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In a coastal village named Seaford, lived a courageous young woman named Amelia. Amelia was known throughout Seaford for her adventurous nature. From the moment she could walk, she would eagerly run towards the crashing waves, feeling the sand between her toes and the cool spray of the ocean mist on her face. She was a woman with a strong will and possessed a heart full of kindness. Amelia’s love for the ocean was intense, and she spent most of her days exploring the beautiful beaches and sparkling waters that surrounded her house.
One sunny morning, while Amelia was walking along the shore, she noticed a group of restless seagulls abnormally circling above the crashing waves. Their unusual calls echoed（回）through the air. Concerned for their well-being, she followed their flight pattern, her instincts guiding her toward danger.
As she approached a towering cliff, Amelia gasped in horror. On a narrow ledge（巖架）, high above the violent waves, was a young dolphin trapped in a thick fishing net. Its shiny body shone under the golden rays of the sun, but its freedom was cruelly limited by the trap. With each struggle, the net tightened around its delicate body, leaving painful marks on its skin. Its tail flapped helplessly, each movement a request for help, while its desperate cries for assistance echoed through the air.
A sense of urgency filled her, pushing her forward with determination and resolve. Realizing that time was tight, Amelia knew she had to act instantly to free this innocent creature from its difficult position before it submitted to exhaustion or the force of the tides.
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第一段：Without hesitation, Amelia rushed back to the village.
第二段：As the dolphin was gently released into the calm, welcoming waters, it hesitated for a moment.
文章大意：在海邊村莊 Seaford，熱愛海洋且勇敢善良的 Amelia 某天在海邊看到一群異常的海鷗，追隨它們發現一只被困在懸崖巖架上漁網中的小海豚。小海豚在漁網中掙扎，身上已有傷痕，情況危急。Amelia 毫不猶豫地回村召集漁民，帶著工具趕回懸崖，冒險下崖解救小海豚，最終成功將其放歸大海，她的英勇事跡也在村里傳頌，激勵著人們保護海洋生物。
伏筆及回應：
伏筆：Amelia 從小就熱愛海洋，“From the moment she could walk, she would eagerly run towards the crashing waves”
回應：為她毫不猶豫地決定救助被困海豚提供了合理的動機，體現出她對海洋生物的深切關愛，這種熱愛驅使她冒險去拯救海豚，在整個救助過程中，她的勇敢和堅定都源于這份深沉的愛。
伏筆：Amelia 注意到海鷗異常盤旋，“she noticed a group of restless seagulls abnormally circling above the crashing waves”
回應：這引導她發現了被困的海豚，推動了故事的發展，使情節從日常的海邊散步轉向緊張的救援行動，后續她根據海鷗的指引找到海豚并展開救援，凸顯了她敏銳的觀察力和對自然跡象的解讀能力。
伏筆：Amelia 性格勇敢且意志堅定，“Amelia was known throughout Seaford for her adventurous nature... She was a woman with a strong will”
回應：在她回村召集漁民、下懸崖救海豚等情節中得以體現，面對危險和困難，她沒有絲毫退縮，而是積極采取行動，充分展現了她勇敢無畏、意志堅定的性格特點，是她能夠成功解救海豚的關鍵因素。
伏筆：海豚被困的位置在懸崖的狹窄巖架上，且下方是洶涌的海浪，“On a narrow ledge, high above the violent waves”
回應：增加了救援的難度和危險性，為后續漁民準備繩索等工具以及 Amelia 冒險下崖的情節做鋪墊，突出了救援行動的艱難，也更加襯托出 Amelia 等人的勇敢和善良。
伏筆：海豚的身體被漁網越纏越緊，情況危急，“With each struggle, the net tightened around its delicate body”
回應：強調了救援的緊迫性，促使 Amelia 迅速行動，爭分奪秒地解救海豚，讓整個故事的節奏更加緊張，讀者也更能感受到救援的刻不容緩，以及成功后的欣慰。
續寫要點
第一段情感線：從看到海豚被困時的焦急和擔憂，到回村召集漁民時的急切與堅定，再到準備下崖救援時的緊張但勇敢無畏，始終圍繞著拯救海豚這一目標，情感強烈且積極向上，展現出 Amelia 對生命的尊重和保護的決心。
故事線：Amelia 跑回村莊，找到熟悉且熱心的漁民，快速說明情況。漁民們迅速行動，準備好繩索、刀具等救援工具后，與 Amelia 一同返回懸崖邊。到達后，他們小心地固定好繩索，Amelia 深吸一口氣，克服內心的恐懼，在漁民的協助下，順著繩索慢慢下到巖架處，靠近被困的海豚，小心翼翼地開始切割漁網，同時時刻留意著海豚的反應和周圍的環境，以防發生意外。
第二段情感線：看到海豚被釋放時的欣慰和喜悅，感受到海豚回望時的感動，以及對整個救援行動成功的自豪和滿足，最后升華到對海洋生物保護的責任感和使命感，情感真摯而深刻，從個人的情感體驗延伸到對自然保護的大情懷。
故事線：海豚在被解開漁網后，先是停頓片刻，似乎在確認自己重獲自由，然后用力擺動尾巴，游向大海深處。Amelia 和漁民們站在懸崖上，望著海豚遠去的身影，心中充滿了喜悅和感動。此后，Amelia 經常在海邊駐足，回憶這次經歷，而她的故事也在村莊里流傳開來，激勵著更多的人關注和保護海洋生物，村莊里也逐漸形成了愛護海洋、保護動物的良好氛圍，大家會定期組織海灘清潔活動，避免海洋生物受到人類垃圾的傷害，并且在遇到受傷的海洋動物時，都會像 Amelia 一樣積極伸出援手。
主旨升華句：
This act of kindness was not only a rescue but a testament to the power of compassion and the bond between humans and nature.（這次善舉不僅是一次救援，更是同情的力量以及人與自然之間紐帶的證明。）
In saving the dolphin, Amelia showed that every life is precious and that we are all guardians of this beautiful blue planet.（在拯救海豚的過程中，Amelia 表明每個生命都是珍貴的，我們都是這個美麗藍色星球的守護者。）
The rescue of the dolphin was a small but significant step towards a world where humans and wildlife coexist in harmony.（拯救海豚是朝著人類與野生動物和諧共處的世界邁出的雖小但意義重大的一步。）
Amelia's bravery and love for the ocean and its creatures reminded us that our actions can make a difference in protecting the delicate balance of nature.（Amelia 對海洋及其生物的勇敢和熱愛提醒我們，我們的行動可以在保護自然的微妙平衡方面產生影響。）
This story is a call to action for all of us to cherish and protect the wonders of the natural world, for they are the true treasures of our existence.（這個故事呼吁我們所有人珍惜和保護自然界的奇跡，因為它們是我們生存的真正寶藏。）
寫作示范一
第一段：Without hesitation, Amelia rushed back to the village. Her mind was racing as she thought of who could help. She quickly gathered a group of strong and brave fishermen, her voice filled with urgency as she described the dolphin's plight. The fishermen, moved by her determination, immediately sprang into action. They collected sturdy ropes and sharp knives, knowing that time was of the essence. Amelia led the way back to the cliff, her heart pounding with a mixture of fear and hope. As they reached the edge, the fishermen skillfully tied the ropes and began to lower Amelia down. She closed her eyes for a moment, gathering her courage, and then began the descent. Inch by inch, she got closer to the trapped dolphin, her hands steady despite the danger.
第二段：As the dolphin was gently released into the calm, welcoming waters, it hesitated for a moment. It seemed to look directly into Amelia's eyes, as if to convey its gratitude. Then, with a graceful swoosh of its tail, it disappeared into the vast ocean. Amelia's eyes filled with tears of relief and joy. She watched as the dolphin swam away, feeling a sense of accomplishment like never before. The fishermen on the cliff cheered and whistled, proud of what they had all accomplished. From that day on, Amelia became an inspiration to the village. Her story was told and retold, a reminder that even one person's actions can have a profound impact on the lives of others, whether they be human or animal. And the village, inspired by her, made a vow to always protect the ocean and its precious inhabitants.
寫作示范二
第一段：Without hesitation, Amelia rushed back to the village. She knew she couldn't save the dolphin alone. Her feet pounded on the sandy path as she searched for help. Spotting some experienced sailors, she quickly explained the situation. They wasted no time in gathering the necessary equipment. Ropes, hooks, and a ladder were loaded onto a cart, and they all hurried back to the cliff. Amelia's heart was in her throat as they set up the rescue gear. She was terrified but determined not to let the dolphin suffer any longer. With the help of the sailors, she carefully climbed down the ladder, the wind whipping at her hair. She focused on the task at hand, her eyes fixed on the trapped dolphin.
第二段：As the dolphin was gently released into the calm, welcoming waters, it hesitated for a moment. It circled back once, as if to say goodbye. Amelia's heart swelled with emotion. She had risked her life for this beautiful creature, and it was all worth it. The dolphin then sped off into the open sea, free at last. The sailors on the cliff clapped and hollered, celebrating the successful rescue. Amelia climbed back up, exhausted but elated. Word of her heroic act spread quickly through the village. People were in awe of her courage and compassion. This incident served as a catalyst for change. The villagers organized beach clean-ups and fishing regulations to ensure the safety of the ocean's creatures. Amelia's story became a symbol of hope and a reminder that we all have a responsibility to protect the natural world around us.
【參考范文】
Without hesitation, Amelia rushed back to the village. She grabbed a toolkit, carried a strong rope and hurried back with a group of villagers. Everything was all set before Amelia got down to the rescue. She lowered herself down the cliff little by little with great care. Somehow, she felt dizzy and nothing could be seen. She stopped. The dolphin’s desperate cries lingering through the air, Amelia summoned up all the courage to proceed. Ultimately, she arrived at the ledge. Standing on the ledge, Amelia’s heart pounded, the hands and feet shivering. After much effort, Amelia broke the thick net. With the help of the villagers, the innocent creature was let loose to the shore carefully and safely.
As the dolphin was gently released into the calm, welcoming waters, it hesitated for a moment. Delicate and painful as the dolphin was, it went to great lengths to jump, wagging its tail. Amelia stood there, appearing extremely worn-out. Then, she stepped over to the lovely creature, patting it on the head and kissing it. The dolphin snuggled up to Amelia, murmuring in a joyful voice. Amelia waved good-bye to it, feeling relieved. The sun cast the golden rays on Amelia’s face, and she went home in delight. Amelia’s story has uplifted more and more people and they have grown valorous, good-natured and persistent.

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