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第二部分　讀后續寫
專題一　高級表達素材
目 錄
Contents
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高級表達1　靈活運用詞匯
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高級表達2　豐富優化句式
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高級表達3　心理描寫萬能句式
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高級表達4　動作描寫萬能句式
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高級表達5　修辭運用萬能句式
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高級表達6　升華結尾萬能句式
高級表達1　靈活運用詞匯
類型1　名詞/形容詞活用作動詞
單詞 活用成動詞 示例
bare adj.光禿禿的→vt.
使露出 Anne bared her teeth in a grin.安妮露齒一笑。
The dog bared its teeth and growled.那條狗齜牙咧嘴地
低吼。
blind adj.失明的→vt.使
眼花，使目眩 She was blinded by the light when she went outside.她
出去的時候被光線照得眼花。
cap n.帽子→vt.用······覆
蓋頂部(或端部) The mountains in the background were capped with
snow.背景中的山巒被白雪覆蓋。
單詞 活用成動詞 示例
closet n.壁櫥→vt.把······關
在房間里 Upon getting home， she closeted herself away in her
room.一回到家，她就把自己關在房間里不見任何
人。
cup n.杯子→vt.使(雙手)
成圓狀托起 She cupped her little son’s face in her hands and kissed
him.她雙手捧著小兒子的臉親吻他。
edge n.邊緣→v.(使)徐徐
移動，慢慢移動 He edged nervously past the dog.他緊張不安地從狗旁
邊慢慢走過去。
elbow n.肘→vt.用肘推；
用肘擠 She elbowed her way through the crowd.她用手肘從人
群中擠了過去。
單詞 活用成動詞 示例
empty adj.空的→vt.倒
空，騰空 They emptied their pockets， but found nothing.他們掏
空了自己的口袋，但里面什么也沒有。
eye n.眼睛→vt.注視，
審視 The boy couldn’t help eyeing the cakes hungrily.男孩兒
饑不可耐地盯著蛋糕。
flood n.洪水→v.照進，
(光線)充滿；(情感
等)充滿，涌上心頭 Morning sunshine flooded in through the window as she
opened her eyes.當她睜開眼睛，清晨的陽光從窗口灑
進來。
A wave of happiness flooded me.我心中涌起一股幸福
的暖流。
單詞 活用成動詞 示例
inch n.英寸→v.(使朝某
方向)謹慎移動 She inched her way delicately over the rough ground.她
小心翼翼地在高低不平的地面上慢慢行走。
narrow adj.狹窄的→v.縮小 He pressed his lips together and his eyes narrowed.他抿
緊嘴唇，眼睛瞇起來。
pocket n.口袋→vt.把······放
進衣袋 She paid for the drink and pocketed the change without
counting it.她付了飲料的錢，把找回的零錢數都沒數
就裝進了口袋。
單詞 活用成動詞 示例
rest n.休息→v.(使)倚
靠，托 She was thinking how to work out the math problem，
with her chin rested in her hands.她雙手托著下巴，在
想怎么解這道數學題。
His elbow was resting on the arm of the sofa.他的胳膊
肘靠在沙發的扶手上。
shoulder n.肩膀→vt. 扛，
背；承擔 He shouldered his bag and set off home.他扛起包朝家
走去。
She shouldered the double burden of childcare and full-
time work.她承擔著撫養孩子和做全職工作的雙重負
擔。
單詞 活用成動詞 示例
snake n.蛇→v.曲折前行 The road snaked through forested mountains.道路在林
間蜿蜒延伸。
storm n.暴風雨→vi.氣呼
呼地疾走，闖 Ryan stormed into the office， demanding to know
where the manager was.瑞安氣沖沖地闖進辦公室，質
問經理在哪里。
類型2　具體動詞代替籠統動詞
籠統動詞 具體動詞 動作描寫示例
look/see/watch看 spot看見，發
現，注意到 I spotted a cute puppy in the bushes while walking
down the path.走在小路上時，我發現灌木叢中有一
只可愛的小狗。
glance瞥一眼 She glanced shyly at him and then lowered her eyes.她害羞地瞥了他一眼，然后垂下了眼睛。
籠統動詞 具體動詞 動作描寫示例
look/see/watch看 scan瀏覽；細
看，端詳 He scanned through the newspaper over breakfast.他邊吃早飯，邊瀏覽報紙。
She scanned his face anxiously.她急切地端詳著他的臉。
observe觀察 He observes keenly， but says little.他觀察敏銳，但言語寥寥。
籠統動詞 具體動詞 動作描寫示例
look/see/watch看 stare/gaze盯著
看，凝視 Emma stared/gazed at him in disbelief， shaking her
head.埃瑪一邊狐疑地盯著他看，一邊搖著頭。
glare怒目而視 The old woman didn’t shout， just glaring at him
silently.老婦人沒有喊叫，只是默默地怒視著他。
peek窺視，偷
看 She peeked from behind the bedroom door， found
nobody in the sitting room， and then slipped out of the house.她從臥室門后偷看，發現沒人在客廳，就溜出了房子。
籠統動詞 具體動詞 動作描寫示例
cry哭 weep流淚，哭
泣 She wept bitter tears of disappointment.她失望得痛哭流
涕。
sob啜泣，抽噎 She began to sob again， burying her face in the pillow.
她把臉埋在枕頭里，又開始抽噎起來。
籠統動詞 具體動詞 動作描寫示例
say/talk說 whisper耳語，
低語 Emily leaned over and whispered something in Amy’s
ear.埃米莉探過身去附耳跟埃米說了些什么。
stammer結結巴
巴地說 ＂Morning， Mr Brook. I...I’ve come to say sorry
for...＂ Bill stammered.＂早上好，布魯克先生。
我······我來道歉，是為······＂比爾結結巴巴地說。
shout大聲說 The twins merrily shouted ＂Happy birthday，
Mom！＂ as she came in.當她進來時，這對雙胞胎高
興地喊道：＂生日快樂，媽媽！＂
yell叫喊 The coach stood on the sidelines yelling encouragement
at the players.教練站在場外，為運動員吶喊鼓勁。
籠統動詞 具體動詞 動作描寫示例
smile/laugh笑 smile微笑 He said nothing， merely smiled and watched them.他什
么也沒說，只是微笑地看著他們。
laugh發笑，大
笑 Seeing his head stuck in the pumpkin， his dad just
couldn’t stop himself laughing.看到他的頭卡在南瓜
里，他的爸爸忍不住大笑起來。
籠統動詞 具體動詞 動作描寫示例
smile/laugh笑 grin露齒而笑 He grins， delighted at the memory.想起往事，他開心
地咧嘴笑起來。
giggle咯咯地笑 Children giggled at the joke.孩子們給這笑話逗得咯咯
笑。
chuckle低聲輕
笑 She chuckled to herself for having worn two socks that
didn’t match.她對自己穿了兩只不配對的襪子而暗自發
笑。
籠統動詞 具體動詞 動作描寫示例
eat吃；
drink喝 bite咬 She grabbed the bread on the table， bit into it， and
then rushed out hurriedly.她抓起桌上的面包，咬了一
口，然后匆匆地跑了出去。
chew咀嚼，嚼
(碎) He leaned out of the window chewing gum.他嚼著口香
糖探身窗外。
籠統動詞 具體動詞 動作描寫示例
eat吃；
drink喝 swallow吞下，
咽下 She swallowed hard and forced back her tears.她使勁咽
了一下口水，強忍住了淚水。
wolf大口地快
吃，狼吞虎咽 The hungry boy took the steamed bun and wolfed it
down.饑餓的男孩兒接過饅頭，狼吞虎咽地吃了下
去。
籠統動詞 具體動詞 動作描寫示例
eat吃；
drink喝 taste品嘗 She was disappointed and discouraged， for the cookies
she made tasted awful.她既失望又氣餒，因為她做的餅
干吃起來很糟糕。
consume吃，
喝，飲 He consumed a loaf of bread and a large bottle of milk
before leaving.他在離開前吃了一條面包，喝了一大瓶
牛奶。
籠統動詞 具體動詞 動作描寫示例
hit打，擊 knock敲，擊；
把······打成(某
種狀態) The wild animal was knocked flat by the blow.那野獸被
一拳打倒在地。
beat敲打，錘砸 Wind roared， thunder rolled and rain beat against the
windows.狂風大作，雷聲隆隆，雨點打在窗戶上。
strike打，擊 He struck the table with his fist angrily.他生氣地用拳頭
打桌子。
籠統動詞 具體動詞 動作描寫示例
walk走；
run跑 wander漫步，
閑逛 We wandered back towards the house after the picnic.野
餐后，我們溜達著回到房子里。
bounce活潑興
奮地走，蹦蹦
跳跳地去 He bounced across the room to greet them.他興奮地沖
過房間去迎接他們。
stamp跺著腳
走，噔噔地走 Anger welling up in him， he turned and stamped out of
the room.他勃然大怒，轉身噔噔地走出了房間。
籠統動詞 具體動詞 動作描寫示例
walk走；
run跑 storm氣呼呼地
疾走，闖，沖 Judy burst into tears and stormed off.朱迪突然大哭起
來，氣沖沖地走了。
stagger搖搖晃
晃地走，蹣跚 He staggered to the bed and collapsed in exhaustion.他搖
搖晃晃地走到床邊，筋疲力盡地倒了下去。
tiptoe踮著腳
走，躡手躡腳
地走 She tiptoed to the room， afraid of waking up the
sleeping baby.她踮著腳走向房間，害怕吵醒睡著的嬰
兒。
籠統動詞 具體動詞 動作描寫示例
walk走；
run跑 slip悄悄疾行，
溜 I didn’t notice the cat slipping out of the door when I
came in.我進來的時候，沒有注意到貓溜出了房間。
jog 慢跑 We were jogging while the dogs were bounding ahead.我
們在慢跑，而狗在前面蹦蹦跳跳地跑。
bound 跳躍著跑
籠統動詞 具體動詞 動作描寫示例
walk走；
run跑 rush迅速移動，
沖 The little girl rushed to greet her mother， sweeping her
arms wide.小女孩兒張開雙臂舞動著，沖過去迎接母
親。
dash猛沖 With the shot of the starting gun， I dashed out and ran
as fast as I could.隨著發令槍的一聲槍響，我沖出去，
以最快的速度奔跑。
籠統動詞 具體動詞 動作描寫示例
think想 wonder琢磨 He wondered what he should say to her to make her feel
better.他想知道該對她說些什么才能讓她感覺好點
兒。
reflect認真思
考，沉思 I need time to reflect before making a decision.做決定
前，我需要時間認真思考。
籠統動詞 具體動詞 動作描寫示例
think想 guess猜想，認
為 I guess he must be really angry at me.我想他一定很生我
的氣。
imagine胡亂猜
想，誤以為 He’s always imagining that we’re talking about him
behind his back.他總是胡亂猜測我們在背后說他的閑
話。
flash突然想
到，猛然想起 A terrible thought flashed through my mind.一個可怕的
想法閃過我的腦海。
籠統動詞 具體動詞 動作描寫示例
shake抖 tremble(因緊
張、激動、驚
慌等)顫抖，哆
嗦 She has done her best to keep calm but finds herself
trembling with tension.她盡力保持鎮定，可還是由于
緊張而抖個不停。
shiver(因寒冷
或恐懼而)哆
嗦，顫抖 I shivered and pulled my scarf more tightly round my
neck.我打了個寒戰，用圍巾把脖子圍得更緊了。
高級表達2　豐富優化句式
句式1　畫龍點睛的＂非謂語動詞＂
1. He listened with close attention， biting his lips and staring at the floor.他聚精會神地
聽著，咬著嘴唇，眼睛盯著地板。
2. He sat with his head in his hands， not believing what I told him.他雙手抱頭坐著，不
相信我告訴他的話。
3. I opened the letter carefully， hoping for some clues to the identity of the owner of the
wallet.我小心翼翼地打開信，希望能找到一些有關錢包主人身份的線索。
4. Gasping with pain， he forced himself to his feet and with slow， shaky
steps， began to walk.他痛苦地喘著氣，強迫自己站了起來，邁著緩慢的步
子，搖搖晃晃地開始走。
5. The man stood there silently， torn by sorrow and compassion.男人安靜地站在那里，
被悲傷和同情折磨著。
6. Encouraged by his teacher， he decided to gather his courage and participate in the
writing contest.在老師的鼓勵下，他決定鼓起勇氣參加寫作比賽。
7. Filled with fright， I dragged my exhausted body inching forward.我心中充滿恐懼，
拖著疲憊的身體慢慢向前走。
8. Having told the truth， he felt a lot easier and returned home with a lighter heart.說出
真相后，他感覺輕松了很多，心情放松地回家了。
句式2　光彩奪目的＂with復合結構＂和＂獨立主格結構＂
9. With my eyes full of tears， I rushed out of the flat and ran along the street.我滿眼淚水
地沖出公寓，沿著街道跑。
10. He embraced me with his arms wide open and his eyes shining like a diamond.他張開
雙臂擁抱我，眼睛像鉆石一樣閃閃發光。
11. All of us were hard at it at the kitchen table， with my dad filming the annual event.我
們都圍著廚房的桌子忙碌，而爸爸在拍攝這個一年一度的活動。
12. With her plan ruined by the accident， she let out a cry with anger.由于她的計劃被事
故破壞了，她憤怒地叫了一聲。
13. My mother stopped and raised her head with surprise in her eyes.我的母親停下，滿
眼詫異地抬起頭。
14. He hung up the phone and ran to hospital， worry written on his face.他掛斷電話，
跑去醫院，臉上寫滿擔憂。
15. The night falling， they put up a tent and wolfed down a simple dinner.夜幕降臨，他
們搭起帳篷，狼吞虎咽地吃了一頓簡單的晚餐。
16. He walked aimlessly along the street， head down and shoulders bowed.他低著頭，
垂著肩，漫無目的地在街上走著。
17. Hundreds of eyes fixed upon him， he felt so nervous that his teeth started to chatter.
上百雙眼睛盯著他，他感到十分緊張，牙齒咯咯打顫。
18. He lay on the grass， his hands crossed under his head.他躺在草地上，雙手交叉放
在頭下。
句式3　豐富多彩的＂復合句＂
19. With a branch in my hand， I intended to frighten the dogs away， which in turn
annoyed them.我手里拿著一根樹枝，打算把狗嚇跑，這反過來又惹惱了它們。
20. His body trembled， his mouth half opened， and he let out a scream of pain that felt
like a knife cutting through his chest.他的身體顫抖著，他的嘴半張著，發出一聲痛苦
的尖叫，感覺就像一把刀穿過他的胸膛。
21. The thought that we might have got lost in such darkness sent shivers down my spine.
想到我們可能在這樣的黑暗中迷了路，我背上一陣陣發冷。
22. An idea flashed into Jack’s mind that he could wake the family by throwing some
stones into the house.杰克腦子里閃過一個念頭，他可以扔一些石頭到房子里，把這
家人吵醒。
23. What followed was an awkwardly long silence， which was eventually broken by
David’s stomach growling.隨后是一段長時間尷尬的沉默，最終被戴維肚子的咕咕叫
聲打破了。
24. She could hardly conceal her excitement the moment she knew she was admitted.當她
得知自己被錄取的時候，她幾乎無法掩飾自己的興奮之情。
句式4　彰顯文采的＂特殊句式＂
25. Standing on stage， so nervous was I that my mind went blank.站在舞臺上，我緊張
得頭腦一片空白。
26. Not until then did she pour out what had been disturbing her the whole day.直到那
時，她才說出了困擾她一整天的事。
27. Only after we had prepared all the necessary ingredients did we begin to make the
cake.我們直到把一切必需的原料都準備好后才開始做蛋糕。
28. Out of the darkness came a voice he had never heard before.黑暗中傳來一個他從來
沒有聽過的聲音。
29. Cold and tired though we were， the kids’ smiling faces cheered us up.雖然我們又冷
又累，但孩子們的笑臉使我們振奮起來。
30. Hanging on the west wall are a group of pictures by Qi Baishi.掛在西墻上的是一組
齊白石的畫。
31. No sooner had he realized his mistake than he apologized to her.他一意識到自己的錯
誤就向她道歉。
32. From then on， not only did I have a good command of writing， but I also knew the
truth： with belief and determination， everything is possible.從那時起，我不僅很好地
掌握了寫作，而且還知道了：有了信念和決心，一切皆有可能。
33. It was at that moment that I felt something changed in our relationship.就在那一刻，
我覺得我們的關系發生了變化。
34. Thanks to my mom， we made it at last. It was she who/that always taught us to hold a
positive attitude towards difficulties.多虧了媽媽，我們最終成功了。是她總教導我們
對困難要持積極的態度。
35. Helping a new friend made Joey feel good inside， for， although the baseball cap did
matter much to him， he knew there were more important things in life.幫助一個新朋友
讓喬伊內心感覺很好，因為盡管棒球帽對他來說很重要，但他知道生活中還有更重
要的事情。
36. What unacceptable excuses he made to avoid his responsibility！他為了逃避責任編
的理由太不能讓人接受了！
37. How wonderful a time we ever had together！ 我們曾一起度過了多么美好
的時光啊！
38. How moved and proud she was when learning her twins made the breakfast for her！
當她得知她的雙胞胎為她做早餐時，她是多么的感動和自豪！
句式5　委婉動人的＂虛擬語氣＂
39. If I hadn’t quarreled with Tom， I wouldn’t have been trapped in this awful place，
confronted with the danger of death.我如果沒有和湯姆吵架，就不會被困在這個可怕
的地方，面臨死亡的危險。(表達后悔)
40. I lost my job and it seemed as if the end of the world had come.我丟了工作，似乎世
界末日已經來臨。(表達沮喪)
41. Without Eric’s encouragement， I would have been immersed in sorrow for the rest of
the day.要是沒有埃里克的鼓勵，我可能后半天都沉浸在悲傷的情緒里。(表達感激)
42. Steven lowered his head with embarrassment， wishing he hadn’t said that.史蒂文尷
尬地低下頭，希望自己剛才沒說那些話。(表達后悔)
43. ＂If only I had listened to my mother’s advice！＂ the little girl whispered
to herself.＂要是我當初聽取了媽媽的建議該多好！＂小女孩低聲對自己說。
(表達后悔)
高級表達3　心理描寫萬能句式
　(a wave/sense/feeling/surge/flush/ripple of＋) 情感名詞＋seized/
overwhelmed/took hold of/swept over/flooded over＋sb. 表示＂某人感到······＂
或＂一陣/一種······向某人襲來＂
1. A wave of panic seized her， but she forced herself to leave the room calmly. 她感到一
陣恐慌，但是強迫自己鎮靜地離開了房間。
2. A strong sense of delight took hold of me the moment I heard the good news.聽到這個
好消息，我很開心。
3. As he realized he had made a big mistake in the teamwork， a feeling of guilt swept
over him.當他意識到自己在團隊合作中犯了一個大錯時，內疚感席卷了他。
4. Fear sweeping over her， she stood rooted to the spot.恐懼籠罩著她，她站在原地，
一動不動。
　情感名詞＋welled up inside/in/within sb. 表示＂某人心中充滿了······＂
或＂······涌上心頭＂
5. Every time I think of my grandpa， sadness will well up inside me.每當我想起爺爺，
悲傷就會涌上心頭。
6. At the thought of how happy her mother was when receiving the gift， joy
and pride welled up within her.一想到母親在收到禮物時多么高興，她內心就
充滿了喜悅和自豪。
7. Anger welling up within him， he flushed bright red.他怒不可遏，臉漲得通紅。
　a look/an expression of＋情感名詞＋flashed across/spread across/crossed one’s face 表示＂······神色從某人臉上掠過＂
8. Levin sat there and an expression of sadness crossed his face. 萊文坐在那里，臉上掠
過一絲悲傷。
9. A look of annoyance crossed her face when she knew that her father forgot her birthday
gift which he had promised.當知道父親忘記了答應她的生日禮物時，她臉上掠過一絲
惱怒的神色。
　the sight/thought of sth. made sb.＋情感形容詞/filled sb. with＋情感名
詞 表示＂看到/想到某事物讓某人······＂
10. The sight of her son graduating filled her with pride.(＝At the sight of her son
graduating， she was filled with pride.)看到兒子畢業，她充滿了自豪。
11. The very sight of the bear made him nervous.(＝At the sight of the bear， he was
nervous.)一見到那頭熊，他就緊張。
12. The thought of the moments shared with Grandpa filled me with great joy.(＝At the
thought of the moments shared with Grandpa， I was filled with great joy.)一想到和爺爺
度過的時光，我就感到十分快樂。
13. The sight of its owner made the little dog excited. (＝At the sight of its owner， the
little dog got excited.)看到自己的主人，小狗興奮不已。
　one’s heart pounded/thumped/raced/fluttered with＋情感名詞
(excitement/nervousness/fear/fright/...) 表示＂某人······得心怦怦直跳＂
14. My heart was thumping with fear as I walked through the dark hallway.當我穿過黑暗
的走廊時，我害怕得心怦怦直跳。
15. His heart had been pounding with nervousness before he stepped onto the stage.在登
上舞臺之前，他緊張得心怦怦直跳。
16. Her heart was racing with anticipation as she waited for the results.她心懷期待，心怦
怦直跳，等待著結果。
　情感名詞A ＋ gave way to/was swept away by/was replaced by/was
overshadowed by/...＋情感名詞B 表示＂······變為······/······為······所取代＂
17. Her previous calm gave way to/was swept away by fear when she learned
that she was left alone at the station.當她得知自己被獨自留在車站時，她先前
的泰然自若已變為害怕。
18. His initial excitement was replaced by a deep sense of disappointment. 他最初的興奮
被深深的失望取代。
19. The joy she once felt was overshadowed by a wave of sadness.她曾經感受到的喜悅
被一股悲傷的浪潮掩蓋。
　情感名詞(fear/terror/panic/surprise/shock/embarrassment/...) rooted sb.
to the spot 表示＂某人······得呆住＂
20. Embarrassment rooted her to the spot.她尷尬得呆住了。
　情感名詞(joy/happiness/delight/excitement/...)＋was shining in one’s
eyes 表示＂某人眼里閃著······的光芒＂
21. Excitement was shining in her eyes.(＝Her eyes were shining/sparkling/ twinkling with excitement.＝There was a sparkle of excitement in her eyes.)
她的眼里閃爍著激動的光芒。
　sb. felt a great sense of ＋情感名詞＋welling up in sb.’s heart/surging
through sb. 表示＂某人感到一股強烈的······在內心升騰/奔涌＂
22. Mother felt a great sense of happiness welling up in her heart， tears rolling down her
face.母親感到一股巨大的幸福感涌上心頭，她淚流滿面。
23. Seeing the barking dog charging towards her， Mary felt a great sense of
horror surging through her.看到那只狗吠叫著朝她沖來，瑪麗感到一股強烈的
恐懼奔涌而來。
　(much) to one’s ＋情感名詞，主句 表示＂令某人(非常)······的是，······＂
24. To his surprise and joy， his father told him to keep the money and buy something he
wanted.令他驚訝和高興的是，父親告訴他把錢留著，買一些他想要的東西。
25. Much to my annoyance， they decided not to come after all.他們最終決定不來，這
使我很生氣。
26. I never thought she’d agree， but to my amazement she did.我從未想過她會同意，
但是令我吃驚的是她同意了。
　What＋moved/excited/shocked/...＋sb. (most)＋was that從句 表示
＂(最)令某人······的是······ ＂
27. What worried her was that her teammate might not agree with her plan.讓她擔心的是
她的隊友可能不同意她的計劃。
28. What upset him most was that his parents forgot his birthday because of the birth of his
little sister.最令他難過的是，因為妹妹的出生，他父母忘記了他的生日。
　情感形容詞(短語)，主句
29. Excited and moved，he followed the sound and went out for help.他又激動又感動，
順著聲音出去求助。
30. Speechless with happiness， she held her son tightly in her arms， with tears welling
up in her eyes.她高興得說不出話來，緊緊地抱著她的兒子，熱淚盈眶。
31. Lonely and sad， I was in desperate need of close friends， with whom I hoped to
share my happiness and sorrow.我既孤獨又悲傷，迫切需要親密的朋友，我希望與他
們分享我的快樂和悲傷。
32. Disappointed and frustrated， the poor man made his way back to his home.帶著失望
和沮喪，這個可憐的人回家了。
33. Jack paced up and down in his room， restless with anxiety.杰克在他的房間里來回
踱步，焦躁不安。
高級表達4　動作描寫萬能句式
　三連動作鏈：主語＋did A， did B and did C
1. She woke up， slipped out of her bed and tiptoed to the door.她醒了，溜下床，踮著
腳走到門口。
2. John pressed his finger against his lips， pointed to the cat， and shook his head gently.
約翰把手指放在嘴唇上，指了指貓咪，輕輕搖了搖頭。
3. He lost his balance， staggered back against the rail and fell over.他失去了平衡，往
后趔趄撞在欄桿上摔倒了。
4. Ben also ran in my direction， gathered me into his arms and kept patting my back.本
也朝我這個方向跑過來，把我擁入懷中，不停地輕拍我的后背。
5. She wiped away tears， turned back and smiled at me sweetly. 她擦去眼淚，轉過身，
朝我嫣然一笑。
　主語＋did A and did B，非謂語動詞；主語＋did， 非謂語動詞A＋and＋非謂語動詞B；非謂語動詞A，主語＋did，非謂語動詞B
6. They ran in bare feet， laughing and teasing.他們光著腳跑著，笑著鬧著。
7. He laid his fishing pole down and dragged his feet， moving toward me at a snail’s
pace.他放下釣魚竿，像蝸牛一樣磨磨蹭蹭地向我走來。
8. Using its head， it touched our hands， seemingly saying that we were to be thanked.
它用頭碰了碰我們的手，好像在說，它要感謝我們。
9. Dad sat beside me and patted me on the shoulder， not saying a word of blame.爸爸坐
在我旁邊，拍了拍我的肩膀，一句責備的話都沒說。
10. Encouraged by Mr Wales， David had made great progress and even decided to take
part in the speech contest.在威爾士先生的鼓勵下，戴維取得了很大的進步，甚至決定
參加演講比賽。
　主語＋did，with＋名詞＋非謂語動詞或形/副/介詞短語
11. When Karina saw it， she hugged it tightly with tears filling her eyes.當卡琳娜看到
它時，她緊緊地擁抱著它，雙眼滿是淚水。
12. We all pretty much slept with one eye open. 我們幾乎都不敢睡太熟。
13. He leaned against the kitchen counter with his arms folded across his chest， glaring at
me. 他靠在廚房的操作臺上，雙臂交叉抱在胸前，怒視著我。
14. With the biggest pumpkin on my shoulder， I headed home merrily， singing along
the way.我肩上扛著最大的南瓜，愉快地朝家走去，一路上唱著歌。
15. He received the letter with his hands trembling and his heart thumping. 他接過信，雙
手顫抖，心怦怦直跳。
　主語＋did，獨立主格[邏輯主語(heart，eyes等表身體部位的名詞)＋非
謂語動詞或形/副/介詞短語]
16. Reaching out， I touched its head，my heart racing. 我心跳加速，伸手去
摸它的頭。
17. He tossed and turned， his head hot to touch. 他輾轉反側，頭摸著燙手。
18. He raced to the bus stop， his heart pounding violently.他飛快地跑到公交車站，心
怦怦狂跳。
19. My arms aching and knees trembling， I crawled out of the cave and shouted for help.
手臂疼痛、膝蓋發抖，我爬出了洞，大喊救命。
20. Eyes glued to it， he fell in love with the shiny red car the instant he saw it.他一看到
那輛閃亮的紅色汽車就愛上了它，目不轉睛地盯著它。
21. So many eyes looking at her，Mary felt very shy.這么多雙眼睛望著她，瑪麗感到
很害羞。
高級表達5　修辭運用萬能句式
　明喻：主語＋did/系動詞＋like/as if...
1. Seized by curiosity，Tom went out of the room on tiptoe like a cat. 湯姆好奇心頓起，
像貓一樣踮著腳走出房間。(心理＋動作描寫)
2. The scenery along the route is just like a breathtaking landscape painting.沿路的景色就
像一幅令人驚嘆的風景畫。(環境描寫)
3. The skies were dark. A strong wind was blowing hard， cutting my face like
a sharp knife.天空一片漆黑。一陣大風猛烈地刮著，像一把鋒利的刀割著我的
臉。(環境描寫)
4. Scared to death， John stood under the tree like a statue. 約翰嚇得要死，站在樹下，
像雕像一樣一動不動。(神態描寫)
5. Children are running on the grass as if they were happy birds.孩子們在草地上奔跑，
宛如快樂的小鳥。(心理＋動作描寫)
6. I couldn’t move my legs. It was as if they had been stuck to the floor.我的腿動不了，
就好像被固定在地板上了。(動作描寫)
　明喻：A＋系動詞/did＋as＋形容詞/副詞＋as＋B
7. My mother was as busy as a bee， making preparations for the festival. 我媽媽忙得不
可開交，為節日做準備。(動作描寫)
8. Her face turned as pale as snow.她的臉變得蒼白如雪。(神態描寫)
9. The teacher’s comfort was as gentle as a spring breeze.老師的安慰如春風般溫柔。(人
物描寫)
10. Having walked in the snow for two hours， I felt my hands were as cold as ice.在雪地
里走了兩個小時，我感覺我的手冷得像冰。(感受描寫)
11. The bus full of passengers went as slowly as a snail.這輛載滿乘客的公交車慢得像蝸
牛。(場景描寫)
12. Her voice came down the line as clear as a bell. 她的聲音如鈴聲般清晰地從聽筒里
傳出來。(人物描寫)
13. He has been as nervous as a cat on hot bricks all evening.他整個晚上都緊張得像熱
鍋上的螞蟻。(心理描寫)
14. The boy was as proud as a peacock when he showed me his new sneakers. 那個男孩
給我看他的新運動鞋時，驕傲得像一只孔雀。(性格描寫)
　暗喻：A＋be動詞＋B ；通過其他一些能暗含A與B之間聯系的動詞
15. My sister’s hair was a flowing golden river streaming down over her shoulders. 我姐
姐的頭發像一條流動的金色河流順著她的肩膀散下來。(外貌描寫)
16. The boy seized the food on the table and wolfed it down.男孩一把抓過桌上的食物，
狼吞虎咽地吃了下去。(動作描寫)
17. The news was a dagger in her heart， making her too painful to breathe.這個消息猶如
一把匕首刺在她心頭，使她痛苦得無法呼吸。(心理描寫)
18. His anger was a wildfire waiting to light.他的憤怒就像等待點燃的野火。
(心理描寫)
19. A heavy silence blanketed the room. 房間里一片寂靜。(環境描寫)
　擬人：主語(表＂動物/自然現象/含蓄抽象＂的名詞)＋用于人的謂語動
詞
20. Sorrow was written in each and every wrinkle of his face.他臉上的每一條皺紋都寫
著悲傷。(心理描寫)
21. He glanced at the dew-covered grass， and it winked back at him.他掃了一眼掛滿露
珠的青草，青草就向他眨了眨眼。(環境描寫)
22. The color rushed to her cheeks when she realized she was being watched.意識到有人
在看她，她頓時漲紅了臉。(神態描寫)
23. The tree branch scratched and clawed at my window， trying to break into the house.
樹枝抓撓我的窗戶，試圖闖進屋內。(環境描寫)
24. She felt on top of the world， and every freckle on her cheeks was dancing with joy.她
感到非常高興，臉頰上的每一個雀斑都在高興地跳舞。(心理描寫)
25. Depressed， I ran out of the room. A gentle breeze greeted me， caressed my cheeks
and smoothed my heart.我沮喪地跑出了房間。一陣輕柔的微風向我襲來，撫過我的
臉頰，撫慰了我的心。(心理描寫)
26. She didn’t realize that an opportunity was knocking at her door.她沒有意識到一個機
會正在敲她的門。(事件描寫)
　夸張：(動詞＋)數詞/量詞/形容詞＋名詞；動詞(＋名詞)＋副詞
27. Despite the cold， he was sweating from carrying a mountain of cardboard into the
backyard.盡管天氣很冷，他還是因為搬了一大堆硬紙板到后院而汗流浹背。(數量的
夸張)
28. Hearing the bad news， she cried her eyes out， her heart breaking into about a
million pieces.聽到這個不幸的消息，她痛哭流涕，心都碎了。(情緒和數量的夸張)
29. Carrying a backpack which weighed a ton， he was extremely exhausted and looked
half dead. 他背了個很沉的背包，非常疲憊，累壞了。(數量和感受的夸張)
30. When she heard the bad news， she cried a river of tears.當她聽到這個噩耗時，她
淚流滿面。(情緒的夸張)
31. Mary is a musical genius. Her performances always bring the house down.瑪麗是個音
樂天才。她的表演總能贏得滿堂喝彩。(動作的夸張)
32. The limitless grassland， the wandering sheep and the setting sun kept me fascinated.
一望無際的草原、徜徉的羊群和落日都讓我著迷。(環境的夸張)
33. He was so nervous and worried that sweat began to pour down his face.他如此緊張和
擔憂，以至于汗開始沿著面頰淌下來。(情緒的夸張)
　排比：詞語/句子＋詞語/句子，and 詞語/句子
34. John convinced most of the audience because he argued logically， calmly and
reasonably.約翰說服了大多數聽眾，因為他辯論得合乎邏輯，冷靜而合理。(突出了
辯論的說服力)
35. To maintain good health， he determined to eat a well-balanced diet， sleep for 8
hours every night and exercise for 20 minutes every day.為了保持健康，他決定均衡飲
食，每晚睡8小時，每天鍛煉20分鐘。(展示一系列行動)
36. He was so ashamed of what he thought， what he said and what he did that day.他為
自己那天所想的、所說的和所做的感到非常羞愧。(突出人物羞愧的情緒)
37. My forgetful mom often forgets to bring the key， take the wallet， and even lock the
door.我健忘的媽媽總是忘記帶鑰匙，忘記帶錢包，甚至忘記鎖門。(突出人物健忘的
性格)
38. As a typical student favored by teachers， he is never late for school， always active
in class， and always friendly towards his classmates.作為一名典型的受老師喜愛的學
生，他上學從不遲到，課堂上總是很活躍，而且對同學一直都很友好。(突出人物的
優秀品質)
39. Terrible thoughts flashed through Jane’s mind： whether there were dangerous
animals， whether she could survive this scary night， and whether Tom could find her.
一些可怕的念頭閃過簡的腦海：是否有危險的動物，她是否能熬過這個可怕的夜
晚，湯姆是否能找到她。(突出人物害怕的心情)
高級表達6　升華結尾萬能句式
　情感升華：銜接語，主人公＋gradually/eventually/suddenly/...＋
realized/learned/felt/...＋n./that從句 表示＂······，主人公漸漸/終于/突然/······意識到/
明白/感到······＂
1. After this event，he came to realize that while he had given the dog a home， it had
given him something bigger — a second life.這件事發生后，他開始意識到，雖然他給
了那只狗一個家，但它給了他更重要的東西——第二次生命。
2. At that moment， I truly understood the meaning of the saying that kindness brings
about kindness.在那一刻，我真正理解了善有善報這句諺語的含義。
3. By showing kindness to others， the young boy gradually learned that he could make a
positive impact on the world surrounding him.通過對他人友善，年輕男孩逐漸明白他
可以對周圍的世界產生積極的影響。
　情感升華：銜接語，it struck/hit/occurred to/dawned on＋主人公＋that
從句 表示＂······，主人公突然想到/逐漸明白······＂
4. Following that， it gradually dawned on me that the love of my mother is priceless，
which nothing can match.在那之后，我逐漸明白了母親的愛是無價的，沒有什么能與
之相比。
5. At the sight of my parents’ working hard on the farm， it occurred to me that it was
their selfless devotion that gave me a happy life. 看到父母在農場辛勤工作，我突然醒
悟，正是他們的無私奉獻給了我幸福的生活。
　結尾點題：looking back on/thinking of/at the thought of/at the sight
of...，主人公＋always/still... 表示＂回首/想到/一想到/一看到······，主人公總是/仍
然······＂
6. Looking back on our adventurous journey， we realized that it was all worth it in the
end.回首我們的冒險之旅，我們覺得最終這一切都值得。
7. At the thought of that heart-warming scene， Jenna couldn’t help getting deeply moved
by the selfless love and care of her neighbors. 一想起那暖心的場景，詹娜就會情不自
禁地被鄰居無私的關愛深深打動。
8. And now，when looking back upon that experience， she still feels that it was that
experience that transformed her into a nature-loving being.現在，當回顧那段經歷時，
她仍然覺得正是那段經歷把她變成了一個熱愛自然的人。
　結尾點題：銜接語，無靈主語＋sounded/echoed/rang/lingered＋in one’s
ear/head/mind/... 表示＂······，······在耳邊/腦中/······回響＂
9. Since then， my father’s plain and encouraging words have always echoed in my
mind， guiding the way of my life.從那時起，父親那些平淡而令人鼓舞的話就一直在
我的腦海中回響，指引著我的人生道路。
10. Though many years had worn on， his warning was still ringing in my ear.雖然許多
年過去了，但他的警告仍然在我耳邊回響。
　結尾點題：(銜接語，)無靈主語＋reminded/enlightened＋主人公＋
that... 表示＂(······，) ······提醒主人公/使主人公明白······＂
11. The whole experience reminded me that teamwork was key to our success in the
project. 整個經歷提醒我，團隊合作是我們成功地完成這個項目的關鍵。
12. The special experience enlightened me that company is the most important for the
elderly.這次特別的經歷使我明白，陪伴對老年人來說是最重要的。
13. Such a warm scene reminded me that the language barrier can never be a problem
between kind and friendly people.如此溫馨的場景提醒我，語言障礙永遠不會是善良
友好的人們之間的難題。
　主題升華：Just then，a(n) old/famous saying/sb.’s words flashed
through/echoed in one’s mind，“名言/諺語.” 表示＂就在那時，一句老話/名言/某
人的話‘······’閃過某人的腦海/在某人腦海中回響。＂
14. Just then， a famous saying flashed through his mind，＂Keep your face always
towards the sunshine， and shadows will fall behind you.＂就在那時，他想到一句名
言：＂始終面向陽光，陰影自然落在你身后。＂
15. At that time， the old saying ＂If at first you don’t succeed， try， try again＂
echoed in my mind.在那個時候，那句老話＂如果你開始時沒有成功，嘗試，再嘗
試＂在我的腦海里回蕩。
　主題升華：Just as the saying goes，名言/諺語. 表示“正如俗話所說：
‘······’＂
16. Through the experience， we learned that helping others in need makes our day as
well. Just as the saying goes，＂Roses given， fragrance in hand.＂通過這次經歷，我們
認識到幫助有需要的人也會讓我們很快樂。正如俗話所說：＂贈人玫瑰，手留余
香。＂
17. Just as the saying goes， ＂Quitters never win and winners never quit.＂正如俗話所
說：＂退縮者永無勝利，勝利者永不退縮。＂
　人生感悟：Not until then did＋主人公＋ realize/learn/come to
understand＋感悟到的道理. 表示＂直到那時，主人公才意識到/明白······＂
18. Not until then did I realize what true friendship was： A friend in need is a friend
indeed.直到那時，我才意識到什么是真正的友誼：患難見真情。
19. Not until then did I come to understand what my teacher meant by saying ＂You’re
unique in the world.＂ 直到那時，我才明白我的老師說的＂你是世界上獨一無二的＂
是什么意思。
　人生感悟：It is/was＋主旨名詞＋that ...(，which sb. felt deep in one’s
heart/mind.)
20. It is love and care that make the world go around， which he felt deep in his heart.正
是愛和關心讓世界轉動，他在心里深深感受到了這一點。
21. It was the cross-country adventure that was the start to a lasting friendship between
him and me.正是那次越野冒險開始了我和他之間持久的友誼。
22. It was the unique experience that made me understand whatever difficulty we are faced
with， we shouldn’t lose heart.正是這次特殊的經歷使我理解了無論我們面臨什么困
難，我們都不應該失去信心。
寓情于景：Despite/In spite of the＋adj.＋wind/rain/storm/air/...， sb./sth. did sth.
23. Despite the bone-chilling wind，I felt a wave of warmth and pride as I had got the
love and respect of my classmates. 盡管寒風刺骨，我還是感到一陣溫暖和自豪，因為
我得到了同學們的愛和尊重。
24. In spite of the chill winter wind， their home where the two lovely dogs played
happily was filled with the warmth of love and reunion.盡管冬風凜冽，他們家里的兩只
可愛的小狗快樂地玩耍，家里滿是愛和團聚的溫暖。
畫面定格：With＋the＋adj.＋sunlight/wind/air/snow...， sb./sth. did...
25. With the warm sunlight flooding in， they hugged together， feeling
forgiven， loved and trusted. 溫暖的陽光照進來，他們擁抱在一起，感到被原
諒、被愛和被信任。
26. After a whole day of volunteering service in the nursing home， we headed for our
home，with the setting sun shining upon our happy faces appreciatively.在養老院志愿服
務一整天后，我們動身回家，落日贊賞地把余暉照耀在我們愉快的臉上。

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