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Unit 4 Eat Well
第五課時（寫作課）
Section B (2a—2c）
本課學習目標
本節(jié)課結(jié)束時，學生能夠：
1. 能夠基于寫作目的和要求，在教師的指導下有效開展寫作準備，梳理介紹自己飲食習慣的結(jié)構(gòu)，列出文章的內(nèi)容要點；
2. 能夠?qū)⒈締卧鶎W的詞匯、目標結(jié)構(gòu)、句型以及各類功能表達遷移應用到自己的寫作之中；
3. 通過自評和互評，不斷改進自己的作品，使之完善，改進初稿的結(jié)構(gòu)、內(nèi)容和語言。
按要求寫出正確的單詞、詞組或句子。
提高 (動詞) __________ 2. 飲食習慣 (動詞) ___________
3. 快餐 (短語) __________ 4. 增重(短語) __________
5. 引起(動詞) __________ 6. 均衡飲食 (短語) __________
7. 能量（名詞）__________ 8. 畢竟（短語）___________
9. 吃什么和如何吃是重要的。 ___________________________
10. 很容易感到困倦。 _______________________
11.健康飲食意味著吃健康的食物。___________________
12. 畢竟，一天一個蘋果，疾病遠離我。
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improve
eating habit
goal
put on weight
work out
balanced meals
energy
after all
Both what we eat and how we eat are important.
It’s easy to feel sleepy.
Healthy eating means eating healthy food.
After all, an apple a day keeps the doctor away.
上節(jié)要點回顧
Junk food makes you…
Healthy food makes you…
strong
fast
healthy
weak
fat
unhealthy
Brainstorm
What kinds of food are healthy
broccoli (西藍花)
bananas
milk
cabbages
tomatoes
apples
vegetables
vegetables
vegetables
fruit
fruit
They are all good for our health.
健康
be good for
對…有好處
be good at +doing 擅長于…be good with+人,善于與…打交道
be good to… 對…友好；
What kinds of food are unhealthy
不健康的
hamburger
potato chips
fried chicken
coffee
They are all bad for our health.
be bad for
對…無好處
Writing task（寫作任務）
飲食習慣對我們的健康非常重要，請以“My Eating Habit”為題，寫一篇詞數(shù)80個左右的短文，談談如何保持健康的飲食習慣。要求文中不得出現(xiàn)真實的人名、地名和校名。
注意事項：
1. 文中不得出現(xiàn)真實人名、校名等信息。
2. 語言通順，意思連貫，條理清楚，書寫規(guī)范。
可以適當發(fā)揮。
字數(shù)要求：約80詞左右。
Lisa
I have some good eating habits.I eat three meals a day and I have them on time.l eat a lot of vegetables too.Some of myfriends don't like carrots or other vegetables,and they don't.ea tthem,but I eat all kinds of vegetables. However,I have some bad eating habits too.First,I drink too manysoft drinks.I love soft drinks because they taste so good!But soft drinks usually have a lot of sugar.They're bad for me.Second,Idon't drink enough water.I drink water when I am thirsty,but it'sbetter to drink before I get thirsty. In future,I should drink more water.
The Joy Clinie wants teenagers to share their eating habits. Read Lisa's post. How many eating habits does Lisa write about What are they
5 hours ago
2a
Lisa
I have some good eating habits.①I eat three meals a day and I have them on time.②l eat a lot of vegetables too.Some of myfriends don't like carrots or other vegetables,and they don't.eat them,but I eat all kinds of vegetables. However,I have some bad eating habits too.First,③I drink too many soft drinks.I love soft drinks because they taste so good!But soft drinks usually have a lot of sugar.They're bad for me.Second,④Idon't drink enough water.I drink water when I am thirsty,but it'sbetter to drink before I get thirsty. In future,I should drink more water.
The Joy Clinie wants teenagers to share their eating habits. Read Lisa's post. How many eating habits does Lisa write about What are they
5 hours ago
2a
Write a message using your information and post it on the board.
1. What good habit(s) do you have
2. What bad habit(s) do you have
3. What can you do to improve your eating habits
Can you guess its meaning
2b
Write a message using your information and post it on the board.
1. What good habit(s) do you have
2. What bad habit(s) do you have
3. What can you do to improve your eating habits
I have some good eating habits. I usually eat breakfast every day. It's important for my body. I also try to eat lots of fruits and vegetables. They are healthy for me.
2b
I have a bad eating habit. I sometimes eat too much fast food. It's not good for my health.
To improve my eating habits, I can eat more home-cooked meals. My mom makes healthy food. I can also try to eat smaller portions of food. And I can drink more water instead of sugary drinks.
Write about your own eating habits with the information from 2b.
2c
WRITING
【單元主題】用英語介自己的飲食習慣。
【寫作任務】Joy Clinie wants teenagers to share their eating habits, read the Lisa's post how many eating habits does Lisa write about what are they
【寫作任務】Write about your own eating habits
要點包括：1. What good/bad habits do you have 2.What can you do to improve your eating habits
I have some good eating habits. (主題句) I eat three meals a day（拓展句） and I have them on time.(拓展句) I eat a lot of vegetables too. Some of my friends don't like carrots or other vegetables and they don't eat them（拓展句）, but I eat all kinds of vegetables（拓展句）.
However, I have some bad eating habits too.(主題句) First， I drink too many soft drinks.（拓展句） I love soft drinks because they taste so good but soft drinks usually have a lot of sugar .(拓展句)They are bad for me. Second, I don't drink enough water. I drink water when I am thirsty. But it's better to drink before I get thirsty. In future, I should drink more water. (反省及改進方式)
說明文的定義及說明方法
說明文是以說明為主要表達方式，介紹事物的形狀、構(gòu)造、性質(zhì)、變化、類別、狀態(tài)、功能、成因、結(jié)果等特征的文章。
常見說明方法有：定義、注釋、舉例、分類、比較、引用、比喻、描述、數(shù)字分析和綜合等。
本單元話題寫作的注意事項
本單元的話題寫作是由自己的一日三餐展開，判斷健康的飲食及說明如何養(yǎng)成合理健康的飲食習慣。故此本單元的寫作可以用舉例方法進行說明，在例證的過程中必須注意事實正確、表達清晰、條理清楚、層次分明、語言簡練和用詞準確。
sample
Hey everyone,
I'm a middle school student and today I want to share with you about my eating habits.
First, let's talk about the good habits I have. I always make sure to have breakfast every day. It's really important for me to start the day with some energy. I also drink milk every day. I know it's good for my bones and helps me grow strong.
But, I also have some bad habits that I'm trying to work on. One of them is that I eat a lot of candy. I love the sweet taste, but I know it's not good for my teeth. It can cause cavities if I eat too much.
sample
So, what can I do to improve my eating habits Well, I can start by eating more fruits and vegetables. They are full of vitamins and nutrients that my body needs. I can try to have a piece of fruit or some veggies with every meal. Also, I can try to eat less candy and fried food. Instead of reaching for a candy bar, I can have a small snack like some nuts or yogurt. And instead of fried food, I can choose grilled or baked options. Lastly, I can drink more water instead of soda. Water is much better for my body and helps keep me hydrated.
I hope by sharing my eating habits, we can all learn from each other and try to make healthier choices.
Extensive languages（拓展性語言）
Famous saying，proverbs, aphorisms and Classical sample sentences（名言、諺語、警句與經(jīng)典例句）
①Eat healthy food and keep healthy!(吃健康食品, 保持健康！)
②An apple a day, keeps the doctor away!(一日一蘋果, 醫(yī)生遠離我！)
③Eat well in breakfast, eat enough in lunch and eat less in supper.（早餐要吃好，午餐要吃飽，晚餐要吃少！）
④He, who has health, has hope; and he who has hope has everything. （擁有健康，就擁有希望；擁有希望，就擁有一切。）
1. start the day with some energy - 以充沛的精力開始一天
2. good for my bones - 對我的骨骼有好處
3. eat a lot of candy - 吃很多糖果
4. not good for my teeth** - 對我的牙齒不好
5. cause cavities - 導致蛀牙
6. eat too much fried food - 吃太多油炸食品
7. not very healthy for my body - 對我的身體不太健康
8. eat more fruits and vegetables - 吃更多的水果和蔬菜
9. full of vitamins and nutrients - 富含維生素和營養(yǎng)素
some useful expressions
10. have a piece of fruit or some veggies with every meal每餐都吃一片水果或一些蔬菜
11. **eat less candy and fried food** - 吃更少的糖果和油炸食品
12. **choose grilled or baked options** - 選擇烤的或烤的選項
13. **drink more water instead of soda** - 多喝水而不是蘇打水
14. **keep me hydrated** - 使我保持水分
15. **make healthier choices** - 做出更健康的選擇
16. **feel good about ourselves** - 對自己感覺良好
some useful expressions
My Eating Habits
Hey everyone,
I'm a middle school student and today I want to share with you about my eating habits.
First, let's talk about the good habits I have. I always make sure to have breakfast every day. It's really important for me to start the day with some energy. I also drink milk every day. I know it's good for my bones and helps me grow strong. But, I also have some bad habits that I'm trying to work on. One of them is that I eat a lot of candy. I love the sweet taste, but I know it's not good for my teeth. It can cause cavities if I eat too much. So, what can I do to improve my eating habits Well, I can start by eating more fruits and vegetables. They are full of vitamins and nutrients that my body needs. I can try to have a piece of fruit or some veggies with every meal.
I hope by sharing my eating habits, we can all learn from each other and try to make healthier choices.
beginning
Body
ending
My Eating Habits
Introduction
good habit
bad habit
ways to improve
how long
Conclusion
My eating habits
Finish your own mind map.
(完成關于你自己的思維導圖)
breakfast
introduction
my idea
lunch
dinner
A good passage
no grammar mistakes
wonderful
handwriting
no spelling mistakes
proper
conj.
beautiful sentences
Person（人稱）
02
03
04
05
06
07
01
Tense(時態(tài)）
Initial(首字母）
Spelling(拼寫）
Complete（完整性）
Punctuation（標點符號）
Skills
Discuss in groups:
Present tense
I
Capital letter
correct
Complete
Use correctly
Handwriting（書寫）
Present tense
Standard(規(guī)范）
3c
Structure
Write about your own eating habits with the information from 2b.
Writing task（寫作任務）
飲食習慣對我們的健康非常重要，請以“My Eating Habit”為題，寫一篇詞數(shù)80個左右的短文，談談如何保持健康的飲食習慣。要求文中不得出現(xiàn)真實的人名、地名和校名。
注意事項：
1. 文中不得出現(xiàn)真實人名、校名等信息。
2. 語言通順，意思連貫，條理清楚，書寫規(guī)范。
可以適當發(fā)揮。
字數(shù)要求：約80詞左右。
Self-check and peer-check.
Let’s proofread
check
Check for mistakes:
spelling
grammar
polish
□你分段了嗎？
□你的每一段都有主旨嗎？
□你包含介紹的基本信息了嗎？
□ 你有拼寫錯誤嗎？
□ 你有語法錯誤嗎？
□ 你使用連詞and了嗎？
Let’s evaluate
Let’s edit
評分原則
本題總分15分，按各檔次給分。評分時先根據(jù)文章的內(nèi)容、語言質(zhì)量初步確定檔次，然后以檔次的要求來衡量，確定或調(diào)整檔次，最后給分；
評分時應考慮：內(nèi)容要點是否完整；時態(tài)，語態(tài)及人稱是否正確；詞匯和句式的多樣性以及語言的準確性；上下文的連貫性；
如書寫較差，影響表達，應視其影響程度，降低一到兩個檔次；英美兩種拼法及詞匯用法都可接受；
內(nèi)容要點可用不同方式表達，應緊扣主題，可適當發(fā)揮。
Self-check List
feature(特征) 20 points
in total
three paragraphs 2 points
some conjs and connecting words 2 points
no grammar mistakes 3 points
no spelling mistakes 3 points
a proper ending and a rich body 3 points
wonderful handwritng 3 points
beautiful expressions 4 points
Exchange and correct（交換批改）
Revise（修改）
Show yourself
Introduce
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My Eating Habits
Hello everyone,
I'm a middle school student and I want to share my eating habits with you. I have some good habits. I always eat breakfast every day. It gives me energy for school. I also drink milk. It's good for my bones.But I have some bad habits too. I eat a lot of candy. It tastes good but it's bad for my teeth. I also eat too much fried food. It's yummy but not healthy. To be healthier, I want to change. I'll eat more fruits and vegetables. They have lots of good things for my body. I'll eat nuts or yogurt instead of candy. I'll choose grilled or baked food, not fried. And I'll drink more water, not soda.
I hope we can all learn from each other. Let's try to eat better and feel good about ourselves.
2c
Write about your own eating habits with the information from 2b.
Summary
Writing
Learn how to write passages about your eating habits.

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