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系列四　不可不背的寫作素材
Ⅰ.應用文寫作高分表達
一、詞匯升級
1.When I was invited to the stage to receive the award, I expressed my thanks to my teacher.
→When I was invited to the stage to receive the award, I conveyed my appreciation to my teacher.
2.We will organize all kinds of activities, including performances on traditional Chinese musical instruments, folk dances and Chinese martial arts.
→We will organize a range of/a variety of activities, including performances on traditional Chinese musical instruments, folk dances as well as Chinese martial arts.
3.It’ll be a thirty-minute ride.Upon arrival, we’ll first visit a farm, where we can feed chickens and pick strawberries.
→It’ll be a thirty-minute ride.Upon arrival, we’ll first pay a visit to/drop in at a farm, where we can feed chickens and pick strawberries.
4.If given the precious opportunity, I will try to present the charm of Chinese culture.
→If given the precious opportunity, I will spare no effort to present the charm of Chinese culture.
5.I’m writing to tell you something about how we arrange the next class.
→I’m writing to inform you of something about how we arrange the next class.
6.Professor Green is a productive poet, whose works are very popular.
→Professor Green is a productive poet, whose works enjoy great popularity.
7.Most importantly, outgoing and enthusiastic, I like being a volunteer, providing service.
→Most importantly, outgoing and enthusiastic, I am keen on being a volunteer, providing service.
8.I would like to congratulate you on your winning the first prize in the Chinese Speech Competition.
→I would like to express/convey my congratulations to you on your winning the first prize in the Chinese Speech Competition.
9.I’d appreciate it/be grateful if you could let me know when you are free in advance.
→I’d appreciate it/be grateful if you could let me know when you are available in advance.
10.Knowing that you like Chinese paper-cutting, I am very happy to invite you to take part in the online lecture given by my art teacher Mr.Wang.
→Knowing that you are fond of Chinese paper-cutting, I am more than delighted to invite you to get engaged in the online lecture delivered by my art teacher Mr.Wang.
11.Besides, essays contributed should be limited within 500 words and written in English only.
→Besides, essays contributed are supposed to be limited within 500 words and written in English only.
12.Busy with my assignments, I can’t go shopping with Mother this morning.
→Occupied with my assignments, I can’t go shopping with Mother this morning.
13.The old man donated a lot of money to the school,making the students return to their classroom.
→The old man donated a lot of money to the school,enabling the students to return to their classroom.
二、句式升級
1.被動要比主動好
①Last Saturday, we held spring ploughing and planting practice in the school’s labor practice base.
→Last Saturday, spring ploughing and planting practice was held in the school’s labor practice base.
②You must submit your paintings to Students’ Union before November 10.
→Your paintings must be submitted to Students’ Union before November 10.
2.倒裝要比正常妙
(1)“only+介詞短語/副詞/狀語從句”位于句首引起的部分倒裝
③We can improve our efficiency and make our school life meaningful only in this way.
→Only in this way can we improve our efficiency and make our school life meaningful.
④You can have a better understanding of it only when you come to China to experience the Spring Festival by yourself.
→Only when you come to China to experience the Spring Festival by yourself can you have a better understanding of it.
(2)not only...but also...“不但……而且……”結構中,not only位于句首引起的部分倒裝
⑤Through this activity, we not only realized the value of labor, but we also learned to respect all laborers.
→Through this activity, not only did we realize the value of labor, but we also learned to respect all laborers.
⑥This theme activity is not only of great benefit to our mental health but it also enriches our school life.
→Not only is this theme activity of great benefit to our mental health but it also enriches our school life.
(3)not until...“直到……才”結構中,not until位于句首引起的倒裝,本句式還可以用強調句型
⑦I wasn’t aware of the importance of teamwork until I was chosen monitor.
→Not until I was chosen monitor was I aware of the importance of teamwork.
→It was not until I was chosen monitor that I was aware of the importance of teamwork.(強調句型)
(4)so/such...that...“如此……以至于……”結構中,so/such...位于句首引起的倒裝
⑧Wasting food is so disappointing that I’d like to give some advice on reducing food waste.
→So disappointing is wasting food that I’d like to give some advice on reducing food waste.
⑨The activity was so meaningful that everyone was eager to have another chance.
→So meaningful was the activity that everyone was eager to have another chance.
(5)as/though“盡管”引起的倒裝句:adj./n.+as/though+主語+謂語,...
⑩Though/Although I was tired and sweaty, I found this trip rewarding.
→Tired and sweaty as/though I was,I found this trip rewarding.
11Though/Although we were exhausted, we enjoyed ourselves cheering and jumping.
→Exhausted as/though we were,we enjoyed ourselves cheering and jumping.
(6)否定副詞hardly,nor,never等引導的倒裝句
12I could hardly hold back my excitement when I knew I got the first prize.
→Hardly could I hold back my excitement when I knew I got the first prize.
(7)完全倒裝
13A few weeks later, when I almost forgot the contest, the news came there.
→A few weeks later, when I almost forgot the contest, there came the news.
14The twins went upstairs,carrying the breakfast they had made.
→Upstairs went the twins,carrying the breakfast they had made.
3.強調結構不可少
強調句型的結構:It is/was+被強調部分+that/who...;強調謂語動詞用do/does/did
15I turned on the gas cooker under the guidance of my mother.
→It was under the guidance of my mother that I turned on the gas cooker.
16We can improve our efficiency and make our school life meaningful only in this way.
→It is only in this way that we can improve our efficiency and make our school life meaningful.
17I hope we could have a meaningful and enjoyable experience.
→I do hope we could have a meaningful and enjoyable experience.
18I should appreciate their selfless and unconditional love.
→It is their selfless and unconditional love that I should appreciate.
4.言簡意明非謂語
恰當地運用非謂語動詞,不僅能夠使句式多樣、句子靈活多變,而且讀起來結構緊湊、言簡意明。
(1)現在分詞作狀語
19Moreover, English will serve as a window to the world.It will allow me to gain a global view towards life, understand people from different cultures and make more friends.
→Moreover, English will serve as a window to the world, allowing me to gain a global view towards life, understand people from different cultures and make more friends.
(2)過去分詞作狀語
20We were bathed in sunshine,and everyone sang and laughed while picking,exhausted but fulfilled.
→Bathed in sunshine,everyone sang and laughed while picking,exhausted but fulfilled.
(3)不定式作狀語
21Our school intended to enrich the students’ life and stimulate our interest in learning English,so it will hold a lecture on English literature at 2 pm next Friday in the lecture hall.
→To enrich the students’ life and stimulate our interest in learning English, our school will hold a lecture on English literature at 2 pm next Friday in the lecture hall.
22Our school aims to raise the awareness of caring for the disadvantaged groups,so it is to organize a charity donation at 5:30 pm next Thursday in the gym,and appeals to us students to participate.
→To raise the awareness of caring for the disadvantaged groups, our school is to organize a charity donation at 5:30 pm next Thursday in the gym, and appeals to us students to participate.(不定式作狀語)
→Aiming to raise the awareness of caring for the disadvantaged groups, our school is to organize a charity donation at 5:30 pm next Thursday in the gym, and appeals to us students to participate. (現在分詞作狀語)
→Aimed at raising the awareness of caring for the disadvantaged groups, our school is to organize a charity donation at 5:30 pm next Thursday in the gym, and appeals to us students to participate.(過去分詞作狀語)
5.意蘊深長復合句
(1)用定語從句升級句子
23Because of your help and instructions, I made much progress in my both spoken English and written English and it gave me much confidence.
→Because of your help and instructions, I made much progress in my both spoken English and written English, which gave me much confidence.
24The activity began with a lecture by a local botanist.He taught us about the different characteristics and uses of various plant species.
→The activity began with a lecture by a local botanist, who taught us about the different characteristics and uses of various plant species.
(2)用定語從句增加細節
25The figures show that students are wasting so much food.
→The figures show that students are wasting so much food, which will have a bad effect on the earth(這將對地球產生不良影響).
26Besides, we have a lot of sports, such as football, basketball and swimming.
→Besides, we have a lot of sports, such as football, basketball and swimming,which can arouse our interests, broaden our horizons and enrich our after-school life(能夠激發我們的興趣,開闊我們的視野,并且豐富我們的課外生活).
(3)用as引導的非限制性定語從句拓展句子
27It is known to us that trees are very significant to the environment and humans.
→As is known to us, trees are very significant to the environment and humans.
(4)用同位語從句升級句子
28Everyone agrees that protecting the Marine ecological environment is the focus of attention.
→No one can deny the fact that protecting the Marine ecological environment is the focus of attention.
Ⅱ.應用文寫作熱考體裁和話題
1感謝信(生活技能云端展)
假定你是學生會主席李華,學生會舉辦的首屆生活技能云端展示活動(Work Creates a Better Life)得到了外教Patrick的大力支持。活動已經圓滿結束,請你給他寫一封感謝信。內容包括:
1.表示感謝;2.外教的幫助;3.活動的反響。
注意:寫作詞數應為80個左右。
Dear Patrick,
　　　　　　　　　　　 　　　　　　　　　　 　　　　　　　　　　 　　　　　　　
　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　 　　　　　　　　　　 　　　　　　　　　　
　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　 　　　　　　　　　　 　　　　　　　　　　
Yours,
Li Hua
【參考范文】
Dear Patrick,
I am writing to express my sincere gratitude for your kind help in the activity Work Creates a Better Life (不定式短語作狀語), which has turned out to be an amazing success (非限制性定語從句).
It is so nice of you to have offered us a variety of presentation skills and creative suggestions on our show.It was under your professional guidance that the participants showed their skills of cooking, gardening, etc(強調句型).Their impressive performances definitely fueled their passion for daily life skills.What is most important is that this activity helped students receive wide admiration and gain their tremendous confidence (主語從句;表語從句).
Many thanks for your time and support.
Yours,
Li Hua
2邀請信(邀請職業規劃師約稿)
假定你是李華,是你校英文報增設的“職業規劃”(Career Planning)欄目的負責人,請給職業規劃師David寫一封郵件向他約稿,內容包括:
1.欄目介紹;2.稿件內容;3.稿件長度:約800詞;4.交稿日期:6月2日前。
注意:1.寫作詞數應為80個左右;
2.可以適當增加細節,以使行文連貫。
Dear David,
　　　　　　　　　　　　　　 　　　　　　　　　　 　　　　　　　　　　 　　　　　
　　　　　　　　　　　　　　 　　　　　　　　　　 　　　　　　　　　　 　　　　　　　
　　　　　　　　　　　　　　 　　　　　　　　　　 　　　　　　　　　　 　　　　　　　
Yours,
Li Hua
【參考范文】
Dear David,
How’s everything going I feel highly honored to invite you to write an article for our school’s English newspaper.
Career Planning is a newly added column designed to help us get a better understanding of the job market (過去分詞短語作定語).The article you write (省略關系詞的定語從句) is designed to deal with what qualities we should possess (賓語從句) to satisfy the requirements of different jobs.In addition, I hope you can offer some tips on how we can get well-prepared for our future career.About 800 words would be fine.And it can’t be better if you can submit your article before June 2 (it作形式主語).
Looking forward to your words of wisdom.
Yours,
Li Hua
3演講稿(創建文明城市)
假定你所在的城市正在創建全國文明城市,請寫一篇演講稿,呼吁全體同學行動起來,為創建文明城市作出自己的貢獻。內容包括:
1.創建文明城市的內容與意義;
2.呼吁同學們從身邊小事做起(不少于兩點)。
參考詞匯:文明城市 civilized city
注意:寫作詞數應為80個左右。
【參考范文】
Boys and girls,
As has been promoted by our school (非限制性定語從句), we are to build a civilized city,in which case our city can be cleaner and more competitive (非限制性定語從句), and all the residents will be better off.
On campus, we should pick up litter while we walk around, or help others when necessary (省略句).At home, we can persuade our parents to quit smoking and get along well with neighbors.In addition, the core socialist values ought to be put into practice, which I think is essential for us to build a civilized city (非限制性定語從句).
Thank you for your listening to my speech.
4征稿啟事(最美家鄉)
假定你是校英文報(School Daily)的負責人,你報將舉行“最美家鄉”圖文征集活動,請寫一份征稿啟事,內容包括:
1.稿件要求;2.獎勵辦法。
注意:寫作詞數應為80個左右。
【參考范文】
With the development of China, your hometown has taken on a new look.To show the beauty of your hometown (不定式短語作狀語), School Daily is expecting fantastic works by individuals from Jun.1 until Oct.1, 2024.
Works can be submitted in the forms of photos and texts.We will have 20 winners to be awarded.Besides awards, participants will get a chance to see their works featured on the school website (“see+賓語+賓補”結構;不定式短語作定語).If you are interested, you can submit your works by e-mail.
Welcome to participate in the activity.
5開幕辭(孝敬父母)
假如你是校學生會主席李華,你校將舉行以“孝敬父母”為主題的系列活動,請為這次活動寫一篇開幕辭。內容包括:
1.活動目的;
2.活動內容;
3.預祝活動圓滿成功。
注意:寫作詞數應為80個左右。
參考詞匯:孝敬 show filial respect for; 對父母的孝心filial affection for parents
【參考范文】
Dear teachers and fellow students,
I feel privileged to give you a brief introduction to the activity whose theme is “showing filial respect for our parents” (定語從句) held in our school (過去分詞短語作定語).
As we all know,filial affection for parents is highly stressed in Chinese traditional education.To deepen our understanding of it (不定式短語作狀語), we are gathered here today to attend the activity.As scheduled (省略句), the activity consists of four parts, a themed speech, short drama performances, a photo show, and a painting exhibition, the specific time of which has been listed on the notice board (非限制性定語從句).
I do hope we could have a meaningful and enjoyable experience (強調;省略that的賓語從句).Thank you for your attendance.
6投稿(最受學生喜愛的書)
你校英文報正在舉辦以“Popular Books Among Students”為主題的征文活動。請你根據圖表中的調查結果寫一篇短文投稿,內容包括:
1.讀書狀況描述;
2.簡單評論;
3.你的建議。
注意:寫作詞數應為80個左右。
Popular Books Among Students
　　　　　　　　　　　　　　 　　　　　　　　　　 　　　　　　　　　　 　　　　　　　
　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　 　　　　　　　　　　 　　　　　　　　　　 　　　　　　
　　　　　　　　　　　　　 　　　　　　　　　　 　　　　　　　　　　 　　　　　　　　
【參考范文】
Popular Books Among Students
According to the survey conducted in our school, 43% of the students prefer to read science books, followed by comics, which account for 26% (非限制性定語從句).Meanwhile, 18% of the students enjoy reading sports and music books while only 13% like to read classics.In the information age, it is encouraging to see (it作形式主語) so many students reading regularly.The preference for books about science indicates that teenagers’ awareness of science is on the rise (賓語從句).
In my view, I hope that our school will organize book clubs or reading groups,where students can discuss and share their thoughts (賓語從句;非限制性定語從句). It can arouse their curiosity and critical thinking and enhance their social skills.
7求助信(幫助潤色稿件)
假定你是李華,你為校英語網站Language Learning Tips欄目寫了一篇文章。請你給外教Mr Smith寫封郵件請他幫忙修改潤色。內容包括:
1.介紹稿件;
2.請求指導。
注意:寫作詞數應為80個左右。
Dear Mr Smith,
　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　 　　　　　　　　　　 　　　　　　　　　　 　　　　　　
　　　　　　　　　　　　　　 　　　　　　　　　　 　　　　　　　　　　 　　　　　　　
　　　　　　　　　　　　　　 　　　　　　　　　　 　　　　　　　　　　 　　　　　　　
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【參考范文】
Dear Mr Smith,
I’m Li Hua.I’m writing to ask you to do me a favour with an article which I wrote for Language Learning Tips (定語從句),a popular column of our school’s English website (同位語).
The article titled Body Language in Different Cultures includes two parts,the first of which covers the importance of body language in daily communication (非限制性定語從句).The other part provides several body gestures in different cultures.Would you please spare some time to look through the article attached to the e-mail (過去分詞短語作定語) and polish it
I’d appreciate it very much if you could give me a hand (it作形式賓語).Looking forward to your early reply.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
8活動介紹(我幫父母做家務)
五一勞動節快到了, 學校開展了“幫父母做家務”的活動。請你為校報英文專欄寫一篇短文, 介紹該活動的情況, 要點包括:
1.活動目的;
2.活動內容;
3.你的感受。
注意:寫作詞數應為80個左右。
【參考范文】
Helping Parents Do Housework
With the approach of the May Day International Labor Day, our school launched an activity of “Helping Parents Do Housework”, aiming to cultivate a sense of responsibility and gratitude (現在分詞短語作狀語) in students.
The activity involved students taking on various chores such as cleaning, cooking, and laundry, thus giving parents some well-deserved rest (現在分詞短語作狀語).Throughout the week, students were encouraged to share their experiences and insights in class, promoting discussion and reflection (現在分詞短語作狀語).
Personally,I find this activity both educational and rewarding (“find+賓語+賓補”結構).It has taught me the importance of contributing to the family and has deepened my appreciation for my parents’ daily efforts.
9建議信(如何與寄宿家庭相處)
假定你是李華,你的英國筆友Mike即將到中國留學并在一個當地家庭里居住。他寫信詢問如何與寄宿家庭相處,請你據此回信,內容包括:
1.很高興他將來中國;
2.你的建議;
3.期待他的留學成功。
注意:1.寫作詞數應為80個左右;
2.可以適當增加細節,以使行文連貫。
Dear Mike,
How is everything going 　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　 　　　　　　　　　　　　
　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　 　　　　　　　　　　 　　　　　　　　　　 　　　　
　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　 　　　　　　　　　　 　　　　　　　　　　 　　　　
　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　 　　　　　　　　　　 　　　　　　　　　　 　　　　　
Yours,
Li Hua
【參考范文】
Dear Mike,
How is everything going I am happy that you are going to study in China (賓語從句).You asked me about how to get along with your Chinese host family.
In fact, Chinese are friendly and easy-going, so you don’t have to worry.I am sure you will be familiar with your host family members soon (省略that的賓語從句).Besides, Chinese are helpful and kindly.We are always ready to offer help.So don’t hesitate to ask for help whenever you are in trouble (時間狀語從句).As for Chinese holiday traditions, you’d better search for some knowledge on the Internet before your arrival.
Hoping you’ll have an unforgettable and enjoyable learning experience here in China (省略that的賓語從句).
Yours,
Li Hua
10推薦信(最喜愛的電影)
假定你是李華,你的英國筆友Ross在郵件中提到他對中國電影很感興趣。請推薦一部你最喜愛的影片,內容包括:
1.你的推薦;
2.你的理由。
注意:寫作詞數應為80個左右。
【參考范文】
Dear Ross,
Knowing that you are interested in Chinese films (現在分詞短語作狀語;賓語從句), I am more than excited because I am fairly a film lover myself.
I recommend a well-known Chinese film titled Monkey King to you,which tells the fairy tale of Sun Wukong (非限制性定語從句), the Monkey King.It tells the story of Sun Wukong, who is not afraid of power (非限制性定語從句), fighting against the dragon palace and the heaven, and bravely fighting with the heaven soldiers and the heaven generals (現在分詞短語作狀語).
Watching this film (現在分詞短語作狀語), you will be deeply moved by the courage and spirit of the main character Sun Wukong.That’s why I make this recommendation (表語從句).I am looking forward to your view of this film.
Yours,
Li Hua
11建議信(“中文日”慶祝活動)
假定你是李華,你的英國筆友Hans來信請你為他負責策劃的4月20日“中文日”班級慶祝活動提建議。請你回復郵件,內容包括:
1.來信收悉;2.提出活動建議;3.望錄制和分享。
注意:1.寫作詞數應為80個左右。
2.可以適當增加細節,以使行文連貫。
Dear Hans,
　　　　　　　　　　　　　 　　　　　　　　　　 　　　　　　　　　　 　　　　　　　　
　　　　　　　　　　　　　　 　　　　　　　　　　 　　　　　　　　　　 　　　　　　　
Yours,
Li Hua
【參考范文】
Dear Hans,
I’m more than delighted to hear you will hold an activity on “the Chinese Language Day”.Here are some tips (倒裝) to make it amazing and educational.
Firstly,engaging audience in entertaining activities (動名詞短語作主語) is the key.It can start with Chinese calligraphy show demonstrating the beauty of Chinese characters.Secondly, why not hold a Chinese speech contest to highlight the unmatched charm of this elegant language After that, it could be wrapped up with “Jasmine”, a traditional Chinese song, which will certainly impress the audience (非限制性定語從句).
I am convinced that this will be a feast of culture and I sincerely hope you could record this unforgettable show and share your achievement with me (賓語從句)!
Yours,
Li Hua
12道歉信(校園生活)
假定你是李華,上周你班外教Mr Green布置了一份作業,截止時間是本周五,但是你因故不能如期提交。請你給Mr Green寫一封信,內容包括:
1.表示歉意;
2.解釋原因;
3.請求延期提交作業。
注意:1.寫作詞數應為80個左右;
2.可以適當增加細節,以使行文連貫。
【參考范文】
Dear Mr Green,
I’m writing to apologize for being unable to submit the homework given by you last week, which is due this Friday (非限制性定語從句).
Owing to the infection of a bad cold, I have been feeling unwell these days.Aching all over with a persistent high fever (現在分詞短語作狀語), I have to be confined to bed all day long.As a consequence, it would be difficult for me to finish the assignment on time.I wonder if you can allow me to postpone the submission time until next Friday (賓語從句).
　　I would appreciate it very much if you could take my request into consideration (it作形式賓語).Looking forward to your reply.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
13報道(體育運動)
假定你是李華,是學校英語報記者,你們學校近期舉行了一次校體育運動會。請寫一篇短文,報道此次校運會。內容包括:
1.活動簡介;
2.你的感受。
注意:1.寫作詞數應為80個左右;
2.可適當增加細節,以使行文連貫。
【參考范文】
Last week, a sports meeting was held by our school in the stadium,which was so exciting that it impressed me deeply (非限制性定語從句;結果狀語從句).All the students got actively involved in it and the whole school was alive and full of freshness.The playground was crowded with audiences.Every athlete made great efforts to win,and the students who stood by the runway (定語從句) let out the most encouraging slogan.Exhausted/Worn out as we were (倒裝), we enjoyed ourselves cheering and jumping.
This activity was of great significance.Not only could it help us sense the fun of exercise, but also it cultivated the awareness of teamwork (倒裝), and deepened our friendship.
14博客(家務我在行)
假設你是李華,最近參與了學校舉辦的“家務我在行”活動。請寫一篇博客文章,分享如下內容:
1.活動目的;
2.活動內容;
3.活動感受。
注意:寫作詞數應為80個左右。
A Good Hand at Housework
　　　　　　　　　　　　　　 　　　　　　　　　　 　　　　　　　　　　 　　　　　　
　　　　　　　　　　　　　　 　　　　　　　　　　 　　　　　　　　　　 　　　　　　　
　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　 　　　　　　　　　　 　　　　　　　　　　 　　　　　
【參考范文】
A Good Hand at Housework
To raise the awareness of students’ tidiness and family responsibility (不定式短語作狀語), an activity named “A Good Hand at Housework” (過去分詞短語作定語) was held.In response to the activity sponsored by our school (過去分詞短語作定語), I carried out my housework plan last weekend, ranging from tidying up rooms to cooking meals (現在分詞短語作定語).
Early in the morning, I removed unwanted items and cleaned the house until it was spotless (時間狀語從句).At almost eleven, I prepared a lunch, fried rice, for which my parents praised me (非限制性定語從句).Tired as I was (倒裝), I felt so proud.
　　Through the involvement in the household chores, not only have I established a sense of family responsibility (倒裝), but also I have fully understood that doing housework is of great meaning.
15圖畫類作文(孩子做家務是否應該得到報酬)
某英語網站正在開展以“Should Children Be Paid to Do Housework ”為題的討論。請你根據下圖跟帖,內容包括:
1.圖片描述;2.簡單評論。
注意:寫作詞數應為80個左右。
Should Children Be Paid to Do Housework
　　　　　　　　　　　　 　　　　　　　　　　 　　　　　　　　　　 　　　　　　　　
　　　　　　　　　　　　　 　　　　　　　　　　 　　　　　　　　　　 　　　　　　　
　　　　　　　　　　　　　　 　　　　　　　　　　 　　　　　　　　　　 　　　　　　　
【參考范文】
Should Children Be Paid to Do Housework
There is no doubt that this picture has reminded me of a phenomenon that cannot be ignored any longer (there be句型;定語從句): A lot of children need to be paid to do housework.
From my point of view,children should not be misled to believe that everything always has a return (賓語從句).Instead, measures should be taken to encourage them to change their mind that housework itself can be the reward.Doing housework is not only a way to show their love to their families,but also helps them to become responsible persons in the future (固定句型).
Ⅲ.讀后續寫精彩語段
人與自我篇
1個人成長類
作者從沉迷于虛擬世界逐步轉向專注現實生活的過程,并在參與很多現實生活的活動中,收獲了很多。
Then I looked at the words on the piece of paper taped to my laptop, lost in thought. I realized a funny fact.I planted and harvested virtual crops for hours every day while leaving the real land outside the window untouched (省略句).This was neither a meaningful life nor an activity that mirrored my highest intentions.How could I base my happiness on unreal goals Inspired (過去分詞作狀語), I decided to stop playing farm games and focus on real life.To begin with, I farmed the land in our backyard actively.
Farming the real land was only the beginning, and I started to do more to enrich my real life.I walked my dog in the park, spent more time with my family, climbed mountains with my friends and attended various classes (動作鏈).These were activities that allowed me to make better use of my spare time and develop positive attitude.The sentence I had copied from that post (省略關系詞的定語從句) became a mirror I used to examine how I should spend my time and energy (省略關系詞的定語從句;賓語從句), enabling me to live a healthier and richer life (現在分詞短語作狀語).
2勵志理想類
作者從小夢想在電視上表演,在父親的幫助和鼓勵下,作者被多倫多瑞爾森學院的廣播電視藝術專業錄取。最終作者憑借努力和勇敢,贏得了上電視的機會,感悟到是爸爸的愛支持著自己成為一名出色的演員。
When I arrived at the station, I went direct into the audition and began my short performance. I finished my performance relatively smoothly though palms were sweating (狀語從句).Never in my wildest dream did I imagine (倒裝) that I was indeed assigned the job to act on a school life show and my first public appearance on TV was in five days.After sharing the thrilling news with my dad, I received the warmest congratulations and expectations from my family.Picturing my families eagerly waiting for my performance (現在分詞短語作狀語), I worked day and night as busy as a bee.
Finally came the day of my first public appearance on live TV with my parents at home watching.Wearing fancy dress (現在分詞短語作狀語) and delicate make-up, I was so proud but nervous that (結果狀語從句) my show would be watched by so many audience.My mind suddenly went blank as I was immersed in my thoughts (原因狀語從句) and totally forgot my lines.Deep frowns gradually climbed on my partners’ face (擬人).I was driven back to the reality.I soon came up with a little trick to make up for the embarrassing blank.As the show went on, so concentrated was I that (倒裝) I hardly dared to even blink my eyes.Hesitating for a moment (現在分詞短語作狀語), I rang my dad with frustration and disappointment.It was literally dad’s love that supported me along my way to be an outstanding actor (強調句型).
3脫險領悟類
作者在雪地里走失,近乎絕望。他獨自一人來到一棵樹下,腦海里出現過世的爸爸的話,開始了自救。
I start to dig. The snowboard works OK.My gloves are wet.After a while my hands feel like wooden blocks.It’s time to take a rest.I’m kind of sleepy.“Don’t stop.Keep digging the cave.You need shelter from the wind.”My eyes open.There’s hardly any light.A wind has come up.It’s rolling up snow in my face.“OK, I’ll keep digging.But only for a while.”“Keep digging until you’re done.”That’s what Dad would have said.“Clean your room.Finish your math.Don’t stop until you’re done.”
Now it’s too dark to see, but I think the cave is finished. With wind blowing outside (with復合結構), I curl up into a ball (比喻) and gradually close my eyes.“Wake up.You forgot to make a hole for air.”My eyes open.I stretch out, my boots punching through snow (獨立主格結構).A cold burst of air rushes in (擬人).I breathe deeply;then sleep again.“Deke.Get up.You’ll miss the bus.” I hear the bus.It’s coming.There is a familiar sound of snowmobiles.My eyes open and I explode out of the cave (夸張).The sun is shining.I see some persons wearing orange jackets.I’m saved.Thank you Dad!
人與社會篇
4情感哲理類
作者和隊友們去參加跆拳道比賽,因為沒有教練而被禁止參加比賽。作者非常著急,開始自己尋找教練,結果一次次地被拒絕,最后決定自己成為教練,開始參加了教練課程,學習激勵策略、比賽技術等并對自己有了新的認識和信心。
Parents threw me disbelieving looks when they learned that their children’s coach was only a child herself.My self-confidence protected me from their doubtful glances.However, as the endless doubts pounded me (原因狀語從句), I grew unsure of my own abilities.Despite the attack, I refused to give up.When I saw the shining eyes of the youngest students preparing for their first competition (現在分詞短語作定語), I knew I couldn’t let them down (省略that的賓語從句).To quit would be to set them up to be barred from competing like I was.The knowledge that I could solve my dojang’s longtime problem (同位語從句) motivated me to overcome my fear.I managed it.
Now, as I arrive at a tournament with my students, I close my eyes and remember the past. I recall the crazy search for a coach and the chaos among my teammates as we competed with one another to find coaches before the competition.It was a hard time but now I open my eyes to the exact opposite scene.Lacking a coach hurt my ability to compete, but I am proud to know that no member of my dojang will have to face that problem again (賓語從句).
5善行義舉類
8歲的Kayzen Hunter得知自己喜歡的服務員Gardner遇到困難后,決定通過籌款的方式幫助他。
A local news station picked up the story, and before they knew it, more donations began pouring in.Soon, they achieved their goal, $5,000, and the number kept increasing.They now had over $100, 000 in donations for Gardner and his family.The money was more than enough for a car, and would enable Gardner and his family to move out of the motel and live in a more comfortable space for over a year.Soon, they thought (省略that的賓語從句) it was time to let Gardner know what they had done for him (賓語從句), so they visited Gardner and his family on a sunny day.
Upon discovering what Kayzen had done, Gardner wept. He expressed his thankfulness to all the people who had helped him and his family (定語從句).Now they had over $100,000 in donations to help them bounce back.After renting a simple apartment and purchasing a car,Gardner went to work at ease and lived comfortably with his family.After he was no longer worried about his life,he thought he should put forward this act of kindness (省略that的賓語從句), so he gave the extra money to these who were in need like him (定語從句), and he hoped someone would continue this great circle (省略that的賓語從句).
6友情親情類
作者和丈夫因為失業有了經濟困難,在他們快絕望的時候,教會給了他們一個放在捐贈箱里的禮物信封,他們可以用這筆錢度過這段艱難的時期。結果一年后發現兒子正在申請學生貸款,追問才得知兒子為了作者和丈夫把自己的積蓄都放進了捐贈箱里。
A year later, our son was applying for a student loan.It was then that we discovered that his savings account was almost empty (強調句型;賓語從句). His father and I were very disturbed by this.What worried me was that he might abuse the money (主語從句;表語從句).Therefore, I asked him repeatedly to tell me where the money had gone (賓語從句).At first he would not tell me, which made me even angrier (非限制性定語從句).Nevertheless, I would not let the matter alone.I was continuously questioning him, determined to find out where the money had gone (過去分詞短語作狀語), but in vain.
Finally, in tears, my son told me he had put his savings in the offering box for us.On hearing this, I stood there speechless,tears filling my eyes (獨立主格結構).It had taken my son years to save that money and he had given it to us willingly—without telling us what he had done (賓語從句).However, I did wrong to him, a kind and caring boy, who carried my husband and me through when we were in trouble (非限制性定語從句;狀語從句).I couldn’t help hugging my son tightly.A warm current welled up in my heart, although it was freezing cold outside (擬人;讓步狀語從句).
7師生情誼類
作者上幼兒園一個單詞都不懂,幸虧作者遇到了Susannah Lung老師,Lung老師給作者補課,作者學會了閱讀和寫作,還在閱讀理解方面獲得了獎項。后來作者和老師失去了聯系,最終Lung老師的丈夫聯系上了作者,二人又再次團聚了。
But a few years earlier, someone reached out to me on Facebook. It was Mrs.Lung’s husband! He asked me if I wanted to speak with her, and I said of course! My family and I all gathered together for the call.My parents had been wanting to thank Mrs.Lung for years as well.When I finally got the chance to hear Mrs.Lung’s voice, tears welled up in my eyes (擬人).I told her that I owed everything I’d accomplished to her, that I thought of her all the time, and that I’d been searching for her for years (賓語從句).
Because of Mrs.Lung’s encouragement, I became a teacher two years ago.During the two years of my teaching, I have witnessed the big changes of several struggling students after giving them patience, time and encouragement.I know a child is like a rocket filled with fuel and that all they need is a single spark to lift off into the sky (比喻;賓語從句).For me, Mrs.Lung was the spark.She gave me time, understanding and encouragement.I received her care and I’m passing it on.
8公益活動類
兩個女孩非常喜歡在自己家附近的海邊游泳,后來發現海灘上的塑料垃圾太多了,再也不想去游泳了,心情很不好。后來課上老師講到英雄人物,他們可以對世界起到正面影響,并激勵到身邊的人,兩個女孩想到自己也可以去做一些事情。
Melati and Isabel decided to make a positive impact straight away.They took advantage of their spare time to pick up rubbish on the beach.However, it was soon that (強調句型) they realized that they couldn’t solve the problem on their own for there was so much plastic (賓語從句).After discussions and preparations, they started an organization to spread their idea among youth, involving more youths in the movement (現在分詞短語作狀語), which proved to be a hit (非限制性定語從句).More and more teenagers took part.In a month, they altogether collected and recycled 2.5 tons of plastic, recovering the beautiful beach (現在分詞短語作狀語).
One month later, Melati received a call from the local newspaper. The two girls were invited to an interview in which they were asked what inspired them to start the organization, what the biggest challenges are and what advice they have for young people who want to make changes in this world (賓語從句;定語從句).They said a team is what keeps them going on the challenging days and added, “Keeping our team engaged and motivated has been a challenge and we are happy to have a positive influence.” Melati and Isabel are heroes who make a big difference to our world (定語從句).
人與自然篇
9環境保護類
Sam喜歡探索大自然,他想為美化世界盡自己的一份力。在植樹節那天,Sam在老師的幫助下與同學們種下了幾百棵樹。Sam學會了種樹,感到很高興。
　　A few days later, a storm damaged some young trees in the community.After seeing what had happened (賓語從句), Sam felt that it was time for him to put the skills of planting trees he had learned (賓語從句;省略關系詞的定語從句) to use.He went home and told his mother he wanted to save those trees.So he took the tools that he had used (定語從句) to plant the trees.With the skills taught by his teacher (with復合結構), he worked with his mother to replant those trees.They helped the trees survive.
The neighbours praised Sam for what he had done. Sam told them about his experience of planting trees.But he owed all the kindnesses to his teacher and mother.He explained that because of his teacher and mother (賓語從句), he learned the skills and saved the trees.The neighbours were very happy to hear that.They said Sam was a role model (省略that的賓語從句) and that they would ask their children to learn the skills from Sam (賓語從句).Sam felt proud and decided to develop a better community and protect the environment with them.
10動物求助類
作者被邀請去一個農場野餐,發現一只蜂鳥被蜘蛛網困住。作者把蜂鳥救下,但把蜂鳥帶出去的時候它遲遲不肯飛走,徘徊著,后來終于飛走了。當作者準備離開時,蜂鳥又飛到作者面前,好像是在和作者告別。
　　A few weeks later, I went to the farm again. As my car approached it (時間狀語從句), my thoughts drifted back to the moment when I rescued the hummingbird from the spider’s web (定語從句).I rushed back to the deserted house.It was a great comfort that the original hole in the window was nowhere to be found (it作形式主語).Leaving the house (現在分詞短語作狀語), I couldn’t help wondering how it was getting on now (賓語從句).Had it managed to find its way back home (倒裝), or was it still out there somewhere struggling to survive
I was just about to leave when the hummingbird appeared. A flash of movement caught my attention (擬人).I turned around to see the same hummingbird hovering in the air.It seemed that the bird was waiting for me (表語從句), its beady eyes locked on mine as if trying to convey some deep, unspoken gratitude (擬人;省略句).I felt a surge of relief and awe at the sight of this sound and grateful creature, and I knew that I would always cherish the memories we shared (賓語從句;省略關系詞的定語從句) as I climbed into my car and drove away (狀語從句). (共106張PPT)
系列四　不可不背的寫作素材
朗朗晨讀
Ⅰ.應用文寫作高分表達
Ⅱ.應用文寫作熱考體裁和話題
Ⅲ.讀后續寫精彩語段
Ⅰ.應用文寫作高分表達
一、詞匯升級
1.When I was invited to the stage to receive the award, I expressed my thanks to my teacher.
→When I was invited to the stage to receive the award, I __________________________ to my teacher.
conveyed my appreciation
2.We will organize all kinds of activities, including performances on traditional Chinese musical instruments, folk dances and Chinese martial arts.
→We will organize _____________________ activities, including performances on traditional Chinese musical instruments, folk dances ____________________ Chinese martial arts.
a range of/a variety of
as well as
3.It’ll be a thirty－minute ride.Upon arrival, we’ll first visit a farm, where we can feed chickens and pick strawberries.
→It’ll be a thirty－minute ride.Upon arrival, we’ll first ____________________ a farm, where we can feed chickens and pick strawberries.
4.If given the precious opportunity, I will try to present the charm of Chinese culture.
→If given the precious opportunity, I will _______________________________ to present the charm of Chinese culture.
pay a visit to/drop in at
spare no effort
5.I’m writing to tell you something about how we arrange the next class.
→I’m writing to _________________ you of something about how we arrange the next class.
6.Professor Green is a productive poet, whose works are very popular.
→Professor Green is a productive poet, whose works ______________________.
inform
enjoy great popularity
7.Most importantly, outgoing and enthusiastic, I like being a volunteer, providing service.
→Most importantly, outgoing and enthusiastic, I _________________________ being a volunteer, providing service.
8.I would like to congratulate you on your winning the first prize in the Chinese Speech Competition.
→I would like to ___________________________________________________ you on your winning the first prize in the Chinese Speech Competition.
am keen on
express/convey my congratulations to
9.I’d appreciate it/be grateful if you could let me know when you are free in advance.
→I’d appreciate it/be grateful if you could let me know when you are _____________ in advance.
10.Knowing that you like Chinese paper－cutting, I am very happy to invite you to take part in the online lecture given by my art teacher Mr.Wang.
→Knowing that you _______________________ Chinese paper－cutting, I am _________________________ to invite you to ___________________________ the online lecture ____________ by my art teacher Mr.Wang.
available
are fond of
more than delighted
get engaged in
delivered
11.Besides, essays contributed should be limited within 500 words and written in English only.
→Besides, essays contributed ____________________________________ be limited within 500 words and written in English only.
12.Busy with my assignments, I can’t go shopping with Mother this morning.
→___________________________________________________ my assignments, I can’t go shopping with Mother this morning.
are supposed to
Occupied with
13.The old man donated a lot of money to the school，making the students return to their classroom.
→The old man donated a lot of money to the school，________________________________ to their classroom.
enabling the students to return
二、句式升級
1.被動要比主動好
①Last Saturday, we held spring ploughing and planting practice in the school’s labor practice base.
→Last Saturday, spring ploughing and planting practice ________________ in the school’s labor practice base.
②You must submit your paintings to Students’ Union before November 10.
→_____________________________________________ Students’ Union before November 10.
was held
Your paintings must be submitted to
2.倒裝要比正常妙
(1)“only＋介詞短語/副詞/狀語從句”位于句首引起的部分倒裝
③We can improve our efficiency and make our school life meaningful only in this way.
→__________________________________________________ our efficiency and make our school life meaningful.
④You can have a better understanding of it only when you come to China to experience the Spring Festival by yourself.
→Only ___________________________________________________________
__________________________________________________________________.
Only in this way can we improve
when you come to China to experience the Spring Festival by
yourself can you have a better understanding of it
(2)not only...but also...“不但……而且……”結構中，not only位于句首引起的部分倒裝
⑤Through this activity, we not only realized the value of labor, but we also learned to respect all laborers.
→Through this activity, _______________________________________________，
but we also learned to respect all laborers.
⑥This theme activity is not only of great benefit to our mental health but it also enriches our school life.
→___________________________________________________ our mental health but it also enriches our school life.
not only did we realize the value of labork
Not only is this theme activity of great benefit to
(3)not until...“直到……才”結構中，not until位于句首引起的倒裝，本句式還可以用強調句型
⑦I wasn’t aware of the importance of teamwork until I was chosen monitor.
→Not until I was chosen monitor _______________________________________.
→It _________________________________________________ I was aware of the importance of teamwork.(強調句型)
was I aware of the importance of teamwork
was not until I was chosen monitor that
(4)so/such...that...“如此……以至于……”結構中，so/such...位于句首引起的倒裝
⑧Wasting food is so disappointing that I’d like to give some advice on reducing food waste.
→_________________________________________________ I’d like to give some advice on reducing food waste.
⑨The activity was so meaningful that everyone was eager to have another chance.
→So _________________________________________ everyone was eager to have another chance.
So disappointing is wasting food that
meaningful was the activity that
(5)as/though“盡管”引起的倒裝句：adj./n.＋as/though＋主語＋謂語，...
⑩Though/Although I was tired and sweaty, I found this trip rewarding.
→________________________________________，I found this trip rewarding.
Though/Although we were exhausted, we enjoyed ourselves cheering and jumping.
→____________________________________，we enjoyed ourselves cheering and jumping.
Tired and sweaty as/though I was
Exhausted as/though we were
(6)否定副詞hardly，nor, never 等引導的倒裝句
I could hardly hold back my excitement when I knew I got the first prize.
→_____________________________________ when I knew I got the first prize.
Hardly could I hold back my excitement
(7)完全倒裝
A few weeks later, when I almost forgot the contest, the news came there.
→A few weeks later, when I almost forgot the contest, ______________________.
The twins went upstairs，carrying the breakfast they had made.
→________________________________，carrying the breakfast they had made.
there came the news
Upstairs went the twins
3.強調結構不可少
強調句型的結構：It is/was＋被強調部分＋that/who...; 強調謂語動詞用do/does/did
I turned on the gas cooker under the guidance of my mother.
→_________________________________________ I turned on the gas cooker.
We can improve our efficiency and make our school life meaningful only in this way.
→_________________________________ we can improve our efficiency and make our school life meaningful.
It was under the guidance of my mother that
It is only in this way that
I hope we could have a meaningful and enjoyable experience.
→I __________________________ we could have a meaningful and enjoyable experience.
I should appreciate their selfless and unconditional love.
→________________________________________________ I should appreciate.
do hope
It is their selfless and unconditional love that
4.言簡意明非謂語
恰當地運用非謂語動詞，不僅能夠使句式多樣、句子靈活多變，而且讀起來結構緊湊、言簡意明。
(1)現在分詞作狀語
Moreover, English will serve as a window to the world.It will allow me to gain a global view towards life, understand people from different cultures and make more friends.
→Moreover, English will serve as a window to the world, __________________
______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________.
allowing me to
gain a global view towards life, understand people from different cultures and make more friends
(2)過去分詞作狀語
We were bathed in sunshine，and everyone sang and laughed while picking，exhausted but fulfilled.
→______________________________，everyone sang and laughed while picking，exhausted but fulfilled.
Bathed in sunshine
To enrich the students’ life and stimulate our interest in learning English
(3)不定式作狀語
To raise the awareness of caring for
Aiming to raise the awareness of caring for
→___________________________________________________ the disadvantaged groups, our school is to organize a charity donation at 5：30 pm next Thursday in the gym, and appeals to us students to participate.(過去分詞作狀語)
Aimed at raising the awareness of caring for
5.意蘊深長復合句
which gave me much confidence
who taught us about
the different characteristics and uses of various plant species
which will have a bad effect on the earth
which can arouse our interests, broaden our horizons and enrich our after-school life
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As is known to us
No one can deny the fact that
Ⅱ.應用文寫作熱考體裁和話題
感謝信(生活技能云端展)
假定你是學生會主席李華，學生會舉辦的首屆生活技能云端展示活動(Work Creates a Better Life)得到了外教Patrick的大力支持。活動已經圓滿結束，請你給他寫一封感謝信。內容包括：
1.表示感謝；2.外教的幫助；3.活動的反響。
注意： 寫作詞數應為80個左右。
【參考范文】
Dear Patrick，
I am writing to express my sincere gratitude for your kind help in the activity Work Creates a Better Life (不定式短語作狀語), which has turned out to be an amazing success (非限制性定語從句).
It is so nice of you to have offered us a variety of presentation skills and creative suggestions on our show.It was under your professional guidance that the participants showed their skills of cooking, gardening, etc(強調句型).Their impressive performances definitely fueled their passion for daily life skills.What is most important is that this activity helped students receive wide admiration and gain their tremendous confidence(主語從句；表語從句) .
Many thanks for your time and support.
Yours，
Li Hua
邀請信(邀請職業規劃師約稿)
假定你是李華，是你校英文報增設的“職業規劃”(Career Planning)欄目的負責人，請給職業規劃師David寫一封郵件向他約稿，內容包括：
1.欄目介紹；2.稿件內容；3.稿件長度：約800詞；4.交稿日期：6月2日前。
注意：1.寫作詞數應為80個左右；
2.可以適當增加細節，以使行文連貫。
【參考范文】
Dear David，
How’s everything going I feel highly honored to invite you to write an article for our school’s English newspaper.
Career Planning is a newly added column designed to help us get a better understanding of the job market (過去分詞短語作定語).The article you write (省略關系詞的定語從句) is designed to deal with what qualities we should possess (賓語從句) to satisfy the requirements of different jobs.In addition, I hope you can offer some tips on how we can get well－prepared for our future career.About 800 words would be fine.And it can’t be better if you can submit your article before June 2 (it作形式主語).
Looking forward to your words of wisdom.
Yours，
Li Hua
演講稿(創建文明城市)
假定你所在的城市正在創建全國文明城市，請寫一篇演講稿，呼吁全體同學行動起來，為創建文明城市作出自己的貢獻。內容包括：
1.創建文明城市的內容與意義；
2.呼吁同學們從身邊小事做起(不少于兩點)。
參考詞匯：文明城市 civilized city
注意：寫作詞數應為80個左右。
【參考范文】
Boys and girls，
As has been promoted by our school (非限制性定語從句), we are to build a civilized city，in which case our city can be cleaner and more competitive (非限制性定語從句), and all the residents will be better off.
On campus, we should pick up litter while we walk around, or help others when necessary (省略句).At home, we can persuade our parents to quit smoking and get along well with neighbors.In addition, the core socialist values ought to be put into practice, which I think is essential for us to build a civilized city (非限制性定語從句).
Thank you for your listening to my speech.
征稿啟事(最美家鄉)
假定你是校英文報(School Daily)的負責人，你報將舉行“最美家鄉”圖文征集活動，請寫一份征稿啟事，內容包括：
1.稿件要求；
2.獎勵辦法。
注意：寫作詞數應為80個左右。
【參考范文】
With the development of China, your hometown has taken on a new look.To show the beauty of your hometown (不定式短語作狀語), School Daily is expecting fantastic works by individuals from Jun.1 until Oct.1，2024.
Works can be submitted in the forms of photos and texts.We will have 20 winners to be awarded.Besides awards, participants will get a chance to see their works featured on the school website (“see＋賓語＋賓補”結構；不定式短語作定語).If you are interested, you can submit your works by e－mail.
Welcome to participate in the activity.
開幕辭(孝敬父母)
假如你是校學生會主席李華，你校將舉行以“孝敬父母”為主題的系列活動，請為這次活動寫一篇開幕辭。內容包括：
1.活動目的；2.活動內容；3.預祝活動圓滿成功。
注意：寫作詞數應為80個左右。
參考詞匯：孝敬 show filial respect for; 對父母的孝心filial affection for parents
【參考范文】
Dear teachers and fellow students，
I feel privileged to give you a brief introduction to the activity whose theme is “showing filial respect for our parents” (定語從句) held in our school (過去分詞短語作定語).
As we all know，filial affection for parents is highly stressed in Chinese traditional education.To deepen our understanding of it (不定式短語作狀語), we are gathered here today to attend the activity.As scheduled (省略句), the activity consists of four parts, a themed speech, short drama performances, a photo show, and a painting exhibition, the specific time of which has been listed on the notice board (非限制性定語從句).
I do hope we could have a meaningful and enjoyable experience (強調；省略that的賓語從句).Thank you for your attendance.
投稿(最受學生喜愛的書)
你校英文報正在舉辦以“Popular Books Among Students”為主題的征文活動。請你根據圖表中的調查結果寫一篇短文投稿，內容包括：
1.讀書狀況描述；
2.簡單評論；
3.你的建議。
注意：寫作詞數應為80個左右。
【參考范文】
Popular Books Among Students
According to the survey conducted in our school, 43% of the students prefer to read science books, followed by comics, which account for 26% (非限制性定語從句).Meanwhile, 18% of the students enjoy reading sports and music books while only 13% like to read classics.In the information age, it is encouraging to see (it作形式主語) so many students reading regularly.The preference for books about science indicates that teenagers’ awareness of science is on the rise (賓語從句).
In my view, I hope that our school will organize book clubs or reading groups，where students can discuss and share their thoughts (賓語從句；非限制性定語從句). It can arouse their curiosity and critical thinking and enhance their social skills.
求助信(幫助潤色稿件)
假定你是李華，你為校英語網站Language Learning Tips欄目寫了一篇文章。請你給外教Mr Smith寫封郵件請他幫忙修改潤色。內容包括：
1.介紹稿件；2.請求指導。
注意：寫作詞數應為80個左右。
【參考范文】
Dear Mr Smith，
I’m Li Hua.I’m writing to ask you to do me a favour with an article which I wrote for Language Learning Tips (定語從句)，a popular column of our school’s English website (同位語).
The article titled Body Language in Different Cultures includes two parts，the first of which covers the importance of body language in daily communication (非限制性定語從句).The other part provides several body gestures in different cultures.Would you please spare some time to look through the article attached to the e－mail (過去分詞短語作定語) and polish it
I’d appreciate it very much if you could give me a hand (it作形式賓語).Looking forward to your early reply.
Yours sincerely，
Li Hua
活動介紹(我幫父母做家務)
五一勞動節快到了， 學校開展了“幫父母做家務”的活動。請你為校報英文專欄寫一篇短文， 介紹該活動的情況， 要點包括：
1.活動目的；
2.活動內容；
3.你的感受。
注意：寫作詞數應為80個左右。
【參考范文】
Helping Parents Do Housework
With the approach of the May Day International Labor Day, our school launched an activity of “Helping Parents Do Housework”， aiming to cultivate a sense of responsibility and gratitude (現在分詞短語作狀語) in students.
The activity involved students taking on various chores such as cleaning, cooking, and laundry, thus giving parents some well－deserved rest (現在分詞短語作狀語).Throughout the week, students were encouraged to share their experiences and insights in class, promoting discussion and reflection (現在分詞短語作狀語).
Personally，I find this activity both educational and rewarding (“find＋賓語＋賓補”結構).It has taught me the importance of contributing to the family and has deepened my appreciation for my parents’ daily efforts.
建議信(如何與寄宿家庭相處)
假定你是李華，你的英國筆友Mike即將到中國留學并在一個當地家庭里居住。他寫信詢問如何與寄宿家庭相處，請你據此回信，內容包括：
1.很高興他將來中國；
2.你的建議；
3.期待他的留學成功。
注意：1.寫作詞數應為80個左右；
2.可以適當增加細節，以使行文連貫。
【參考范文】
Dear Mike，
How is everything going I am happy that you are going to study in China (賓語從句).You asked me about how to get along with your Chinese host family.
In fact, Chinese are friendly and easy－going, so you don’t have to worry.I am sure you will be familiar with your host family members soon (省略that的賓語從句).Besides, Chinese are helpful and kindly.We are always ready to offer help.So don’t hesitate to ask for help whenever you are in trouble (時間狀語從句).As for Chinese holiday traditions, you’d better search for some knowledge on the Internet before your arrival.
Hoping you’ll have an unforgettable and enjoyable learning experience here in China (省略that的賓語從句).
Yours，
Li Hua
推薦信(最喜愛的電影)
假定你是李華，你的英國筆友Ross在郵件中提到他對中國電影很感興趣。請推薦一部你最喜愛的影片，內容包括：
1.你的推薦；
2.你的理由。
注意：寫作詞數應為80個左右。
【參考范文】
Dear Ross，
Knowing that you are interested in Chinese films (現在分詞短語作狀語；賓語從句), I am more than excited because I am fairly a film lover myself.
I recommend a well－known Chinese film titled Monkey King to you，which tells the fairy tale of Sun Wukong (非限制性定語從句), the Monkey King.It tells the story of Sun Wukong, who is not afraid of power (非限制性定語從句), fighting against the dragon palace and the heaven, and bravely fighting with the heaven soldiers and the heaven generals (現在分詞短語作狀語).
Watching this film (現在分詞短語作狀語), you will be deeply moved by the courage and spirit of the main character Sun Wukong.That’s why I make this recommendation (表語從句).I am looking forward to your view of this film.
Yours，
Li Hua
建議信(“中文日”慶祝活動)
假定你是李華，你的英國筆友Hans來信請你為他負責策劃的4月20日“中文日”班級慶祝活動提建議。請你回復郵件，內容包括：
1.來信收悉；2.提出活動建議；3.望錄制和分享。
注意：1.寫作詞數應為80個左右。
2.可以適當增加細節，以使行文連貫。
【參考范文】
Dear Hans，
I’m more than delighted to hear you will hold an activity on “the Chinese Language Day”.Here are some tips (倒裝) to make it amazing and educational.
Firstly, engaging audience in entertaining activities (動名詞短語作主語) is the key.It can start with Chinese calligraphy show demonstrating the beauty of Chinese characters.Secondly, why not hold a Chinese speech contest to highlight the unmatched charm of this elegant language After that, it could be wrapped up with “Jasmine”， a traditional Chinese song, which will certainly impress the audience (非限制性定語從句).
I am convinced that this will be a feast of culture and I sincerely hope you could record this unforgettable show and share your achievement with me (賓語從句)!
Yours，
Li Hua
道歉信(校園生活)
假定你是李華，上周你班外教MrGreen布置了一份作業，截止時間是本周五，但是你因故不能如期提交。請你給MrGreen寫一封信，內容包括：
1.表示歉意；
2.解釋原因；
3.請求延期提交作業。
注意：1.寫作詞數應為80個左右；
2.可以適當增加細節，以使行文連貫。
【參考范文】
Dear MrGreen，
I’m writing to apologize for being unable to submit the homework given by you last week, which is due this Friday (非限制性定語從句).
Owing to the infection of a bad cold, I have been feeling unwell these days.Aching all over with a persistent high fever (現在分詞短語作狀語), I have to be confined to bed all day long.As a consequence, it would be difficult for me to finish the assignment on time.I wonder if you can allow me to postpone the submission time until next Friday (賓語從句).
I would appreciate it very much if you could take my request into consideration (it作形式賓語).Looking forward to your reply.
Yours sincerely，
Li Hua
報道(體育運動)
假定你是李華，是學校英語報記者，你們學校近期舉行了一次校體育運動會。請寫一篇短文，報道此次校運會。內容包括：
1.活動簡介；
2.你的感受。
注意：1.寫作詞數應為80個左右；
2.可適當增加細節，以使行文連貫。
【參考范文】
Last week, a sports meeting was held by our school in the stadium，which was so exciting that it impressed me deeply (非限制性定語從句；結果狀語從句).All the students got actively involved in it and the whole school was alive and full of freshness.The playground was crowded with audiences.Every athlete made great efforts to win，and the students who stood by the runway (定語從句) let out the most encouraging slogan.Exhausted/Worn out as we were (倒裝), we enjoyed ourselves cheering and jumping.
This activity was of great significance.Not only could it help us sense the fun of exercise, but also it cultivated the awareness of teamwork (倒裝), and deepened our friendship.
博客(家務我在行)
假設你是李華，最近參與了學校舉辦的“家務我在行”活動。請寫一篇博客文章，分享如下內容：
1.活動目的；
2.活動內容；
3.活動感受。
注意：寫作詞數應為80個左右。
【參考范文】
A Good Hand at Housework
To raise the awareness of students’ tidiness and family responsibility (不定式短語作狀語), an activity named“A Good Hand at Housework” (過去分詞短語作定語) was held.In response to the activity sponsored by our school (過去分詞短語作定語), I carried out my housework plan last weekend, ranging from tidying up rooms to cooking meals (現在分詞短語作定語).
Early in the morning, I removed unwanted items and cleaned the house until it was spotless (時間狀語從句).At almost eleven, I prepared a lunch, fried rice, for which my parents praised me (非限制性定語從句).Tired as I was (倒裝), I felt so proud.
Through the involvement in the household chores, not only have I established a sense of family responsibility (倒裝), but also I have fully understood that doing housework is of great meaning.
圖畫類作文(孩子做家務是否應該得到報酬)
某英語網站正在開展以“Should Children Be Paid to Do Housework？”為題的討論。請你根據下圖跟帖，內容包括：
1.圖片描述；
2.簡單評論。
注意：寫作詞數應為80個左右。
【參考范文】
Should Children Be Paid to Do Housework
There is no doubt that this picture has reminded me of a phenomenon that cannot be ignored any longer (there be句型；定語從句): A lot of children need to be paid to do housework.
From my point of view，children should not be misled to believe that everything always has a return (賓語從句).Instead, measures should be taken to encourage them to change their mind that housework itself can be the reward.Doing housework is not only a way to show their love to their families，but also helps them to become responsible persons in the future (固定句型).
返 回
Ⅲ.主題續寫精彩語段
人與自我篇
個人成長類
作者從沉迷于虛擬世界逐步轉向專注現實生活的過程，并在參與很多現實生活的活動中，收獲了很多。
Then I looked at the words on the piece of paper taped to my laptop, lost in thought. I realized a funny fact.I planted and harvested virtual crops for hours every day while leaving the real land outside the window untouched (省略句).This was neither a meaningful life nor an activity that mirrored my highest intentions.How could I base my happiness on unreal goals Inspired (過去分詞作狀語), I decided to stop playing farm games and focus on real life.To begin with, I farmed the land in our backyard actively.
Farming the real land was only the beginning, and I started to do more to enrich my real life.I walked my dog in the park, spent more time with my family, climbed mountains with my friends and attended various classes (動作鏈).These were activities that allowed me to make better use of my spare time and develop positive attitude.The sentence I had copied from that post (省略關系詞的定語從句) became a mirror I used to examine how I should spend my time and energy (省略關系詞的定語從句；賓語從句), enabling me to live a healthier and richer life (現在分詞短語作狀語).
勵志理想類
作者從小夢想在電視上表演，在父親的幫助和鼓勵下，作者被多倫多瑞爾森學院的廣播電視藝術專業錄取。最終作者憑借努力和勇敢，贏得了上電視的機會，感悟到是爸爸的愛支持著自己成為一名出色的演員。
When I arrived at the station, I went direct into the audition and began my short performance. I finished my performance relatively smoothly though palms were sweating (狀語從句).Never in my wildest dream did I imagine (倒裝) that I was indeed assigned the job to act on a school life show and my first public appearance on TV was in five days.After sharing the thrilling news with my dad, I received the warmest congratulations and expectations from my family.Picturing my families eagerly waiting for my performance (現在分詞短語作狀語), I worked day and night as busy as a bee.
Finally came the day of my first public appearance on live TV with my parents at home watching.Wearing fancy dress (現在分詞短語作狀語) and delicate make－up, I was so proud but nervous that (結果狀語從句) my show would be watched by so many audience.My mind suddenly went blank as I was immersed in my thoughts (原因狀語從句) and totally forgot my lines.Deep frowns gradually climbed on my partners’ face (擬人).I was driven back to the reality.I soon came up with a little trick to make up for the embarrassing blank.As the show went on, so concentrated was I that (倒裝) I hardly dared to even blink my eyes.Hesitating for a moment (現在分詞短語作狀語), I rang my dad with frustration and disappointment.It was literally dad’s love that supported me along my way to be an outstanding actor (強調句型).
脫險領悟類
作者在雪地里走失，近乎絕望。他獨自一人來到一棵樹下，腦海里出現過世的爸爸的話，開始了自救。
I start to dig. The snowboard works OK.My gloves are wet.After a while my hands feel like wooden blocks.It’s time to take a rest.I’m kind of sleepy.“Don’t stop.Keep digging the cave.You need shelter from the wind.”My eyes open.There’s hardly any light.A wind has come up.It’s rolling up snow in my face.“OK, I’ll keep digging.But only for a while.”“Keep digging until you’re done.”That’s what Dad would have said.“Clean your room.Finish your math.Don’t stop until you’re done.”
Now it’s too dark to see, but I think the cave is finished. With wind blowing outside (with復合結構), I curl up into a ball (比喻) and gradually close my eyes.“Wake up.You forgot to make a hole for air.”My eyes open.I stretch out, my boots punching through snow (獨立主格結構).A cold burst of air rushes in (擬人).I breathe deeply；then sleep again.“Deke.Get up.You’ll miss the bus.” I hear the bus.It’s coming.There is a familiar sound of snowmobiles.My eyes open and I explode out of the cave (夸張).The sun is shining.I see some persons wearing orange jackets.I’m saved.Thank you Dad!
人與社會篇
情感哲理類
作者和隊友們去參加跆拳道比賽，因為沒有教練而被禁止參加比賽。作者非常著急，開始自己尋找教練，結果一次次地被拒絕，最后決定自己成為教練，開始參加了教練課程，學習激勵策略、比賽技術等并對自己有了新的認識和信心。
Parents threw me disbelieving looks when they learned that their children’s coach was only a child herself.My self－confidence protected me from their doubtful glances.However, as the endless doubts pounded me (原因狀語從句), I grew unsure of my own abilities.Despite the attack, I refused to give up.When I saw the shining eyes of the youngest students preparing for their first competition (現在分詞短語作定語), I knew I couldn’t let them down (省略that的賓語從句).To quit would be to set them up to be barred from competing like I was.The knowledge that I could solve my dojang’s longtime problem (同位語從句) motivated me to overcome my fear.I managed it.
Now, as I arrive at a tournament with my students, I close my eyes and remember the past. I recall the crazy search for a coach and the chaos among my teammates as we competed with one another to find coaches before the competition.It was a hard time but now I open my eyes to the exact opposite scene.Lacking a coach hurt my ability to compete, but I am proud to know that no member of my dojang will have to face that problem again (賓語從句).
善行義舉類
8歲的Kayzen Hunter得知自己喜歡的服務員Gardner遇到困難后，決定通過籌款的方式幫助他。
A local news station picked up the story, and before they knew it, more donations began pouring in.Soon, they achieved their goal, $5，000, and the number kept increasing.They now had over $100, 000 in donations for Gardner and his family.The money was more than enough for a car, and would enable Gardner and his family to move out of the motel and live in a more comfortable space for over a year.Soon, they thought (省略that的賓語從句) it was time to let Gardner know what they had done for him (賓語從句), so they visited Gardner and his family on a sunny day.
Upon discovering what Kayzen had done, Gardner wept. He expressed his thankfulness to all the people who had helped him and his family (定語從句).Now they had over $100, 000 in donations to help them bounce back.After renting a simple apartment and purchasing a car，Gardner went to work at ease and lived comfortably with his family.After he was no longer worried about his life，he thought he should put forward this act of kindness (省略that的賓語從句), so he gave the extra money to these who were in need like him (定語從句), and he hoped someone would continue this great circle (省略that的賓語從句).
友情親情類
作者和丈夫因為失業有了經濟困難，在他們快絕望的時候，教會給了他們一個放在捐贈箱里的禮物信封，他們可以用這筆錢度過這段艱難的時期。結果一年后發現兒子正在申請學生貸款，追問才得知兒子為了作者和丈夫把自己的積蓄都放進了捐贈箱里。
A year later, our son was applying for a student loan.It was then that we discovered that his savings account was almost empty (強調句型；賓語從句). His father and I were very disturbed by this.What worried me was that he might abuse the money (主語從句；表語從句).Therefore, I asked him repeatedly to tell me where the money had gone (賓語從句).At first he would not tell me, which made me even angrier (非限制性定語從句).Nevertheless, I would not let the matter alone.I was continuously questioning him, determined to find out where the money had gone (過去分詞短語作狀語), but in vain.
Finally, in tears, my son told me he had put his savings in the offering box for us.On hearing this, I stood there speechless，tears filling my eyes (獨立主格結構).It had taken my son years to save that money and he had given it to us willingly—without telling us what he had done (賓語從句).However, I did wrong to him, a kind and caring boy, who carried my husband and me through when we were in trouble (非限制性定語從句；狀語從句).I couldn’t help hugging my son tightly.A warm current welled up in my heart, although it was freezing cold outside (擬人；讓步狀語從句).
師生情誼類
作者上幼兒園一個單詞都不懂，幸虧作者遇到了Susannah Lung老師，Lung老師給作者補課，作者學會了閱讀和寫作，還在閱讀理解方面獲得了獎項。后來作者和老師失去了聯系，最終Lung老師的丈夫聯系上了作者，二人又再次團聚了。
But a few years earlier, someone reached out to me on Facebook. It was Mrs.Lung’s husband! He asked me if I wanted to speak with her, and I said of course! My family and I all gathered together for the call.My parents had been wanting to thank Mrs.Lung for years as well.When I finally got the chance to hear Mrs.Lung’s voice, tears welled up in my eyes (擬人).I told her that I owed everything I’d accomplished to her, that I thought of her all the time, and that I’d been searching for her for years (賓語從句).
Because of Mrs.Lung’s encouragement, I became a teacher two years ago.During the two years of my teaching, I have witnessed the big changes of several struggling students after giving them patience, time and encouragement.I know a child is like a rocket filled with fuel and that all they need is a single spark to lift off into the sky (比喻；賓語從句).For me, Mrs.Lung was the spark.She gave me time, understanding and encouragement.I received her care and I’m passing it on.
公益活動類
兩個女孩非常喜歡在自己家附近的海邊游泳，后來發現海灘上的塑料垃圾太多了，再也不想去游泳了，心情很不好。后來課上老師講到英雄人物，他們可以對世界起到正面影響，并激勵到身邊的人，兩個女孩想到自己也可以去做一些事情。
Melati and Isabel decided to make a positive impact straight away.They took advantage of their spare time to pick up rubbish on the beach.However, it was soon that (強調句型) they realized that they couldn’t solve the problem on their own for there was so much plastic (賓語從句).After discussions and preparations, they started an organization to spread their idea among youth, involving more youths in the movement (現在分詞短語作狀語), which proved to be a hit (非限制性定語從句).More and more teenagers took part.In a month, they altogether collected and recycled 2.5 tons of plastic, recovering the beautiful beach (現在分詞短語作狀語).
One month later, Melati received a call from the local newspaper. The two girls were invited to an interview in which they were asked what inspired them to start the organization, what the biggest challenges are and what advice they have for young people who want to make changes in this world (賓語從句；定語從句).They said a team is what keeps them going on the challenging days and added, “Keeping our team engaged and motivated has been a challenge and we are happy to have a positive influence.” Melati and Isabel are heroes who make a big difference to our world (定語從句).
人與自然篇
環境保護類
Sam喜歡探索大自然，他想為美化世界盡自己的一份力。在植樹節那天，Sam在老師的幫助下與同學們種下了幾百棵樹。Sam學會了種樹，感到很高興。
A few days later, a storm damaged some young trees in the community.After seeing what had happened (賓語從句), Sam felt that it was time for him to put the skills of planting trees he had learned (賓語從句；省略關系詞的定語從句) to use.He went home and told his mother he wanted to save those trees.So he took the tools that he had used (定語從句) to plant the trees.With the skills taught by his teacher (with復合結構), he worked with his mother to replant those trees.They helped the trees survive.
The neighbours praised Sam for what he had done. Sam told them about his experience of planting trees.But he owed all the kindnesses to his teacher and mother.He explained that because of his teacher and mother (賓語從句), he learned the skills and saved the trees.The neighbours were very happy to hear that.They said Sam was a role model (省略that的賓語從句) and that they would ask their children to learn the skills from Sam (賓語從句).Sam felt proud and decided to develop a better community and protect the environment with them.
動物求助類
作者被邀請去一個農場野餐，發現一只蜂鳥被蜘蛛網困住。作者把蜂鳥救下，但把蜂鳥帶出去的時候它遲遲不肯飛走，徘徊著，后來終于飛走了。當作者準備離開時，蜂鳥又飛到作者面前，好像是在和作者告別。
A few weeks later, I went to the farm again. As my car approached it (時間狀語從句), my thoughts drifted back to the moment when I rescued the hummingbird from the spider’s web (定語從句).I rushed back to the deserted house.It was a great comfort that the original hole in the window was nowhere to be found (it作形式主語).Leaving the house (現在分詞短語作狀語), I couldn’t help wondering how it was getting on now (賓語從句).Had it managed to find its way back home (倒裝), or was it still out there somewhere struggling to survive
I was just about to leave when the hummingbird appeared. A flash of movement caught my attention (擬人).I turned around to see the same hummingbird hovering in the air.It seemed that the bird was waiting for me (表語從句), its beady eyes locked on mine as if trying to convey some deep, unspoken gratitude (擬人；省略句).I felt a surge of relief and awe at the sight of this sound and grateful creature, and I knew that I would always cherish the memories we shared (賓語從句；省略關系詞的定語從句) as I climbed into my car and drove away (狀語從句).
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