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單元寫作 幸福的秘密
Unit 1 The secrets of happiness
寫作維度
本單元的寫作題目是“幸福的秘密”，相關內容有以下幾個方面：(1) 提出不同的觀點：幸福的秘密是什么 (2) 對不同的觀點進行歸納總結。
寫作支架/ 模版
幸福的秘密 開篇點題
分述不同的觀點：財富、地位、愛心等
表達自己的觀點
黃金語料(從教材內外積累好句)
開頭段 ① Happiness is important to every one of us.
② Happiness is everywhere in our life.
③ But different people have different opinions about happiness.
中間段 ① Some people think the key to happiness is money.
② Others think that giving love to people makes them happy.
③ There are many poor people around us.
④ When the poor receive our help, their lives will be better and better.
⑤ When we see the smiles on their faces, we must feel even happier than them.
結尾段 ① So I think true happiness comes from the love.
② As Plato said, “Happiness springs from doing good and helping others.”
③ What’s your opinion
經典例題(從經典例題學會審題)
英語課上，老師要求你以“The Secrets of Happiness”為題來談一下“幸福的秘密”。
要求：1. 語句通順，語言規范；
2. 書寫工整，時態正確，段落清晰。
3. 可適當發揮，70 詞左右
The Secrets of Happiness
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審人稱：第一人稱
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審體裁：議論文
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審時態：一般現在時
審要點：幸福、
愛心、感受
精彩范文[從教材內外積累好句]
精彩范文展示
The Secrets of Happiness
Happiness is important to every one of us. It is everywhere in our life. But different people have different opinions about happiness.
Some people think the key to happiness is money. Others think that giving love to people makes them happy. I agree to the second opinion. There are many poor people around us. We should try our best to help them. Then we can see smiles on their faces. When we see the smiles on their faces, we must feel even happier than them.
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教材原句：①But love, in fact, is the key to happiness.(教材P5)
So I think true happiness comes from the love.
As Plato said, “Happiness springs from doing good and helping others.” What’s your opinion
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教材原句
②Happiness springs from doing good and helping others.(教材P13)
【亮點詞塊】
· be important to... 對……很重要
· agree to... 同意……
· try our best to help them 盡我們的最大努力幫助他們
【高分句子】
· Some people think the key to happiness is money.
一些人認為幸福的關鍵是金錢。
· Happiness springs from doing good and helping others.
幸福源自于做好事和幫助他人。
實戰演練
請根據下面的提示，以“My Happiness”為題寫一篇100 詞左右的英語作文，可適當發揮。
要求： 1. 幸福無處不在恰如“美無處不在”。
2. 考試沒有考好害怕見父母。
3. 父母給予了大量的鼓勵。
4. 我的感受。
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范文參考
My Happiness
Happiness is everywhere just as “Beauty is everywhere”. In fact, happiness is always around you if you put your heart into it.
I will never forget one thing. Once, I had a bad grade at a math test. I was afraid to meet my parents. But when I got back home late, my parents knew what happened. They said to me, “It doesn’t matter, my child. Remember we’ll be always beside you when you need help. We believe you can do better next time. ” I was touched and decided to work harder. I felt happy.
Whenever I am in trouble, I can feel my parents’ love. I want to be a good child for my parents.
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完成本課時的課后作業。
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