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閱讀下面材料，根據其內容和所給段落開頭語續寫兩段，使之構成一篇完整的短文，續寫的詞數應為150左右。
I was eight years old when my family moved from Towoomba to England in 1950. My mother was suffering from a rare disease and had to take treatment in London. The day before we boarded the ship, Father sent his five-year-old red heeler (Australian cattle dog), Spider, who was loved by us all, to his friend Sandy, as Sandy was to be his guardian while we were overseas. We didn’t know how long my mother’s treatment would take or how long we would be away.
Six weeks later, an air letter arrived from Sandy, giving my father the news that Spider had run away just two weeks after we had sailed. I will always remember my father’s face as he read this news. My mother and I tried to comfort him, knowing in our hearts how useless this was.
Sandy had advertised constantly on the media. Despite many “sightings”, the dog was never found. It seemed Spider just kept running and searching for us. My father worried he would be shot or dead from starvation. But our family thought that Father held a secret hope that Spider was still alive.
We sailed back to Australia two years later and my father immediately began his own search for Spider. He repeated calls to the people who had said they had seen his dog, but it turned out to be clueless.
One cold winter’s Saturday morning, eight months after our return, my father had a call from Gin Gin, 375 kilometers from Toowoomba. An elderly lady living on her own was putting food out “for a very old yellow dog”. This had been going on for a few weeks. Immediately we set off.
Five and a half hours later, we found the old house beside the bush (灌木叢). Sadly, the lady told my father that the dog hadn’t been around for a few days. My father had an upset look in his eyes. He put two fingers to his mouth and did his special whistle for Spider.
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1. 續寫詞數應為150左右；
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Suddenly there was a sound in the bush.___________________________________________
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Once home we gently cleaned him up.
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一、文章大意
1950 年，8 歲的作者一家因母親要去倫敦治病而搬往英國，出發前將心愛的 5 歲紅色澳洲牧牛犬 Spider 托付給父親的朋友 Sandy。六周后，Sandy 告知 Spider 在他們離開兩周后跑丟了，雖經多方尋找仍無果。兩年后作者一家回到澳大利亞，父親繼續尋找 Spider。八個月后的一個寒冷周六早晨，父親接到 375 公里外 Gin Gin 的電話，得知一位獨居老婦人連續幾周給一只老黃狗喂食。一家人立刻前往，卻得知狗已幾天沒出現。父親吹起給 Spider 的特殊口哨。
二、故事山分析
開端：作者一家因母親治病搬往英國，將狗托付給朋友。
發展：狗跑丟，家人和朋友多方尋找無果。
高潮：一家人回到澳大利亞后，父親接到可能發現狗的線索，前往尋找，卻得知狗已幾天未出現，父親吹口哨呼喚。
結局（預測）：狗聽到口哨聲出現，與家人團聚。
尾聲（預測）：家人和狗團聚后，感慨這份跨越時間和距離的深厚情感，體現動物與人之間真摯的羈絆。
三、伏筆及在續寫中的回應
伏筆 1：Spider 是家人深愛的狗 。回應：在續寫中，家人對 Spider 的深厚情感促使他們堅持不懈地尋找，重逢時也會格外激動。
伏筆 2：Spider 跑丟后多方尋找無果 。回應：與續寫中突然出現的狗形成對比，增加故事的戲劇性。
伏筆 3：父親接到可能發現狗的線索 。回應：是續寫中家人前往尋找并可能重逢的關鍵契機。
伏筆 4：父親吹起給 Spider 的特殊口哨 。回應：在續寫中，這是呼喚狗出現的關鍵信號，推動故事發展。
伏筆 5：家人對 Spider 的擔憂 。回應：在續寫中，重逢時家人的擔憂轉化為喜悅和安心。
四、續寫要點
第一段：描述從灌木叢中傳來的聲音越來越大，接著 Spider 搖搖晃晃地從灌木叢中走出來，它看起來又瘦又疲憊，但聽到口哨聲后，眼中閃爍著光芒，興奮地向父親跑來。父親激動地蹲下身子，抱住 Spider，眼中滿是淚水。
第二段：回到家后，家人溫柔地給 Spider 清洗，發現它身上有很多傷痕，大家心疼不已。之后的日子里，Spider 在家人的照顧下逐漸恢復健康，它總是緊緊跟著家人，一家人也更加珍惜這份失而復得的感情。
五、情感線
從家人與 Spider 分離時的不舍，到得知它跑丟后的擔憂，尋找無果時的失落，接到線索時的期待，尋找時的緊張，再到重逢時的激動和喜悅，最后是團聚后的溫馨和珍惜，情感層層遞進，展現出家人與狗之間深厚的情感。
六、故事線
作者一家因母親治病搬往英國，將 Spider 托付給朋友。
Spider 跑丟，家人和朋友多方尋找無果。
家人回到澳大利亞，父親繼續尋找。
父親接到可能發現 Spider 的線索，一家人前往尋找。
父親吹口哨呼喚，Spider 出現，與家人重逢。
家人帶 Spider 回家，悉心照顧，它恢復健康，一家人珍惜這份感情。
七、主旨升華句
This heartwarming reunion between the family and Spider taught us that the bond between humans and animals is a powerful force that can overcome time and distance.（家人與 Spider 的暖心重逢讓我們明白，人類與動物之間的紐帶是一種強大的力量，能夠跨越時間和距離。）
Through the long - awaited search and the joyous reunion, we realized that the love we share with our pets is not only a source of comfort but also a reminder of the unbreakable connection that exists between us.（通過漫長的期待尋找和歡樂的重逢，我們意識到，我們與寵物之間的愛不僅是一種安慰，更是我們之間牢不可破聯系的象征。）
The story of Spider's journey and return home serves as a beautiful example of the loyalty and perseverance that can exist in the relationship between humans and their animal companions.（Spider 的旅程和回家的故事，是人類與動物伙伴之間忠誠和堅持的美好例證。）
Our reunion with Spider made us understand that even in the face of seemingly insurmountable odds, the love and hope we hold for our beloved pets can lead to the most wonderful of outcomes.（我們與 Spider 的團聚讓我們明白，即使面對看似無法克服的困難，我們對心愛寵物的愛和希望也能帶來最美好的結果。）
This remarkable experience with Spider taught us that the love between humans and animals is a precious gift, one that enriches our lives and reminds us of the beauty of unconditional affection.（與 Spider 的這段非凡經歷讓我們明白，人類與動物之間的愛是一份珍貴的禮物，它豐富了我們的生活，讓我們銘記無條件的愛的美好。）
八、寫作示范一
第一段
Suddenly there was a sound in the bush. It grew louder and louder. To our great surprise, Spider, looking extremely thin and weak, staggered out from the thick bushes. His fur was matted and his body was covered in dirt. But as soon as he heard the familiar whistle, his ears perked up and his eyes lit up with excitement. He barked weakly and rushed towards my father, his tail wagging vigorously. My father, with tears welling up in his eyes, quickly crouched down and opened his arms wide. Spider jumped right into his embrace, nuzzling his face affectionately.
第二段
Once home we gently cleaned him up. We found many scars on his body, which made us heartbroken. Over the next few days, we took good care of him, feeding him nutritious food and giving him warm baths. Gradually, Spider regained his strength and vitality. He became our shadow, following us everywhere in the house. Our home was filled with joy and laughter again, and this precious reunion made us cherish every moment with him even more.
寫作示范二
第一段
Suddenly there was a sound in the bush. Everyone held their breath, waiting anxiously. A few seconds later, a shabby - looking dog limped out. It was Spider! His legs were trembling, and he seemed on the verge of collapse. However, the moment he saw my father, a glimmer of recognition flashed in his eyes. He let out a faint whine and tried his best to run towards us. My father rushed forward, scooping him up into his arms. Spider licked my father's hands, as if to tell him how much he had missed us.
第二段
Once home we gently cleaned him up. We carefully applied medicine to his wounds, and my mother prepared a warm meal for him. Spider ate with gusto, his eyes full of contentment. In the following weeks, with our love and care, he transformed from a weak and battered dog into a lively one again. He played with us in the yard, and his presence brought a sense of completeness to our family. This experience taught us the true meaning of loyalty and the power of love that can endure through hardships.
九、范文
Suddenly there was a sound in the bush. My heart leaped into my throat as we all turned towards the noise. Out stumbled Spider, his body battered and his fur matted with dirt and twigs. But his eyes were fixed on my father, filled with a mixture of exhaustion and sheer joy. Father rushed over and scooped him up into his arms, cradling him gently as if he were the most precious thing in the world. Spider's tail managed a feeble wag, and he licked my father's hand weakly. We were all in tears, amazed and overjoyed at this miraculous reunion.
Once home we gently cleaned him up. We took our time, carefully washing away the grime of his long journey. As we worked, Spider seemed to relax, as if he knew he was finally safe. We gave him a warm, soft bed and a bowl of fresh water and food. Over the next few days, he slowly regained his strength and his old spirit. He would follow us from room to room, never wanting to be far from our sides. His return was a reminder of the incredible bond we shared, a bond that had withstood time and distance. We knew then that Spider was more than just a pet; he was a beloved member of our family, and we would never let him go again.

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