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I had run away from home after finishing high school. My parents had insisted I go to college, but I was tired of school. I hated it. I was determined not to go. And, besides, my father was too strict. I had too many chores to do around the farm. I haled the work!
There had been a quarrel between my father and me. I threw some things into a bag and left angrily, as my father shouted after me, “If you leave, don’t come back!” My mother cried openly, and I had seen those tears during a hundred sleepless nights.
Then it was time to write a letter to my father.
Dear Dad,
It’s been more than a year now. I’ve traveled east to west. I’ve had dozens of jobs. None of them amounted to very much. Always the same questions: “How much education have you got ” It seems they always want college men for the good jobs.
Dad, you and Mother were right about everything. I know now that the work on the farm didn’t hurt me, and I’m convinced I need college. I’m also convinced that both of you loved me.
Dad, I’ve learned a lesson. I want to come home. I know you said if I left, I couldn’t come back, but I’m praying you’ll change your mind. I want to come home and be a part of the family again.
Give my love to Mother and the girls.
Love,
Your son
As I folded the letter and put it into an envelope, I felt a refreshing relief. It was as if a heavy load had been lifted from my shoulders. And I had to be on my way home.
I started down the desolate road—the long road home. Fortunately, a car picked me up, and it was good to have someone to talk with. The driver was a salesman and very pleasant.
“Where you going, boy ” he asked good-naturedly.
There was a long silence before I said, “Home.”
“Been away from home long ”
I smiled, a little self-conscious, and said, “One year, one month and two days.”
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Having heard my story, he expressed his support for my final decision and told me something surprising.
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Finally I arrived home when. it was completely dark.
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文章大意
“我” 高中畢業(yè)后，因父母堅(jiān)持讓 “我” 上大學(xué)，加上覺(jué)得父親過(guò)于嚴(yán)厲，農(nóng)場(chǎng)家務(wù)繁重，與父親發(fā)生爭(zhēng)吵后離家出走。在外漂泊一年多，“我” 歷經(jīng)艱辛，做過(guò)許多工作，卻因?qū)W歷受限難以找到好工作。此時(shí) “我” 意識(shí)到父母當(dāng)初的想法是正確的，于是寫信給父親表達(dá)悔意，渴望回家。在回家路上，“我” 搭上一位推銷員的車，他詢問(wèn) “我” 的去向，“我” 告知他自己離家的時(shí)長(zhǎng)。
故事山分析
開端：“我” 與父親因上大學(xué)和農(nóng)場(chǎng)勞作的矛盾爭(zhēng)吵后離家出走。
發(fā)展：“我” 在外漂泊，經(jīng)歷各種工作，因?qū)W歷不足碰壁，開始反思自己的行為。
高潮：“我” 寫信給父親表達(dá)想回家的愿望，踏上歸程，這是故事的關(guān)鍵轉(zhuǎn)折點(diǎn)，充滿期待和緊張。
結(jié)局（待續(xù)寫）：通過(guò)司機(jī)的講述以及 “我” 回家后的情景，展現(xiàn)家庭的接納和 “我” 的成長(zhǎng)，構(gòu)成故事結(jié)局。
伏筆以及在續(xù)寫中的回應(yīng)
父親的狠話 “如果你離開，就別回來(lái)”：在續(xù)寫中，會(huì)成為 “我” 回家的心理障礙，父親的態(tài)度成為懸念，最終父親可能會(huì)放下狠話，接納 “我”，體現(xiàn)親情的包容。
母親的眼淚：暗示母親對(duì) “我” 的思念和牽掛，續(xù)寫中，母親可能會(huì)第一時(shí)間沖出來(lái)迎接 “我”，展現(xiàn)母愛的溫暖。
“我” 在外工作因?qū)W歷受限的遭遇：與回家后決心上大學(xué)形成呼應(yīng)，體現(xiàn) “我” 的成長(zhǎng)和轉(zhuǎn)變。
“我” 寫信表達(dá)悔意和回家的渴望：是回家的鋪墊，續(xù)寫中，家人可能已經(jīng)收到信，對(duì) “我” 的歸來(lái)有心理準(zhǔn)備，使故事更連貫。
與司機(jī)的對(duì)話：續(xù)寫中，司機(jī)講述的故事可能會(huì)進(jìn)一步觸動(dòng) “我”，讓 “我” 更加珍惜回家的機(jī)會(huì)，也為故事增添新元素。
續(xù)寫要點(diǎn)（兩段）
第一段：著重描寫司機(jī)表達(dá)支持后講述的令人驚訝的事情，比如他自己年輕時(shí)也有類似離家出走的經(jīng)歷，以及后來(lái)回家的故事，通過(guò)他的經(jīng)歷讓 “我” 更加堅(jiān)定回家的決心，也從他的故事中獲得面對(duì)家人的勇氣。
第二段：細(xì)致描繪 “我” 到家時(shí)的場(chǎng)景，如家中的燈光、父母和家人的反應(yīng)，“我” 看到家人后的心情，以及一家人團(tuán)聚后的溫馨畫面，突出親情的珍貴和回家的溫暖。
情感線
起初，“我” 因與父親的矛盾負(fù)氣離家，在外漂泊時(shí)，經(jīng)歷工作挫折，開始后悔和思念家人，寫信時(shí)充滿愧疚和期待。在與司機(jī)交談中，聽到他的故事，內(nèi)心被觸動(dòng)，堅(jiān)定回家決心?？斓郊視r(shí)，緊張又激動(dòng)，擔(dān)心父親不接納自己。到家后，看到家人的那一刻，所有的擔(dān)憂化為喜悅，感受到親情的溫暖，內(nèi)心充滿幸福和對(duì)未來(lái)的希望，完成從叛逆到成熟、從迷茫到堅(jiān)定的情感轉(zhuǎn)變。
故事線
“我” 與父親爭(zhēng)吵后離家出走。
“我” 在外漂泊，工作不如意，反思自己。
“我” 寫信給父親表達(dá)回家意愿，踏上歸程。
司機(jī)與 “我” 交談，講述他的經(jīng)歷。
“我” 到達(dá)家門口，看到家中景象。
家人迎接 “我”，一家人團(tuán)聚，“我” 感受到親情溫暖。
主旨升華句
This journey of leaving and returning taught me that family is an unbreakable bond, and no matter how far we stray, the love and warmth of home will always welcome us back.（這次離家與歸來(lái)的經(jīng)歷讓我明白，家庭是牢不可破的紐帶，無(wú)論我們走得多遠(yuǎn)，家的愛與溫暖總會(huì)迎接我們歸來(lái)。）
Through my experiences away from home and the subsequent reunion, I realized that the lessons learned from mistakes and the embrace of family are the most precious gifts in life, shaping us into better individuals.（通過(guò)我離家的經(jīng)歷和隨后的團(tuán)聚，我意識(shí)到從錯(cuò)誤中吸取的教訓(xùn)以及家人的接納是生命中最珍貴的禮物，將我們塑造成為更好的人。）
My story serves as a reminder that the love of parents is like a lighthouse in the dark, always guiding us back to the right path, even when we make wrong choices and lose our way.（我的故事提醒我們，父母的愛就像黑暗中的燈塔，即使我們做出錯(cuò)誤選擇迷失方向，也總能指引我們回到正確的道路。）
The reunion with my family after my long - lost journey home not only mended the broken relationship but also made me cherish the importance of communication and understanding within a family.（在漫長(zhǎng)的歸家之旅后與家人團(tuán)聚，不僅修復(fù)了破裂的關(guān)系，還讓我更加珍惜家庭中溝通與理解的重要性。）
From the rebellious departure to the remorseful return, I came to understand that home is not just a place but a haven of love and forgiveness, where we can always find refuge and grow into more responsible people.（從叛逆的離開到懊悔的歸來(lái)，我逐漸明白家不僅僅是一個(gè)地方，更是愛與寬恕的港灣，在那里我們總能找到庇護(hù)，成長(zhǎng)為更有擔(dān)當(dāng)?shù)娜?。?br/>寫作示范一
Having heard my story, he expressed his support for my final decision and told me something surprising. He said that he had once been in the same situation as me. When he was young, he also had a big fight with his father and left home impulsively. After years of struggling outside, he finally plucked up the courage to go back. To his surprise, his father had been waiting for him with open arms. His story made me more determined to face my family. I couldn't wait to get home and see my parents.
Finally I arrived home when it was completely dark. The house was dimly lit. I took a deep breath and knocked on the door. After a while, the door opened, and my mother stood there, her eyes wide with surprise. Then she burst into tears and hugged me tightly. At that moment, my father came out of the room. He looked at me, his eyes filled with love and relief. Without a word, he pulled me into a warm embrace. We were finally reunited, and I knew I was home.
寫作示范二
Having heard my story, he expressed his support for my final decision and told me something surprising. He shared how his own son had left home a few years ago, and the pain his family had endured during that time. When his son finally returned, their relationship became stronger than ever. His words gave me hope and comfort. I listened intently, imagining my own reunion with my family.
Finally I arrived home when it was completely dark. As I walked up the driveway, I saw the familiar silhouette of our house. My heart was pounding. I opened the gate and walked towards the door. Just then, the door swung open, and my sisters rushed out, screaming with joy. They surrounded me, jumping and hugging me. My mother appeared behind them, tears streaming down her face. My father stepped forward, his voice a bit hoarse, “Welcome back, son.” I smiled through my tears, feeling the warmth of home wash over me.
【答案】One possible version:
Having heard my story, he expressed his support for my final decision and told me something surprising. “Boy, you have made the right choice to go back home,” he said. “To be frank, my son ran away from home two years ago. I have been missing him every hour and every minute.” Now it’s time for me to comfort him, “Don’t worry. I believe he will come back soon, just like me.” I expressed my thanks for his kindness of having me in his car and I wished his son good luck. After all, we are all good people and good people deserve good fortune.
Finally, I arrived home when it was completely dark. Nervous and uneasy, I approached the door and knocked on it gently. It was my father who opened the door and my sudden appearance made him go wild with joy. “Son, you’ve finally come back. I’ve been waiting for this moment for long,” said my father in a trembling voice. It was at that moment that I realized there is no place like home and that blood is thicker than water.

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