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Calvin’s day camp teacher, Autumn, passed out a sheet of paper with pictures and descriptions of different birds and a small pair of binoculars) (雙筒望遠鏡) to each camper. He announced, “We’re going to do a one-week challenge called ‘Big Week’, where you try to identify birds and mark them on the paper. Whoever identifies the most birds wins.”
Another challenge Ever since camp started, Gladys had beaten Calvin at everything. If he won this one, maybe he’d finally show Gladys that she wasn’t unbeatable. “How will you know if I really saw…” Calvin scanned the list. “… a glossy ibis ” “I won’t,” Autumn said. “A Big Week is based on honesty.”
The next day at the preserve, when they hid behind some brush, Gladys spotted a great egret! “That was my gift to you,” Gladys whisper-shouted with an I’m-going-to-win-this tone. “Like I would’ve missed that giant bird,” Calvin protested. Suddenly, birds exploded above Calvin’s head. Thunk! He fell down onto his back. Gladys rushed toward him, helped him up and advised, “Here’s a tip: try being OUIET.”
That evening, a large bird landed on Calvin’s neighbor’s tree. Calvin focused the binoculars. The bird had a bright red eye, a thick straight bill, a white throat and breast, and—oh, wow—long, thin, white feathers on the back of its head. “A black-crowned night heron!” he whispered excitedly. He was completely absorbed in his observation.
As the week went by, competition became fierce. Calvin had to win this contest. But chance seemed so slim! Then he remembered that he had found a feather that Autumn thought belonged to a Cooper’s hawk close enough. He marked it, plus a few extra birds. What was the difference He had seen them in the past, or he would see them eventually. He swallowed (吞咽) hard. No one will know the truth.
On the last day of Big Week, Autumn waved Gladys’s checklist in the air. “Twenty-six is the number to beat. Anybody else ”
注意：1. 續寫詞數應為150左右；
2. 請按如下格式在答題卡的相應位置作答。
Reviewing the 29 birds marked on his list, Calvin felt his face heated up.
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Autumn awarded Gladys a Big Week T-shirt.
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一、文章大意
在卡爾文參加的日間夏令營中，老師奧森發起了為期一周的 “觀鳥大挑戰”，誰識別出的鳥類最多就能獲勝。卡爾文因之前總是輸給格拉迪斯而渴望在這次挑戰中取勝，隨著比賽的進行，競爭愈發激烈，卡爾文為了贏開始不誠實，在最后一天看到格拉迪斯的成績后，內心產生了掙扎，故事將圍繞卡爾文是否會坦白以及此事對他和格拉迪斯關系的影響展開，突出誠實與友誼的主題。
二、故事山分析
開端：老師奧森宣布 “觀鳥大挑戰”，介紹規則并發放觀鳥資料和望遠鏡，引出故事核心事件，激發卡爾文的求勝心，同時也為后續情節發展奠定基礎，引發讀者對比賽過程和結果的好奇。
發展：比賽中格拉迪斯先發現了大白鷺，卡爾文在觀察過程中遇到各種狀況，如被鳥群嚇到摔倒等，這些情節增加了故事的趣味性和緊張感，也展現了觀鳥活動的挑戰性，推動故事發展，同時進一步強化卡爾文想要贏的決心，為他后面的不誠實行為做鋪墊。
高潮：卡爾文為了贏得比賽，在記錄鳥類時添加了一些自己不確定看到的鳥，內心陷入道德掙扎，這是故事的關鍵轉折點，將矛盾沖突聚焦在卡爾文的內心世界，使讀者關注他將如何抉擇，極大地增強了故事的張力。
低谷：卡爾文在回顧自己標記的 29 只鳥時，因不誠實行為而感到愧疚和不安，情緒陷入低谷，這種內心的痛苦與之前渴望獲勝的急切形成鮮明對比，更加凸顯出誠實的重要性以及他此時內心的矛盾，為后續的坦白情節營造了緊張壓抑的氛圍。
結局（續寫前）：奧森宣布格拉迪斯的 26 只鳥是目前的最高記錄，詢問是否有人超過，卡爾文的內心正進行著激烈的斗爭，故事在此處留下懸念，讀者急切想知道卡爾文會做出怎樣的決定，為續寫提供了明確的方向和強烈的期待感。
三、伏筆及續寫中的回應
伏筆：“自從夏令營開始，格拉迪斯在所有事情上都打敗了卡爾文。如果他贏得這次比賽，也許他最終能向格拉迪斯證明她不是不可戰勝的。”
回應：續寫中可以描述卡爾文在坦白不誠實行為后，雖然失去了贏得比賽的機會，但他贏得了格拉迪斯的尊重和友誼。例如，格拉迪斯看到卡爾文的勇氣和誠實，主動與他分享觀鳥經驗，兩人一起去觀鳥，卡爾文在這個過程中真正提高了自己的觀鳥技能，不再僅僅執著于戰勝格拉迪斯，而是享受觀鳥的樂趣和與朋友共同成長的過程，從而呼應前文卡爾文對勝利的渴望以及與格拉迪斯的競爭關系，展現他在經歷此事后的心態轉變和成長。
伏筆：“‘大挑戰周’是基于誠實的。”
回應：在后續情節中，當卡爾文坦白自己的不誠實行為時，老師奧森可以借此強調誠實的重要性，并給予卡爾文一個小的懲罰或教育，如讓他在大家面前分享這次經歷和學到的教訓，使卡爾文更加深刻地理解誠實的價值，同時也向其他孩子傳遞這一重要品質，強化了故事的教育意義，呼應了前文對 “誠實” 這一主題的鋪墊。
伏筆：“卡爾文必須贏得這場比賽。但機會似乎很渺茫！然后他想起他找到了一根奧森認為屬于庫珀鷹的羽毛，差不多就行了。他標記了它，還加了幾只額外的鳥。”
回應：續寫時可以詳細描述卡爾文坦白時內心的掙扎和最終的決定過程，他可能會想到如果不誠實贏得比賽，即使得到了 T 恤也不會真正開心，而且會失去他人的信任。通過內心的對話和回憶比賽過程中的點滴，他最終選擇面對自己的錯誤，突出他在道德困境中的成長和對誠實的回歸，與之前的不誠實行為形成對比，使故事的情節發展更加合理且富有深度。
伏筆：“他完全沉浸在自己的觀察中。”
回應：后續可以提到卡爾文對觀鳥的熱愛在坦白后并沒有減少，反而更加純粹。他開始更加專注于真正地觀察和了解鳥類，不再被勝負心所左右。例如，他會主動去查閱更多關于鳥類的資料，參加各種觀鳥活動，并且與其他觀鳥愛好者分享自己的真實觀察記錄，展現他回歸對觀鳥本身的熱愛，進一步深化故事的主題，即誠實和真正的興趣愛好比一時的勝利更重要，同時也呼應了前文他對觀鳥的投入和熱情。
伏筆：“格拉迪斯帶著一種‘我要贏得這場比賽’的語氣低聲喊道，‘那是我送給你的禮物’。”
回應：續寫中可以描述格拉迪斯在得知卡爾文坦白后，對他的態度發生了轉變，從競爭關系逐漸轉變為友好互助的朋友關系。她可能會回憶起之前與卡爾文的互動，意識到自己之前的競爭態度可能給卡爾文帶來了壓力，從而主動改變，與卡爾文一起探討觀鳥技巧，互相學習，共同進步，體現出在誠實和友誼面前，競爭的勝負變得不再重要，使故事的情感更加豐富和溫暖，同時也與前文兩人的競爭氛圍形成對比，突出了故事的發展和變化。
四、續寫要點
第一段
要點：描述卡爾文內心的掙扎和最終決定坦白的過程，包括他的心理活動、表情和動作等細節。可以提及他想到之前老師強調的誠實原則、與格拉迪斯的競爭過程以及自己對觀鳥的真正熱愛，這些因素如何促使他克服內心的虛榮和對勝利的渴望，鼓起勇氣向老師和同學們承認自己的錯誤，展現他在道德困境中的成長和轉變。
示例：Reviewing the 29 birds marked on his list, Calvin felt his face heated up. His heart pounded in his chest as he thought about the dishonesty of his actions. Images of the week's bird-watching flashed through his mind - the excitement of spotting new species, the thrill of the competition, but also the guilt that had been gnawing at him. He remembered Autumn's words about honesty and realized that winning this way would be hollow. With a deep breath and a determined look, he stood up, his legs trembling slightly. "I... I need to tell you something," he said, his voice barely above a whisper. "I didn't see all of these birds. I marked some that I wasn't sure about. I'm sorry."
第二段
要點：講述格拉迪斯得知卡爾文坦白后的反應，以及老師奧森的處理方式和后續大家的互動。描述格拉迪斯從最初的驚訝到理解和寬容的態度轉變，老師對卡爾文誠實行為的肯定和鼓勵，以及同學們的反應。最后可以提及卡爾文和格拉迪斯在這次事件后的關系變化，如他們開始互相幫助、分享觀鳥經驗，一起更加純粹地享受觀鳥的樂趣，突出誠實和友誼在故事中的升華，使故事有一個溫暖而積極的結局。
示例：Autumn awarded Gladys a Big Week T-shirt. Gladys took it with a big smile, but then her eyes met Calvin's. She was surprised to see the remorse in his eyes. After Autumn explained what had happened, Gladys walked over to Calvin. "Hey," she said softly. "It was brave of you to admit that. We all make mistakes." Calvin looked up, a glimmer of hope in his eyes. Autumn nodded in agreement. "Honesty is what matters most in this challenge," she said. "Calvin, you've learned an important lesson, and that's worth more than any prize." From that day on, Calvin and Gladys became closer. They went on bird-watching trips together, sharing tips and tricks, and the competition that once divided them now brought them closer as friends, united by their love for birds and the newfound respect for honesty.
五、情感線
起初，卡爾文因之前總是輸給格拉迪斯而充滿求勝欲和不甘；在觀鳥過程中，既有發現新鳥種的興奮，也有因競爭壓力產生的緊張；當他為了贏而不誠實時，內心陷入愧疚和不安；最后在回顧自己的行為時，羞愧感達到頂點，經過內心掙扎后決定坦白，此時感到釋然和勇敢；格拉迪斯得知后從驚訝到理解和寬容，兩人的關系也從競爭走向友好互助，這條情感線細膩地展現了人物在故事中的心理變化，突出了誠實和友誼的珍貴，使讀者能夠深刻感受到人物的成長和情感的轉變。
六、故事線
老師奧森發起 “觀鳥大挑戰”，卡爾文渴望借此戰勝格拉迪斯。
比賽中格拉迪斯先發現大白鷺，卡爾文在觀察時遇到各種狀況，競爭激烈。
卡爾文為贏添加未確定看到的鳥，內心開始掙扎。
最后一天卡爾文看到格拉迪斯的成績后，愧疚感加劇，內心斗爭激烈。
卡爾文決定坦白自己的不誠實行為，向老師和同學認錯。
格拉迪斯理解并寬容卡爾文，老師肯定卡爾文的誠實，兩人關系變好，共同享受觀鳥樂趣，突出誠實和友誼的重要性。
七、主旨升華句
"Honesty is the true prize in any competition, for it enriches our character and paves the way for genuine relationships and personal growth."（誠實是任何比賽中真正的獎品，因為它豐富了我們的品格，并為真正的人際關系和個人成長鋪平了道路。）
"In the pursuit of victory, it is easy to lose sight of what truly matters; but when we choose honesty, we find that the journey of self-discovery and friendship is far more rewarding."（在追求勝利的過程中，我們很容易忽視真正重要的東西；但當我們選擇誠實時，我們會發現自我發現和友誼的旅程更加有意義。）
"True success lies not in the number of victories we accumulate, but in the integrity we uphold and the values we cherish, for they are the building blocks of a meaningful life."（真正的成功不在于我們積累的勝利數量，而在于我們堅持的正直和珍惜的價值觀，因為它們是有意義生活的基石。）
"A single act of honesty can transform a moment of shame into a turning point of growth, leading us to embrace the beauty of friendship and the joy of being true to ourselves."（一個誠實的舉動可以將羞恥的時刻轉變為成長的轉折點，引領我們擁抱友誼的美好和做真實自己的快樂。）
"When we let go of the desire for false triumph and embrace honesty, we open the door to a world of trust, kindness, and the purest form of enjoyment in life's simple pleasures."（當我們放下對虛假勝利的渴望并擁抱誠實時，我們就打開了一扇通往信任、善良和生活簡單樂趣中最純粹享受的世界的大門。）
八、寫作示范
第一篇
Reviewing the 29 birds marked on his list, Calvin felt his face heated up. His palms were sweaty as he clutched the checklist, the numbers seeming to mock him. He thought of the times he had genuinely spotted a bird, the rush of excitement, and how it had all been tainted by his dishonesty. The image of Gladys's eager face, always one step ahead in the competition, flashed before his eyes. But then he remembered the look of trust Autumn had when she handed out the binoculars. With a shuddering breath, he walked towards Autumn, his legs feeling like lead. "I... I cheated," he stammered, his voice barely audible. "I added some birds I wasn't sure about."
Autumn awarded Gladys a Big Week T-shirt. Gladys's eyes sparkled with pride as she received it. But when she saw Calvin's dejected figure, her expression softened. Autumn explained what had happened, and Gladys walked over to Calvin. "Hey, we all get carried away sometimes," she said gently. "At least you had the guts to own up to it." Calvin looked at her, surprised. From that moment, a bond formed between them. They started going on bird-watching trips together, not as competitors, but as friends. Calvin learned that winning wasn't everything; it was the honesty and the friendships forged along the way that truly mattered.
第二篇
Reviewing the 29 birds marked on his list, Calvin felt his face heated up. His mind was a whirlwind of conflicting thoughts. The desire to win warred with the guilt of his dishonesty. He thought about how much he had enjoyed the actual process of bird-watching, the beauty of the creatures he had seen. But now, the false marks on his list seemed to overshadow it all. He glanced at Gladys, who was looking at Autumn expectantly. Taking a deep breath, he mustered the courage to speak. "Autumn," he said, his voice shaking. "I marked some birds I didn't really see. I'm sorry."
Autumn awarded Gladys a Big Week T-shirt. Gladys took it with a grin, but her attention was quickly drawn to Calvin. After Autumn commended Calvin for his honesty, Gladys walked up to him. "You know," she said, "I respect you for coming clean. Let's forget about the competition and just focus on the birds." Calvin nodded, a sense of relief washing over him. In the days that followed, Calvin and Gladys became inseparable. They explored different bird habitats, sharing their knowledge and love for the hobby. Calvin realized that in losing the chance to win, he had gained something far more valuable - a true friend and a newfound respect for honesty.
參考答案
Reviewing the 29 birds marked on his list, Calvin felt his face heated up. He was about to win! But he also felt a knot in his stomach. He knew he had cheated. At the thought of Gladys’s words and Autumn’s trust in him, he stood up and announced, “I didn’t see three of these birds.” Then he crossed out the Cooper’s hawk and two other birds from his checklist. “Why did you do that ” Autumn asked. “Because I didn’t see them,” Calvin said. “But I will.”
Autumn awarded Gladys a Big Week T-shirt. She beamed with pride as she accepted it. Calvin congratulated her sincerely. “You deserved it,” he said. “Thanks,” Gladys said. “And good job too. You were honest.” “Yeah, I guess I was,” Calvin said, feeling proud of himself. As they walked back to camp, Calvin spotted a bird that seemed familiar. “A Cooper’s hawk!” he exclaimed. “No way！” Gladys said. “Yes,” Calvin said, marking it on his checklist, “Now we have seen it.”

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