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Lionel, Fandi and Iskandar often got together to play football. They dreamt of one day growing up to be professional footballers. The empty field beside the block of neighbourhood was where they would meet for their football sessions.
One sunny afternoon, they were at the field as usual. They were in the thick of their game when Fandi aimed his foot at the ball and gave a forceful kick. He himself was surprised by his strength. The ball flew past the goalposts breaking into a glass window of the house behind. The boys were too shocked for words. They were half expecting the annoyed home owner, Madam Leong, to storm out through the front door and give them a good tongue criticizing. They knew she was an ill-tempered old lady. Actually, she had scolded them several times before for being too noisy.
When no one came out of the house after ten minutes, the boys were quite surprised. They had prepared themselves for a scolding and were ready to compensate Madam Leong for breaking her window. Out of curiosity, Fandi adventured into Madam Leong’s yard. The gate was unlocked and he went in while the other two waited outside. Fandi knocked on the main door. No reply. Looking in through the broken window, Fandi let out a loud scream. Lying on the floor in a pool of blood was the old lady. There was a big cut on her forehead. She must have been cut by pieces of glass, flying across the living room.
In panic, Fandi immediately dialled 911 for an ambulance. As they were unable to enter the house without a key, there was nothing they could do but wait for the ambulance to arrive. Although the ambulance arrived soon, to the boys, the annoying wait seemed like forever. The ambulance attendants forced open the door and rushed to Madam Leong. She was unconscious, but still breathing. One of the ambulance attendants applied pressure on the wound and wrapped it. With its emergency lights flashing, the ambulance rushed off to the nearest hospital.
注意：
1．續(xù)寫(xiě)詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150個(gè)左右；
2．請(qǐng)按如下格式在答題卡的相應(yīng)位置作答。
The three boys decided to stay behind to wait for Madam Leong’s family to return. ________________________
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To everyone’s relief, Madam Leong received immediate treatment. _____________________________________
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文章大意：
Lionel、Fandi 和 Iskandar 三個(gè)男孩常在一起踢足球，夢(mèng)想成為職業(yè)球員。一次踢球時(shí)，F(xiàn)andi 大力射門(mén)，球擊碎了鄰居 Madam Leong 家的窗戶，他們本以為會(huì)被責(zé)罵，結(jié)果等了十分鐘沒(méi)人出來(lái)。Fandi 好奇進(jìn)入院子，發(fā)現(xiàn) Madam Leong 受傷昏迷，于是趕緊撥打 911。由于無(wú)法進(jìn)入屋子，他們只能在外面等待救護(hù)車(chē)，之后決定留下來(lái)等其家人回來(lái)，這一系列事件引發(fā)了后續(xù)故事，也凸顯了孩子們?cè)谝馔馐录械某砷L(zhǎng)與擔(dān)當(dāng)。
伏筆及續(xù)寫(xiě)回應(yīng)：
Madam Leong 脾氣不好且之前責(zé)罵過(guò)他們：為孩子們擔(dān)心被責(zé)罵以及后續(xù)發(fā)現(xiàn)她受傷時(shí)的驚慌做鋪墊。續(xù)寫(xiě)中孩子們焦急等待并自責(zé)的表現(xiàn)，與之前對(duì)她脾氣的描述相呼應(yīng)，展現(xiàn)出他們內(nèi)心的不安，回應(yīng)了這一伏筆。
球打碎窗戶后無(wú)人出來(lái)：引發(fā) Fandi 進(jìn)入院子查看，從而發(fā)現(xiàn) Madam Leong 受傷，推動(dòng)故事發(fā)展。續(xù)寫(xiě)中對(duì)等待過(guò)程的描述以及孩子們的心理活動(dòng)，延續(xù)了因無(wú)人出來(lái)而產(chǎn)生的緊張氛圍，回應(yīng)了此處伏筆。
孩子們準(zhǔn)備好賠償：暗示他們有擔(dān)當(dāng)?shù)囊幻?，為后續(xù)積極彌補(bǔ)過(guò)錯(cuò)的行為做伏筆。續(xù)寫(xiě)中孩子們?nèi)メt(yī)院看望并承諾彌補(bǔ)，體現(xiàn)了他們的責(zé)任感，回應(yīng)了這一伏筆。
救護(hù)車(chē)很快到達(dá)：盡管如此，孩子們?nèi)杂X(jué)得等待漫長(zhǎng)，突出他們的焦急心情，也為后文他們對(duì) Madam Leong 病情的持續(xù)關(guān)注埋下伏筆。續(xù)寫(xiě)中他們?nèi)メt(yī)院看望的情節(jié)，表現(xiàn)出對(duì) Madam Leong 的關(guān)心，回應(yīng)了這里的伏筆。
Madam Leong 受傷昏迷：預(yù)示著后續(xù)其病情的發(fā)展以及孩子們對(duì)此的反應(yīng)。續(xù)寫(xiě)中提到她脫離危險(xiǎn)及孩子們的行動(dòng)，完整地展現(xiàn)了事件的后續(xù)走向，回應(yīng)了該伏筆。
續(xù)寫(xiě)要點(diǎn)：
情感線：從一開(kāi)始的驚慌、自責(zé)與擔(dān)憂，到后來(lái)決定留下來(lái)等待時(shí)的不安，再到得知 Madam Leong 脫離危險(xiǎn)后的欣慰，以及后續(xù)想要彌補(bǔ)過(guò)錯(cuò)的堅(jiān)定，情感變化豐富且合理，深刻展現(xiàn)了孩子們內(nèi)心的情感世界和成長(zhǎng)歷程。
故事線：第一段續(xù)寫(xiě)孩子們等待 Madam Leong 家人時(shí)的情景，包括內(nèi)心的想法和周?chē)h(huán)境的描寫(xiě)，進(jìn)一步渲染緊張氛圍；第二段續(xù)寫(xiě) Madam Leong 接受治療后的情況以及孩子們的后續(xù)行動(dòng)，如去醫(yī)院看望、承諾彌補(bǔ)等，使故事完整且有意義，圍繞意外事件展開(kāi)了溫暖而有教育意義的后續(xù)情節(jié)。
主旨升華句：
In the face of unexpected accidents, our responsibility and kindness can turn guilt into redemption, and fear into courage.（在意外事故面前，我們的責(zé)任和善良能將內(nèi)疚轉(zhuǎn)化為救贖，將恐懼轉(zhuǎn)化為勇氣。）
Even the most unfortunate events can be the seeds of growth and transformation, as long as we have the heart to take responsibility and make amends.（即使是最不幸的事件也能成為成長(zhǎng)和轉(zhuǎn)變的種子，只要我們有承擔(dān)責(zé)任和彌補(bǔ)過(guò)錯(cuò)的心。）
The journey of taking responsibility for our mistakes is not an easy one, but it is the path that leads us to become better and more empathetic individuals.（為自己的錯(cuò)誤承擔(dān)責(zé)任的旅程并不輕松，但這是引領(lǐng)我們成為更好、更有同理心的人的道路。）
Sometimes, accidents are not just disasters but also opportunities for us to show our true selves and the values we uphold.（有時(shí)，意外事故不只是災(zāi)難，也是我們展現(xiàn)真實(shí)自我和所秉持價(jià)值觀的機(jī)會(huì)。）
When we take the initiative to face the consequences of our actions, we not only mend the broken pieces but also build bridges of understanding and forgiveness.（當(dāng)我們主動(dòng)面對(duì)自己行為的后果時(shí)，我們不僅修復(fù)了破碎的部分，還搭建起了理解與原諒的橋梁。）
寫(xiě)作示范一：
第一段：
The three boys decided to stay behind to wait for Madam Leong’s family to return. The evening breeze blew gently, but it did nothing to soothe their restless hearts. Lionel stared blankly at the broken window, his mind filled with regret. Fandi paced back and forth, his hands clenched tightly. Iskandar sat on the ground, his eyes fixed on the front door, praying for the family to arrive soon. The guilt was eating them alive, and they whispered among themselves, vowing to do whatever it took to make things right. The streetlights flickered on, casting an eerie glow over the silent yard.
第二段：
To everyone’s relief, Madam Leong received immediate treatment. The doctors worked tirelessly to stabilize her condition. When the boys heard the good news, tears of relief streamed down their faces. The next day, they went to the hospital, carrying a bouquet of flowers they had bought with their pocket money. They entered the room timidly, their eyes filled with remorse. Madam Leong's family was touched by their gesture. From then on, the boys visited regularly, helping with small chores around the house when Madam Leong was discharged. This experience taught them that taking responsibility for their actions could turn a bad situation into an opportunity for growth and kindness.
寫(xiě)作示范二：
第一段：
The three boys decided to stay behind to wait for Madam Leong’s family to return. As the night fell, the stars twinkled overhead, but the boys were oblivious to the beauty. They huddled together, shivering not only from the cold but also from the fear of the unknown. Each passing car made them jump, hoping it was the family. Their conversation was filled with self-blame and worry. They imagined the worst and tried to come up with ways to make amends. The silence of the house was deafening, and they felt as if time had stood still.
第二段：
To everyone’s relief, Madam Leong received immediate treatment. She slowly regained consciousness a few days later. The boys were overjoyed when they heard the news. They decided to raise money to help with the medical bills by doing odd jobs in the neighborhood. They mowed lawns, washed cars, and saved every penny they earned. When they presented the money to Madam Leong's family, the gratitude in their eyes was palpable. This incident became a turning point in the boys' lives, teaching them the value of responsibility and the power of redemption. They realized that even the most difficult situations could be overcome with a sincere heart and a determination to make things right.
讀后續(xù)寫(xiě)參考答案
The three boys decided to stay behind to wait for Madam Leong’s family to return. Half an hour witnessed their anxious waiting, but they felt like a decade passing by. Heart pounding wildly and a surge of worry creeping up on them, they faced the hurried family of Madam Leong, especially Fandi, who was obviously immersed in the ocean of quit and grief, resting his head on his hand and sitting on the stairs silently. Fandi stepped forward, explaining the awful accident caused by him. To their astonishment, the family didn’t scold them by virtue of the fact that they didn’t mean to do it. What the family wanted was the safety of Madam Leong.
To everyone’s relief, Madam Leong received immediate treatment. It was not only exciting news for her family, but also a rope saving three boys from the deep cliff of guilt. When they got to the hospital, seeing Madam Leong wake up, the previous fear gave way to relief. In the following days, they volunteered to look after her in an endeavor to make up for the mistake. Gradually, Madam Leong realized their sincerity and changed her attitude to the boys. Soon after, life went back to normal, and Madam Leong sometimes even invited the exhausted football players to drink water.

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