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On Sunday, Nicholas, a teenager, went skiing with his father at Sugarloaf Mountain in Maine. They had a wonderful day and decided to drive home to Massachusetts after a final run. They took a chairlift to the top of the mountain, where they split up to go down different trails. When the father finished his run, he headed to the parking lot to wait for his son. However, Nicholas never showed up.
It turned out that a fierce snowstorm had swept into the area as Nicholas was on his way down. Unable to see far, he accidentally turned off(拐出) the path and ventured down the west side of the mountain. Before he knew it, Nicholas was lost and all alone. His way back to the ski trails was blocked. What’ s worse, he didn't have any food or water with him, let alone his cell phone or other supplies. The sun began to sink and he was getting colder by the minute.
Nicholas had no idea where he was. He tried not to panic. He thought about Bear Grylls’ survival show Man VS. Wild that he used to watch on TV. In the show, Grylls is abandoned in a wild area and has to find ways to stay alive. It was time to put the tips he had learned to use.
He decided to stop moving around. He needed the energy, and the winds weren’t as strong in the valley where he stood as they were up on the mountain. Plus, there was a better chance of someone finding him if he stayed out. The first thing he did was to seek shelter from the freezing wind and snow. Using his skis, Nicholas built a snow cave. He gathered a huge mass of snow and dug out a hole in the middle. Then he piled branches on top of himself, like a blanket, to stay as warm as he could.
When evening came, Nicholas was really hungry. He ate some snow and drank some water from a nearby stream so that he wouldn’t dehydrate (脫水). Then he returned to his cave and slept.
Para1. When Nicholas didn’t show up, his father realized there must be something wrong.
Para2. The next day, Nicholas heard the sound of a snowmobile.
文章大意：周日，青少年尼古拉斯和父親在緬因州的休格洛夫山滑雪。他們度過了愉快的一天，打算最后滑一次就開車回馬薩諸塞州。父子倆在山頂分開選擇不同滑道下山，之后父親在停車場久等尼古拉斯未歸。原來，尼古拉斯下山時遭遇暴風(fēng)雪，迷路且孤身一人，身處陌生之地，沒有食物、水和手機(jī)等物資。他想起電視節(jié)目中貝爾·格里爾斯的生存技巧，于是停止亂走，用滑雪板搭建雪洞，收集樹枝保暖，吃雪、喝溪水補(bǔ)充水分，在雪洞度過了饑寒交迫的夜晚。
伏筆以及在續(xù)寫中的回應(yīng)：
伏筆：父子倆在山頂分開選擇不同滑道下山。回應(yīng)：這一情節(jié)為尼古拉斯迷路后與父親失聯(lián)埋下伏筆，在續(xù)寫中導(dǎo)致父親發(fā)現(xiàn)尼古拉斯未歸后意識到情況不對，從而引發(fā)救援行動。
伏筆：尼古拉斯遭遇暴風(fēng)雪，迷路且孤身一人，沒有食物、水和手機(jī)等物資。回應(yīng)：此困境為后續(xù)尼古拉斯的生存挑戰(zhàn)以及救援難度增加做鋪墊。在續(xù)寫中，這些物資的缺乏使他在等待救援時更加艱難，同時也促使救援人員在尋找他時需要考慮其可能因物資匱乏面臨的生命危險。
伏筆：尼古拉斯想起貝爾 格里爾斯的生存技巧，并運用這些技巧搭建雪洞、保暖、補(bǔ)充水分。回應(yīng)：表明他具備一定的生存能力，在續(xù)寫中，他的這些行動不僅幫助他在惡劣環(huán)境中撐過一晚，也讓他在聽到雪摩托聲音時，有足夠體力和精力做出反應(yīng)，配合救援。
伏筆：父親在停車場等尼古拉斯，尼古拉斯卻未出現(xiàn)。回應(yīng)：直接引發(fā)父親的擔(dān)憂，在續(xù)寫中促使父親迅速向滑雪場管理處求助，推動救援情節(jié)的發(fā)展。
伏筆：故事發(fā)生在山區(qū)，有滑雪道、山谷等復(fù)雜地形。回應(yīng)：在續(xù)寫中，復(fù)雜的地形增加了救援的難度，無論是救援人員尋找尼古拉斯，還是尼古拉斯聽到雪摩托聲音判斷方向，都受到地形的影響。
續(xù)寫要點（兩段）：
第一段：主要描寫父親發(fā)現(xiàn)尼古拉斯失蹤后的行動。他向滑雪場管理處報告情況后，管理處迅速組織救援行動，包括召集救援人員、調(diào)配救援設(shè)備等。可以描述父親焦急的心情，如在原地踱步、不斷張望、向過往人員詢問等，以及他對兒子深深的擔(dān)憂。同時，可提及救援人員在惡劣天氣和復(fù)雜地形下展開搜索的艱難。
第二段：重點刻畫尼古拉斯聽到雪摩托聲音后的反應(yīng)。他先是興奮和激動，意識到可能是救援人員來了，然后想盡辦法引起救援人員的注意，比如大聲呼喊、揮舞樹枝等。當(dāng)救援人員找到他時，描述他如釋重負(fù)的心情，以及與父親重逢后的感人場景。還可簡單提及后續(xù)尼古拉斯的身體狀況和恢復(fù)情況。
情感線：
父親從等待時的平靜，到發(fā)現(xiàn)兒子未歸時的焦急，再到組織救援過程中的擔(dān)憂與煎熬，最后與兒子重逢時的喜悅與欣慰。
尼古拉斯從迷路時的驚慌，到運用生存技巧時的冷靜，在等待救援過程中的忐忑，聽到雪摩托聲音時的興奮，被救時的如釋重負(fù)以及與父親重逢的激動。
故事線：
父子滑雪后分開，尼古拉斯遭遇暴風(fēng)雪迷路。
父親發(fā)現(xiàn)尼古拉斯失蹤后，引發(fā)滑雪場管理處的救援行動。
尼古拉斯在困境中運用生存技巧等待救援。
尼古拉斯聽到雪摩托聲音，成功被救援，與父親團(tuán)聚。
主旨升華句：
In the face of adversity, the knowledge we've acquired can be the key to survival.（在逆境面前，我們所學(xué)的知識可能是生存的關(guān)鍵。）
The bond between father and son is unbreakable, and it gives them the strength to overcome even the most difficult situations.（父子之間的紐帶堅不可摧，它賦予他們戰(zhàn)勝最艱難困境的力量。）
This experience shows that hope and perseverance can lead us out of the darkest times.（這段經(jīng)歷表明，希望和堅持能引領(lǐng)我們走出最黑暗的時刻。）
When nature tests us, the unity of the community, like the ski resort's rescue team, can make all the difference.（當(dāng)大自然考驗我們時，像滑雪場救援團(tuán)隊這樣的社區(qū)團(tuán)結(jié)力量能帶來截然不同的結(jié)果。）
The story of Nicholas reminds us that courage and resourcefulness are essential in the fight for survival.（尼古拉斯的故事提醒我們，勇氣和足智多謀在求生斗爭中至關(guān)重要。）
兩篇寫作示范
寫作示范一
第一段
When Nicholas didn't show up, his father realized there must be something wrong. Panic - stricken, he sprinted back to the ski resort's main office. His hands trembled as he reported Nicholas's disappearance. The resort staff sprang into action immediately. They assembled a team of experienced rescuers, equipped with snowmobiles, thermal imaging cameras, and emergency supplies. The father, his heart pounding, joined the search. The snow was still falling heavily, and the howling wind made visibility almost zero. Every moment seemed like an eternity as they combed through the snow - covered slopes, calling out Nicholas's name.
第二段
The next day, Nicholas heard the sound of a snowmobile. His heart leaped with joy. He knew this could be his ticket to safety. He scrambled out of his snow cave, ignoring the cold biting his skin. He grabbed a long branch and started waving it vigorously, shouting at the top of his lungs, "Help! I'm here!" The sound of the snowmobile grew louder. Finally, the rescuers spotted him. His father rushed towards him, tears streaming down his face. Nicholas, weak but relieved, fell into his father's embrace. After a thorough medical check - up, Nicholas was found to be okay, just a bit dehydrated and exhausted. This experience taught him the importance of being prepared and the power of hope.
寫作示范二
第一段
When Nicholas didn't show up, his father realized there must be something wrong. His face turned pale, and he rushed around the parking lot, asking everyone if they had seen his son. Realizing that time was of the essence, he ran to the ski resort's management. The manager quickly organized a rescue mission. Helicopters were dispatched to scan the mountain from above, while teams of rescuers on snowmobiles fanned out across the slopes. The father, filled with guilt for letting his son out of his sight, joined one of the snowmobile teams. The blizzard made the search arduous, but they pressed on, determined not to give up until Nicholas was found.
第二段
The next day, Nicholas heard the sound of a snowmobile. At first, he thought he was hallucinating. But as the sound grew closer, he knew it was real. With all his remaining strength, he crawled out of his snow cave. He used his ski poles to make a large "X" in the snow, hoping to catch the rescuers' attention. The snowmobile came into view, and the driver spotted Nicholas. His father was on the back, and when he saw his son, he jumped off and ran towards him. They hugged tightly, both overcome with emotion. Nicholas was taken to the hospital for treatment. After a few days of rest, he fully recovered, and this incident became a story of survival and the power of family love.
參考答案
When Nicholas didn't show up, his father realized there must be something wrong. The father contacted the police, and a search team was gathered to look for the missing teenager. Although the weather conditions were poor and the wind was still fierce, they didn’t lose hope of finding Nicholas alive. They knew the clock was ticking, and Nicholas stood a better chance of survival the earlier they found him. The team split up. One of the searchers who knew the area better decided to sweep a mountain trail he used to hike up.
The next day, Nicholas heard the sound of a snowmobile. He went out and followed the sound to find help. He had walked for about a mile when he heard someone calling his name. He moved towards the sound, and sure enough, a few minutes later, he came face to face with the searcher. Despite feeling weak, Nicholas was generally in good condition. Then, he was carried back to the ski resort to be reunited with his family, feeling really happy.

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