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When I was a kid, my parents brought me a four-month-old puppy (小狗). My family named the puppy Dusty. Although I wanted to lay only claim to her affections, in a family of seven kids, no one lays permanent claim to the family pet.
Dusty was our dog, not “my” dog. We soon realized that she had patience. My baby sister often transformed Dusty’s warm fur into a naptime pillow — falling asleep on the carpet. Like a protective mother, Dusty waited — without moving — until my sister woke.
Dusty doubled as a school crossing guard, too. Monday through Friday she’d walk us kids two blocks to St. Patrick’s Parochial, looking both ways to check for the traffic before allowing us to cross the street. We’d wave good-bye as we entered the door, knowing Dusty would be waiting at the school door to claim us at the close of the school day.
Of all the contributions Dusty made to our family, one incident stands out far above all others.
Late one night, Dusty rushed to my parents’ bedroom. She barked and barked. When she got no response, Dusty raced upstairs to my bedroom and my brothers’ bedroom and barked again and again. When she failed to fully wake us, she flew back down the steps and returned to my parents’ room. Finally, she got Mom’s attention.
“What are you doing, Dusty ” Mom said, still halfway in dreamland. Dusty persisted (堅(jiān)持). Finally my mother gave in. “Okay, what is it ”
Dusty rushed out of Mom's room. Thinking the dog needed to be let out to relieve herself, my mother followed Dusty to the front door.
注意：
1. 續(xù)寫(xiě)詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150左右；
2. 請(qǐng)按如下格式在答題卡上的相應(yīng)位置作答。
When Mom opened the door, Dusty tore across the street, not stopping to do her business as my mother had assumed.
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My mother called the fire department immediately.
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一、文章大意 小時(shí)候，父母給“我”帶回一只四個(gè)月大的小狗Dusty。在有七個(gè)孩子的家庭里，Dusty是大家的寵物。它非常有耐心，寶寶妹妹常把它的毛當(dāng)枕頭睡覺(jué)，它也靜靜等待妹妹醒來(lái)。Dusty還像學(xué)校的交通協(xié)管員，每天陪孩子們上下學(xué)，確保過(guò)馬路安全。一天深夜，Dusty先沖向父母臥室狂吠，沒(méi)得到回應(yīng)后又上樓到“我”和哥哥們的臥室，反復(fù)如此，最終引起媽媽注意。媽媽以為它要出去方便，便跟著它來(lái)到前門(mén)。
二、故事山分析
開(kāi)端：“我” 家迎來(lái)小狗 Dusty，它成為家庭一員，展現(xiàn)出有耐心、守護(hù)孩子上下學(xué)等特點(diǎn)。
發(fā)展：深夜 Dusty 異常舉動(dòng)，不斷在各房間狂吠，試圖叫醒家人。
高潮：媽媽跟著 Dusty 來(lái)到前門(mén)，Dusty 的行為出乎媽媽意料，它沒(méi)有去方便。
結(jié)局（預(yù)測(cè)）：Dusty 成功引導(dǎo)家人發(fā)現(xiàn)危險(xiǎn)（如鄰居家著火等），家人及時(shí)報(bào)警，避免了嚴(yán)重后果。
尾聲（預(yù)測(cè)）：家人對(duì) Dusty 的英勇行為十分感激，Dusty 在家庭中的地位更加特殊，它的故事成為家人間溫暖的回憶。
三、伏筆及在續(xù)寫(xiě)中的回應(yīng)
伏筆 1：Dusty 對(duì)家人的守護(hù)，如陪孩子上下學(xué)?；貞?yīng)：在續(xù)寫(xiě)中，Dusty 深夜的行為也是對(duì)家人及鄰居的守護(hù)，體現(xiàn)它一直以來(lái)守護(hù)家人的本能延續(xù)。
伏筆 2：Dusty 的聰明，能理解一些日常行為（如過(guò)馬路等）?；貞?yīng)：它能通過(guò)反復(fù)行動(dòng)引起家人注意，并且準(zhǔn)確引導(dǎo)媽媽到危險(xiǎn)地點(diǎn)，展現(xiàn)其聰明才智。
伏筆 3：Dusty 的堅(jiān)持，在叫不醒家人時(shí)反復(fù)行動(dòng)。回應(yīng)：在媽媽誤解它要方便時(shí)，依然堅(jiān)持引導(dǎo)媽媽?zhuān)罱K成功讓媽媽發(fā)現(xiàn)危險(xiǎn)。
伏筆 4：深夜 Dusty 的異常行為?；貞?yīng)：是為了引出后面的危險(xiǎn)情況，如鄰居家著火，解釋它異常行為的原因。
伏筆 5：媽媽跟著 Dusty 到前門(mén)以為它要方便?；貞?yīng)：與 Dusty 實(shí)際沖向危險(xiǎn)地點(diǎn)形成反差，增加故事的戲劇性。
四、續(xù)寫(xiě)要點(diǎn)
第一段：著重描寫(xiě) Dusty 沖過(guò)馬路后的具體行為，比如它對(duì)著某戶(hù)人家或某個(gè)危險(xiǎn)區(qū)域狂吠、用爪子抓門(mén)等，以及媽媽看到這些行為后的驚訝和疑惑，還有周?chē)h(huán)境的一些細(xì)節(jié)，如是否有異常氣味、聲響等。
第二段：詳細(xì)描述媽媽報(bào)警后的情況，消防部門(mén)的反應(yīng)速度，到達(dá)現(xiàn)場(chǎng)后的救援行動(dòng)，以及家人對(duì) Dusty 的感激和贊揚(yáng)，突出 Dusty 的英勇行為帶來(lái)的積極影響。
五、情感線
起初家人對(duì) Dusty 是喜愛(ài)和依賴(lài)，Dusty 也忠誠(chéng)守護(hù)家人。深夜 Dusty 異常舉動(dòng)時(shí)，家人先是疑惑不解。當(dāng)發(fā)現(xiàn)危險(xiǎn)后，家人轉(zhuǎn)為震驚和緊張。在 Dusty 成功引導(dǎo)媽媽并避免嚴(yán)重后果后，家人對(duì) Dusty 充滿(mǎn)感激和敬佩，情感在這個(gè)過(guò)程中不斷升華，體現(xiàn)了人與動(dòng)物之間深厚的情感紐帶。
六、故事線
Dusty 來(lái)到 “我” 家，成為家庭寵物，展現(xiàn)守護(hù)家人的特點(diǎn)。
深夜 Dusty 異常舉動(dòng)，在各房間狂吠。
媽媽跟著 Dusty 到前門(mén)，Dusty 沖過(guò)馬路。
Dusty 引導(dǎo)媽媽發(fā)現(xiàn)危險(xiǎn)（如鄰居家著火）。
媽媽報(bào)警，消防部門(mén)救援。
家人對(duì) Dusty 的英勇行為表示感激，Dusty 成為家庭英雄。
七、主旨升華句
A dog's loyalty and love can transcend language and understanding, showing us the true meaning of selfless protection.（狗的忠誠(chéng)和愛(ài)可以超越語(yǔ)言和理解，向我們展示無(wú)私守護(hù)的真正含義。）
In the face of danger, the bond between humans and animals can be a powerful force that saves lives and warms hearts.（在危險(xiǎn)面前，人類(lèi)與動(dòng)物之間的紐帶可以成為一股強(qiáng)大的力量，拯救生命，溫暖心靈。）
Sometimes, the most unexpected heroes are the ones who have been by our side all along, like our furry friends.（有時(shí)候，最意想不到的英雄就是那些一直陪伴在我們身邊的，比如我們毛茸茸的朋友。）
A dog's instincts and determination can lead to remarkable acts of bravery, reminding us of the hidden powers within our animal companions.（狗的本能和決心可以帶來(lái)非凡的勇敢行為，提醒我們動(dòng)物伙伴身上隱藏的力量。）
The love and protection of a pet are not just for daily companionship but can also be a crucial lifeline in times of crisis.（寵物的愛(ài)和守護(hù)不僅僅是日常陪伴，在危機(jī)時(shí)刻也可以是至關(guān)重要的生命線。）
八、寫(xiě)作示范一
When Mom opened the door, Dusty tore across the street, not stopping to do her business as my mother had assumed. Instead, she dashed straight to the neighbor's house and started barking wildly, jumping up and down, her paws scratching at the door. Mom was shocked and confused at first. Then, she noticed a faint smell of smoke in the air. Peering through the window, she saw a small fire starting in the kitchen.
My mother called the fire department immediately. She also tried to wake up the neighbors by knocking loudly on the door. In no time, the fire trucks arrived. The firefighters quickly put out the fire. The neighbors were saved from the potential disaster. Everyone was filled with gratitude towards Dusty. Our family was especially proud of her. From that day on, Dusty became a hero not only in our family but also in the neighborhood, and her story was told and retold as a heartwarming tale of a dog's loyalty and bravery.
寫(xiě)作示范二
When Mom opened the door, Dusty tore across the street, not stopping to do her business as my mother had assumed. She ran around the corner house, barking non - stop. Mom followed closely, her heart pounding with curiosity. As she got closer, she heard crackling sounds. To her horror, she realized that the garage of the house was on fire. Flames were starting to lick the walls.
My mother called the fire department immediately. She shouted for help, trying to wake up the sleeping residents. The neighbors rushed out, panic - stricken. Minutes later, the fire trucks roared in. The firefighters worked efficiently, and soon the fire was under control. The family whose house was on fire was extremely grateful. Dusty was praised and petted by everyone. Our family felt a deep sense of pride in our beloved pet. It was a night none of us would ever forget, a night that proved Dusty's love and loyalty to our family and the whole community.
九、【參考答案】
When Mom opened the door, Dusty tore across the street, not stopping to do her business as my mother had assumed. Her paws pounded the ground, not a moment wasted as she raced, her tail streaming behind her like a triumphant banner. Then Mom discovered what Dusty already knew. The house across the street—where my best friend, Marianne, and her family lived — was on fire! All of Dusty’s middle-of-the-night craziness had served a purpose: she’d been trying to call for help.
My mother called the fire department immediately. Soon, the firemen in their trucks roared up the street, put out the fire, saved my best friend’s family from harm and their house from total ruin. My mother refused to take credit. “It was Dusty, ” I put my arms around my dog’s neck and kissed her square on the tip of her wet nose. “Thank you for saving Marianne, ” I whispered into Dusty’s black ear. “You’re the bravest dog I’ve ever known. ”

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