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Unit1 Where did you go on vacation
寫作題目
假設你的名字叫小明。你很喜歡旅游，你和家人去年夏天去了長城。請以“The visit to the Great Wall” 為題，
寫一篇不少于80詞的英語短文。
時態：一般過去式 人稱：第一和第二人稱復數
段落布局 要點 目標短語 句子
第一段：開篇點題，介紹人物和旅游的時間和地點 1.我的名字叫小明，我非常喜歡旅行 like doing sth
2.去年夏天，我和我的家人參觀了長城 go to sp
第二段：介紹旅游
地點，時間，名勝
古跡和有樂趣的事 3.那天的天氣非常好 be fine
4.我們一大早就坐公交車去了 go there by bus
5.當我們到達長城的時候，有很多的游客 there were...
6.當我和我的家人去長城時，我們看到了
美麗的風景 go onto
7.我們都驚訝了這么美麗的風景 be amazed by
8.我們拍了很多的照片 take photos
第三段：描述旅行
后的感受 9.我們玩的很開心 have a good time
10.時間過得很快，很快我們就必須回來了 have to /go back
11.旅行后我很累，但我真的很喜歡參觀
長城 be tired
enjoy doing sth
范文中小學教育資源及組卷應用平臺
Unit1 Where did you go on vacation
寫作題目
假設你的名字叫小明。你很喜歡旅游，你和家人去年夏天去了長城。請以“The visit to the Great Wall” 為題，
寫一篇不少于80詞的英語短文。
時態：一般過去式 人稱：第一和第二人稱復數
段落布局 要點 目標短語 句子
第一段：開篇點題，介紹人物和旅游的時間和地點 1.我的名字叫小明，我非常喜歡旅行 like doing sth My name is Xiaoming and I like traveling
very much
2.去年夏天，我和我的家人參觀了長城 go to sp Last summar, I went to the Great Wall with
my family.
第二段：介紹旅游
地點，時間，名勝
古跡和有樂趣的事 3.那天的天氣非常好 be fine It was fine that day
4.我們一大早就坐公交車去了 go there by bus We went there by bus early in the morning.
5.當我們到達長城的時候，有很多的游客 there were... When we got there, there were many other visitors there
6.當我和我的家人去長城時，我們看到了
美麗的風景 go onto When my family and I went onto the Great
Wall, we saw beautiful scenery(風景).
7.我們都驚訝了這么美麗的風景 be amazed by We all were amazed by how beautiful it was.
8.我們拍了很多的照片 take photos We took quite a few photos there.
第三段：描述旅行
后的感受 9.我們玩的很開心 have a good time We had a good time there.
10.時間過得很快，很快我們就必須回來了 have to /go back The time flew by, and soon we had to go back.
11.旅行后我很累，但我真的很喜歡參觀
長城 be tired
enjoy doing sth I was tired after traveling, but I really
enjoyed visiting the Great Wall!
范文
My name is Xiaoming and I like traveling very much.Last summar, I went to the Great Wall with my family.
It was fine that day.We went there by bus early in the morning.When we got there, there were many other visitors there.When my family and I went onto the Great Wall, we saw beautiful scenery(風景).We all were amazed by how beautiful it was.We took quite a few photos there.
We had a good time there.The time flew by, and soon we had to go back. I was tired after traveling, but I really enjoyed visiting the Great Wall!

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