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(共18張PPT)
Unit 3 The Internet
Reading for Writing
Write a blog post
What is a blog post
A blog post is an entry (article) that you write on a blog. It can include content in the form of text, photos, infographics (信息圖), or videos.
The blog part
The comment part
1. What is it
2. How many parts dose it have
A blog post
Two parts
navigation bar導航條
commet area
title
introduction
body
ending
Online Safety Tips 網絡安全提示
Make sure your Internet connection is safe. 確保網絡連接是安全的。
Be careful what you download/post. 小心你下載/發布的內容。
Don't post information concerning your personal privacy.
不要發布有關你個人隱私的信息。
You had better not believe everything you read, some of which is false/fake.
你最好不要相信你看到的所有東西,其中有些是假的。
Don't click on links that you are not familiar with. 不要單擊您不熟悉的鏈接。
Use strong/difficult passwords. 使用加強密碼。
Attachment
附件
What is a blog post
A blog post is an article that you write on a blog. It can include content in the form of text, photos, infographics (信息圖), or videos.
黃金法則
點擊（用鼠標）
保護某人的隱私
泄露
不是...的借口
...的目標/對象
惹事
對準...
a. 粗魯的，無禮的，粗糙的，原始的
近義詞 impolite a. 無禮的
假名字
false a.假的，錯誤的
對某人刻薄
mean a.（人或其行為）不善良的，刻薄的
近義詞：specific a. 具體的，特定的，特有的
a. 尷尬的,難堪的
教會我一兩件事/略知一二
n. rudeness 無禮，粗蠻
privacy n. 隱私，私密
private adj.私人的；秘密的
Introduction
background information, the topic of the post
Body
Tell the readers what they should do or keep in mind.
Ending
End by asking the readers to write comments.
Comments
online safety
structure
Pre-writing
Read paragraph 1 and find out the main idea of the blog post
2
Today I thought I'd blog about a question that has been asked many times—how do you stay safe online and avoid bad experiences on the Internet I'm not an expert, but many years as a blogger have taught me a thing or two.
Introduction Tick what the writer tells the reader in Paragragh1.
definition of online safety the writer’s knowledge
background information the topic of the post
Try to write a title for the blog post.
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Online Safety
√
√
Pre-writing
Read paragraph 2 and find out 3 guidelines the author provided
2
Body Tell the reader what they should do or keep in mind.
dos don'ts



leave the site immediately
protect your privacy
be polite
post comments/click on anything
give out your address/
phone number
How are the guidelines connected
First of all, To begin with, In the first place;
Besides, in addition, additionally, moreover, furthermore, what's more, on top of that;
Lastly, Most importantly, last but not the least;
Q1. What is the main function of the blog post
Activity 1: Write a title for it.
Online Safety/How to Stay Safe Online
Q2. What guidelines does the author provide for staying safe online
Linking words
first of all, to begin with firstly, first, in the first place, on top of the list, for a start,
besides, in addition, additionally, moreover, what's more, furthermore
lastly, finally, in the end, consequently, last but not least
Q3 What could you write to attract interest online
奪人眼球開頭句
1.There is no denying that the Internet has brought about great convenience to our life.
毋庸置疑網絡給我們的生活帶來了很大的便利。
2.However,the network also has its disadvantages/drawbacks.
然而，網絡也有它的缺點。
3.It is a phenomenon that our personal information is let out by online shopping, such as more disturbance calls or accounts stolen.
由于網上購物而導致個人信息泄露是一種現象，比如更多的騷擾電話或賬戶被盜。
4. Here are some useful tips as follows.
如下是一些實用技巧。
Q3 What could you write to attract interest online
■ 亮點出彩篇中句
1. Don't post information concerning your personal secret.
不要發布有關你個人秘密的信息。
2. You had better not believe everything you read, some of which is false.
你最好不要相信你看到的所有東西，其中有些是假的。
3. Don't click on the links where there is a large amount of welfare/lure.
不要點擊有大量福利/誘餌的鏈接。
4. Be polite online if you don't want to be targets of ill persons.
如果你不想成為壞人的目標，要文明使用網絡。
5. Someone online will take advantage of your information and attack your accounts.
網上有人會利用你的信息攻擊你的賬戶。
6. The more attractive it is, the more dangerous it is.
越吸引人的東西就越危險。
[書面表達]
假定你是李華，請你針對目前由于網上購物而導致個人信息泄露，銀行卡里的錢被盜等現象，在你的博客上寫一篇帖子，提醒大家注意網絡安全。內容要點如下：
1．使用熟悉的網絡；
2．使用加強密碼；
3．不要使用公共電腦。
注意：詞數80左右。
參考詞匯：網絡環境the Internet environment
信用卡 credit card
_________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
第一步：認真審題，謀篇布局
明確體材話題:
Title
確定時態人稱:
布局文章架構:
博客，網絡安全
一般現在時，第一人稱
首段：說明網上購物帶來的安全隱患
中段：如何在網上安全購物
尾段：希望大家多加注意
列出核心要點:
1.針對現象說明網上購物的安全隱患
2.介紹使用網絡的一些技巧
3.呼吁大家“防患于未然”，讓網絡更好的服務我們
【第二步：斟詞酌句，靚化表達】
1.今天，我將寫一篇由網上購物帶來的安全問題的博客。(分詞作定語)
Today, I willblog about the security problems ________________________
2.毋庸置疑，網上購物帶來了便利，但是隨之而來的是弊端。
______________________________________along with disadvantages.
3.如下是一些實用技巧。
Here are ________________as follows.
4.不要輕易使用陌生網站，不管有什么樣的吸引力。
Don't use unfamiliar websites___________________________
5.使用加強密碼是個好辦法，這種密碼不好破解。
It is a good idea to use strong passwords, _____________________
6.最好不要使用公共電腦上網買東西。用這種方式，個人信息容易被他人利用。
___________________________________in which way personal information is easily taken advantage of by others.
7.正如諺語所說的“防患于未然。”
________________________“Better safe than sorry."
8.希望網絡能夠更好且更安全地服務于我們。
Hope the network can serve us ________________________
【范文展示】
Today,I will blog about the security problems bought about by online shopping.There is no denying that online shopping brings us convenience along with disadvantages.Here are some useful tips as follows.
In the first place, don't use unfamiliar websites no matter what attraction there is. Additionally, it is a good idea to use strong passwords, which are hard to crack. Lastly, we had better not use public computers to shop online, in which way personal information is easily taken advantage of by others.
Just as the saying goes, "Better safe than sorry." Hope the network can serve us better and more safely.

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