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河南省頂級名校聯(lián)盟2025屆高三上學(xué)期1月調(diào)研考試
第二節(jié)（滿分25分）
閱讀下面材料，根據(jù)其內(nèi)容和所給段落開頭語續(xù)寫兩段，使之構(gòu)成一篇完整的短文。
When my husband passed away last year，my world turned upside down．Richard and I had been together for over forty years，and suddenly，there was an unbearable blank where he used to be．So，when my son，James，and his wife，Natalie，invited me to live with them for a while，I wasn’t about to refuse．I think being with the grandkids will be healing．
They welcomed me with open arms，making me feel like part of their daily life．They insisted that they wanted to help me through this difficult time and when I moved in，I only took the essentials．The rest of my things were locked 30 minutes away at my home，locking away the memories of a life shared with Richard．
From the beginning，there was simply one rule for the kids and myself：“Please，all three of you，stay out of the basement（地下室），” James had said when we were sitting for dinner，his tone was gentle but firm．“There are some repairs being done，and it’s really dusty and messy down there．We don’t want any of you to get sick or hurt．Understood ”
The boys，John，6，and Eric，4，nodded．I understood James’ concern，too．I agreed without giving it much thought．It wasn’t like I had any reason to go down there anyway．
Living with them was an adjustment．John and Eric were everything I needed to keep me distracted while my heart healed and grew with love for my grandchildren．We had also gotten into a new routine，where every evening，we’d gather in the living room for story time．Nothing delighted me more than watching their eyes light up as I read to them．
We’d been reading Harry Potter and the Chamber of Secrets for a few days now，and it had quickly become a favorite for them．One evening，I turned to the next chapter，and as I read about Harry discovering the hidden entrance to the chamber，Eric suddenly piped up，“Grandma! We have a Chamber of Secrets too! In the basement!”
注意：
1．續(xù)寫詞數(shù)應(yīng)150左右：
2．請按如下格式在答題卡的相應(yīng)位置作答。
I paused，glancing down at him unbelievably．____________________________________
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The room was a perfect copy of my own bedroom back home．________________________
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第二節(jié)（滿分25分）
閱讀下面材料，根據(jù)其內(nèi)容和所給段落開頭語續(xù)寫兩段，使之構(gòu)成一篇完整的短文。
When my husband passed away last year(狀從)，my world turned upside down．Richard and I had been together for over forty years，and suddenly，there was an unbearable blank where he used to be(定從)．So，when my son，James，and his wife，Natalie，invited me to live with them for a while，I wasn’t about to refuse．I think being with the grandkids will be healing(賓從)．
They welcomed me with open arms，making me feel like part of their daily life．They insisted that they wanted to help me through this difficult time (賓從)and when I moved in(狀從)，I only took the essentials．The rest of my things were locked 30 minutes away at my home，locking away(狀從) the memories of a life shared with Richard(非謂語動詞做后置定語)．
From the beginning，there was simply one rule for the kids and myself：“Please，all three of you，stay out of the basement（地下室），” James had said when we were sitting for dinner(狀從)，his tone was gentle but firm．“There are some repairs being done(非謂語動詞做后置定語)，and it’s really dusty and messy down there．We don’t want any of you to get sick or hurt．Understood ”
The boys，John，6，and Eric，4，nodded．I understood James’ concern，too．I agreed without giving it much thought．It wasn’t like I had any reason to go down there anyway(賓從)．
Living with them was an adjustment．John and Eric were everything I needed to keep me distracted(定從) while my heart healed and grew with love for my grandchildren(狀從)．We had also gotten into a new routine，where every evening，we’d gather in the living room for story time(定從)．Nothing delighted me more than watching their eyes(否定比較級=最高級) light up as I read to them．
We’d been reading Harry Potter and the Chamber of Secrets for a few days now，and it had quickly become a favorite for them．One evening，I turned to the next chapter，and as I read about Harry(狀從) discovering the hidden entrance to the chamber(非謂語動詞做伴隨動作)，Eric suddenly piped up，“Grandma! We have a Chamber of Secrets too! In the basement!”
注意：
1．續(xù)寫詞數(shù)應(yīng)150左右：
2．請按如下格式在答題卡的相應(yīng)位置作答。
I paused，glancing down at him unbelievably．____________________________________
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The room was a perfect copy of my own bedroom back home．________________________
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1. 高考英語讀后續(xù)寫要求與分析
分類角度 內(nèi)容 原文反應(yīng)句
續(xù)寫類型 溫情類情感故事，通過親情治愈失落的心靈。 "When my husband passed away last year, my world turned upside down."
構(gòu)思與布局 1. 第一段：發(fā)現(xiàn)地下室的秘密，引出意外驚喜；
2. 第二段：表達(dá)情感，重拾對生活的希望和家庭的溫暖。 "‘Grandma! We have a Chamber of Secrets too! In the basement!’"
提煉框架 原文中伏筆：“地下室秘密”，承接兒童的天真表達(dá)，引出地下室情感象征的場景。 "Please, all three of you, stay out of the basement."
實(shí)施建議 1. 延續(xù)原文語氣和細(xì)節(jié)描寫；
2. 通過心理、動作和環(huán)境描寫表現(xiàn)轉(zhuǎn)變的情感；
3. 以正向結(jié)局升華主題。 "Living with them was an adjustment."
承接原文注意事項(xiàng) 保持情感連貫；注意兒童語言的天真風(fēng)格；地下室與回憶之間需有自然連接；不要偏離親情治愈主題。 "We’d been reading Harry Potter and the Chamber of Secrets for a few days now, and it had quickly become a favorite for them."
巧妙設(shè)計(jì)續(xù)寫內(nèi)容 1. 地下室布置成溫馨回憶場景，引發(fā)感動；
2. 利用兒童角色語言推動情節(jié)，結(jié)局強(qiáng)調(diào)重拾對生活的熱愛。 "The room was a perfect copy of my own bedroom back home."
2. 故事山模式與原文分析
分析角度 內(nèi)容 原文反應(yīng)句
伏筆 地下室禁止進(jìn)入，暗示秘密的存在。 "Please, all three of you, stay out of the basement."
沖突點(diǎn) 孫子無意中提到地下室秘密，引起奶奶的好奇心。 "‘Grandma! We have a Chamber of Secrets too! In the basement!’"
隱含線索 地下室可能是兒子為母親布置的回憶場所，用來治愈母親的傷痛。 "The rest of my things were locked 30 minutes away at my home."
解決方案 奶奶進(jìn)入地下室，發(fā)現(xiàn)重溫回憶的溫馨布置，感受到家人的用心。 "The room was a perfect copy of my own bedroom back home."
故事山模式思維導(dǎo)圖：
引入：丈夫去世，生活失落，搬入兒子家。
上升：孩子提到地下室的秘密，引發(fā)好奇。
高潮：地下室布置與過去的房間一模一樣，充滿回憶。
下降：奶奶感動，感受到家人對她的愛與關(guān)懷。
結(jié)局：奶奶重新燃起對生活的熱愛，與家人更加親密。
3. 推薦語料
描寫類別 英文例句 高級替換詞
動作描寫 - She pushed the door open cautiously, her heart pounding in anticipation.
- Tears welled up in her eyes as she stepped inside.
- Her trembling hands traced the familiar patterns on the quilt. - cautiously → gingerly
- stepped → ventured
- trembling → quivering
心理描寫 - Her heart ached at the sight of the room, but it was a comforting ache.
- Memories flooded back like an unstoppable tide.
- She felt a warm glow of gratitude spread through her chest. - ached → throbbed
- flooded → surged
- glow → radiance
環(huán)境描寫 - The room smelled faintly of lavender, a scent that transported her back in time.
- The soft lighting cast a golden hue over the room.
- The carefully arranged furniture felt like a warm embrace. - smelled faintly → carried a whiff
- cast → bathed
- carefully → meticulously
4. 高中語法與搭配分析
語法現(xiàn)象 原文例句 搭配與語料
時態(tài)變化 "Living with them was an adjustment." - be an adjustment
- present continuous for ongoing actions
復(fù)合句使用 "They insisted that they wanted to help me through this difficult time." - insist that + 從句
- want to help + 賓語
詞匯積累 - "unbearable blank" = intolerable void - blank (n.) = gap, void
- unbearable (adj.) = intolerable, insufferable
語料例句 - Her husband’s passing left an unbearable void in her life. - The soft lighting bathed the room in a nostalgic glow.
5. Possible Versions
中心概括：
通過家人的溫暖舉動，祖母重新找回記憶與家的歸屬感，傳遞愛與感恩的力量。
I paused, glancing down at him unbelievably. Eric said he would show it to me. Before I could stop him, he jumped off the couch and grabbed my hand, tugging me toward the basement door(非謂語動詞做動作串). I called that we were not supposed to be going down here(賓從). “There it is!” Eric exclaimed, pointing toward a door hidden behind a large sheet of plastic(非謂語動詞做伴隨動作). I was curious and reached for the door handle. The door swung open with a soft creak, revealing a room(非謂語動詞做伴隨動作) that took my breath away(定從).
The room was a perfect copy of my own bedroom back home. The familiar wallpaper and the same pattern of the bed were identical. But what truly made my heart sing(主從) was the photograph: Richard and I on our wedding day, smiling and yong, full of life(非謂語動詞，adj補(bǔ)語). I stepped backward, tears streaming down my face(獨(dú)立主格) as a thousand memories flooded back(狀從). James and Natalie rushed down the staris, followed by John. James explained softly that they wanted to surprise me and didn’t want me to go back to my old house(賓從). They wanted me to have a space here that felt like home(定從). I hugged them and said in tears that I wanted them(賓從), too.
Version 1:
Paragraph 1: I paused, glancing down at him unbelievably(非謂語動詞做伴隨動作). “What do you mean ” I asked with a curious smile. The boys exchanged mischievous(adj.淘氣的 naughty ) looks before leading me toward the forbidden basement. As I hesitated(狀從), John tugged my hand and whispered, “You’ll love it, Grandma!” My heart raced as the door creaked open(狀從).
Paragraph 2: The room was a perfect copy of my own bedroom back home. Familiar photos lined the walls, and my favorite quilt was spread neatly on the bed. Tears filled my eyes as I turned to James(狀從), who stood at the door(定從). “We thought it might help(賓從),” he said softly. My heart swelled with gratitude, and for the first time in months, I felt whole again.
亮點(diǎn)詞匯短語：mischievous looks, creaked open, swelled with gratitude
升級替換詞：tears filled → welled up; felt whole → felt complete
Version 2:
Paragraph 1: I paused, glancing down at him unbelievably(非謂語動詞做伴隨動作) “Really What makes you say that ” I asked, trying to mask my curiosity(非謂語動詞做伴隨動作). Eric grinned and whispered, “There’s a big surprise!” Unable to resist their excitement(adj做主語補(bǔ)語), I allowed the boys to lead me to the basement. The moment we stepped inside(狀從), the dim light flickered on, revealing(非謂語動詞做伴隨動作) a space that looked astonishingly familiar(定從).
Paragraph 2: The room was a perfect copy of my own bedroom back home, from the floral curtains to the antique clock on the dresser. The faint scent of lavender hung in the air, just as it had for years in my old room(狀從). Overwhelmed by emotions(非謂語動詞做原因狀語), I turned to James, who was standing behind me with a soft smile(定從). “We wanted to bring your memories closer to you,” he said. Tears welled up in my eyes as I realized how much love and effort they had poured into this gesture(狀從含賓從含定從).
亮點(diǎn)分析
情緒描寫：mask my curiosity, overwhelmed by emotions, tears welled up
動作描寫：grinned, whispered, flickered on
環(huán)境描寫：dim light, floral curtains, faint scent of lavender
Version 3
Paragraph 1: I paused, glancing down at him unbelievably(非謂語動詞做伴隨動作)“Are you sure about that ” I asked, feigning(vt.假裝) suspicion(非謂語動詞做伴隨動作). The boys nodded eagerly, their small hands tugging at mine(獨(dú)立主格). “Come and see!” they chimed in(加入，配合，一致) unison(n.合奏，合唱). Despite James’ earlier warning, their enthusiasm was infectious, and I found myself descending the stairs with them. The door opened, and I froze in surprise.
Paragraph 2: The basement had been transformed into a replica of my old bedroom. Familiar books lined the shelves, and my favorite armchair sat invitingly in the corner. A warm glow from the lamp lit up the room, casting shadows that felt like old friends(非謂語動詞做伴隨動作). “We thought this might help you feel at home,” James said from behind me. My voice caught in my throat as I murmured(狀從), “It’s perfect.” Love and gratitude filled my heart as I embraced my boys(狀從), thankful for a family that understood me so deeply(定從).
亮點(diǎn)分析
情緒描寫：infectious enthusiasm, froze in surprise, love and gratitude filled my heart
動作描寫：feigning suspicion, tugging, descending
環(huán)境描寫：replica of my old bedroom, warm glow, shadows that felt like old friends
亮點(diǎn)詞匯短語總結(jié)
亮點(diǎn)詞匯/短語 含義 同義詞/替換詞 例句
mask my curiosity 掩飾自己的好奇 hide my curiosity She tried to mask her curiosity but couldn’t hide her smile.
tears welled up 淚水涌上眼眶 tears filled, eyes moistened Tears welled up as she read the heartfelt letter.
infectious enthusiasm 感染人的熱情 contagious excitement The children’s infectious enthusiasm made her laugh.
warm glow 溫暖的光芒 gentle light, soft illumination The warm glow of the fireplace lit up the cozy room.
faint scent 淡淡的香氣 subtle fragrance The faint scent of jasmine filled the evening air.
亮點(diǎn)語法與語料
語法現(xiàn)象 原文例句 解析與拓展
情態(tài)動詞用于推測 "Are you sure about that " 用于表達(dá)懷疑或確認(rèn)，常用于續(xù)寫中傳遞對未來情節(jié)發(fā)展的期待或懸念。
復(fù)合句 "We thought this might help you feel at home." 分析：主句+賓語從句，用于解釋情節(jié)和情感的起因。
高分詞匯 "Overwhelmed by emotions" overwhelmed 替換 moved，更形象地表達(dá)情感的強(qiáng)烈程度。
語料例句 - The warm glow of the room brought back cherished memories. 可作為續(xù)寫中環(huán)境描寫和情感升華的高分語句模板。
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Winter Vacation Photography Contest
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Winter Vacation Photography Contest
Are you ready to share your colorful winter vacation moments
Our school English newspaper invites all students to participate in the Winter Vacation Photography Contest. To be eligible, you must be a current student and submit your original and best photos about your unique experiences or beautiful scenery in your holiday. The winner will get prizes, including a certificate and an album of this photo contest.
Entries should be sent via email to englishnewspaper@ourschool.edu by February 28th,2025. Don’t miss the chance to show your talents and win fabulous prizes!
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