you please offer me some suggestions on how to solve these problems
拓展句：Could you please offer me some suggestions on how I should solve these problems
【點睛】【高分 句型1】I’m writing with the intention of asking for some help, for I can’t devote myself to study for a long time, which confuses me a lot. （運用了which引導的非限定性定語從句）
【高分句型2】What troubles me most is that it’s difficult for me to fall asleep every night. （運用了what引導的主語從句，that引導的表語從句）
考向3 求助大學解決學費和生活費
（24-25高三上·重慶·階段練習）假如你是李華，是新加坡國立大學（NUS）的一名國際交換生，因最近家庭經濟狀況出現變故，現無法承擔全部的學費（tuition）和生活費用，因此你決定給輔導員Paul Black寫一封求助信。內容包括：
1.個人情況；
2.求助內容。
注意：1.寫作詞數應為80左右；
2.可適當增加細節，使行文連貫。
Dear Mr. Black,
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Mr. Black,
I trust this message finds you well. As an international exchange student from NUS, I am writing to humbly request the school’s support due to a sudden shift in my family’s financial situation, which has left me unable to fully cover my tuition and living expenses.
My parents have made immense sacrifices to provide me with this educational opportunity, and I have spared no effort in lightening their burden. However, despite our collective perseverance, the mounting costs now exceed what we can manage, putting my continued education at risk.
I am reaching out to seek the school’s assistance to help bridge the financial gap. I remain wholeheartedly dedicated to my studies, and with the school’s invaluable support, I am confident that I can continue to excel and achieve my goals. Your consideration is deeply appreciated. Looking forward to your favorable response.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【導語】本篇書面表達屬于應用文。因為家庭經濟狀況出現變故，現無法承擔全部的學費和生活費用，要求考生給輔導員Paul Black寫一封求助信。
【詳解】1.詞匯積累
由于：due to→because of
給某人提供……：provide sb. with sth.→offer sth. to sb.
機會：opportunity→chance
然而：however→nevertheless
2.句式拓展
并列句變復合句
原句：My parents have made immense sacrifices to provide me with this educational opportunity, and I have spared no effort in lightening their burden.
拓展句：My parents have made immense sacrifices to provide me with this educational opportunity, for which I have spared no effort in lightening their burden.
【點睛】【高分句型1】As an international exchange student from NUS, I am writing to humbly request the school’s support due to a sudden shift in my family’s financial situation, which has left me unable to fully cover my tuition and living expenses.（運用了which引導的非限定性定語從句）
【高分句型2】However, despite our collective perseverance, the mounting costs now exceed what we can manage, putting my continued education at risk.（運用了what引導的賓語從句）
考向4 求助外籍教師潤色修改稿件
（24-25高三上·云南大理·階段練習）假設你是李華，是你校英文報“中國傳統文化”欄目的負責人。你寫了一篇介紹中國功夫（Chinese kung fu）的英文宣傳稿。請給你的外教老師Mr. Roger寫一封電子郵件，請他幫助修改、潤色你的稿件。內容包括：
1. 寫信事由；
2. 求助內容；
3. 表達感謝。
注意：1. 詞數80 左右；
2. 可適當增加細節，以使行文連貫；
3. 請按如下格式在答題卡的相應位置作答。
Dear Mr. Roger,
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【答案】One possible version:
Dear Mr. Roger,
I am Li Hua, the person in charge of the school English newspaper’s “Traditional Chinese Culture” column. I am writing in the hope that you will be kind enough to do me a favour.
When it comes to Chinese kung fu, there is no denying that it carries abundant traditional Chinese culture and enjoys a great reputation around the world. I have written an article “A Glimpse into Chinese kung fu”, where I dig deep into the beauty and wisdom of this traditional sport. I eagerly ask for your assistance in reviewing my draft, polishing my language and offering insights to better present Chinese kung fu. Your feedback will not only contribute to the excellence of my writing but also deepen the readers’ understanding of this fascinating tradition.
I’d appreciate it if you could give me a hand. I’m looking forward to your early reply.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【導語】本篇書面表達屬于應用文。要求考生給外教老師Mr. Roger寫一封電子郵件請他幫忙修改介紹中國功夫的英文宣傳稿。
【詳解】1.詞匯積累
負責：in charge of→ be responsible for
大量的：abundant→ plentiful
名聲：reputation→ fame
提供：offer→ provide
2.句式拓展
簡單句變復合句
原句：I am Li Hua, the person in charge of the school English newspaper’s “Traditional Chinese Culture” column.
拓展句：I am Li Hua, the person who is in charge of the school English newspaper’s “Traditional Chinese Culture” column.
【點睛】【高分句型1】I have written an article “A Glimpse into Chinese kung fu”, where I dig deep into the beauty and wisdom of this traditional sport.（where引導的非限制性定語從句）
【高分句型2】Your feedback will not only contribute to the excellence of my writing but also deepen the readers’ understanding of this fascinating tradition.（運用了固定短語not only … but also …）
考向5 求助交換生指導英文歌曲大賽
（23-24高三下·內蒙古赤峰·期中）假定你是李華,你準備參加學校舉辦的英文歌曲大賽。請給你班交換生Anna寫一封郵件,請她給予指導。內容包括:
1. 說明比賽要求；
2.請她推薦歌曲；
3.請求陪同練習。
注意:
1.詞數80左右；
2.可以適當增加細節,以使行行文連貫。
Dear Anna ,
______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Anna,
I’m writing to ask for your help. Our school will hold an English Singing Contest next weekend. I have signed up for it. It is required that the theme should be about nature. Each contestant is given up to five minutes to sing the song. So, would you please give me some recommendations on which song to choose？
Besides, what I need are the skills of singing, including pronunciation and intonation, which will perfect my performance. I’d appreciate it if you could practice it with me.
Looking forward to your reply.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【導語】本篇書面表達屬于應用文。要求考生給Anna寫信對學校舉辦的英文歌曲大賽給予指導。
【詳解】1.詞匯積累
要求：required→demanded
選手：contestant→competitors
建議：recommendations→suggestions
此外：Besides→Additionally
2.句式拓展
簡單句變復合句
原句：So, would you please give me some recommendations on which
song to choose？
擴展句：So, would you please give me some recommendations which are about which song I should choose.
【點睛】【高分句型1】It is required that the theme should be about nature. Each contestant is given up to five minutes to sing the song. (運用了It作形式主語)
【高分句型2】Besides, what I need are the skills of singing, including pronunciation and intonation, which will perfect my performance. (運用了what引導的主語從句及which引導的非限制性定語從句)
題型三 投訴信
一、高考考情
目錄 內容提要
2008年湖北卷 購買一部外國公司生產的手機，因質量問題要求該公司更換
二、高考考向
投訴信是向有關部門反映所購買的某種商品或某項服務/環境不能達到要求，以期望對方退換或向對方索賠。投訴信一般包括以下要點：寫信目的、反映問題、提出解決方案、期待解決。其措辭要客氣，但語氣要堅定，這樣才能達到投訴效果。
三、高考真題
（2008湖北卷）假設你是卜曼宜，你購買了一部某外國公司生產的手機，因有質量問題，要求該公司更換。請根據下列要點，用英文寫一封電子郵件。
要點：
1. 問題：手機不響鈴，不能發短信；該產品已售完，無法更換；型號新，無配件，無法維修。
2. 要求：公司應盡快予以更換。
　　注意：1. 詞數為100左右；
　　2. 參考詞匯：配件-- spare part;
　　3. 電子郵件的開頭和結尾已為你寫好（不計入你所寫詞數）
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【滿分范文】
Dear Sir，
I am writing to you for the mobile phone of Dephone-S250 I bought on 20th April at Tele Mall in Wuhan, P.R. China.
Ten days after that, it didn’t ring and send short messages. Then I took it to the seller, but was told that the model had been sold out and I had to wait at least three months for a new one. I had no choice but to go to the repairman. To my disappointment, he said since it was a new model in China, it was impossible to fix it without the right spare parts. I was so desperate on hearing that for I can not wait that long. Therefore, I have to require that you send me a new one of the same model within a month.
Thank you for your consideration.
Sincerely yours,
Bu Manyi
【導語】這是一篇應用文寫作。要求學生向手機公司寫一封電子郵件，要求更換有質量問題的手機。
【詳解】1. 詞匯積累
因為：since→ for/because
因此：therefore→ hence/accordingly/consequently
不能：can not→ unable
選擇：choice→ option/selection
2. 句式拓展
同義句轉換
原句：Ten days after that, it didn’t ring and send short messages.
復合句：Ten days after that, it not only can't ring, but also can't send short messages.
【點睛】【高分句型1】Then I took it to the seller, but was told that the model had been sold out and I had to wait at least three months for a new one. （that引導的賓語從句）
【高分句型2】Therefore, I have to require that you send me a new one of the same model within a month.（that引導的賓語從句）
或
高考英語投訴信滿分技巧
一、用三段式結構
首段先自我介紹，再開門見山表達投訴某一產品、糟糕服務等寫作意圖。
次段清楚地表達投訴產品、服務等發生的時間、地點以及所存在的諸多問題。句子之間應有恰當的過渡詞或邏輯信號詞，使文章讀起來連貫、有條理。
尾段照應主題，希望重視投訴盡快給予回復。同時，給對方提出完善整改建議或要求退款等。
二、表達熱情真誠
投訴信的語言應該禮貌、客氣，體現出對對方的尊重和期待，同時有禮有節，不夸大不虛假，實事求是陳述事情的經過、存在的問題或受到的不公正待遇等。
三、提升表達效果
使用恰當的詞匯和句式 ：注意詞匯的準確性和句式的多樣性，使文章表達更加豐富和流暢。文章結構應有邏輯性，句子之間應有恰當的過渡詞或邏輯信號詞，使文章讀起來連貫、有條理。
一、投訴信首段金句：首段開門見山表明投訴意圖
1. My name is Li Hua, a regular customer of your website. 我叫李華，是貴公司網站的常客。
2. I’m a Chinese passenger who took your Flight NYZ369 from Beijing to London on August 8. 我是一名中國乘客，于8月8日乘坐貴公司NYZ369航班從北京飛往倫敦。
3. Here I am writing to complain about the shoes I bought last week. 我寫信來投訴我上周買的鞋子。
4. This letter is a complaint concerning the actions of one of your salespersons. 這封信是投訴你們一位銷售人員的行為。
5. I feel bad to trouble you but I am afraid that I have to make a complaint about the cellphone. 很抱歉打擾你，但恐怕我得投訴一下手機。
二、投訴信次段金句：分條陳述投訴內容和事實
1. In the first place, the cellphone powers off at least twice a week. 首先，手機每周至少關機兩次。
2. When I opened the parcel, I was disappointed to discover the front coverwas damaged. 當我打開包裹時，我失望地發現封面損壞了。
3. Surprisingly, it was not until two weeks later that the book was delivered to me. 令人驚訝的是，直到兩周后，這本書才投遞給我。
4. He said since it was an old model, it was impossible to fix it without the right spare parts. 他說由于這是一款舊車型，沒有合適的備件是不可能修好的。
5. The last straw was that several pages of the newly published book were missing. 最讓我受不了的是這本新出版的書缺少了幾頁。
三、投訴信尾段金句：表明自己的訴求或要求（退款、賠償、道歉等）
1. Unless you give back my money within three days, I intend to take further action. 除非你在三天內把錢還給我，否則我打算采取進一步行動。
2. So I demand that you should apologize to me, for your mistake, preferably compensating for my loss. 所以我要求你為你的錯誤向我道歉，最好是賠償我的損失。
3. This incident indicates there is still room for improvement concerning your customer service. 這一事件表明，您的客戶服務仍有改進的空間。
4. I believe you will take my case seriously and I am looking forward to your positive reply. 我相信你會認真對待我的案件，我期待著你的積極答復。
5. Thank you for your consideration and your early reply would be highly appreciated. 感謝您的考慮，如能早日回復，我們將不勝感激。
考向1 投訴網購電子詞典筆
（24-25高三上·河南南陽·階段練習）假定你是李華，你發現上周網購的電子詞典筆(electronic dictionary pen)有問題，請給客戶服務中心寫一封電子郵件進行投訴，要點如下：
1.進行投訴；
2.說明問題；
3.說明解決方案
注意：1.詞數 80 左右；
2.可適當增加細節，以使行文連貫。
Dear Sir/Madam,
I am Li Hua, a devoted customer of your online store.
__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【滿分范文】
Dear Sir/Madam,
I am Li Hua, a devoted customer of your online store. I am writing to complain about the defective electronic dictionary pen I purchased from your store last week.
After one week of its purchase, I find it doesn’t work as expected. The battery doesn’t last long after being recharged, perhaps merely half a day. Worse than that, the words on the screen are not distinct enough, which I think is damaging to my eyesight. The last straw is that when I contacted the online store yesterday, I didn’t get a satisfactory answer.
I would appreciate it if you could either refund my purchase or replace it with a new one. Otherwise, I will take legal action. Look forward to your attention and early reply.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【導語】本篇書面表達屬于應用文。假定你是李華，你發現上周網購的電子詞典筆(electronic dictionary pen)有問題，請給客戶服務中心寫一封電子郵件進行投訴。
【詳解】1.詞匯積累
投訴：complain→make a complaint
購買：purchase→buy
令人滿意的：satisfactory→content
代替：replace→take place of
2.句式拓展
同義句轉換
原句：I am writing to complain about the defective electronic dictionary pen I purchased from your store last week.
拓展句：The reason why I am writing to you is that I’d like to complain about the defective electronic dictionary pen I purchased from your store last week.
【點睛】[高分句型1] Worse than that, the words on the screen are not distinct enough, which I think is damaging to my eyesight. (運用了which引導非限制性定語從句)
[高分句型2] I would appreciate it if you could either refund my purchase or replace it with a new one. (運用了if引導條件狀語從句)
考向2 投訴航空公司行李問題
（24-25高三下·四川德陽·階段練習）假定你是李華，乘飛機從北京到倫敦旅行，到達目的地取行李時發現行李箱破損，部分物品丟失。你與相關人員交涉無果，于是給該航空公司寫一封投訴信。內容主要包括：
1.說明個人相關信息(航線/航班：MMYZ577/時間：August 28)：
2.反映情況；
3.希望盡快解決。
注意：
1. 詞數約為 80 字左右;
2. 可以適當增加細節，以使行文連貫。
Dear sir or madam,
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
【滿分范文】
Dear Sir/Madam,
I’m a Chinese passenger who took your Flight MMYZ577 from Beijing to London on August 28. I’m writing to make a complaint about the bad service offered by your airport staff.
I was disappointed to find my suitcase broken and some of my belongings missing when I claimed my suitcase at London airport. When I reported it to the staff on duty, they totally ignored my demand of compensation for damage. I just can’t imagine how a company with a good reputation can do such a thing!
I do hope you’ll take it seriously and get it settled as soon as possible.
Yours,
Li Hua
【導語】本篇書面表達屬于應用文。要求考生給航空公司寫一封投訴信，投訴其行李箱破損，部分物品丟失的問題。
【詳解】1.詞匯積累
忽視：ignore→overlook
投訴：make a complaint about→complain about
提供：offer→provide
失望的：disappointed→despondent
2.句式拓展
簡單句變復合句
原句：I’m writing to make a complaint about the bad service offered by your airport staff.
拓展句：The reason why I’m writing to you is that I want to make a complaint about the bad service offered by your airport staff.
【點睛】[高分句型1] I’m a Chinese passenger who took your Flight MMYZ577 from Beijing to London on August 28. (運用了who引導定語從句)
[高分句型2] When I reported it to the staff on duty, they totally ignored my demand of compensation for damage. (運用了when引導時間狀語從句)
考向3 投訴博物館收藏書籍英文介紹錯誤
（24-25高三上·河北石家莊·階段練習）假定你是李華，在美國某博物館參觀時，購買了一本介紹該館所收藏文物的書籍，閱讀后發現書中對一些中國文物(artifacts)的英文介紹有誤。請你就此向博物館寫一封信，內容包括：
1. 投訴問題；
2. 提出建議。
注意：
1.詞數 80 左右；
2. 可以適當增加細節，以使行文連貫。
Dear Sir or Madam,
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【滿分范文】
Dear Sir or Madam,
I’m Li Hua, a visitor from China. I purchased a book introducing the artifacts collected in your museum. However, to my disappointment, I discovered several errors in the English descriptions of some Chinese artifacts after reading it.
I sincerely suggest that your museum should have these errors corrected promptly. It’s crucial as accurate information helps visitors better understand and appreciate these precious cultural relics. I do hope my feedback will be taken seriously.
Thank you!
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【導語】本篇書面表達屬于應用文寫作中的投訴信。要求考生給美國某博物館寫信，就該館所收藏文物的書籍關于一些中國文物(artifacts)的英文介紹有誤一事進行投訴并提出建議。
【詳解】1.詞匯積累
購買：purchase→ buy
真誠地：sincerely→ genuinely
建議：suggest→ advise
重要的：crucial→ important/significant
2.句式拓展
簡單句變復合句
原句：I purchased a book introducing the artifacts collected in your museum.
拓展句：I purchased a book, which introduces the artifacts collected in your museum.
【點睛】【高分句型1】I sincerely suggest that your museum should have these errors corrected promptly.（運用了that引導的賓語從句和虛擬語氣）
【高分句型2】It’s crucial as accurate information helps visitors better understand and appreciate these precious cultural relics.（運用了as引導的狀語從句）
考向4 投訴網購圖書問題
（2025·廣東江門·模擬預測）假設你是李華，兩周前你網購了一套叢書，昨天才到貨，還存在其他問題，請就此向網店客服寫郵件投訴。要點如下：
1. 陳述寫信目的；
2. 投訴內容；
3. 提出你的要求。
注意:
1. 詞數80詞左右；
2. 可適當增加細節，使行文連貫；
3. 開頭結尾已給出，不計入總詞數。
Dear sir or madam,
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【滿分范文】
Dear sir or madam,
I am one of your customers. I am writing to complain about an order.
I ordered a set of Bookworm Series on your website two weeks ago, but I didn’t receive them until yesterday. And much to my disappointment, the books were so poorly packed up that the cover of one book was torn. To make matters worse, it is not a complete set, as I found one book missing.
I believe I have every right to ask you to deal with this problem. I hope that you either refund my money or deliver a new set of books to me. Besides, I’d like to be informed of the process of your dealing with my complaint.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【導語】本篇書面表達屬于應用文，要求考生寫一封郵件，就網購的一套叢書的問題表示投訴，要點如下：1. 陳述寫信目的；2. 投訴內容；3. 提出你的要求。
【詳解】1.詞匯積累
缺損的：missing→defective
另外：besides→moreover
更糟糕的是：to make matters worse→worse still
處理：deal with→cope with
2.句式拓展
同義句轉換
原句：And much to my disappointment, the books were so poorly packed up that the cover of one book was torn.
拓展句：And I was disappointed that the books were so poorly packed up that the cover of one book was torn.
【點睛】[高分句型1] And much to my disappointment, the books were so poorly packed up that the cover of one book was torn. (運用了so...that...引導的結果狀語從句)
[高分句型2] I hope that you either refund my money or deliver a new set of books to me. (運用了that引導的賓語從句)
考向5 投訴網購圖書問題
（24-25高三上·安徽合肥·期中）假定你是李華，在某海外購物網站上訂購了一款智能手表作為新年禮物送給母親，但是收貨之后出現了一些問題，請你給該網站客服寫一封郵件，內容包括：
1. 投訴內容；
2. 你的訴求。
注意：1. 寫作詞數應為80左右；2. 開頭和結尾已給出，不計入總詞數。
Dear Sir or Madam
I’m writing to express my dissatisfaction with the smartwatch I recently purchased from your online store.
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