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It was last August. We were on vacation, just me, my husband, and our two kids, out for a nice, safe, socially distanced week away. We went to a popular place called Diana's Baths, where the water falls off a series of flat rocks up the mountain. The baths were full of families, so we made our way to one of the upper levels of rock to keep our distance.
Both where we sat and down below, the water fell down and into small pools, where kids in swimsuits were playing water around. I was frightened as I saw my two boys jump between the smooth rocks. I told them to stay away from all those edges. But I soon relaxed, and we were all having fun, laughing in the pools.
Suddenly, I turned and saw my son Wyatt sitting down between two rocks in fast-moving water. I shouted at him to get out. He called back something that I couldn't hear, and then he disappeared over the edge. All I remember from the moments after was screaming, over and over, like a prayer, “Somebody help my son!” I didn't even know what help he needed, because I couldn't force myself to look.
My husband was already jumping down the rocks. I finally looked. Wyatt was sitting up-he was alive. My biggest fear was gone. As I held my younger son, Jed, close, I heard another woman scream. “That child just went over the waterfall!” she shouted at her husband. “We are leaving!” They walked away, never even looking back to see whether our child was OK.
It was about 4 meters from the top of the waterfall to the pool below, which was filled with huge rocks. Wyatt had fallen on his back, straight onto the rocks. That's what Lisa told us. We didn't know her name was Lisa at that point. All we knew was that while everyone else looked on from a distance, too afraid or unbothered to help, Lisa didn't hesitate.
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2．請按如下格式在答題卡的相應位置作答。
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Later, Lisa told me that she was a nurse.__________________________________________
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The rescue team finally came.___________________________________________________
文章大意：
去年八月，一家人外出度假，在戴安娜浴場游玩，孩子們在巖石間和水池嬉戲，“我” 叮囑兒子們遠離邊緣。但 Wyatt 還是坐到了湍急水流中的巖石間，隨后失足落水，“我” 驚恐尖叫，丈夫立刻去救。 Wyatt 落水處約 4 米高，下方布滿巨石，他背部朝下摔落。眾人圍觀卻無人幫忙，只有 Lisa 毫不猶豫伸出援手。
故事山分析：
開端：一家人在戴安娜浴場享受假期，孩子在危險區域玩耍。
發展：Wyatt 落水，“我” 驚慌失措，丈夫施救，旁人冷漠離去。
高潮：Lisa 挺身而出，后續需續寫她救助的過程及結果。
結局：待構建，包含救援后續情況及感悟。
伏筆以及在續寫中的回應：
伏筆：浴場有很多家庭，人多擁擠，續寫回應：凸顯旁人的冷漠，更襯托 Lisa 的勇敢熱心，在人群中只有她果斷行動。
伏筆：“我” 叮囑孩子遠離邊緣，孩子不聽，續寫回應：導致 Wyatt 落水，引發后續緊張情節，也為 Lisa 的救助鋪墊，讓她的行為顯得更關鍵。
伏筆：眾人圍觀卻無人幫忙，續寫回應：突出 Lisa 的與眾不同，強化她善良、果敢的形象，使其成為故事轉折點。
伏筆：提到下方水池布滿巨石，續寫回應：增加救援難度與危險系數，襯托 Lisa 專業救助的重要性，稍有不慎 Wyatt 就有生命危險。
伏筆：“我” 驚恐尖叫，丈夫施救，續寫回應：與 Lisa 的救助交織，展現多方努力，使故事更曲折，一家人的感激之情也因眾人反應對比而更濃烈。
續寫要點：
第一段：
要點：描述 Lisa 表明護士身份后，如何利用專業知識快速檢查 Wyatt 身體狀況，安撫他的情緒，采取初步急救措施，如固定受傷部位，同時 “我” 和家人的反應，焦急又感恩。
情感線：從驚恐、絕望轉為看到希望后的感激、慶幸，對 Lisa 充滿感恩。
故事線：Lisa 跑來告知職業，冷靜查看 Wyatt；邊檢查邊輕聲安慰；用衣物簡單固定 Wyatt 可能受傷的背部；“我” 和丈夫圍在旁，不斷道謝。
第二段：
要點：救援團隊到來后的專業救援流程，如用擔架搬運 Wyatt，送往醫院檢查治療，最終 Wyatt 平安無事，結尾點明這次經歷對一家人的觸動，感恩陌生人的善意。
情感線：從緊張擔憂過渡到安心、感恩，對人性溫暖有更深體會。
故事線：救援團隊迅速展開行動，用專業設備將 Wyatt 抬上擔架；送往醫院，一家人跟隨；經檢查 Wyatt 無大礙；“我” 感慨陌生人的善意拯救家庭。
情感線：
聽到 Lisa 說自己是護士，絕望瞬間被希望點亮，感激如潮水涌上心頭。看著她專業檢查 Wyatt，輕柔安撫，慌亂的我漸歸平靜，滿心慶幸有她出現。救援團隊趕來，緊張再度揪緊心房，直至 Wyatt 被穩妥抬上擔架，送往醫院，忐忑才慢慢消散。最終得知 Wyatt 平安，感恩如暖流包裹全家，這份來自陌生人的善意，讓我們深知人間有愛，溫暖總在危難時。
故事線：
Lisa 表明護士身份，快速跑到 Wyatt 身邊查看。
她邊檢查邊安慰 Wyatt，用衣物固定其背部。
我” 和丈夫焦急圍在旁邊，向 Lisa 道謝。
救援團隊趕到，用擔架搬運 Wyatt。
送往醫院，一家人緊張跟隨。
Wyatt 經檢查無大礙，一家人感恩陌生人善意。
主旨升華句：
In the face of danger, a stranger's kindness can be the brightest light, guiding us through the darkest moments.（在危險面前，陌生人的善意可以是最亮的光，指引我們度過最黑暗的時刻。）
Sometimes, it's not the grand gestures but the prompt action of a kind-hearted person that saves a life and restores our faith in humanity.（有時候，拯救生命、重拾我們對人性信心的，不是什么宏大的舉動，而是一個好心人及時的行動。）
When everyone else turns a blind eye, the one who steps forward with love proves that goodness still exists and is more powerful than fear.（當其他人都視而不見時，那個帶著愛挺身而出的人證明了善良依然存在，且比恐懼更強大。）
This experience taught us that the bonds of humanity extend beyond family and friends, reaching out to strangers in need.（這次經歷讓我們明白，人性的紐帶超越了家人和朋友，伸向了需要幫助的陌生人。）
A single act of courage from a stranger can turn a moment of despair into a story of hope and gratitude.（陌生人的一次勇敢之舉，可以把絕望時刻變成一個充滿希望與感恩的故事。）
寫作示范兩篇：
第一篇：
Later, Lisa told me that she was a nurse. Without wasting a second, she rushed to Wyatt's side. Kneeling down, she gently but firmly examined his body, her fingers probing carefully for any signs of serious injury. “It's okay, sweetheart. You're gonna be just fine,” she cooed to Wyatt, her voice soothing his panicked cries. She quickly improvised a makeshift splint using a towel and some branches to immobilize his back. I stood there, clutching Jed tightly, tears streaming down my face, whispering words of gratitude to this angel who had descended in our moment of need.
The rescue team finally came. They immediately took over, their professional equipment and expertise evident. With practiced ease, they transferred Wyatt onto a stretcher, securing him snugly. As we rushed to the hospital behind them, my heart was in my throat. Hours later, the doctor emerged with a smile. Wyatt had escaped with just a few bruises. That day, we not only witnessed the power of a stranger's kindness but also learned that in times of crisis, heroes don't always wear capes; sometimes, they're just kind-hearted people like Lisa.
第二篇：
Later, Lisa told me that she was a nurse. Swiftly, she made her way to Wyatt, her eyes sharp and focused. “Mom, don't worry. I've got this,” she said reassuringly as she started her assessment. She checked his pulse, his breathing, all while chatting softly with Wyatt to keep him calm. “You're one brave boy, you know that ” She deftly fashioned a support for his back with her scarf and a couple of sticks. My husband and I watched in awe and relief, our eyes never leaving her hands.
The rescue team finally came. They brought a sense of order and further reassurance. Working in tandem with Lisa, they lifted Wyatt onto the stretcher with the utmost care. En route to the hospital, I held Wyatt's hand, still trembling. Once there, we received the wonderful news that he was okay. That fateful day, Lisa's actions became a testament to the kindness that can transform a nightmare into a tale of survival and love, making us believe in the goodness of strangers again.
參考答案
Paragraph 1: Later, Lisa told me that she was a nurse. She immediately sprang into action, her training kicking in. Kneeling beside Wyatt, she first gently checked his breathing and pulse, her face a mask of concentration. “He’s breathing steadily, but we need to be cautious,” she murmured. With deft hands, she took off her light jacket and carefully folded it to cushion Wyatt’s head. Then, she started talking to him in a soothing voice, asking simple questions to keep him alert. “What’s your name, sweetie You’re doing great.” I stood there, tears streaming down my face, clutching Jed tightly, utterly grateful for her presence.
Paragraph 2: The rescue team finally came. They quickly surrounded Wyatt, their professional equipment at the ready. One of them nodded approvingly at Lisa’s makeshift cushion. Gently, they lifted Wyatt onto a stretcher, securing him with straps. As they carried him away, I rushed to follow, my husband by my side. At the hospital, after a series of tests, the doctor emerged with a reassuring smile. “He’s going to be just fine, a few bruises and scrapes, that’s all.” That day, we learned that kindness and courage can come from the most unexpected places. Lisa, a stranger, had become an angel in our darkest hour, and we would never forget her selfless act.

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