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讀后續(xù)寫專題
（親情類）
核心素養(yǎng)目標(biāo)
【語(yǔ)言能力】write the outline of 2 paragraphs by their own.
【學(xué)習(xí)能力】 learn reading and writing skills;
【文化意識(shí)】overcome writing difficulties,and enhance learning interest.
【思維品質(zhì)】writing things in a logical way.
By the end of this lesson,
students are able to
Lead in(Review)
1.What is continuation writing ？
讀 后 續(xù) 寫
2.What are the elements of a story？
時(shí)間 when
地點(diǎn) where
人物 who
事件的起因 why
事件的經(jīng)過(guò) what
事件的結(jié)果 how
六要素(5W1H)
How to read
文章很長(zhǎng)？？？ 主題不藏！！！
單詞不會(huì)？？？ 找你會(huì)的！！！
四大主題
親情類
助人類
成長(zhǎng)類
脫困類
Take A MOTHER’S DAY SURPRISE for Example
1. 先看續(xù)寫給出的兩句話，確定大概主題方向。
Take A MOTHER’S DAY SURPRISE for Example
A MOTHER’S DAY SURPRISE
The twins were filled with excitement as they thought of the surprise they were planning for Mother’s Day. How pleased and proud Mother would be when they brought her breakfast in bed. They planned to make French toast and chicken porridge. They had watched their mother in the kitchen. There was nothing to it. Jenna and Jeff knew exactly what to do.
2. 尋找更多認(rèn)識(shí)的單詞，理解故事走向
Take A MOTHER’S DAY SURPRISE for Example
The big day came at last. The alarm rang at 6 am. The pair went down the stairs quietly to the kitchen. They decided to boil the porridge first. They put some rice into a pot of water and left it to boil while they made the French toast. Jeff broke two eggs into a plate and added in some milk. Jenna found the bread and put two slices into the egg mixture. Next, Jeff turned on the second stove burner to heat up the frying pan.
Take A MOTHER’S DAY SURPRISE for Example
Everything was going smoothly until Jeff started frying the bread. The pan was too hot and the bread turned black within seconds. Jenna threw the burnt piece into the sink and put in the other slice of bread. This time, she turned down the fire so it cooked nicely.
Take A MOTHER’S DAY SURPRISE for Example
Then Jeff noticed steam shooting out of the pot and the lid starting to shake. The next minute, the porridge boiled over and put out the fire. Jenna panicked. Thankfully, Jeff stayed calm and turned off the gas quickly. But the stove was a mess now. Jenna told Jeff to clean it up so they could continue to cook the rest of the porridge. But Jeff’s hand touched the hot burner and he gave a cry of pain. Jenna made him put his hand in cold water. Then she caught the smell of burning. Oh dear! The piece of bread in the pan had turned black as well.
Beginning:
Conflict:
solution :
Ending
Take A MOTHER’S DAY SURPRISE for Example
經(jīng)過(guò)：一開始在平穩(wěn)進(jìn)行，后來(lái)發(fā)生意外（矛盾出現(xiàn)）
起因：雙胞胎想在母親節(jié)為媽媽準(zhǔn)備驚喜--做早飯
How to write ----“十句五定”
什么是“十句五定”？
十句：續(xù)寫的兩段每一段都寫五句話，加起來(lái)就是十句。
五定：這十句話中，有五句是可以確定的。
每句話里可以寫什么？
動(dòng)作描寫，情緒描寫，對(duì)話
第一段：As the twins looked around them in disappointment, their father appeared.當(dāng)雙胞胎失望地環(huán)顧四周時(shí)，他們的父親出現(xiàn)了。S1.___________________________
S2._____________________________
S3._____________________________
S4.________________________________
S5._________________________________
第二段：The twins carried the breakfast upstairs and woke their mother up.雙胞胎把早餐端上樓，叫醒了他們的媽媽。
（1）定第一句：順著開頭的話去寫----父親會(huì)有什么反應(yīng)？（情緒/心理描寫--震驚）
（2）定第二句：根據(jù)第二段首句確定--他們成功地做好了早餐
第二步完成S5；根據(jù)第二段首句信息，猜測(cè)第一段結(jié)局--做好早餐，然后倒推S234句
由S5，可得 S2,3,4 可能包含在父親的幫助下，成功處理了意外（利用角色之間的對(duì)話、反應(yīng)）
如何編故事？----“十句五定”
第二段：The twins carried the breakfast upstairs and woke their mother up.雙胞胎把早餐端上樓，叫醒了他們的媽媽。
S6.___________________________
S7._____________________________
S8._____________________________
S9.________________________________
S10._________________________________
（3）定第三句，順著本段開頭句寫--媽媽看到后的反應(yīng)：震驚？疑惑？
（4）定第四句，倒數(shù)第二句寫結(jié)局--擁抱、開心
猜測(cè)結(jié)局（正能量）抱在一起，感激開心幸福...
（5）定第五句，萬(wàn)能句升華（在那時(shí)，xxx真正地明白了家是成員之間互相理解和享受愛(ài)意的地方。
如何編故事？----“十句五定”
At that time, xxx really knew home was a place where members should understand each other and enjoy love. /
六、如何編故事？----“十句五定”
五句話定完了，
那其余的五句話S2 S3 S4 S7 S8要怎么寫呢？
六、如何編故事？----“十句五定”
1、可以插入角色間的對(duì)話，對(duì)話后的反應(yīng)；
2、可以插入動(dòng)作鏈描寫，或者人物心理/情緒、環(huán)境描寫。
第一段：As the twins looked around them in disappointment, their father appeared.當(dāng)雙胞胎失望地環(huán)顧四周時(shí)，他們的父親出現(xiàn)了。S1.___________________________
S2._____________________________
S3._____________________________
S4.________________________________
S5._________________________________
第二段：The twins carried the breakfast upstairs and woke their mother up.雙胞胎把早餐端上樓，叫醒了他們的媽媽。
（1）定第一句：順著開頭的話去寫----父親會(huì)有什么反應(yīng)？（情緒/心理描寫--震驚）
（2）定第二句：根據(jù)第二段首句確定--他們成功地做好了早餐
第二步完成S5；根據(jù)第二段首句信息，猜測(cè)第一段結(jié)局--做好早餐，然后倒推S234句
由S5，可得 S2,3,4 可能包含在父親的幫助下，成功處理了意外（利用角色之間的對(duì)話、反應(yīng)）
如何編故事？----“十句五定”
父親與雙胞胎之間的對(duì)話（父親詢問(wèn)）
父親與雙胞胎之間的對(duì)話（孩子解釋）
父親得知實(shí)情，幫助
第二段：The twins carried the breakfast upstairs and woke their mother up.雙胞胎把早餐端上樓，叫醒了他們的媽媽。
S6.___________________________
S7._____________________________
S8._____________________________
S9.________________________________
S10._________________________________
（3）定第三句，順著本段開頭句寫--媽媽看到后的反應(yīng)：震驚？疑惑？
（4）定第四句，倒數(shù)第二句寫結(jié)局--擁抱、開心
猜測(cè)結(jié)局（正能量）抱在一起，感激開心幸福...
（5）定第五句，萬(wàn)能句升華（二選一或者都寫）（在那時(shí)，xxx真正地明白了家是成員之間互相理解和享受愛(ài)意的地方。/透過(guò)窗戶的溫暖的金色陽(yáng)光，和xxx家人之間的愛(ài)，溫暖了彼此。）
如何編故事？----“十句五定”
At that time, xxx really knew home was a place where members should understand each other and enjoy love. / The warm golden sunlight, flooding in through the window, together with love between xxx’s family, warmed each other.
插入角色間的對(duì)話+情緒描寫（開心、感動(dòng)...）
Group work:（Finish the practice）
模擬練習(xí)
1. 先看續(xù)寫給出的兩句話，確定大概主題方向。
Para1： Brad hesitantly walked over to her .
___________________________
Para2：After that day, Brad decided not to leave any regrets in his grandma’s life_________________________________
practice
Avoiding people in a small town requires the skills of a spy. So Brad Ryan moved like a ghost, taking precautions to stay far away from the woman who he thought had broken his heart. He had not seen or spoken to Grandma Joy for six years
One day, he received a call from his mom, saying his elder sister had announced her engagement and a wedding date had been set for a Duncan Falls church. Brad's heart sank, because Grandma Joy would be there. But he loved his sister, and there was no way he'd miss the wedding.
2. 尋找更多認(rèn)識(shí)的單詞，確定主題猜測(cè)
模擬練習(xí)
Despite Joy Ryan's first name, there were lots of sufferings and regrets instead of joy in her life. She grew up in a home with no electricity, running water or plumbing. She attended a one-room schoolhouse. And she suffered the loss of two sons. She was a widow（寡婦）for 14 years. And she'd never had the chance to see what she called the great outdoors other than a trip to see relatives in Lousiana.
模擬練習(xí)
"My earliest memory of her is when I was 3," said Brad. "We'd walk to Blue Rock State Park, which is close to her house. She'd help me lift rocks in the creek（小溪）to find crawfish. We'd hold them in our hands and talk about how beautiful it was being in nature. No one in my family thought like that."
模擬練習(xí)（complete the story mountain )
Beginning:
Conflict:
solution :
Ending
有一天，Brad收到媽媽的消息---姐姐要結(jié)婚，要去參加婚禮，祖母也會(huì)去
Brad和祖母發(fā)生矛盾，兩人六年沒(méi)見(jiàn)的(conflict）
模擬練習(xí)
Para1： Brad hesitantly walked over to her. (Brad猶豫地走向了她。)
S1.___________________________
S2._____________________________
S3._____________________________
S4.________________________________
S5._________________________________
Para2：After that day, Brad decided not to leave any regrets in his grandma’s life.(那天之后，Brad決定不在奶奶的生活中留下任何遺憾。)
請(qǐng)你構(gòu)思：
Brad為什么猶豫？
此時(shí)他的心理活動(dòng)是怎樣的？
他會(huì)有什么樣的表現(xiàn)？
他和奶奶相見(jiàn)后會(huì)發(fā)生什么？（動(dòng)作、語(yǔ)言、情緒/心理）
模擬練習(xí)
Para2：After that day, Brad decided not to leave any regrets in his grandma’s life.(那天之后，Brad決定不在奶奶的生活中留下任何遺憾。)
S6.___________________________
S7._____________________________
S8._____________________________
S9.________________________________
S10._________________________________
請(qǐng)你構(gòu)思：
他決定不再留下遺憾，那他會(huì)怎么做？（呼應(yīng)前文）
Brad和Grandma的心理變化？
這篇文章想向我們傳達(dá)什么？
SHOW TIME
如何編故事？----“十句五定”
第一段：Brad hesitantly walked over to her. (Brad猶豫地走向了她。)
① Brad的心跳動(dòng)地很快，手心出汗，內(nèi)心有一個(gè)聲音告訴他要保持冷靜。
②當(dāng)祖母走進(jìn)Brad時(shí)，他能看到祖母眼里有淚水并且她的身體在顫抖。
⑤婚禮開始了，Brad和祖母手牽手坐在一起。
Para1：
Brad’s heart pounding fiercely and his palm sweating, an inner voice told him he should stay calm. As his grandmother approached to him, he could see her eyes was filled with tears and her body trembling. “I’m sorry, grandma. I didn’t stay with you when you needed me the most.” Brad uttered, managing a weak smile. Hearing this, she nodded, tears streaming down her cheeks. She hugged Brad tightly and whispered: “I never thought I could see you again. I miss you very much these years. I often thought that I should give you more patience and understanding.” As the wedding ceremony began, they took seats next to each other, hand in hand.
如何編故事？----“十句五定”
第二段：After that day, Brad decided not to leave any regrets in his grandma’s life.(那天之后，Brad決定不在奶奶的生活中留下任何遺憾。)
① 他每天都去看望祖母，聽(tīng)祖母講這幾年的故事，并且他也和祖母分享他自己這幾年的經(jīng)歷。
④對(duì)于祖母來(lái)說(shuō)，她的生活最終也充滿了JOY。
⑤在那時(shí)，Brad真正地明白了家是成員之間互相理解和享受愛(ài)意的地方。
Para2：
He visited his grandmother everyday, listening to her stories of the past and sharing his own life experiences. They went to the Blue Rock State Park together, taking her on trips to enjoy the most impressive scenery in the world. Brad accompanied her to visit her relatives in Louisiana, compensating her regrets. For Grandma Joy, her life was eventually of joys. At that time, Brad really knew home was a place where members should understand each other and enjoy love.
Homework
Finish the continuation writing .
Thank You!

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