資源簡(jiǎn)介

(共23張PPT)
Reading for writing
MY AMAZING NAADAM EXPERIENCE
Have you ever been to Inner Mongolia What's your impression of it Mongolian tentsMongolian robesroast muttonMongolian steppes(grassland)1234Lead inWhat is the most important festival in Inner Mongolia
the Naadam Festival
When/Where/Major events
What do you know about Naadam Festival
lead-in
shooting arrows/archery
horse racing
wrestling
A. time order
B. space order
C. logic order
1. In what order did the author write the diary
And how do you know that
Tip:
To make our article more organised, we can follow the time order when writing a diary.
Match the main idea with each paragraph.
Brief introduction of Naadam Festival
What the author saw before the opening ceremony.
The wrestling competition and rules about it.
The horse race.
Brief summary of Naadam Festival
para1.
para2.
para3.
para4.
para5.
Step 2.While-reading
According to the left information，we can divide the passage into ___ parts.
3
Part 1
(1)
Part 2
(2-4)
Part 3
(5)
time order
Body
para. ____
Describe the festival in _______:
activities + my feelings
Give a brief _________ of the experience:
evaluation (評(píng)價(jià)) + feelings
Opening para. ____
Closing
para. ____
State the ______:
what, when, where, who...
My Amazing Naadam Experience
1
2-4
5
topic
detail
summary
Reading for the structure
Q.What kind of writing is the passage
A. a(n) narration B. exposition
C. argumentation
para 1
1. When is the festival celevrated
2.Where is the festival celevrated
3. Major events of the festival.
4.What is the function of the first
sentence and the first para
The first sentence functions as the opening sentence of the diary.
opening para
para 2:
1. What were people doing when I arrived at the game
2. Was the writer describing a person, a place or a scene to us in
this paragraph
3. What is the purpose of paragraph 2
Describe a vivid scene for us.
It describes a lively scene before the festival begins, helping readers know more about the surroundings.
para3¶ 4:
1. How did the writer feel about the wrestling competition
2. What is the most impressive thing about the festival for the
writer and why
3. What did the writer think of the horse
horse racing
very important
describe in detail the activities:
wrestling competition and the horse races
What activities did the author experience
(1) opening ceremony
(2) wrestling competition
(3) archery
(4) horse racing
Naadam Festival
horse racing
wrestling
archery
2. What does “Naadam” mean What events does it include
Naadam means “games” in Mongolian.
3. What Naadam Festival customs did you learn about
① People wear fancy Mongolian robes(蒙古袍).
② Mongolians travel from near and far to attend the festival.
③ There are an opening ceremony and some amazing performances. Then the wrestling competition, archery competition and horse race begin.
Para 1: State the topic (when, where and with whom and main feelings)
Para 2-4:
Describe the festival in detail:
activities(what I saw, what I heard), and my feelings
Para 5:
Give a brief summary of the experience.
Organisation of the diary entry
Reading for language features
The passage is a diary, and it is written mainly in ____________
person and _________________tense.
the first
the simple present
1). The festival falls on the fourth day of the six month of the lunar calendar, ...
Naadam means "games" in Mongolian, and it is represented by three
events: …which are all so exciting to watch! (Para. 1)
2). Burin told me that Mongolians travel every year from near and far to attend
the festival, .... (Para. 3)
3). Mongolian wrestling is different from the wrestling in the Olympic Games.
There are no rounds, and wrestlers are not separated by weight. The wrestler
loses if any part of his body above his knee touches the ground. (Para. 3)
4). I’m finally back home now, feeling….I can’t wait! (Para. 5)
Step 3.Writing
本單元的寫作任務(wù)是寫一篇和節(jié)日慶祝有關(guān)的敘事類記敘文。該類作文以敘述事件為主，要通過(guò)完整的故事情節(jié)和生動(dòng)形象的語(yǔ)言，使讀者在享受故事情節(jié)的同時(shí)有所感悟。寫作時(shí)要注意把記敘文的六要素：時(shí)間、地點(diǎn)、人物、事件的起因、經(jīng)過(guò)和結(jié)果交代清楚。
1.開頭——交代清楚事件的背景。
2.主體——主要敘述事件的發(fā)生、經(jīng)過(guò)及結(jié)果。
3.結(jié)尾——呼應(yīng)主題，表達(dá)感想、愿望等。
一、審題定調(diào)
本寫作任務(wù)要求記述一次自己的節(jié)日經(jīng)歷，屬于記敘文。在介紹節(jié)日經(jīng)歷時(shí)，可以按照時(shí)間順序或事件發(fā)展的順序?qū)?jié)日經(jīng)歷或慶祝活動(dòng)展開敘述。
二、謀篇布局
第一部分：點(diǎn)明節(jié)日名稱和重要性；
第二部分：具體敘述節(jié)日的活動(dòng)和自己的經(jīng)歷；
第三部分：總結(jié)節(jié)日經(jīng)歷，表明感受。
第一部分：點(diǎn)明節(jié)日名稱和重要性
表達(dá)一：As one of the most popular traditional festivals in China, the Spring Festival is on January 1st of the lunar calendar.
表達(dá)二：Spring Festival is one of the most popular traditional festivals in China. It is on January 1st of the lunar calendar.
作為中國(guó)最受歡迎的傳統(tǒng)節(jié)日之一，春節(jié)是在農(nóng)歷的1月1日。
第二部分：具體敘述節(jié)日的活動(dòng)和自己的經(jīng)歷
1. I still remember how my family celebrated the ...(節(jié)日) last year.
eg: 我仍然記得我的家人去年是如何慶祝春節(jié)的。
I still remember how my family celebrated the Spring Festival last year.
2. 積累各種節(jié)日的慶祝活動(dòng)
(1) Spring Festival (春節(jié))
① Before the festival, we pasted the couplets together.
我們?cè)谛履昵百N對(duì)聯(lián)。
② On the Lunar New Year' s Eve, we enjoyed dinner together.
在農(nóng)歷除夕，我們一起享受晚餐。
③ On the early morning of the Lunar New Year, I got lucky money from my parents, and then I went to visit my relatives with them.
農(nóng)歷新年的一大早，我從父母那里得到了壓歲錢，然后我和他們一起去看望親戚。
假如你是李華，請(qǐng)根據(jù)下面五幅圖畫寫一篇短文介紹你和家人慶祝春節(jié)的經(jīng)過(guò)。
典例示范
Writing
注意：
1.詞數(shù)80左右；
2.標(biāo)題和開頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。
參考詞匯：春晚the Spring Festival Gala；
除夕夜the Lunar New Year Eve __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

展開更多......

收起↑