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The train station was bustling (喧鬧的) as I sat on a cold metal bench, watching the chaos (混亂) unfold around me. Travelers rushed by, each with their own destinations, their own stories. Yet I sat there, still and purposeless. My suitcase rested beside me, but unlike everyone else, I had no destination. I had left my hometown, tired of the never-ending routine, but the escape I had longed for brought no relief. Instead, it left me alone, separated from a world I once believed I understood. The noise, the people, the announcements - all of it seemed distant, as though I were watching life happen from behind a glass wall.
As I stared aimlessly, a wrinkled old man walked past me, pushing an overloaded cart of junk. He paused a few feet away, scanning the area, before sitting down cross-legged on the floor near me. His clothes were muddy, and his hands looked roughened by years of hard work. I watched as he reached into his cart and pulled out a harmonica (口琴), pressing it to his lips. The first note was shaky, but soon a simple, beautiful melody (旋律) filled the air. Strangely, the chaotic station grew quieter, as though his music had worked magic.
At first, I felt confused - why here, and why now But as I watched him play, I noticed something remarkable. His face lit up, not with joy exactly, but with a deep contentment that seemed out of place in his circumstances. People started slowing down to listen. A young girl tugged at her mother's coat, wanting to stay. A businessman, hurriedly checking his phone, paused to drop a coin in the old man’s hat. It struck me how a man with so little could share so much.
注意：
1. 續(xù)寫詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150左右；
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With a hesitant step, I approached the old man, wanting to understand the source of his contentment.
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After hearing what he said, I felt a glimmer of hope as I reached for my own suitcase.
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文章大意
“我” 厭倦家鄉(xiāng)一成不變的生活，離家來(lái)到喧鬧的火車站，卻因漫無(wú)目的而倍感孤獨(dú)，周圍的一切都讓 “我” 覺(jué)得遙遠(yuǎn)。此時(shí)，一位衣衫襤褸、推著裝滿雜物手推車的老人在 “我” 附近坐下，拿出口琴吹奏。起初音符不穩(wěn)，但很快美妙旋律響起，喧鬧的車站都安靜下來(lái)，他臉上帶著與處境不符的滿足感，引得路人駐足聆聽(tīng)，甚至有人投幣。“我” 對(duì)老人的滿足感到好奇，想一探究竟。
故事山分析
開(kāi)端：“我” 在火車站，因逃離家鄉(xiāng)卻無(wú)目的而迷茫孤獨(dú)，周圍的喧囂與 “我” 格格不入。
發(fā)展：老人出現(xiàn)，他衣衫破舊，推著雜物車，坐下后吹起口琴，音樂(lè)讓車站安靜，他的滿足和路人的反應(yīng)引起 “我” 的好奇。
高潮：“我” 決定接近老人，探尋他滿足的原因，這是故事的關(guān)鍵轉(zhuǎn)折點(diǎn)，推動(dòng)情節(jié)發(fā)展。
結(jié)局（待續(xù)寫）：通過(guò) “我” 與老人的對(duì)話以及 “我” 之后的感悟和行動(dòng)，展現(xiàn)從迷茫到找到方向的轉(zhuǎn)變，構(gòu)成故事結(jié)局。
伏筆以及在續(xù)寫中的回應(yīng)
“我” 的迷茫無(wú)目的：為 “我” 向老人尋求答案埋下伏筆，在續(xù)寫中，“我” 會(huì)向老人傾訴自己的困惑，渴望得到指引。
老人的貧窮與滿足形成反差：引出 “我” 的好奇，在續(xù)寫中，老人會(huì)解釋自己滿足的原因，這將觸動(dòng) “我”，讓 “我” 重新審視生活。
路人對(duì)老人音樂(lè)的反應(yīng)：暗示老人的行為有感染力，在續(xù)寫中，“我” 也會(huì)被老人的音樂(lè)和態(tài)度所感染，發(fā)生思想轉(zhuǎn)變。
“我” 對(duì)周圍的疏離感：與之后 “我” 被老人吸引形成對(duì)比，在續(xù)寫中，“我” 會(huì)因老人的出現(xiàn)打破這種疏離，重新融入生活。
老人的音樂(lè)：是故事的重要元素，在續(xù)寫中，老人可能會(huì)結(jié)合音樂(lè)闡述自己的生活態(tài)度，影響 “我” 的想法。
續(xù)寫要點(diǎn)（兩段）
第一段：著重描寫 “我” 接近老人時(shí)的心理活動(dòng)，緊張、期待又有些忐忑。與老人交流時(shí)，詳細(xì)描述老人的回答，他可能講述自己雖物質(zhì)匱乏，但從音樂(lè)中找到內(nèi)心寧?kù)o，生活的小確幸讓他滿足，如能在車站為大家?guī)?lái)片刻寧?kù)o就是幸福。
第二段：描繪 “我” 聽(tīng)了老人的話后的內(nèi)心變化，從迷茫到找到希望。描述 “我” 的行動(dòng)，如決定重新規(guī)劃行程，不再盲目逃避，而是帶著新的感悟去探索世界，最后表達(dá)對(duì)未來(lái)的期待。
情感線
起初，“我” 因逃離家鄉(xiāng)卻無(wú)方向而孤獨(dú)迷茫，內(nèi)心充滿對(duì)生活的失望和對(duì)未知的恐懼。看到老人滿足的樣子，“我” 好奇又疑惑。接近老人時(shí)，“我” 緊張又期待。聽(tīng)老人講述后，“我” 心中燃起希望，從消極逃避轉(zhuǎn)變?yōu)榉e極面對(duì)，對(duì)未來(lái)充滿期待，渴望像老人一樣，從平凡生活中找到屬于自己的滿足，內(nèi)心變得堅(jiān)定而充實(shí)。
故事線
“我” 厭倦家鄉(xiāng)生活，來(lái)到火車站，卻無(wú)目的地，感到孤獨(dú)迷茫。
衣衫破舊的老人出現(xiàn)，在 “我” 附近坐下吹口琴，音樂(lè)讓車站安靜，他的滿足和路人反應(yīng)引起 “我” 好奇。
“我” 決定接近老人，探尋他滿足的原因。
老人向 “我” 解釋自己滿足的原因，如從音樂(lè)和生活小確幸中找到幸福。
“我” 聽(tīng)后受到觸動(dòng)，內(nèi)心從迷茫轉(zhuǎn)為充滿希望。
“我” 決定重新規(guī)劃行程，積極面對(duì)生活，期待未來(lái)。
主旨升華句
This encounter taught me that true contentment doesn't lie in material possessions or a fixed destination, but in the simple joys and the ability to find beauty in every moment.（這次相遇教會(huì)我，真正的滿足不在于物質(zhì)財(cái)富或固定的目的地，而在于簡(jiǎn)單的快樂(lè)和在每一刻發(fā)現(xiàn)美的能力。）
The old man's story reminded me that even in the midst of chaos and hardship, a positive attitude can transform our perception of life and bring us inner peace.（老人的故事提醒我，即使在混亂和艱難之中，積極的態(tài)度也能改變我們對(duì)生活的認(rèn)知，給我們帶來(lái)內(nèi)心的平靜。）
Through this experience, I realized that sometimes, the most valuable lessons come from the most unexpected people, guiding us to rediscover the meaning of life.（通過(guò)這次經(jīng)歷，我意識(shí)到，有時(shí)候，最寶貴的教訓(xùn)來(lái)自最意想不到的人，引導(dǎo)我們重新發(fā)現(xiàn)生活的意義。）
The old man's music and his contentment were a wake - up call, making me understand that happiness is a choice we make, regardless of our circumstances.（老人的音樂(lè)和他的滿足感敲響了警鐘，讓我明白幸福是我們做出的選擇，與我們的處境無(wú)關(guān)。）
Our brief interaction at the train station not only changed my perspective on that day but also became a guiding light for my future journey, teaching me to cherish every moment and find joy in the simplest things.（我們?cè)诨疖囌镜亩虝航涣鞑粌H改變了我當(dāng)天的看法，也成為我未來(lái)旅程的一盞明燈，教會(huì)我珍惜每一刻，從最簡(jiǎn)單的事物中找到快樂(lè)。）
寫作示范一
With a hesitant step, I approached the old man, wanting to understand the source of his contentment. My heart was pounding, and I felt a bit nervous. "Sir," I said softly, "I'm curious. You seem so content, even though you don't have much. How do you manage that " The old man looked up at me with kind eyes and smiled. "Young man," he said, "life is full of simple pleasures. This harmonica brings me joy, and when I can share that joy with others, it makes me feel fulfilled. Material things don't define happiness." His words struck a chord in me.
After hearing what he said, I felt a glimmer of hope as I reached for my own suitcase. I realized that my journey didn't have to be aimless. I decided to set out with a new purpose, to explore the world and find my own simple pleasures. I thanked the old man sincerely and walked towards the ticket counter. Looking back, I saw him playing his harmonica again, still content. I was excited about the new chapter of my life, ready to embrace whatever came my way.
寫作示范二
With a hesitant step, I approached the old man, wanting to understand the source of his contentment. Standing in front of him, I stammered, "Excuse me, but your happiness really puzzles me. Can you tell me why " The old man put down his harmonica and replied, "Well, every day is a gift. When I play my music here, I see people's faces light up. That's more precious than any money or luxury. Life is what we make of it, and I choose to find beauty in the ordinary." His words were like a warm breeze on a cold day.
After hearing what he said, I felt a glimmer of hope as I reached for my own suitcase. I knew I couldn't keep running away. I made up my mind to go back home and face my life with a new attitude. I would cherish the small things, just like the old man. I waved goodbye to him and left the station with a new sense of purpose. I was eager to start this new journey, filled with the belief that a better life was waiting for me.
【答案】One possible version:
With a hesitant step, I approached the old man, wanting to understand the source of his contentment. As I neared, his melody softened, and he looked up with a gentle smile. “Beautiful tune, ” I said, unsure how to begin. He nodded, his hands resting on the harmonica. “Music doesn’t fix everything, but it reminds me there’s still beauty in the world, ” he said. I hesitated, then shared my struggle - the feeling of being lost, the weight of purposelessness. “Life isn’t about having all the answers, ” he added. “It’s about finding meaning, even in the little things. That’s what keeps me going. ”
After hearing what he said, I felt a glimmer of hope as I reached for my own suitcase. The old man’s words stayed with me, urging me to stop running and start creating purpose. Dropping a coin in his hat, I thanked him - not just for the music, but for the wisdom. As I boarded the train, the station no longer felt chaotic but alive with possibilities. This time I was resolved to push forward. The uncertainty ahead no longer frightened me. Instead, it felt like a blank canvas waiting to be painted, a melody waiting to be played.

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