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Reading for writing
Describe a place that you like
Lead-in
It has made a great contribution to world literature, producing many Nobel Prize winners, including Bernard Shaw, William Yeats.
It is an island.
It is separated from Grean Britain and near the Atlantic Ocean.
Lead-in
emerald – a bright green color
isle – island [literary]
the nick name
beautiful
amazing
fascinating
Emerald Isle
綠寶石島
How would you describe the scenery in Ireland
Step 1 Read the text on Page 44 and then choose the best answer.
1．What’s the main idea of the passage
A．The beautiful scenery of the Ireland．
B．The history of the Ireland．
C．The beautiful scenery and its traditions．
D．The customs of the Ireland．
2．What makes the Irish countryside exciting and inspiring
A．The beautiful countryside scenery of the Ireland．
B．The long history of the Irish countryside．
C．The traditions of the Irish countryside．
D．Many green countries in the Ireland．
Reading
3．What are the best ways to experience some Irish traditions and cultures
A．Dance with the natives．
B．Drink a glass of wine or a local beer in a village pub．
C．Sing a song with the natives．
D．Enjoy some traditional music．
Part Sentence Topic sentence
one 1
two 2-6
three 7-11
Step2 Mark each sentence with numbers, divide the passage into three parts and fill in the table.
Ireland’s beautiful countryside has always had a great influence on its people and traditions.
Its beautiful countryside excites and
inspires all, offering something for each
of the senses.
With all this beauty, it is not surprising
that Ireland has developed strong
traditions that include music, dancing,
and dining.
Step 3
Read the text again and discuss the questions in pairs.
What is the meaning of "breathe in the sweet scent of fresh flowers while birds greet the new day with their morning song"
It means to not just smell but also breathe in the smell of fresh flowers early in the morning as the birds sing their first song of the new day.
“On a quiet morning in the mountains, feel the sun on your skin, and breathe in the sweet scent of fresh flowers while birds greet the new day with their morning song.” (Line 7-8)
Step1: Find the corresponding sentence in the passage
Step2: Read it again and again in the way you like, and feel the beauty of it, try to describe it
Reading
introduction
beautiful countryside
people
traditions
Reading
beautiful countryside
Which sentence shows Ireland’s beautiful countryside in general
Reading
Write down the places and sensory details in the order that they appear.
down by the sea
in the mountains
a village pub
green counties
a true feast for the eyes, with its rolling green hills dotted with sheep and cattle
the roar of the ocean waves and cries of the seabirds make up the music of the coast
feel the sun on your skin, and breathe in the sweet scent of fresh flowers while birds greet the new day with their morning song
relax with a glass of wine or a local beer;
enjoy traditional food, music and dancing
beautiful countryside
traditions
Reading
down by the sea
in the mountains
a village pub
green counties
The peaceful landscape of the “Emerald Isle” and its many green counties is a true feast for the eyes, with its rolling green hills dotted with sheep and cattle.
sight
adj.: green, rolling
phrases: a true feast for the eyes, be dotted with
sentence pattern: with + ...
The peaceful landscape of the “Emerald Isle” and its many green counties is a true feast for the eyes, with its rolling green hills dotted with sheep and cattle.
Brainstorm
What Chinese traditions and customs do you think are the most worthwhile to experience
Discussion
1 Read the text and discuss the questions in pairs.
What are the best ways to experience Chinese traditions and customs？
By travelling to different places and using all your senses to experience everything and by interacting with local people.
Analyse
2 Analyse the descriptive paragraph.
(1) ldentify and underline the paragraph's introductory sentence(s) and the ending sentence(s).
Introductory sentence: Ireland's beautiful countryside has always had a great influence on its people and traditions.
Ending sentence: And if you introduce yourself to a friendly face, you are more than likely to experience local culture and customs first-hand.
Write the senses and places in the order that they appear. And describe sensory details
Senses
Places
Analyse
sight
hearing
touch
smell
in the green counties and hills
by the sea
In the mountains
In the mountains
feast for the eyes
sweet scent
feel the sun on your skin
roar, cries, music of the coast, morning song
Description of senses
Read the passage and find the senses and places the writer talks about.
P44 Activity 2-2
Senses Places Details
touch
smell
taste
in the green
counties and hills
by the sea
in the mountains
in the mountains
by a village pub
feast for the eyes
roar, cries, music of the coast, morning song
feel the sun on your skin
sweet scent
delicious
sight
hearing
Introductory sentence
Ending sentence
Body(details)
Read for structure
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How to make the article more organized
Describe a place
Introduction
Body
Ending
To make the reader eager to read your writing
A striking image
Something surprising
A quote or question
Transitions
Help the reader follow your ideas
Details and examples
Use sensory details.
Rhetoric devices (personification…)
Give examples.
Let the reader know that the passage ends.
Help the reader remember your writing.
如何描述你喜歡的地方
體裁：說明文
時態(tài)人稱：現(xiàn)在時，以第三人稱為主
布局
para 1：介紹基本信息
para 2：具體介紹其旅游特色
para 3：總結(jié)，吸引讀者前去旅游
Writing
（地理位置、面積、人口、氣候狀況）
（景點(diǎn)、歷史、特色小吃、風(fēng)俗）
1. 位于……
X is located in ….
Located in …, X …
2. X 的面積是…
X covers an area of …square kilometers.
3. X 有…人口
X has a population of... ; with a population of ...
4. X 有…年的歷史
X has a long history of … years; with a history of ...
5. 天氣
X is quite dry/humid（潮濕）/rainy/mild (溫和的)...
para 1：介紹基本信息 （地理位置、面積、人口、氣候狀況）
地點(diǎn)介紹句型積累：
6.名勝古跡、景點(diǎn)
它是…之鄉(xiāng)
它以…聞名
有許多名勝古跡，如… (there be 句型)
It's famous/ known for ……
There are many places of interest, such as..
It's home to ……
7. 特色：special snacks
delicious dishes
special local products
be rich in ..
特色小吃
美食
特產(chǎn)
盛產(chǎn)
In my village, every day starts with a “fire”! The houses turn red as the sun rises above the mountains.
Seeing the flames, the roosters(公雞) sound the alarm. They wake everyone in the village with their loud cries, chasing the children to school and rushing the adults to work. In the evening, a gold haze settles over everything. This is my favourite time of the day, when all work for the day has been completed. When the smell of hot oil and fragrant(芳香的) spices float through the air, I know that it will soon be time for dinner. My neighbours begin to call to their children to come home. The birds begin their nightly quarrel over their favourite places to rest.
At night, the stars come out to tell us that all is well and my village grows quiet. For now we'll sleep, and tomorrow the sun will set us on fire again for a new day!
Possible version
How to describe a place that you like
Body
(transitions; details and examples)
Introduction
(make the reader eager to read your writing)
Ending
(let the reader know that the passage ends;
help the reader remember your writing)
Review
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