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Carol Ansbro, Marion Bamforth, Susan Morris, and Mary Helliwell have been good friends since primary school. They had countless happy hours together, exploring the vast playground, dreaming big, and whispering secrets under the blanket of night. Each weekend, they gathered at Carol's home, making plans for the next week, looking forward to more excitements and surprises.
At seventeen, their friendship blossomed further during a summer trip to the seaside town of Torquay, Devon. As teenagers, the group stayed and soaked in the excitement of being on their own for the first time. It felt really fantastic and grown-up being on their own without parents. The sea breeze carried their giggles, and under the starlit(星光照耀的) sky, they promised to always stand by each other for ever. One day, a photographer happened to notice them and took a photo of them. So in blue jeans and white shirts—a common sight of teenage girls at tourist destinations in those days, each girl had a precious picture in the year of1972.
Following high school, life presented crossroads. Carol moved to Edinburgh for her art studies, Marion pursued medicine in Manchester: Susan ventured into engineering in Bristol, and Mary sailed off to Oxford for law. Distance stretched across miles, yet they had alternatives to stay together. Emails, calls and visits bridged the gaps created by geography. So, despite varied lifestyles and responsibilities, they prioritized reunions, whether virtual or in person, cherishing the moments they shared.
Fast forward to 50 years later, Carol, the eldest of the four, who was always considerate and thoughtful, thought they should do something to celebrate their everlasting friendship. However, things were not easy as she had expected. Worried, she was at a loss where to start. But to her great joy, her grandson, Mike, who was having a summer break, volunteered to help her after hearing the story with her lifelong friends. The first thing he did was to look over his grandma's old stuff.
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第一段： An old photo attracted his attention immediately. 第二段： Soon, each of them received a package.
文章大意：
Carol、Marion、Susan 和 Mary 從小學起就是好友，一起度過無數歡樂時光，十七歲去海邊旅行時友誼升溫，還留下珍貴合影。高中畢業后，四人各奔東西追求學業與事業，雖相隔甚遠但通過各種方式維系友情，五十年后，作為大姐的 Carol 想慶祝這段長久友誼，孫子 Mike 聽聞后主動幫忙，從翻找舊物開啟行動。
故事山分析：
開端：四人自幼結下深厚友誼，青少年時海邊之旅留下美好回憶。
發展：畢業后分赴各地，仍努力維系友情。
高潮：五十年后 Carol 想慶祝，Mike 幫忙找舊物，發現關鍵物品，后續需續寫慶祝籌備及老友反應。
結局：待構建，應展現友情延續與升華。
伏筆以及在續寫中的回應：
伏筆：四人從小親密無間，分享秘密，續寫回應：五十年后收到 Mike 寄來的包裹，睹物思人，回憶潮涌，感慨歲月未淡友情，更加珍視彼此。
伏筆：十七歲海邊之旅留下合影，續寫回應：Mike 發現舊照，以照片為核心籌備慶祝，勾起老友青春記憶，成為情感紐帶，串聯起五十年歲月。
伏筆：畢業后各奔東西，靠多種方式保持聯系，續寫回應：收到包裹后，迫不及待線上分享感受，即便相隔千里，心瞬間拉近，凸顯友情堅韌。
伏筆：Carol 想慶祝友誼卻不知從何下手，續寫回應：Mike 的行動推動進程，他的用心讓 Carol 欣慰，也為老友重聚鋪墊，展現年輕一代對長輩情誼的助力。
伏筆：Mike 主動幫忙且先翻舊物，續寫回應：找到照片，精心籌備包裹，用充滿回憶的物品給老友驚喜，體現他的聰慧細心，延續友誼火種。
續寫要點：
第一段：
要點：描述 Mike 看到舊照片后的所思所想，如何以照片為靈感策劃特別慶祝方式，比如制作復刻版當年穿搭、準備寫有回憶話語的卡片，聯系沖印店放大照片等，展現他的用心。
情感線：因受奶奶友情觸動而滿懷熱忱，期待給老人們帶來驚喜，對傳承這份情誼充滿干勁。
故事線：Mike 端詳舊照，憶起奶奶講述的故事；聯系裁縫、文具店、沖印店籌備；精心打包物品，貼上寫有四人名字的標簽。
第二段：
要點：講述老友們收到包裹后的反應，打開看到熟悉又陌生的復刻物品，回憶如潮水般涌來，她們或落淚或歡笑，通過電話、視頻分享感受，約定相聚，彰顯友情經歲月沉淀后的醇厚。
情感線：從驚訝、感動到迫不及待相聚的喜悅，沉浸在回憶與重逢期待中，感恩歲月留情。
故事線：收到包裹，驚訝于寄件人；打開看到舊照復刻品、卡片等，眼眶濕潤；紛紛聯系彼此，視頻中歡笑感慨；約定見面日期，滿心歡喜籌備。
情感線：
Mike 凝視舊照，仿若踏入時光隧道，被奶奶的青春友情深深觸動，一腔熱忱為驚喜奔忙。精心籌備時，滿是對傳遞溫暖的期待。老友們收到包裹，驚訝瞬間擊中心房，打開剎那，熟悉物件拽出回憶洪流，眼眶濕潤，笑聲與淚花交織。視頻電話里，感慨跨越時空，迫不及待相約重聚，喜悅在心底瘋長，五十年風雨未淡情誼，感恩歲月讓重逢更暖。
故事線：
Mike 發現舊照，被照片背后故事吸引。
他聯系多方，籌備復刻版穿搭、卡片、放大照片。
精心打包，標注四人名字，寄給各位奶奶。
老友們收到包裹，詫異寄件人身份。
打開包裹，睹物思人，激動落淚、歡笑分享。
線上約定相聚，滿心歡喜籌備重逢。
主旨升華句：
True friendship is like a fine wine that gets better with age, and theirs was a vintage that had aged gloriously.（真正的友誼就像美酒，越陳越香，而她們的友誼是一瓶歷經歲月沉淀而愈發醇厚的佳釀。）
In a world full of changes, their unwavering friendship remained a constant, a lighthouse guiding them through life's storms.（在這個充滿變化的世界里，她們堅定不移的友誼始終如一，如同一座燈塔，指引她們穿越人生的風暴。）
Fifty years of separation only strengthened the bond they shared, proving that distance and time are no match for true friends.（五十年的分離只會讓她們之間的情誼更加深厚，證明了距離和時間都無法與真正的朋友抗衡。）
The power of friendship lies not only in the shared memories but also in the ability to reignite the spark after decades apart.（友誼的力量不僅在于共同的回憶，還在于分別數十年后仍能重燃激情的能力。）
Their story is a testament to the fact that friendship, once kindled, can burn brightly for a lifetime and beyond.（她們的故事證明了，一旦點燃友誼之火，它就能在一生乃至更久的時間里熊熊燃燒。）
寫作示范兩篇：
第一篇：
An old photo attracted his attention immediately. It was the picture taken in Torquay in 1972. Mike's eyes lit up as he held it, imagining the fun his grandma and her friends must have had. He decided to recreate that moment. He contacted a local tailor to make replicas of their blue jeans and white shirts. Then, he went to a stationery store to buy some vintage-looking cards and wrote down memories shared by Carol over the years. After getting the photo enlarged at a print shop, he carefully packaged everything, labeling each item with the four ladies' names.
Soon, each of them received a package. Carol was the first to open it. As she saw the familiar photo and the clothes replica, tears welled up in her eyes. She immediately called the others. Marion, Susan, and Mary, all had the same reaction. Through video calls, they laughed and cried, reminiscing about that summer. They all agreed that they couldn't wait to meet in person and relive those golden days. Their friendship, rekindled by a young heart, was set to continue shining brightly.
第二篇：
An old photo attracted his attention immediately. Staring at the faded image, Mike was captivated by the carefree smiles of the four young girls. Inspired, he sprang into action. He searched online for the exact style of jeans and shirts, ordering custom-made replicas. Next, he dug through his grandma's photo albums for more snapshots and made a small collage. With a heartfelt note attached, he placed it all in a box. He even found a small shell from a local beach to add a touch of Torquay.
Soon, each of them received a package. Susan opened hers at work and gasped. The memories came flooding back. She quickly dialed the others. Mary, who was reading in her study, dropped her book and joined the call. Marion, in the middle of a hospital shift, took a break to see what was inside. Their voices filled with emotion as they talked about the past. They planned a reunion trip to Torquay, determined to make new memories while honoring the old. Their friendship, once again, proved to be timeless.
參考答案
（1）An old photo attracted his attention immediately. It was the photo from that memorable summer in Torquay in 1972. The four girls, with their youthful smiles and carefree postures, seemed to leap out of the picture. Mike could almost hear their laughter carried by the sea breeze. He realized this photo was a treasure trove of memories for his grandma and her friends. He carefully scanned the photo and had high-quality prints made. Then, he got creative. He added small notes on the back of each print, jotting down some of the funniest moments they had shared during that trip. He also found some vintage postcards of Torquay and included them in the package.
Soon, each of them received a package. As they unwrapped it, a rush of emotions overwhelmed them. The photo, now pristine and accompanied by the postcards and notes, took them back in time. Carol's letter spoke of the unbreakable bond they had formed and how this photo was a symbol of their enduring friendship. She suggested they each write a short memory on the back of the photo and send it back to her, so they could create a collective memory book. The idea sparked enthusiasm among them. They called each other, their voices filled with excitement and anticipation. They couldn't wait to start this new chapter in their friendship story, just like they had eagerly planned their adventures in the past.

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