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Unit 3 Keep Fit
第五課時（寫作課）
Section B (2a—2c）
本課學習目標
本節課結束時，學生能夠：
1. 能夠基于寫作目的和要求，在教師的指導下有效開展寫作準備，梳理介紹自己最喜歡的運動及原因的結構，列出帖子的內容要點；
2. 能夠將本單元所學的詞匯、目標結構、句型以及各類功能表達遷移應用到自己的寫作之中；
3. 通過自評和互評，不斷改進自己的作品，使之完善，改進初稿的結構、內容和語言。
按要求寫出正確的單詞、詞組或句子。
滑板 (名詞) __________ 2. 鼓勵 (動詞) ___________
3. 目標 (名詞) __________ 4. 做仰臥起坐(短語) __________
5. 解決出(短語) __________ 6. 取得進步 (短語) __________
7. 比賽（名詞）__________ 8. 團隊合作（短語）___________
9. 我的目標是變得非常健康。 ___________________________
10. 我們團隊合作，贏或輸也是一個團隊。 _______________________
11. 我們都是好朋友，賽場上或賽場下。___________________
12. 這展示了我的進步。
________________________________________
skateboard
encourage
goal
do sit-ups
work out
better
match
work as a team
My goal is to be really fit.
We work as a team, we win or lose as a team.
All of us are good friends, both on and off the field.
It can show my progress.
上節要點回顧
football
basketball
running
What’s your favorite sport
Brainstorm
swimming
rowing
table tennis
cycling
skating
tennis
What’s your favorite sport
Writing task（寫作任務）
現在，越來越多的人重視體育鍛煉。在閑暇時間或休息日，到處都是鍛煉的人們。他們有的愛打羽毛球，有的愛踢足球，還有一些人喜歡走綠道。你喜歡哪種鍛煉方式呢？請你以 “My Favorite Sport” 為題，寫一篇80字左右的短文介紹一項你最喜歡的運動。
注意事項：
1. 文中不得出現真實人名、校名等信息。
2. 語言通順，意思連貫，條理清楚，書寫規范。
可以適當發揮。
字數要求：約80詞左右。
A website wants to learn more about how teenagers keep fit. Read Kate's post and complete the mind map.
2a
A website wants to learn more about how teenagers keep fit. Read Kate's post and complete the mind map.
2a
swimming
It's fun to swim and play (withher friends)( in the water).
Also,she likes swimming( because the cool water feels great)( when it's hot).
two or three times a week
because it keeps her healthy
A website wants to learn more about how teenagers keep fit. Read Kate's post and complete the mind map.
2a
My favourite sport is swimming. It's fun to swim and play with my friends in the water. Also, I like swimming because the cool water feels great when it's hot. I go swimming two or three times a week. Swimming is good for me because it keeps me healthy. It is good exercise for my body. I think everyone should try it!
It’s fun to do sth
做某事很有趣
also 同樣
be good for
對……有好處
keep sth adj
保持某物……的
Make a similar mind map about your favourite sport or exercise.
2b
How often do I do/play it
Who do I do/play it with
Where do I do/play it
What can you write about your favorite sport
My favourite sport
What is it
Do I have any favorite sport stars/teams
Why do I like them
Use your mind map to write a post about your favourite way to keep fit.
2c
sample
My Favorite Sport
Many people like to swim in summer. So do l.
My favorite sport is swimming. Just imagine! What fun it is to jump into the water in hot summer! In hot weather, I often go to swim in the swimming pool with my family. Swimming can not only makes us strong and healthy, but also helps us to keep in good shape. But few people like to swim in winter because it is too cold.
Swimming in winter needs much courage. I hope one day I can be strong enough to swim in winter.
Work and share in groups
Paragraph 1
Begin with a topic sentence. (中心句/主題句）
(My favorite sport is .../... ismy favorite sport.)
Paragraph 2
Give details about your favorite sport. (具體細節)
Paragraph 3
Include your memory or experience of this sport, or your favorite sport stars/team.
(關于你的經歷或最喜愛的運動明星/團體）
My favorite sports
I enjoy sports very much. They help me to keep healthy and study better.
I find it’s a good way to relax myself.
I have benefited a lot from doing exercise!
Doing sports gives me energy.
Sports can keep me active and strong.
I learn to get on well with others after playing
basketball with my classmates.
some useful expressions
My Favorite Sport
I like doing sports very much.My favorite sport is running.I think running because running can make me strong and healthy.
I often run with my friends in the park after school.I run twice a week and half an hour each time. Running is really very interesting. When I run, I will look like a lovely bird. I'm so active and happy. Now I can run very well. I look young and healthy, too.
Su Bingtian is my favorite player. I think he is so cool and he runs very well. I am going to be a runner like him in the future. That's my dream.
beginning
Body
ending
favorite sport
why
when
where
how often
how long
favorite player dream
why
which sport
How long
when
who
what
My Favorite Sport
how often
where
healthy
could
Running
running
makes
修改病句
1.I like running. It's interesting and I can keep health.
2.Run is my favorite sport. I like run very day. It make me strong.
3.I can run well two years ago, but now I can run very well.
美化句子
一般句：I like running. It's very interesting.
美化句子：__________________________________________________
一般句：I like running. I often run in the park after supper.
美化句子：______________________________________________________________
一般句：I'm going to be a great runner like Su Bingtian when I grow up.
美化句子：______________________________________________________________
I like running because it's very interesting.
I like running and I often run in the park after supper.
I hope I'm going to be a great runner like Su Bingtian when I grow up.
A good passage
no grammar mistakes
wonderful
handwriting
no spelling mistakes
proper
conj.
beautiful sentences
1
2
3
4
7
6
5
9
8
cycling rowing
football
skating running
mountain climbing
Which sport
Why
When and where
make sb. strong
be good for legs/lungs/health
help sb. relax
help to keep heart and lungs healthy
a good way to keep fit/healthy
popular all over the world
after supper/class
every Tuesday
on Sundays
in the park
on the playground
in the gym
every day
twice a week
three times a week
How long
How often
half an hour
an hour
thirty minutes
favorite
player
Why
dream
action
Yao Ming
Su Bingtian
Messi
handsome/cool
work hard/brave
play soccer very
well/friendly/kind
work hard,
practice soccer very day,
play basketball after school,
watch ball games on TV
to learn more skills
作文構思
Person（人稱）
02
03
04
05
06
07
01
Tense(時態）
Initial(首字母）
Spelling(拼寫）
Complete（完整性）
Punctuation（標點符號）
Skills
Discuss in groups:
Present tense
I
Capital letter
correct
Complete
Use correctly
Handwriting（書寫）
Present tense
Standard(規范）
3c
Structure
Use your mind map to write a post about your favourite way to keep fit.
Writing task（寫作任務）
現在，越來越多的人重視體育鍛煉。在閑暇時間或休息日，到處都是鍛煉的人們。他們有的愛打羽毛球，有的愛踢足球，還有一些人喜歡走綠道。你喜歡哪種鍛煉方式呢？請你以 “My Favorite Sport” 為題，寫一篇80字左右的短文介紹一項你最喜歡的運動。
注意事項：
1. 文中不得出現真實人名、校名等信息。
2. 語言通順，意思連貫，條理清楚，書寫規范。
可以適當發揮。
字數要求：約80詞左右。
Self-check and peer-check.
Let’s proofread
check
Check for mistakes:
spelling
grammar
polish
□你分段了嗎？
□你的每一段都有主旨嗎？
□你包含介紹的基本信息了嗎？
□ 你有拼寫錯誤嗎？
□ 你有語法錯誤嗎？
□ 你使用連詞and了嗎？
Let’s evaluate
Let’s edit
評分原則
本題總分15分，按各檔次給分。評分時先根據文章的內容、語言質量初步確定檔次，然后以檔次的要求來衡量，確定或調整檔次，最后給分；
評分時應考慮：內容要點是否完整；時態，語態及人稱是否正確；詞匯和句式的多樣性以及語言的準確性；上下文的連貫性；
如書寫較差，影響表達，應視其影響程度，降低一到兩個檔次；英美兩種拼法及詞匯用法都可接受；
內容要點可用不同方式表達，應緊扣主題，可適當發揮。
Self-check List
feature(特征) 20 points
in total
three paragraphs 2 points
some conjs and connecting words 2 points
no grammar mistakes 3 points
no spelling mistakes 3 points
a proper ending and a rich body 3 points
wonderful handwritng 3 points
beautiful expressions 4 points
Exchange and correct（交換批改）
Revise（修改）
Show yourself
Introduce
Use your mind map to write a post about your favourite way to keep fit.
2c
_______________________________________________________________________
_______________________________________________________________________
_______________________________________________________________________
_______________________________________________________________________
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My favourite way to keep fit is cycling. It's exciting to ride my bike and explore new places with my friends. Moreover, I enjoy cycling because the fresh air and beautiful scenery along the way make me feel relaxed and happy. I usually go cycling three or four times a week.
Cycling is beneficial for me as it helps maintain my fitness. It's an excellent form of exercise that strengthens my muscles and improves my endurance. Plus, it's an eco-friendly way to travel and reduces my carbon footprint. I believe everyone should give it a try!
2c
Use your mind map to write a post about your favourite way to keep fit.
Summary
Writing
Learn how to write passages about the way you keep fit
Homework

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