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八省聯考讀續兇悍外表機車黨的鐵漢柔情
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2025年1月普通高等學校招生全國統一考試適應性測試英語試題（八省聯考）
閱讀下面材料，根據其內容和所給段落開頭語續寫兩段，使之構成一篇完整的短文。
I was in Philadelphiafor a conference when I saw an ad in the hotel. A nearby theater was showing a documentary (紀錄片) about several local animal shelters that were helping to save abandoned dogs across the country. I love animals, and I felt an urge to go to this fundraising event. However, none of my co-workers would go with me, and I was worried about walking on the street alone at night.
I resigned myself to spending the evening in my hotel room, but as soon as I got back to my room I felt restless and bored. The theater where the event was taking place was only about five blocks from the hotel, and the area around the hotel didn’t seem particularly dangerous. So, I decided to brave it. I gathered up my wallet and room key and set off.
It was already getting dark and the streets were nearly deserted. I managed to find the street the theater was on, but when I turned the corner, I stopped in shock. In front of the theater were a group of bikers—very big, tough-looking bikers.
I’ve known lots of motorcycle enthusiasts and most are nice people. However, in this case, I was a woman all alone, in a strange neighborhood, at night, and there were twenty or so very large men—all wearing insignia (徽章) that indicated they were in some sort of club—standing before me. Warning bells began to sound in my head, and my heart was pounding. Was I at the right theater Had I misread the date of the event
A sign outside the theater told me that I was in the right place on the right evening. Nevertheless, I wondered if I should rush back to my hotel instead of walking through that crowd of bikers. I finally decided that I would be safer inside the theater. Hopefully, the bikers would have gone away by the time the film was over.
注意：
（1）續寫詞數應為150個左右；
（2）請按如下格式在答題卡的相應位置作答。
Para. 1 I hurried into the theater, only to find there were even more bikers inside.
Para. 2 When the film began, I realized that the bikers were an animal rescue group.
語篇分析
據分析，2025八省聯考卷讀后續寫文本難度等級為標準，大致對應美國七到八年級學生閱讀水平，三音節以上的復雜單詞，2024新課標卷讀后續寫中有19個，而2025八省聯考該部分則多達32個！材料出現選修或課標以外詞匯，諸如：
conference n. 會議
animal shelter 動物 收容所
abandon 遺棄
urge n. 強烈欲望
fundraising event 募捐活動
resign oneself to 只好接受
restless adj. 坐立不安的
brave v. 勇敢面對
deserted adj. 荒涼的
nevertheless adv. 然而
故事梗概
一位熱愛動物的女士，被募捐活動廣告吸引，天黑黑孤身一人從賓館出發，穿過幾條無人街，電影院前撞見一群身材魁梧、佩戴徽章的摩托車手，這時主人公開始擔心自己的安全……
人物分析
“我”:原文的敘述者，一個普通人，因愛動物而勇敢面對內心恐懼，最終經歷了一次從誤解到感悟的轉變。
摩托車騎士:外表“粗獷”，但實際上是富有愛心的動物救助者，他們的反差成為推動故事發展的關鍵。
情節分析
開端：敘述者計劃參加動物救助紀錄片放映，卻因夜晚街道的寂靜與騎士的外表而感到恐懼。
發展：敘述者鼓起勇氣進入劇院，發現更多的騎士也在場。
高潮：紀錄片揭示騎士是動物救助者，敘述者從恐懼到敬佩的情緒轉變。
結局：敘述者反思自身的刻板印象，感悟到善良可能隱藏在意想不到的人群中。
情緒發展
開端情緒：猶豫、害怕——因陌生環境與騎士的外表而充滿警惕。
發展情緒：驚訝、好奇——逐漸發現騎士的真正身份與用意。
高潮情緒：敬佩、感動——通過紀錄片感受到騎士的善意與奉獻。
結局情緒：平靜、反思——從誤解到自我成長，對人性和外表有了新的認知。
主題分析
不要以貌取人：外表并不決定一個人的品質，真正的善良往往藏在不經意之中。
續寫方向以及難點
1.第一段描寫進入劇場看到的畫面以及波動的心情
與所給句銜接，描寫作者進入劇場看到更多bikers時的心情，同時應適當推動情節發展（不能整段就在描述恐懼的心情）：尋找座位，觀察環境，以及bikers，心中疑惑漸增。最后與第二段銜接，可以是等待電影開場或者燈光變暗，電影即將開始。
1. 我看到更多騎手，愈發恐懼；
2. 尋找座位，觀察周圍環境；
3. 恐懼和困惑夾雜，我等待電影開場。
2.第一段描寫誤判的心情，紀錄片畫面以及最后的感悟
本段描寫作者知道bikers原來是動物營救組織后的心情，以及觀看documentary，了解到tough-looking bikers背后的故事，到最后作者受到的震撼以及感動，升華此次經歷給自己帶來的影響。
1. 我恍然大悟，心生羞愧；（下降）
2. 影片徐徐展開，我驚嘆不已；（下降）
3. 收獲感動以及人生教訓。（結局）
伏筆 foreshadowing
文中提到“there were twenty or so very large men–all wearing insignia (徽章) that indicated they were in some sort of club”，以及“warning bells began to sound in my head, my heart was pounding等描寫，都為后文揭示這些騎手的真實身份埋下伏筆，讓讀者也跟著“我”一起好奇他們到底是怎樣的群體, 同時讓tough-looking bikers 和warm-hearted rescue volunteers形成強烈的反差。
Possible Version
I hurried into the theater, only to find there were even more bikers inside. I felt like escaping from a hell and then found myself in another. My unease grew as I squeezed past their leather jackets and intimidating tattoos(可怕的紋身), searching for an empty seat. However, my nervousness began to waver(動搖) as I overheard snippets(零星的話) of their conversations—words like “rescue,” “fostering,” and “adoption” floated to my ears. Confused, I glanced at their jackets again and noticed paw prints and word like“Rescue”. My previous fear slowly waned(減弱) and turned into keen curiosity. Who were these intimidating men Why were they here Those questions kept whirling in my mind. Though still nervous, I tried to calm my nerves as the theatre lights dimmed. (109words)
When the film began, I realized that the bikers were an animal rescue group. Revealing before my eyes were scene after scene where these tough-looking bikers navigated dangerous areas to save stray(流離失所的) animals, bringing them to shelters, and even nursed them back to health in their own homes. Gone was my initial fear, replaced by overwhelming admiration and shame.When the lights came back on,I finally got a clear look at the insignia on their jackets——a simple paw print with the words"Ride for Rescue"boldly displayed underneath. Walking out of the theater, I was filled with awe and guilt mingled. I not only witnessed the beauty of compassion but also learned to see beyond stereotypes—a lesson I would carry with me for a lifetime.(109words)
一些“不要以貌取人”的語料積累
主題句
1. "Don't judge a book by its cover, as those who seem intimidating might have a kind heart."
不要以貌取人，那些看似令人生畏的人或許有著善良的心。
2. "Appearances can be deceiving, and unexpected kindness may come from the most unlikely people."
外表可能具有欺騙性，意想不到的善意或許來自最不可能的人。
3. "One should never make assumptions based on looks alone, for there's often more than meets the eye."
人們絕不應該僅憑外表就妄下論斷，因為往往有很多內在的東西是看不到的。
4. "Underneath a tough exterior could lie a warm and caring soul, just as those bikers did."
在強硬的外表之下可能藏著一顆溫暖且有愛心的靈魂，就像那些騎手一樣。
5. The most compassionate hearts can sometimes beat beneath the toughest exteriors.（最有愛心的心靈有時隱藏在最堅硬的外表下。）

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