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運(yùn)用從句，提升表達(dá) 【用合適的從句合并下列句子】
1.He is a child. He knows a lot.
________________________________________, he knows a lot.
Child as he is,he knows a lot.
2.He was excited. He could not say a word.
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He was so excited that he could not say a word.
3.They put off the competition. It rained heavily.
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They put off the competition because it rained heavily.
4.The teacher told me a piece of good news. I was admitted into a key college.
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The teacher told me a piece of good news that I was admitted into a key college.
5.The view was really breathtaking. It impressed me most during my trip to Guilin.
___________________________________was that the view was really breathtaking.
What impressed me most during my trip to Guilin was
that the view was really breathtaking.
6.We involved ourselves in the community activities. We gained experience for growth.
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We involved ourselves in the community activities,
through which we gained experience for growth.
二.套用特殊句式，升級(jí)表達(dá)
1.A disaster was avoided because of their help. (強(qiáng)調(diào)原因)
_____________________________________________________________________It was because of their help that a disaster was avoided.
2.I have never seen such a beautiful picture. (部分倒裝)
_____________________________________________________________________Never have I seen such a beautiful picture.
3.A beautiful lake lies at the foot of the hill.(全部倒裝)
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At the foot of the hill lies a beautiful lake.
4.He set up a charitable organization and donated the money he earned.(用not only...but also...并列)
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He not only set up a charitable organization
but also donated the money he earned.
5.He is very happy to see his friends.(感嘆句)
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How happy he is to see his friends!
6.While I was on the street, I came cross a friend of mine.(狀語從句的省略)
_____________________________________________________________________On the street, I came across a friend of mine.
7.We can’t visit the museum because it was being repaired.(用with復(fù)合結(jié)構(gòu))
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With the museum being repaired,we can’t visit it .
8.I sat in my room for a few minutes. My eyes were fixed on the ceiling.(用with復(fù)合結(jié)構(gòu))
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I sat in my room for a few minutes, with my eyes fixed on the ceiling.
三 .無靈主語和代詞it來打頭,增強(qiáng)文章的多變性
Great changes have happened to Tom in the past ten years. (用witness改寫)
_____________________________________________________________________The past ten years have witnessed great changes in Tom.
Students didn’t come because of the bad weather. (用prevent改寫)
_____________________________________________________________________The bad weather prevented the students from coming.
I thought of a good idea when I read this article. (用occur改寫)
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A good idea occurred to me when I read this article.
People believe that he will win the first prize in the contest. (用it is + done改寫)
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It is believed that he will win the first prize in the contest.
In January 2017, I started my life in a small city called Mangshi. (用find改寫)
_____________________________________________________________________In January 2017, I found myself starting my life in a small city called Mangshi.
She felt a little sad.(用seize, grip或flood over 改寫)
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(1)Sadness flooded over her.
(2)Her heart was seized by a touch of sadness.
(3)He was gripped by sadness.
四. 用狀語開頭，增強(qiáng)文章表現(xiàn)力
Tom, whose nose was red with cold, entered the room.(用with復(fù)合結(jié)構(gòu)開頭)
_____________________________________________________________________With his nose red with cold, Tom entered the room.
Mr.Green was angry at the girl’s oversleeping and bent down to wake her up.(形容詞短語作狀語)
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Angry at the girl's oversleeping, Mr. Green bent down to wake her up.
As soon as I heard the news of his winning, I offered my congratulations to him.(用upon doing...)
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Upon hearing the news of his winning, I offered my congratulations to him.
五、通過添加狀語來擴(kuò)展句子
(1)添加非謂語結(jié)構(gòu)
I opened the letter, _________________________________________.
(現(xiàn)在分詞作伴隨狀語)
(1)I opened the letter, reading it carefully.
(2)I opened the letter, glancing through its contents.
I drooped the vase, ______________________________________.
(現(xiàn)在分詞作結(jié)果狀語)
(1)I dropped the vase, breaking/shattering it into pieces.
(2)I dropped the vase, **leaving it in pieces on the floor.
Mike was surprised ___________________________________
(動(dòng)詞不定式作原因狀語)
(1)Mike was surprised to see the gift.
(2)Mike was surprised to find the door unlocked.
_________________________________, the lady returned home.
(過去分詞作伴隨狀語)
(1)Followed by her dog, the lady returned home.
(2)Accompanied by her friends, the lady returned home.
(3)Dressed in a beautiful gown, the lady returned home.
We hurried to the station, ____________________________________
(動(dòng)詞不定式作結(jié)果狀語)
We hurried to the station, only to find the train had left.
Tom worked day and night___________________________________
(動(dòng)詞不定式作目的狀語)
(1)Tom worked day and night to finish the project on time.
(2)Tom worked day and night to meet the deadline.
(3)Tom worked day and night to support his family.
________________________________________, the students stopped talking.
(現(xiàn)分作時(shí)間狀語)
(1)Seeing the teacher approach, the students stopped talking.
(2)Hearing the bell ring, the students stopped talking.
____________________________________, the problems were settled at last.
(過分作原因狀語)
Caused by a lack of communication, the problems were settled at last.
或Due to our joint efforts,the problems were settled at last.
_________________________________, the small town looks more beautiful.
(過分作時(shí)間狀語)
(1)Seen from the top of the hill, the small town looks more beautiful.
(2)Observed at sunset, the small town looks more beautiful.
______________________, Mary didn’t come to school yesterday.
(現(xiàn)在分詞作原因狀語)
(1)Feeling unwell, Mary didn’t come to school yesterday.
(2)Being sick, Mary didn’t come to school yesterday.
(3)Having a headache, Mary didn’t come to school yesterday.
(2) 添加其他狀語
Bob approached us, ____________________________________________
(添加形容詞短語)
Bob approached us,,(looking) exceptionally confident and composed.
_________________________________, Jane didn’t dare to move.
(添加形容詞短語)
Extremely scared/Absolutely terrified, Jane didn’t dare to move.
The little girl seemed sad and went back home__________________
(添加介詞短語)
The little girl seemed sad and went back home without saying a word/in silence
The doctors gave her a general checkup_______________________________________________
(添加目的狀語從句)
The doctors gave her a general checkup so that they could monitor her condition.
________________________, our headmaster soon left the meeting room.
(添加獨(dú)立主格結(jié)構(gòu))
The meeting being over/With the agenda completed,our headmaster soon left the meeting room.
六：細(xì)化動(dòng)作，構(gòu)造動(dòng)作鏈
●示例:
Lisa朝她父親走去。 Lisa walked toward her father.
Lisa saw her father in the distance, so she jumped up and made her way through the crowd toward him.
●練一練:
請(qǐng)通過細(xì)化動(dòng)作，構(gòu)造動(dòng)作鏈，使下列句子更生動(dòng)：
They broke into smiles.
__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ They noticed the familiar face in the crowd, and their faces gradually relaxed. First, a tiny corner of their lips curled upwards, then their eyes crinkled into crescents, and finally, their whole faces erupted into broad, radiant smiles, lighting up the room with their joy.
他們?cè)谌巳褐凶⒁獾搅四菑埵煜さ拿婵祝樕系谋砬闈u漸放松下來。先是嘴角微微上揚(yáng)，隨后眼睛彎成了月牙狀，最后，整張臉綻放出燦爛的笑容，喜悅之情照亮了整個(gè)房間。
Lily looked out of the widow.
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Lily stepped away from her desk, her eyes drawn to the glistening square of glass. She placed her hands gently on the sill, leaning slightly forward as if to get a better view. She gazed out, her brow furrowing slightly.
莉莉望向窗外。莉莉從書桌旁走開，目光被那塊閃閃發(fā)光的玻璃方塊所吸引。她輕輕地將手放在窗臺(tái)上，身體微微前傾，仿佛想看得更清楚些。她向外凝視著，眉頭微微蹙起.
The mother kissed her baby on the cheek.
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The mother gazed down at her baby with a warm smile, gently lifting the tiny hand that was gripping her shirt. She leaned in close, her heart swelling with love, and placed a soft, tender kiss on the baby's rosy cheek. The baby giggled, its eyes sparkling with joy.
母親面帶微笑，溫情脈脈地俯視著懷中的嬰兒，輕輕抬起嬰兒緊抓著她襯衫的小手。她湊近嬰兒，心中愛意涌動(dòng)，在嬰兒粉嫩的臉頰上印下一個(gè)溫柔細(xì)膩的吻。嬰兒咯咯地笑了起來，眼睛里閃爍著喜悅的光芒.
Jeremy去郊外游玩遇到了一只兔子。請(qǐng)?jiān)O(shè)計(jì)一個(gè)情節(jié)，詳細(xì)描述他遇到兔子的過程。
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Jeremy was taking a leisurely stroll through the countryside, surrounded by lush green fields and the soft hum of nature. As he wandered along a dirt path lined with wildflowers, something caught his eye—a small, fluffy creature hopping gracefully nearby. Curious, Jeremy approached cautiously and realized it was a rabbit, its soft fur glistening in the sunlight. The rabbit seemed unafraid, stopping occasionally to nibble on tender grass. Jeremy knelt down slowly, extending an open hand, and to his delight, the rabbit came closer, sniffing curiously before hopping away playfully.
杰里米正在鄉(xiāng)間悠閑地散步，四周是郁郁蔥蔥的田野和自然界柔和的嗡嗡聲。當(dāng)他沿著一條野花盛開的小土路漫步時(shí)，有什么東西吸引了他的目光——一只小巧、毛茸茸的生物正在附近優(yōu)雅地跳躍。出于好奇，杰里米小心翼翼地靠近，發(fā)現(xiàn)那是一只兔子，它的軟毛在陽光下閃閃發(fā)光。兔子似乎并不害怕，偶爾會(huì)停下來啃食鮮嫩的青草。杰里米緩緩跪下，伸出張開的手，令他高興的是，兔子靠近了過來，好奇地嗅了嗅，然后頑皮地跳開了。
Nina今天參加了學(xué)校舉辦的舞蹈比賽。請(qǐng)?jiān)O(shè)計(jì)一個(gè)情節(jié)，詳細(xì)描述Nina參加比賽的過程。
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Nina was buzzing with excitement as she prepared for the school dance competition. Dressed in a shimmering costume that complemented her graceful movements, she took deep breaths to calm her nerves. As she stepped onto the stage, the spotlight illuminated her, and the audience erupted in applause. With music filling the air, Nina began her routine, her movements flowing seamlessly from one step to the next. Her elegance and precision captivated the crowd, and by the end of her performance, the room was filled with thunderous applause and cheers.
尼娜在為學(xué)校的舞蹈比賽做準(zhǔn)備時(shí)興奮不已。她穿著一件閃閃發(fā)光的服裝，襯托出她優(yōu)雅的舞姿，她深吸一口氣以平復(fù)緊張的情緒。當(dāng)她踏上舞臺(tái)時(shí)，聚光燈照亮了她，觀眾爆發(fā)出熱烈的掌聲。隨著音樂在空氣中回蕩，尼娜開始了她的表演，她的動(dòng)作流暢地從一步過渡到下一步。她的優(yōu)雅和精準(zhǔn)吸引了觀眾，到表演結(jié)束時(shí)，整個(gè)房間充滿了雷鳴般的掌聲和歡呼聲。
七. 巧用修辭手法
樹木在風(fēng)中低語。（擬人）
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The trees whisper in the wind.
The trees rustle softly, whispering secrets to the wind.
她沒有意識(shí)到機(jī)會(huì)正在敲她的門。(擬人)
_____________________________________________________________________ She didn't realize that opportunity was knocking at her door.
運(yùn)動(dòng)員像離鉉的箭一樣向終點(diǎn)線沖去。(比喻)
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(1)The athlete rushed to the finishing line as swiftly as an arrow released from its bowstring.
(2)The athlete surged towards the finish line like an arrow released from its bow.
【常用的比喻搭配】
1.as light as a feather (輕如鴻毛)
2.as strong as a horse (強(qiáng)壯如馬)
3.as cool as a cucumber (泰然自若)
4.as fast as lightning (快如閃電)
5.as busy as a bee (忙忙碌碌)
6.as hungry as a wolf (饑腸轆轆)
7.as slowly as a snail(像蝸牛一樣慢)
8.as cold as the ice (像冰一樣冰冷)
9.like a cat on hot bricks (像熱鍋上的螞蟻)
10.like a duck to water (如魚得水)
11.like an arrow from the string(如離弦之箭)
12.like a bullet (像子彈一樣)
八：把靜態(tài)描寫改成動(dòng)態(tài)描寫
●示例:
1.I was very terrified at the sight of the fierce wolf. (靜態(tài))
At the sight of fierce wolf, I froze with terror. (動(dòng)態(tài))
2.When the host announced that she won the prize, she was excited. (靜態(tài))
When the host announced that she won the prize, her eyes twinkled with excitement. (動(dòng)態(tài))
3.Upon hearing the bad news, she felt very sad. (靜態(tài))
Upon hearing the bad news, her heart ached, tears streaming down her cheeks.(動(dòng)態(tài))
●練一練:
Hearing the police’s voice, the suspect was awfully fearful.
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Hearing the police’s voice, the suspect trembled with fear.
Walking into the headmaster’s office, he was terribly nervous.
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Walking into the headmaster’s office, he could feel his lips drying out,prompting him to lick them occasionally,with a pounding heart.
At the sight of a stranger approaching the house, the dog became alert.
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At the sight of a stranger approaching the house, the dog’s ears pricked up and it became alert.
After working a long day, I fell asleep quickly.
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After working a long day, I collapsed into bed and fell asleep quickly.
九．少用籠統(tǒng)詞，多用細(xì)節(jié)詞
請(qǐng)用合適的細(xì)節(jié)詞改寫下列句子中的黑體部分
All the facts showed that Bob was right.
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All the facts indicated/demonstrated /revealed clearly that Bob was right.
Emily was afraid when she saw that snake.
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Emily was terrified when she saw that snake.
The nice lady entertained all the guests.
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The gracious lady entertained all the guests.
I know the importance of the environmental protection.
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I am well aware of/quite understand/fully realize the importance of the environmental protection.

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