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假設你是明啟中學高三學生李華，你所在的學校即將舉行主題為“親情”的攝影展， 邀請同學們提交一張自己拍攝的照片參展。請你寫一封投稿信件給組委會，內容須包括：(1)描述該照片背后的親情故事;(2)你選擇該照片參展的理由。
注意：1. 詞數80左右;
2. 可以適當增加細節，以使行文連貫。
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寫作提綱
一、開頭段
表明身份與目的：簡單介紹自己是明啟中學高三學生李華，提及學校即將舉辦的 “親情” 攝影展，表明寫信是為了投稿，并簡要引出照片背后的親情故事。
示例：Dear Photo Exhibition Committee, I am Li Hua, a student from Mingqi Middle School. I am writing to submit my photograph for the upcoming "Family Affection" photo exhibition. This photo holds a special place in my heart as it encapsulates a beautiful moment of love and care within my family.
二、中間段
描述照片背后的故事：詳細講述照片拍攝的時間、地點、人物以及當時發生的具體事情，突出親情元素。
闡述參展理由：說明該照片如何體現親情主題，如通過人物的表情、動作或場景的氛圍等，強調照片的獨特性和感染力，解釋為什么選擇它來參展。
示例：The photo was taken on a rainy evening last winter. My younger sister had fallen ill and was feeling very weak. I noticed her discomfort and immediately went to the kitchen to make her a cup of warm ginger tea. As I carefully carried the steaming cup to her bedside, my mother snapped this photo. In the picture, you can see the concern on my face and the gratitude in my sister's eyes. I believe this photo is a perfect representation of the selfless love and care that exists within a family. It shows how, in times of need, we are always there for each other, offering comfort and support. The simple act of making tea might seem ordinary, but it is filled with the warmth of family affection.
三、結尾段
表達期待與感謝：表達對自己作品參展的期待，并感謝組委會提供這樣一個展示親情的平臺。
示例：I sincerely hope that my photo will be selected for the exhibition, allowing others to also feel the power of family love through this image. Thank you for considering my submission and for organizing this meaningful event.
語言積累
This photograph freezes a heartwarming moment of our family gathering, where laughter and love filled the air.（這張照片定格了我們家庭聚會的溫馨時刻，空氣中洋溢著歡笑和愛。）
The image captures the essence of the unbreakable bond between me and my parents, as we stand side by side facing life's challenges.（這張照片捕捉到了我和父母之間堅不可摧的紐帶的精髓，我們并肩站在一起面對生活的挑戰。）
In this photo, the tender expression on my grandmother's face as she tells us old stories is a vivid portrayal of the love and wisdom passed down through generations.（在這張照片中，祖母給我們講老故事時臉上溫柔的表情生動地描繪了代代相傳的愛和智慧。）
The picture showcases the silent but powerful support of my family during my difficult times, with their presence being my greatest source of strength.（這張照片展示了在我困難時期家人默默但有力的支持，他們的陪伴是我最大的力量源泉。）
This snapshot reflects the small yet significant acts of kindness that make our family life so rich and meaningful.（這張快照反映了那些雖小但意義重大的善舉，使我們的家庭生活如此豐富和有意義。）
The photo is a testament to the unconditional love that flows within our family, regardless of the circumstances.（這張照片證明了無論在何種情況下，我們家庭中流淌的無條件的愛。）
It beautifully illustrates how our family members are always there to catch us when we fall, both literally and metaphorically.（它完美地說明了當我們跌倒時，無論是字面意義還是比喻意義上，我們的家人總是在那里扶持我們。）
This image encapsulates the precious memories we create together as a family, memories that will be cherished for a lifetime.（這張照片濃縮了我們作為一個家庭共同創造的珍貴回憶，這些回憶將被珍藏一生。）
The photograph vividly displays the unique connection and understanding that exists only among family members.（這張照片生動地展示了只存在于家庭成員之間的獨特聯系和理解。）
With this photo, I hope to convey the message that family affection is the most precious gift we can ever receive and should always be treasured.（通過這張照片，我希望傳達這樣一個信息：親情是我們所能得到的最珍貴的禮物，應該永遠珍惜。）
寫作示范
第一篇
Dear Committee Members,
I am Li Hua, a senior at Mingqi Middle School. The photo I'm sharing was taken during a family dinner on my grandfather's birthday. As we all sat around the table, my grandfather, with a big smile on his face, was about to cut the cake. My parents and I were looking at him with love and respect. At that moment, my cousin snapped the photo.
I choose this photo because it shows the unity and love within our family. The warm smiles and the joyous atmosphere are palpable. It represents the simple yet profound happiness that comes from being together with our loved ones, celebrating the important moments of life. This is what family affection means to me, and I believe it will resonate with others.
Thank you for your consideration.
Best regards,
Li Hua
第二篇
Dear Photo Exhibition Committee,
I'm Li Hua, a student in grade three of Mingqi Middle School. The photograph I'm submitting was captured during a trip to the beach with my family. I was trying to build a sandcastle, but the waves kept knocking it down. My father noticed my frustration and came to help. He held my hand and showed me how to make a stronger foundation. My mother took the photo just as we were laughing together.
I selected this picture for the exhibition because it embodies the spirit of family support. It shows how my father was there to guide me through a small setback, and our shared laughter represents the love and happiness that fills our family. I hope it can convey the beauty of family affection to all who see it.
Thank you!
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
第三篇
Dear Committee,
I am Li Hua, from Mingqi Middle School. The photo I offer was taken on a snowy day. I had caught a cold and was feeling unwell. My sister, who is usually quite playful, became very gentle and caring. She wrapped a warm blanket around me and made me a hot bowl of soup. As she was feeding me the soup, my father took this photo.
I picked this photo as it exemplifies the deep care and love that siblings have for each other. The tenderness in my sister's actions and the concern on her face are a true display of family affection. It is a moment that I will always cherish, and I want to share this beautiful instance of love with everyone through the exhibition.
Thank you for giving me this opportunity.
Best wishes,
Li Hua
參考答案
Dear Photo Exhibition Committee,
I am Li Hua, a senior three student at Mingqi Middle School. The photo I'm submitting was taken during a family hike. My father, who has a bad knee, was struggling on the uphill path. Without hesitation, I offered my shoulder for him to lean on. At that moment, my mother captured this scene.
I choose this photo because it vividly portrays the mutual care and support within a family. It's a simple yet powerful display of how love is expressed in our daily lives, which I believe perfectly embodies the theme of "family affection".
Thank you!
Best regards,
Li Hua

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