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2025新人教版七年級(jí)英語(yǔ)下冊(cè)Unit 7作文訓(xùn)練練習(xí)題
1．假如你是李華，你校廣播站以“My First Day at Junior High School”為題向?qū)W生們征稿。請(qǐng)你寫(xiě)一篇英語(yǔ)文章投稿，內(nèi)容包括：學(xué)習(xí)、活動(dòng)、遇到的問(wèn)題、這一天的感受等等。
注意：
1.詞數(shù)80左右；
2.可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫；
3.文中不能出現(xiàn)真實(shí)姓名及學(xué)校名稱(chēng)；
4.開(kāi)頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。
My First Day at Junior High School
Dear Schoolmates,
I’m Li Hua. _____________________________________________________________________________ __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
2．假設(shè)你是李華，上周末你參加了一次郊游。請(qǐng)根據(jù)下面表格中的提示信息，寫(xiě)一篇題為“An Exciting Trip”的英語(yǔ)短文。
時(shí)間 上周末
參加者 你和……
地點(diǎn) 北海公園（Beihai Park）
活動(dòng) 劃船、爬山、野餐（have a picnic）、照相、做游戲……
感受 ……
要求:
1. 不要逐條翻譯表格中的信息，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮；
2. 語(yǔ)句通順，表達(dá)正確；
3. 60詞左右，開(kāi)頭已經(jīng)給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。
An Exciting Trip
Last weekend, I went on a trip with___________________________________________________________ ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
3．假設(shè)上個(gè)月，你參加了學(xué)校組織的去現(xiàn)代農(nóng)場(chǎng)的郊游活動(dòng)，請(qǐng)以“A school trip to the modern farm”為題，寫(xiě)一篇英語(yǔ)短文。
提示問(wèn)題：
(1) Who did you go to the farm with
(2) How did you get there
(3) What did you do there
(4) How did you feel
提示詞語(yǔ)：pick strawberries, feed cows, tired but very happy
要求：
1. 60詞左右；
2. 在提示問(wèn)題和提示詞語(yǔ)的基礎(chǔ)上，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。
A school trip to the modern farm
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4．假如你是Kate，現(xiàn)在就讀于北京某國(guó)際學(xué)校，上周你學(xué)校組織了一次旅行。你們游覽了北京的許多名勝古跡（place of interest），如長(zhǎng)城、故宮、天安門(mén)廣場(chǎng)（Tian’anmen Square)等。請(qǐng)你給你的同學(xué)Mike寫(xiě)一封60詞左右的書(shū)信介紹一下你的這次學(xué)校旅行。
Dear Mike,
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Yours,
Kate
5．假如你叫皮特，請(qǐng)根據(jù)表格中所給的信息用英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)一則旅行日記。詞數(shù)不少于60。
Date October 2nd, Tuesday
Weather windy
Place the Great Wall, the Palace Museum
Food chicken, fried fish
Feeling delicious, happy, tired
Tuesday, October 2nd Windy
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【真題鏈接】
1．（23-24七年級(jí)下·河北張家口·期末）隨著社會(huì)的發(fā)展，越來(lái)越多的人走進(jìn)博物館。假如上周六（7月6日），你參觀了張家口博物館（Zhangjiakou Museum）。請(qǐng)根據(jù)下面的圖示寫(xiě)一篇短文，介紹你的博物館之旅。
要求：
1. 短文須包含以上全部圖片信息，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮；
2. 條理清晰，語(yǔ)句通順，語(yǔ)法正確，書(shū)寫(xiě)規(guī)范；
3. 詞數(shù)60個(gè)左右。
A Trip to Zhangjiakou Museum
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2．（23-24七年級(jí)下·山東德州·期末）古人云：“讀萬(wàn)卷書(shū)，行萬(wàn)里路。”假如你是李華，本周你需要在英語(yǔ)角活動(dòng)上向大家分享你的一次旅行經(jīng)歷。請(qǐng)根據(jù)以下要點(diǎn)及要求寫(xiě)一篇英文短文。
要求：
1. 參考要點(diǎn)內(nèi)容，并適當(dāng)發(fā)揮；
2. 語(yǔ)句通順，意思連貫，書(shū)寫(xiě)工整；
3. 文中不得出現(xiàn)你的任何真實(shí)信息（姓名、校名和地名等）；
4. 詞數(shù)：不少于 80 詞（開(kāi)頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)）。
My trip to__________
Last Saturday, I took a trip to________________________________________________________________ __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
3．（23-24七年級(jí)下·山東德州·期末）假如你是李明，去年暑假爸爸媽媽帶你去了北京旅游，請(qǐng)你根據(jù)下列表格提示寫(xiě)篇英語(yǔ)短文，介紹一下你的旅游經(jīng)歷。
行程 我和爸爸、媽媽去了北京
參觀了天安門(mén)廣場(chǎng)，國(guó)家博物館，在北海公園劃船
去了老舍茶館，了解了老舍的生命歷程：
吃了美味的食物，并給爺爺奶奶買(mǎi)了禮物。
感受 ……
提示詞：
天安門(mén)廣場(chǎng) Tiananmen Square；國(guó)家博物館 National Museum；北海公園 Beihai Park
劃船 go boating；老舍茶館 Lao She Teahouse；駱駝祥子 Camel Xiangzi
要求：
1. 參考提示內(nèi)容，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮；
2. 語(yǔ)句通順，意思連貫，書(shū)寫(xiě)工整；
3. 文中不得出現(xiàn)你的任何真實(shí)信息（姓名、校名和地名等）；
4. 詞數(shù)：不少于60詞（開(kāi)頭已給出，但不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)）。
My Trip to Beijing
My name is Li Ming. Last summer vacation, I had a trip to Beijing with my parents. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
4．（23-24七年級(jí)下·四川廣安·期末）假如你是Lucy，去年暑假和父母一起參觀了杭州，根據(jù)下面提供的信息，以“My Last Summer Holiday”為題，介紹你的杭州之旅以及你的感受。根據(jù)提示，寫(xiě)一篇不少于60詞的小短文，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。
參考詞匯：第一天：On the first day； 西湖：The West Lake；第四： fourth
提示：
1. 第一天，參觀西湖，拍了許多照片。
2. 第二天，在湖里游泳，非常涼爽。
3. 第三天，野炊，食物很好吃。
4. 第四天，在街上散步，為朋友買(mǎi)了一些禮物。
5. 很累，但很開(kāi)心。期待著下次再去。
My Last Summer Holiday
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5．（23-24七年級(jí)下·山東臨沂·期末）21世紀(jì)英文報(bào)正在舉辦以“My Trip to ________”為主題的征文活動(dòng)。假如你是李華，根據(jù)以下提示與要求，用英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)一篇短文來(lái)投稿，分享自己難忘的旅行經(jīng)歷。
提示: 1. When and where did you go
2. Who did you go with And how did you go there
3. What did you do there
4. How did you feel about your trip
要求：1.詞數(shù)不少于80詞，開(kāi)頭和結(jié)尾已經(jīng)寫(xiě)好，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)；
2.語(yǔ)言通順，條理清楚，書(shū)寫(xiě)規(guī)范；
3.文中不要出現(xiàn)任何真實(shí)人名、校名及其它相關(guān)信息，否則不予評(píng)分。
My Trip to Beijing
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6．（23-24七年級(jí)下·河北石家莊·期末）假如你是李華，今年五一節(jié)你和你的父母坐火車(chē)一起去北京游玩了。請(qǐng)你根據(jù)下面表格中的提示內(nèi)容，用英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)一篇日記，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。
日期 5月1日
天氣 晴朗
行程 上午：游覽天安門(mén)廣場(chǎng)（Tian’anmen Square） 和故宮（the Palace Museum） 中午：在一家餐館吃牛肉面 下午：參觀名勝古跡長(zhǎng)城
感受 雖然有點(diǎn)累，但是很開(kāi)心。
要求：
1. 意思連貫，表達(dá)準(zhǔn)確，可適當(dāng)拓展；
2. 詞數(shù)：不少于70詞。
May 1st
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7．（23-24七年級(jí)下·河南平頂山·期末）假如你是陳紅，你收到外籍朋友 Michael 的郵件。在郵件中 Michael 講述了他的一次特殊的旅行經(jīng)歷，請(qǐng)根據(jù)以下提示，給他回一封電子郵件，向他介紹你的一次特殊的旅行經(jīng)歷。
提示:
1. When and where did you go
2. What did you do during the trip
3. How did you feel about the trip
要求：
1.文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)姓名和學(xué)校名稱(chēng)；
2.詞數(shù)100左右。回復(fù)郵件時(shí)可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，郵件格式已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。
Dear Michael,
It was great to hear from you. _______________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
The trip is very special to me. I want to travel there again.
Yours,
Chen Hong
1．假如你是李華，你校廣播站以“My First Day at Junior High School”為題向?qū)W生們征稿。請(qǐng)你寫(xiě)一篇英語(yǔ)文章投稿，內(nèi)容包括：學(xué)習(xí)、活動(dòng)、遇到的問(wèn)題、這一天的感受等等。
注意：
1.詞數(shù)80左右；
2.可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫；
3.文中不能出現(xiàn)真實(shí)姓名及學(xué)校名稱(chēng)；
4.開(kāi)頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。
My First Day at Junior High School
Dear Schoolmates,
I’m Li Hua. _____________________________________________________________________________ __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】
My First Day at Junior High School
Dear Schoolmates,
I’m Li Hua. My first day here was good because I learned many new things. The classes were interesting. I like science and history best. After school, I joined the book club. We read and talked about books. I also played games with my new friends. How fun it was! But sometimes, I found it’s difficult for me to learn English. I should spend more time learning new words.
Overall, I’m happy here. I’m making new friends and learning new things. I’m looking forward to more days like this.
Thank you for listening.
【詳解】[總體分析]
① 題材：本文是一篇話題作文；
② 時(shí)態(tài)：時(shí)態(tài)為“一般過(guò)去時(shí)”；
③ 提示：寫(xiě)作要點(diǎn)已給出，考生應(yīng)注意不要遺漏提示的要點(diǎn)，適當(dāng)添加細(xì)節(jié)，并突出寫(xiě)作重點(diǎn)。
[寫(xiě)作步驟]
第一步，開(kāi)門(mén)見(jiàn)山。向大家問(wèn)好，介紹自己。（開(kāi)頭已給出）
第二步，具體闡述。根據(jù)提示的要點(diǎn)，闡述在初中第一天的學(xué)習(xí)、活動(dòng)、遇到的問(wèn)題、這一天的感受等。
第三步，書(shū)寫(xiě)結(jié)語(yǔ)。展望未來(lái)，感謝大家的聆聽(tīng)。
[亮點(diǎn)詞匯]
① find it+adj. for sb. to do sth. 發(fā)現(xiàn)做某事對(duì)某人來(lái)說(shuō)很怎么樣
② spend time doing sth. 花時(shí)間做某事
③ overall adv. 總之
④ look forward to 期待
[高分句型]
① How fun it was!（感嘆句）
② But sometimes, I found it’s difficult for me to learn English.（省略that的賓語(yǔ)從句）省略（）
2．假設(shè)你是李華，上周末你參加了一次郊游。請(qǐng)根據(jù)下面表格中的提示信息，寫(xiě)一篇題為“An Exciting Trip”的英語(yǔ)短文。
時(shí)間 上周末
參加者 你和……
地點(diǎn) 北海公園（Beihai Park）
活動(dòng) 劃船、爬山、野餐（have a picnic）、照相、做游戲……
感受 ……
要求:
1. 不要逐條翻譯表格中的信息，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮；
2. 語(yǔ)句通順，表達(dá)正確；
3. 60詞左右，開(kāi)頭已經(jīng)給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。
An Exciting Trip
Last weekend, I went on a trip with___________________________________________________________ ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】
An Exciting Trip Last weekend, I went on a trip with my classmates. At 7:30 in the morning, we met at my home. We went to Beihai Park by bus. On the way, we were so excited and we sang songs on the bus. When we got there, we went boating on the lake. We climbed mountains and had a picnic on the mountain. After that we took some photos. Then some girls danced under the tree and some boys played games happily. We got home at 4 o'clock in the afternoon. We were tired but very happy. We really had a great time.
【詳解】
1. 題干解讀：本題為材料作文。要求根據(jù)題目所給要點(diǎn)提示寫(xiě)一篇關(guān)于郊游的英語(yǔ)短文，文中所給要點(diǎn)必須全部包含，并可以適當(dāng)加以拓展。
2. 寫(xiě)作指導(dǎo)：寫(xiě)作時(shí)人稱(chēng)應(yīng)用第一人稱(chēng)；時(shí)態(tài)應(yīng)用一般過(guò)去時(shí)；按照要點(diǎn)提示，準(zhǔn)確表達(dá)，內(nèi)容條理清楚，無(wú)句法錯(cuò)誤；可適當(dāng)運(yùn)用連詞或時(shí)間狀語(yǔ)從句，使文章內(nèi)容層次清晰。
3．假設(shè)上個(gè)月，你參加了學(xué)校組織的去現(xiàn)代農(nóng)場(chǎng)的郊游活動(dòng)，請(qǐng)以“A school trip to the modern farm”為題，寫(xiě)一篇英語(yǔ)短文。
提示問(wèn)題：
(1) Who did you go to the farm with
(2) How did you get there
(3) What did you do there
(4) How did you feel
提示詞語(yǔ)：pick strawberries, feed cows, tired but very happy
要求：
1. 60詞左右；
2. 在提示問(wèn)題和提示詞語(yǔ)的基礎(chǔ)上，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。
A school trip to the modern farm
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【答案】
A school trip to the modern farm
I went on a school trip to the modern farm with my classmates and teachers last month.
We took a bus there. When we got there, we picked strawberries. The strawberries were delicious. After that, we fed cows. The cows were very friendly. We had a really good time there.
On the way back to school, I felt a little tired but very happy.
【詳解】
1.題干解讀：該題目屬于記敘文寫(xiě)作。要求根據(jù)所給的要點(diǎn)提示來(lái)介紹你參加的現(xiàn)代農(nóng)場(chǎng)的郊游活動(dòng)。注意要點(diǎn)齊全。
2.寫(xiě)作指導(dǎo)：本文應(yīng)用第一人稱(chēng)和一般過(guò)去時(shí)來(lái)敘述。寫(xiě)作時(shí)先開(kāi)篇點(diǎn)題，然后敘述自己在現(xiàn)代農(nóng)場(chǎng)的經(jīng)歷，最后表達(dá)這次旅行的感受。在介紹內(nèi)容時(shí)，力求語(yǔ)言準(zhǔn)確，內(nèi)容完整，保證行文連貫，條理清晰。做到無(wú)語(yǔ)法和標(biāo)點(diǎn)錯(cuò)誤。
4．假如你是Kate，現(xiàn)在就讀于北京某國(guó)際學(xué)校，上周你學(xué)校組織了一次旅行。你們游覽了北京的許多名勝古跡（place of interest），如長(zhǎng)城、故宮、天安門(mén)廣場(chǎng)（Tian’anmen Square)等。請(qǐng)你給你的同學(xué)Mike寫(xiě)一封60詞左右的書(shū)信介紹一下你的這次學(xué)校旅行。
Dear Mike,
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Yours,
Kate
【答案】
Dear Mike,
How are you How was your school trip
I went on a school trip with my classmates last week in Beijing, China. It was great. You know Beijing is the capital of China. It has lots of places of interest. Last Sunday, the weather was sunny. We went to the Great Wall and it was great and exciting. Then we went to the Palace Museum. It was cool! Next we visited Tian’anmen Square. It was beautiful. Oh, I took a lot of photos on the trip. All of us had great fun on the school trip!
Please write back soon and tell me about your trip.
Yours,
Kate
【詳解】
1.題干解讀：本文是一封書(shū)信，要注意書(shū)信的格式，文章主要是向朋友介紹上周的學(xué)校旅行，題中給出了旅行的相關(guān)內(nèi)容，在寫(xiě)作中要進(jìn)行運(yùn)用，也可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，使文章更加流暢。
2.寫(xiě)作指導(dǎo)：本文主要是向朋友介紹上周的學(xué)校旅行，在介紹北京的情況時(shí)，用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)，介紹旅行過(guò)程時(shí)用一般過(guò)去時(shí)。第一段主要是問(wèn)候朋友；第二段重點(diǎn)介紹北京并描述旅行過(guò)程和感受，寫(xiě)作時(shí)要注意連接詞的使用，使文章更加有層次；最后一段表達(dá)祝愿。寫(xiě)作中注意時(shí)態(tài)的轉(zhuǎn)換，同時(shí)保證無(wú)語(yǔ)法錯(cuò)誤和單詞拼寫(xiě)錯(cuò)誤。
5．假如你叫皮特，請(qǐng)根據(jù)表格中所給的信息用英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)一則旅行日記。詞數(shù)不少于60。
Date October 2nd, Tuesday
Weather windy
Place the Great Wall, the Palace Museum
Food chicken, fried fish
Feeling delicious, happy, tired
Tuesday, October 2nd Windy
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【答案】
Tuesday, October 2nd Windy
It was windy on October 2nd. We went to the Great Wall and the Palace Museum. They’re very great. There were many visitors there. We had chicken and fried fish for dinner in a restaurant. The food in the restaurant was very delicious. We liked it very much. We had a great time. It was an excellent trip in China. We were tired, but happy.
【詳解】
1. 題干解讀：文章是一篇日記，主要從當(dāng)天的天氣入手開(kāi)始描寫(xiě)，然后用記述的方式講述當(dāng)天做的一些事情，把當(dāng)天的經(jīng)歷寫(xiě)清楚即可。
2. 例文點(diǎn)評(píng)：文章以當(dāng)天的天氣情況展開(kāi)描寫(xiě)，詳細(xì)的描寫(xiě)了當(dāng)天做的一些事情，文章結(jié)構(gòu)完整，格式正確，用詞簡(jiǎn)單易懂，語(yǔ)言結(jié)構(gòu)清晰。
3. 高分亮點(diǎn)：
短語(yǔ)：the Great Wall；Palace Museum；have a good time。
句型：and引導(dǎo)的并列句；There be句型。
【真題鏈接】
1．（23-24七年級(jí)下·河北張家口·期末）隨著社會(huì)的發(fā)展，越來(lái)越多的人走進(jìn)博物館。假如上周六（7月6日），你參觀了張家口博物館（Zhangjiakou Museum）。請(qǐng)根據(jù)下面的圖示寫(xiě)一篇短文，介紹你的博物館之旅。
要求：
1. 短文須包含以上全部圖片信息，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮；
2. 條理清晰，語(yǔ)句通順，語(yǔ)法正確，書(shū)寫(xiě)規(guī)范；
3. 詞數(shù)60個(gè)左右。
A Trip to Zhangjiakou Museum
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【答案】
A Trip to Zhangjiakou Museum
Last Saturday, I had a trip to Zhangjiakou Museum. It was very interesting. Let me tell you something about it.
It was sunny last Saturday. Zhangjiakou Museum is very far. It’s about forty kilometers. I went there by bus. It took us about fifty minutes. In the museum we saw a lot of interesting things and I learned a lot. I learned some information about the history, geography and culture of my hometown. I took a lot of photos and I bought some gifts for my friends.
It was an excellent trip and I had a good time!
【詳解】[總體分析]
①題材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②時(shí)態(tài)：時(shí)態(tài)以“一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)”和“一般過(guò)去時(shí)”為主；
③提示：根據(jù)所給提示完成寫(xiě)作，注意標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號(hào)及大小寫(xiě)等問(wèn)題，不要犯語(yǔ)法錯(cuò)誤。注意上下文之間的邏輯關(guān)系，語(yǔ)意連貫。
[寫(xiě)作步驟]
第一步，表明寫(xiě)作意圖，介紹博物館之旅；
第二步，介紹時(shí)間、天氣、交通以及在博物館進(jìn)行的活動(dòng)等；
第三步，介紹自己的感受并書(shū)寫(xiě)結(jié)語(yǔ)。
[亮點(diǎn)詞匯]
①interesting有趣的
②sunny晴朗的
③information信息
④gift禮物
⑤excellent極好的
⑥have a good time玩得愉快
[高分句型]
Let me tell you something about it.(祈使句)
2．（23-24七年級(jí)下·山東德州·期末）古人云：“讀萬(wàn)卷書(shū)，行萬(wàn)里路。”假如你是李華，本周你需要在英語(yǔ)角活動(dòng)上向大家分享你的一次旅行經(jīng)歷。請(qǐng)根據(jù)以下要點(diǎn)及要求寫(xiě)一篇英文短文。
要求：
1. 參考要點(diǎn)內(nèi)容，并適當(dāng)發(fā)揮；
2. 語(yǔ)句通順，意思連貫，書(shū)寫(xiě)工整；
3. 文中不得出現(xiàn)你的任何真實(shí)信息（姓名、校名和地名等）；
4. 詞數(shù)：不少于 80 詞（開(kāi)頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)）。
My trip to__________
Last Saturday, I took a trip to________________________________________________________________ __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】
My trip to a village
Last Saturday, I took a trip to a village near my home with my parents. The weather there was sunny and warm that day. It took us about an hour to drive there.
When we got there, my father and I flew kites at first. My mother took some beautiful pictures. After that, we picked some fresh fruit on the farm together. Then we had lunch in a small but clean restaurant. The food there was very delicious. In the afternoon, we went fishing for an hour. We didn’t go home until it was dark.
It was great fun to stay in the village and I was happy about this trip. I’m looking forward to travelling there again.
【詳解】[總體分析]
①題材：本文是一篇記敘文，為材料作文；
②時(shí)態(tài)：時(shí)態(tài)為“一般過(guò)去時(shí)”；
③提示：寫(xiě)作要點(diǎn)已給出，考生應(yīng)注意不要遺漏，適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)完整表述內(nèi)容。
[寫(xiě)作步驟]
第一步，補(bǔ)全標(biāo)題；
第二步，講述去農(nóng)村的旅行經(jīng)歷；
第三步，表達(dá)自己的感受。
[亮點(diǎn)詞匯]
①at first起初
②look forward to期待
[高分句型]
①I(mǎi)t took us about an hour to drive there.（動(dòng)詞不定式作主語(yǔ)）
②When we got there, my father and I flew kites at first.（時(shí)間狀語(yǔ)從句）
3．（23-24七年級(jí)下·山東德州·期末）假如你是李明，去年暑假爸爸媽媽帶你去了北京旅游，請(qǐng)你根據(jù)下列表格提示寫(xiě)篇英語(yǔ)短文，介紹一下你的旅游經(jīng)歷。
行程 我和爸爸、媽媽去了北京
參觀了天安門(mén)廣場(chǎng)，國(guó)家博物館，在北海公園劃船
去了老舍茶館，了解了老舍的生命歷程：
吃了美味的食物，并給爺爺奶奶買(mǎi)了禮物。
感受 ……
提示詞：
天安門(mén)廣場(chǎng) Tiananmen Square；國(guó)家博物館 National Museum；北海公園 Beihai Park
劃船 go boating；老舍茶館 Lao She Teahouse；駱駝祥子 Camel Xiangzi
要求：
1. 參考提示內(nèi)容，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮；
2. 語(yǔ)句通順，意思連貫，書(shū)寫(xiě)工整；
3. 文中不得出現(xiàn)你的任何真實(shí)信息（姓名、校名和地名等）；
4. 詞數(shù)：不少于60詞（開(kāi)頭已給出，但不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)）。
My Trip to Beijing
My name is Li Ming. Last summer vacation, I had a trip to Beijing with my parents. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】
My trip to Beijing
My name is Li Ming. Last summer vacation, I had a trip to Beijing with my parents. Now let me tell you something about the trip.
I went to Beijing with my parents by train. And we visited many places of interest, such as Tiananmen Square, the National Museum and Beihai Park. And in Beihai Park, we went boating. It was great fun! We also went to Lao She Teahouse and learnt a lot about Lao She.
He was born in Beijing in 1899. Then he became a teacher in 1916. Five years later, he was in a newspaper. And then he went to England and taught Chinese in 1924. Later, he came back to China in 1929. He married in 1931 and died in 1966. Two of his famous works are Camel Xiangzi and Lao She Teahouse.
We also had some delicious local food, such as Beijing Duck. And we bought some gifts for my grandparents before we left.
Though the trip was short, I felt very happy. Beijing is a wonderful place. I think I will go there again.
【詳解】[總體分析］
①題材：本文是一篇記敘文，為材料作文；
②時(shí)態(tài)：時(shí)態(tài)主要為“一般過(guò)去時(shí)”；
③提示：文章應(yīng)該包括表格中所列要點(diǎn)，要適當(dāng)補(bǔ)充，使文章內(nèi)容充實(shí)；行文時(shí)多用第一人稱(chēng)，盡量多使用短語(yǔ)和句型；寫(xiě)作中適當(dāng)使用連接詞，使行文連貫、順暢。
［寫(xiě)作步驟］
第一步，開(kāi)門(mén)見(jiàn)山，引出話題：介紹去年暑假去北京的經(jīng)歷。
第二步，介紹去北京的方式和參觀的景點(diǎn)；
第三步，重點(diǎn)介紹老舍的生命歷程；
第四步，品嘗美食以及其他活動(dòng)；
第五步，表達(dá)感受。
［亮點(diǎn)詞匯］
① many places of interest 許多名勝古跡
② such as 例如
［高分句型］
① Though the trip was short, I felt very happy. (though引導(dǎo)讓步狀語(yǔ)從句)
② I think I will go there again. (賓語(yǔ)從句)
4．（23-24七年級(jí)下·四川廣安·期末）假如你是Lucy，去年暑假和父母一起參觀了杭州，根據(jù)下面提供的信息，以“My Last Summer Holiday”為題，介紹你的杭州之旅以及你的感受。根據(jù)提示，寫(xiě)一篇不少于60詞的小短文，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。
參考詞匯：第一天：On the first day； 西湖：The West Lake；第四： fourth
提示：
1. 第一天，參觀西湖，拍了許多照片。
2. 第二天，在湖里游泳，非常涼爽。
3. 第三天，野炊，食物很好吃。
4. 第四天，在街上散步，為朋友買(mǎi)了一些禮物。
5. 很累，但很開(kāi)心。期待著下次再去。
My Last Summer Holiday
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【答案】
My Last Summer Holiday
I visited Hang Zhou with my parents last summer vacation. We had a great time there.
Hang Zhou is one of the most beautiful cities in our country. We visited the West Lake and took many photos there on the first day. I swam in the lake the next day and it was very cool. We had a picnic on the third day. How delicious the food was! I walked on the street and bought some gifts for my friends on the fourth day. I left Hang Zhou, feeling tired, but happy. I am looking forward to going there again.
【詳解】[總體分析]
①題材：本文是一篇材料作文，為記敘文。
②時(shí)態(tài)：時(shí)態(tài)為“一般過(guò)去時(shí)”；
③提示：寫(xiě)作要點(diǎn)已給出，考生應(yīng)注意不要遺漏“信息提示”中你的杭州之旅的介紹要點(diǎn)，適當(dāng)添加細(xì)節(jié)，并突出寫(xiě)作重點(diǎn)。
[寫(xiě)作步驟]
第一步，表明寫(xiě)作意圖。借用“以“My Last Summer Holiday”為題，介紹你的杭州之旅以及你的感受。”來(lái)引出重點(diǎn)介紹的內(nèi)容；
第二步，具體闡述寫(xiě)作內(nèi)容。從“參觀的地點(diǎn)、自己的活動(dòng)、感受等”幾個(gè)方面重點(diǎn)介紹你的杭州之旅的具體情況；
第三步，書(shū)寫(xiě)結(jié)語(yǔ)，表達(dá)“期望再次去那里”的愿望。
[亮點(diǎn)詞匯]
①have a great time玩得高興；
②take photos拍照；
③buy sth for sb給某人買(mǎi)某物；
④look forward to期望。
[高分句型]
①Hang Zhou is one of the most beautiful cities in our country. (“one of the+形容詞最高級(jí)+可數(shù)名詞復(fù)數(shù)”句型)
②How delicious the food was! (感嘆句)
5．（23-24七年級(jí)下·山東臨沂·期末）21世紀(jì)英文報(bào)正在舉辦以“My Trip to ________”為主題的征文活動(dòng)。假如你是李華，根據(jù)以下提示與要求，用英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)一篇短文來(lái)投稿，分享自己難忘的旅行經(jīng)歷。
提示: 1. When and where did you go
2. Who did you go with And how did you go there
3. What did you do there
4. How did you feel about your trip
要求：1.詞數(shù)不少于80詞，開(kāi)頭和結(jié)尾已經(jīng)寫(xiě)好，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)；
2.語(yǔ)言通順，條理清楚，書(shū)寫(xiě)規(guī)范；
3.文中不要出現(xiàn)任何真實(shí)人名、校名及其它相關(guān)信息，否則不予評(píng)分。
My Trip to Beijing
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【答案】
My Trip to Beijing
Last year, I went to Beijing with my parents in the summer vacation. We went there by plane.
We visited the wonderful Forbidden City and Summer Palace, climbed the Great Wall, and walked through Tiananmen Square. What’s more, we watched the raising of the national flag in the early morning. The food in Beijing was also amazing. I liked delicious Peking duck and lamb hotpot.
My trip to Beijing was an unforgettable experience that I will cherish for a lifetime. It was a journey that not only filled my eyes with wonder but also touched my heart.
【詳解】[總體分析]
①題材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②時(shí)態(tài)：時(shí)態(tài)為“一般過(guò)去時(shí)”；
③提示：寫(xiě)作要點(diǎn)已給出，考生應(yīng)注意不要遺漏信息提示的內(nèi)容，適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，并且突出寫(xiě)作的要點(diǎn)。
[寫(xiě)作步驟]
第一步，直入主題，介紹旅行的時(shí)間，地點(diǎn)和人物；
第二步，具體闡述在這次旅行中都做了什么；
第三步，談?wù)勛约旱母惺堋?br/>[亮點(diǎn)詞匯]
①walk through穿過(guò)
②the raising of the national flag國(guó)旗的升起
③not only...but also不僅……而且……
[高分句型]
①M(fèi)y trip to Beijing was an unforgettable experience that I will cherish for a lifetime. (定語(yǔ)從句)
6．（23-24七年級(jí)下·河北石家莊·期末）假如你是李華，今年五一節(jié)你和你的父母坐火車(chē)一起去北京游玩了。請(qǐng)你根據(jù)下面表格中的提示內(nèi)容，用英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)一篇日記，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。
日期 5月1日
天氣 晴朗
行程 上午：游覽天安門(mén)廣場(chǎng)（Tian’anmen Square） 和故宮（the Palace Museum） 中午：在一家餐館吃牛肉面 下午：參觀名勝古跡長(zhǎng)城
感受 雖然有點(diǎn)累，但是很開(kāi)心。
要求：
1. 意思連貫，表達(dá)準(zhǔn)確，可適當(dāng)拓展；
2. 詞數(shù)：不少于70詞。
May 1st
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【答案】
May 1st
This May Day I went to Beijing with my parents by train. It was sunny. We were excited. We visited the Tian’anmen Square and the Palace Museum in the morning. There were lots of people. At noon, we had beef noodles at a restaurant. In the afternoon, we visited the Great Wall and took some photos there. Beijing is a beautiful city. When I came back, I felt a little tired but very happy. All in all, it was an exciting day.
【詳解】[總體分析]
①題材：本文是一篇日記；
②時(shí)態(tài)：時(shí)態(tài)為“一般過(guò)去時(shí)”；
③提示：寫(xiě)作要點(diǎn)已給出，學(xué)生應(yīng)注意不要遺漏“要點(diǎn)提示”。適當(dāng)添加細(xì)節(jié)，并突出寫(xiě)作重點(diǎn)。
[寫(xiě)作步驟]
第一步，介紹五一勞動(dòng)節(jié)，我和父母一起去北京游玩；
第二步，具體描述一天的行程；
第三步，總結(jié)游玩北京后的感受。
[亮點(diǎn)詞匯]
①by train乘火車(chē)
②take photos拍照
③all in all總而言之
[高分句型]
①When I came back, I felt a little tired but very happy. （時(shí)間狀語(yǔ)從句）
7．（23-24七年級(jí)下·河南平頂山·期末）假如你是陳紅，你收到外籍朋友 Michael 的郵件。在郵件中 Michael 講述了他的一次特殊的旅行經(jīng)歷，請(qǐng)根據(jù)以下提示，給他回一封電子郵件，向他介紹你的一次特殊的旅行經(jīng)歷。
提示:
1. When and where did you go
2. What did you do during the trip
3. How did you feel about the trip
要求：
1.文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)姓名和學(xué)校名稱(chēng)；
2.詞數(shù)100左右。回復(fù)郵件時(shí)可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，郵件格式已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。
Dear Michael,
It was great to hear from you. _______________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
The trip is very special to me. I want to travel there again.
Yours,
Chen Hong
【答案】
Dear Michael,
It was great to hear from you.
Last winter holiday, my friend Zhang Min asked me to her hometown. Her hometown is in Ermei, Sichuan. When I arrived at her home, her family had a big party to welcome me. The next day, Zhang Min and I climbed the mountains and visited some small villages. The life there was so quiet that I fell in love with it at once. The kind villagers prepared a wonderful dinner for us. And we sang and danced with them. I was very happy about the trip.
The trip is very special to me. I want to travel there again.
Yours,
Chen Hong
【詳解】[總體分析]
①題材：本文是一篇應(yīng)用文，為電子郵件；
②時(shí)態(tài)：時(shí)態(tài)為“一般過(guò)去時(shí)”；
③提示：寫(xiě)作要點(diǎn)已給出，考生應(yīng)注意不要遺漏“信息提示”，適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，并突出寫(xiě)作重點(diǎn)。
[寫(xiě)作步驟]
第一步，表明寫(xiě)作意圖，點(diǎn)明自己所去的地點(diǎn)。
第二步，具體介紹自己在旅行中做了什么及自己旅行的感受。
第三步，書(shū)寫(xiě)結(jié)語(yǔ)。
[亮點(diǎn)詞匯]
①arrive at 到達(dá)
②fall in love with愛(ài)上
③prepare sth for sb為某人準(zhǔn)備……
[高分句型]
①When I arrived at her home, her family had a big party to welcome me. (when引導(dǎo)時(shí)間狀語(yǔ)從句)
②The life there was so quiet that I fell in love with it at once. (so...that引導(dǎo)結(jié)果狀語(yǔ)從句)

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