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Unit 2 No Rules, No Order
第五課時（寫作課）
Section B (2a—2b）
本課學習目標
本節課結束時，學生能夠：
1. 能夠基于寫作目的和要求，在教師的指導下有效開展寫作準備，梳理給予Eric建議的結構，列出建議信內容要點；
2. 能夠將本單元所學的詞匯、目標結構、句型以及各類功能表達遷移應用到自己的寫作之中；
3. 通過自評和互評，不斷改進自己的作品，使之完善，改進初稿的結構、內容和語言。
按要求寫出正確的單詞、詞組或句子。
也 (副詞) __________ 2. 訓練 (動詞) ___________
3. 工作日 (名詞) __________ 4. 糟糕的(形容詞) __________
5. 變成(動詞) __________ 6. 較好的 (形容詞) __________
7. 人（名詞）__________ 8. 創建（動詞）___________
9. 我們需要專注于學習。 ___________________________
10. 你可以在周末和朋友閑逛。 _______________________
11. 規則幫助使世界更好。___________________
12. 我也在課上禁止使用手機。
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either
practise
weekday
awful
become
better
person
build
We need to focus on learning.
You can hang out with friends at weekends
Rules can help to make the world better.
I mustn’t use my phone in class either.
上節要點回顧
Work in two and share your ideas.
do my homework
.......
family rules
watch TV
hang out
wash dishes
I can't...
I must...
I have to...
My mom says, “Don't....”
Brainstorm
Work in two and share your ideas.
arrive late
school rules
run in the hallways
fight
listen to music
I can't...
I must...
I have to...
My teacher says, “Don't....”
Brainstorm
Writing task（寫作任務）
Eric在生活中遇到了許多困擾，他在家里和學校都需要遵守許多規則，這讓他感到十分壓抑和無趣。現在，請你以“Dr Know”的身份，給埃里克寫一封回信，給予他一些實用的建議，幫助他更好地應對生活中的這些挑戰。
寫作要點：
1. 理解Eric的困擾，并給予建議；
2. 強調積極態度的重要性并鼓勵Eric。
注意事項：
1. 文中不得出現真實人名、校名等信息。
2. 語言通順，意思連貫，條理清楚，書寫規范。可以適當發揮。
字數要求：約80詞左右。
Complete the letter to Dr Know using can, have to/must, or can’t / mustn’t.
Dear Dr Know,
Can you help me I_________ follow too many rules at home and at school. I_____________ clean my room every day, and I ____________ let my desk get untidy. At school,
I _____________ wear my own clothes. I ______ wear my favourite cap either. After school, I_______ watch TV,
mustn’t/can’t
must / have to
mustn’t / can’t
have to
can’t
can
2a
Complete the letter to Dr Know using can, have to/must, or can’t/mustn’t.
but only after I finish my homework, walk the dog, and do lots of other things!
I can’t even relax at weekends, because I _____________ practise the violin every day! I never have fun. What ______
I do
Yours,
Eric
must / have to
can
2a
Choose three important rules from 2a. Discuss the questions with a partner.
·Why is each rule important
·What is your advice for each rule
2b
Choose three important rules from 2a. Discuss the questions with a partner.
Rule: I must clean my room every day.
Why is this rule important
Cleaning one's room every day is important for keeping a healthy and nice living environment. It helps make you happy.
What is my advice for this rule
You could play music while cleaning. Besides, Eric could share housework with his family members.
2b
Choose three important rules from 2a. Discuss the questions with a partner.
Rule: I can't wear my own clothes at school.
Why is this rule important
It helps us to build school spirit and gives us less fashion pressure.
What is my advice for this rule
He could join school clubs or activities that allow him to show his personality.
2b
Choose three important rules from 2a. Discuss the questions with a partner.
Rule: I have to practise the violin every day, even at weekends.
Why is this rule important
It helps us to get better at playing and builds discipline..
What is my advice for this rule
Practice with a friend, set goals, or play favorite pieces as a reward.
2b
Write a reply to Eric as Dr Know. Give him some advice.
以百事通博士的名義給埃里克寫一封回信。給他一些建議吧。
Dear Eric,
I know it can be diffcult to follow many rules. But rules can be good for us…
2c
Dear Eric,
I know it can be difficult to follow many rules. But rules can be good for us because they help us live in a structured and orderly way. Let's look at your situation and see if we can find a balance.
Firstly, A clean and tidy room can make you feel more relaxed and focused. My advice is to set aside a specific time each day to tidy up your desk, and perhaps use organizers or containers to keep things in place.
Regarding the school uniform, I know it can feel restrictive not to be able to wear your own clothes. But uniforms help create a sense of equality and belonging among students.
Understanding
The first advice
The second advice
2c
Write a reply to Eric as Dr Know. Give him some advice.
As for not being able to watch TV after school until you finish your other tasks, this rule is actually quite beneficial. My suggestion is to set aside a specific time each day for leisure activities, like watching TV or playing games, after you have completed your tasks.
Practicing the violin every day is a great way to develop your musical skills and discipline. But I understand that it can sometimes feel like a chore. My advice is to find ways to make practicing fun, such as setting small goals for yourself, playing duets with a friend.
In the end, try to find the joy in the things you do, even if they are rules or responsibilities. Life is too short to be unhappy, and there's always a way to make things better
Take care,
Dr. Know
The third advice
The fourth advice
Encouragement
2c
Write a reply to Eric as Dr Know. Give him some advice.
Person（人稱）
02
03
04
05
06
07
01
Tense(時態）
Initial(首字母）
Spelling(拼寫）
Complete（完整性）
Punctuation（標點符號）
Skills
Discuss in groups:
Present tense
I
Capital letter
correct
Complete
Use correctly
Handwriting（書寫）
Present tense
Standard(規范）
3c
Structure
Write a reply to Eric as Dr Know. Give him some advice.
如何給予他人建議
結尾: 升華主題，鼓勵他人
There’re some ways to solve problems.
開頭: 引出話題
I understand how you feel—××.
建議二: I think it’s better to do sth...
中間: 詳細介紹
段落布局
建議三: You could...
建議四: It’s important to do...
建議一: It helps you...
Writing task（寫作任務）
Eric在生活中遇到了許多困擾，他在家里和學校都需要遵守許多規則，這讓他感到十分壓抑和無趣。現在，請你以“Dr Know”的身份，給埃里克寫一封回信，給予他一些實用的建議，幫助他更好地應對生活中的這些挑戰。
寫作要點：
1. 理解Eric的困擾，并給予建議；
2. 強調積極態度的重要性并鼓勵Eric。
注意事項：
1. 文中不得出現真實人名、校名等信息。
2. 語言通順，意思連貫，條理清楚，書寫規范。可以適當發揮。
字數要求：約80詞左右。
Self-check and peer-check.
Let’s proofread
check
Check for mistakes:
spelling
grammar
polish
□你分段了嗎？
□你的每一段都有主旨嗎？
□你包含介紹的基本信息了嗎？
□ 你有拼寫錯誤嗎？
□ 你有語法錯誤嗎？
□ 你使用連詞and了嗎？
Let’s evaluate
Let’s edit
評分原則
本題總分15分，按各檔次給分。評分時先根據文章的內容、語言質量初步確定檔次，然后以檔次的要求來衡量，確定或調整檔次，最后給分；
評分時應考慮：內容要點是否完整；時態，語態及人稱是否正確；詞匯和句式的多樣性以及語言的準確性；上下文的連貫性；
如書寫較差，影響表達，應視其影響程度，降低一到兩個檔次；英美兩種拼法及詞匯用法都可接受；
內容要點可用不同方式表達，應緊扣主題，可適當發揮。
Exchange and correct（交換批改）
Revise（修改）
Show yourself
Introduce
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Dear Eric,
I know it can be difficult to follow many rules. But rules can be good for us because they help us live in a structured and orderly way. Let's look at your situation and see if we can find a balance.
Firstly, A clean and tidy room can make you feel more relaxed and focused. My advice is to set aside a specific time each day to tidy up your desk, and perhaps use organizers or containers to keep things in place.Regarding the school uniform, I know it can feel restrictive not to be able to wear your own clothes. But uniforms help create a sense of equality and belonging among students.
2c
Write a reply to Eric as Dr Know. Give him some advice.
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As for not being able to watch TV after school until you finish your other tasks, this rule is actually quite beneficial. My suggestion is to set aside a specific time each day for leisure activities.
Practicing the violin every day is a great way to develop your musical skills and discipline. My advice is to find ways to make practicing fun, such as setting small goals for yourself, playing duets with a friend.
In the end, try to find the joy in the things you do, even if they are rules or responsibilities. Life is too short to be unhappy, and there's always a way to make things better
Take care,
Dr. Know
2c
Write a reply to Eric as Dr Know. Give him some advice.
Summary
Writing
Learn how to write passages about rules
Homework
假如你是Lisa，你在美國的好朋友Jenny給你發了郵件向你抱怨自己家的家規。請你給她回信說明自家也有一些家規（根據提示），并表達自己的看法、給出建議。
提示：Must (get up early、go to bed early、practise playing the piano every day)
Can’t (play computer games、watch TV)
要求：語句通順、語意連貫，詞數不少于80。
Dear Jenny,
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