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When Sabrina heard her dad Pete Parker, a coal miner, parking his van (貨車) in the garage, she kept switching channels on the TV, hoping he wouldn’t ask her about her upcoming graduation that was scheduled in two days. She feared her dad would ruin her graduation for looking “dirty” and smelling of coal and sweat.
“Hey, sweetheart! Look what I got for you, ” Pete said as he entered, sounding happy. Then he left two packages on the table.
Sabrina was surprised and quickly unwrapped one box and found a beautiful dress inside She loved it very much. Then she opened the other box and saw a new suit in it.
“Thanks for the dress, dad. But for whom is this suit ”
“It’s for me, honey! I have to look amazing. . . it’s your graduation, after all! ”
Sabrina bit her lips in frustration and said, “Dad, I don’t want you to come. All my friends and their parents will be attending. I don’t want them to laugh at me after seeing you, alright ”
Sabrina’s words hit Pete like a bag of bricks. He was so hurt because he was looking forward to attending the event. However, he knew Sabrina was too young to understand his love for her. “She’s still a little girl! ” he comforted his broken heart and decided to still go to the graduation party with a surprise.
On the day of the graduation, Pete arrived and sat in the seating area for the parents. When his daughter’s name was announced, Pete ran up to the front with his phone and started filming as Sabrina received her diploma. Sabrina looked so pretty, and Pete was so proud she was graduating.
Suddenly, Sabrina heard the host say, “Mr. Parker, can we please have you on stage. ” Sabrina was confused and didn’t understand what was going on as she saw Pete walking over to the platform.
注意：
(1) 續寫詞數應為150個左右：
(2) 請按如下格式在答題紙的相應位置作答。
Pete stepped onto the stage.
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Tears streamed down Sabrina’s cheeks.
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一、文章大意
薩布麗娜的父親皮特是煤礦工人，畢業典禮前夕，父親滿心歡喜帶回給她的漂亮裙子和自己準備穿的新西裝，期待參加女兒畢業典禮，薩布麗娜卻因擔心父親 “又臟又臭” 遭同學嘲笑而拒絕他出席。畢業典禮當日，父親還是來了，還上臺給女兒拍視頻，當主持人邀請父親上臺時，薩布麗娜滿心疑惑，故事在此處轉折，引出后續情節。
二、故事山分析
伏筆一：開篇描述薩布麗娜頻繁換臺躲避父親詢問畢業典禮之事，暗示她內心糾結，為后面拒絕父親鋪墊，回應：后續她看到父親上臺后的震驚與反思，與之前逃避形成對比。
伏筆二：父親帶回漂亮裙子和新西裝，體現他對參加畢業典禮的重視，回應：即便被拒仍堅持出席并準備驚喜，突出父愛的深沉。
伏筆三：薩布麗娜直白表達不想父親參加，怕被同學嘲笑，反映她的虛榮，回應：父親上臺后的舉動讓她認識錯誤，內心愧疚，實現人物成長。
伏筆四：父親雖被女兒言語傷害，仍自我安慰決定帶驚喜前往，預示后續有反轉情節，回應：臺上舉動震撼眾人，成為改變女兒想法的關鍵。
伏筆五：父親在臺下開心拍視頻，展現他對女兒的驕傲，鋪墊他上臺后的情感爆發，回應：上臺發言傾訴愛意，讓全場動容，升華父女情。
三、續寫要點
第一段：皮特走上臺，接過主持人話筒，先是深情凝視女兒，眼中滿是溫柔與自豪，隨后對著話筒說道，他知道女兒可能嫌棄他的工作，但他每天辛苦勞作都是為了給她更好生活，這份愛從未變過，今天他要為女兒送上特別禮物 —— 一張存有多年積蓄的銀行卡，希望助力她追逐夢想。
第二段：淚水從薩布麗娜臉頰滑落，她滿心懊悔，沖上臺緊緊抱住父親，在父親耳邊哽咽著道歉，臺下同學和家長被這一幕打動，紛紛鼓掌。薩布麗娜此刻深知，父親的愛無比珍貴，外表與職業都無法衡量，她發誓以后定以父親為榮，珍惜這份親情。
四、情感線
起初薩布麗娜對父親是嫌棄、抵觸，害怕父親出席畢業典禮讓自己丟臉；父親則是滿懷期待、慈愛，被拒后雖傷心仍執著。上臺后，父親深情表白，傳遞無私父愛，薩布麗娜從震驚轉為懊悔、感動，情感在沖突與和解中升華，圍繞父女親情展開。
五、故事線
薩布麗娜因父親職業，抵觸其參加畢業典禮。
父親精心準備，帶回禮服，期待出席。
薩布麗娜拒絕父親，傷其心。
畢業典禮父親到場，暗中拍視頻。
主持人邀父親上臺，引發懸念。
父親上臺表露心聲，薩布麗娜悔悟。
六、主旨升華句
True love doesn't care about appearances. It's the selfless dedication that shines through in every act.（真愛不在乎外表，是每一個行動中閃耀的無私奉獻。）
A father's love is like a lighthouse, always guiding and supporting, even when unappreciated.（父親的愛就像燈塔，即使不被感激，也總是指引和支持著。）
We often overlook the ones closest to us, but it's their unconditional love that truly matters in the end.（我們常常忽視身邊最親近的人，但最終真正重要的是他們無條件的愛。）
In the pursuit of acceptance from others, we should never forget the love that holds us up from within.（在追求他人認可的過程中，我們永遠不應忘記支撐我們內心的愛。）
Sometimes, a moment of truth on a stage can mend a broken relationship and make us see the value of love we once took for granted.（有時候，舞臺上的一個真情時刻可以修復破裂的關系，讓我們看到曾經被視為理所當然的愛的價值。）
七、寫作示范
第一篇
續寫第一段：Pete stepped onto the stage. He took the microphone from the host, his hands trembling slightly. Looking straight into Sabrina's eyes, he said, "Sweetheart, I know you might be embarrassed by my job. But every day I go down into that mine, I'm thinking of you. I'm working hard to give you a good life." Then he reached into his pocket and pulled out a small envelope. "Inside here is a bank card with all my savings over the years. I want you to use it to chase your dreams, no matter what they are." The audience was silent, captivated by Pete's words.
續寫第二段：Tears streamed down Sabrina's cheeks. She felt a crushing sense of guilt as she realized how wrong she had been. Without hesitation, she rushed onto the stage and flung her arms around her father. "Dad, I'm so sorry," she sobbed into his ear. The crowd erupted into thunderous applause, touched by the father-daughter reunion. From that moment on, Sabrina knew that her father's love was more precious than anything. She vowed to always cherish him and never let superficial things come between them again.
第二篇
續寫第一段：Pete stepped onto the stage. With a warm smile on his face, he faced the audience. "Everyone, I'm Sabrina's dad. I know my girl was worried about me embarrassing her today. But I just want her to know that my love for her has nothing to do with how I look or what I do." He paused and took a deep breath. "I've been saving up for a long time, and today, I want to give her this." He then revealed a beautifully wrapped box. Opening it, he showed a delicate necklace with a heart-shaped pendant. "This is a symbol of my love that will always be with her, through thick and thin."
續寫第二段：Tears streamed down Sabrina's cheeks. She was overwhelmed with shame and remorse. How could she have been so blind She quickly made her way to the stage and hugged her father tightly. "Dad, I was so stupid. I should have known better." Her voice choked with sobs. The parents and students in the audience wiped away their own tears as they watched the pair reconcile. Sabrina made a silent promise to herself that she would always be proud of her father and hold his love dear to her heart.
【答案】范文
Para. 1: Pete stepped onto the stage. The audience fell silent, curious about the unexpected turn. With a warm smile, he began to speak, “Ladies and gentlemen, today is a special day for my little princess, Sabrina. I know she’s been embarrassed by my appearance and job, but I want her to know that I’m proud of her and of what I do. I love you, Sabrina, and I’m here to celebrate your achievements.” As he finished, he played the video of Sabrina receiving her diploma on the big screen, and the crowd erupted in applause.
Para. 2: Tears streamed down Sabrina’s cheeks. She realized how selfish and shallow she had been, not understanding the sacrifices he had made for her. As Pete walked back to his seat, Sabrina rushed to him, embracing him tightly. “I’m sorry, Dad. I didn’t mean it. I’m so proud of you and everything you do,” she whispered. Pete hugged her back, tears in his own eyes, knowing that his love had finally reached her heart.

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