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閱讀下面材料，根據其內容和所給段落開頭語續寫兩段，使之構成一篇完整的短文。
My younger brother and I were home watching cartoons while my father slept and my mother was out shopping. I left my brother in the living room and went to get something to drink. As I was pulling some orange juice, I heard something break. Firsts I looked in to see if my father had woken up and he hadn’t. Then I quickly ran to see what had happened. When I went into the living room. I was shocked. My brother had broken my mother’s favorite vase.
“What did you do ” I asked.
“I broke it!” My brother answered, “It was an accident.”
Knowing that he was shocked and frightened, and not wanting him to get in trouble, I did what any friend would do. I tried to help him. I quickly ran and got some glue. I didn’t know what time my mother was going to be back or when my father was going to wake up, so I tried to hurry. I anxiously gathered up all of the broken pieces and started to glue them together. It took me an hour but finally I fixed the vase. Then came the real disaster.
“Oh, my God! Oh, my God!” I screamed.
I had fixed the vase but I had accidentally glued my hair to it!
While my brother looked at me like I was some kind of fool, I carried the vase — with my hair attached to it—into the bathroom. I looked in the mirror.
“My beautiful hair,” I cried. Realizing that there was no way to pull my hair from the vase, I grabbed a pair of scissors. With every single strand (縷) of hair that I cut, I cried again. My hair was ruined, and the vase looked as if a wig was attached to it! As I was leaving the bathroom with my ridiculous new hairdo, I heard the key turn in the front door.
注意：續寫詞數應為150左右。
My mother was back!
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While I was lying on my bed, I realized what I had done was an act of friendship.
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一、文章大意
作者和弟弟在家，父母分別在睡覺和外出購物。作者去拿飲料時聽到東西破碎的聲音，發現弟弟打碎了媽媽最愛的花瓶。出于不想讓弟弟受罰的心理，作者用膠水試圖修復花瓶，結果卻不小心把自己的頭發粘在了花瓶上。作者試圖把頭發從花瓶上弄下來但無果，最后只好用剪刀剪掉頭發，這時媽媽回來了。
二、故事山分析
開場：作者和弟弟在家，父母不在身邊，營造了一個相對自由但也容易引發意外的場景。
上升：弟弟打碎花瓶，這是事件的開端，引發了后續一系列的動作。
高潮：作者用膠水粘花瓶卻把頭發粘住，然后不得不剪掉頭發，情節在此達到緊張的頂點。
下降：媽媽回來，緊張的氛圍即將得到緩解。
結局：未給出，留給續寫。
三、伏筆及續寫回應
伏筆：弟弟打碎花瓶時父親在睡覺，這為作者有時間去處理花瓶事件埋下伏筆。
續寫回應：在作者處理花瓶問題的過程中，父親都沒有醒來，使得情節得以順利發展。
伏筆：作者不知道媽媽什么時候回來，增加了事件處理的緊張感。
續寫回應：媽媽突然回來，讓作者陷入了更加尷尬的境地。
伏筆：作者為了不讓弟弟受罰決定幫忙，體現了對弟弟的保護。
續寫回應：在后續情節中，這種保護弟弟的心理得到了強化，盡管自己遭遇了頭發被剪的尷尬，但出發點是對弟弟的愛護。
伏筆：作者選擇用膠水粘花瓶，暗示可能會出現意外。
續寫回應：意外發生，頭發被粘住，推動情節發展到高潮。
伏筆：作者聽到鑰匙轉動的聲音，預示著媽媽即將出現，制造緊張氛圍。
續寫回應：媽媽回來看到作者和花瓶的樣子，引發后續的情節發展。
四、續寫要點
第一段：
媽媽的反應：媽媽看到作者和花瓶先是驚訝，然后可能會因為作者保護弟弟的初衷而感到欣慰，同時也會安慰作者關于頭發的事情。
作者的感受：作者從緊張和尷尬中逐漸放松，感受到媽媽的理解。
第二段：
作者對友誼的思考：作者躺在床上，深刻意識到自己對弟弟的保護是出于深厚的情誼，這種情誼超越了物質和外表。
未來的行動：作者決定以后在面對類似情況時，依然會選擇保護弟弟，并且會更加機智地處理問題。
五、情感線
文章開始時作者是輕松地在拿飲料，聽到花瓶破碎聲后變得緊張和擔憂，擔心弟弟會受罰。在處理花瓶過程中，作者變得焦慮，尤其是頭發被粘住時更加慌亂。媽媽回來后，作者感到極度的尷尬和不安。最后躺在床上，作者從對頭發被毀的難過轉變為對自己保護弟弟行為的欣慰，意識到親情和友誼的珍貴。
六、故事線
作者和弟弟在家，父母分別在睡覺和外出。
弟弟打碎媽媽最愛的花瓶。
作者用膠水試圖修復花瓶，卻把頭發粘住。
作者無奈剪掉頭發，這時媽媽回來。
媽媽看到作者和花瓶的情景。
作者躺在床上思考自己的行為，意識到對弟弟的情誼。
七、主旨升華句（英文）
True friendship is shown not in times of ease, but in the face of trouble.（真正的友誼不是在安逸時體現，而是在面對麻煩時顯現。）
Family bonds are the ties that bind us, making us do selfless acts.（親情是將我們聯系在一起的紐帶，讓我們做出無私的行為。）
Sometimes, sacrifice in the name of friendship is the most precious gift.（有時，以友誼之名做出的犧牲是最珍貴的禮物。）
The love for our family members often drives us to make unexpected sacrifices.（對家人的愛常常驅使我們做出意想不到的犧牲。）
In the journey of life, acts of friendship within the family are like lighthouses, guiding us.（在人生旅途中，家庭中的友誼之舉就像燈塔，指引著我們。）
八、寫作示范
第一篇
My mother was back!
She stared at me and the vase with a mix of shock and confusion. I stood there, rooted to the spot, waiting for her to explode. But instead, she burst out laughing. She said, “You silly child, why did you do this ” I told her about trying to protect my brother. She then hugged me and said, “Your kindness is more precious than the vase.” I felt a wave of relief wash over me.
While I was lying on my bed, I realized what I had done was an act of friendship.
I thought about how much my brother meant to me. Although my hair was a mess now, it was a small price to pay for protecting him. I made a vow to myself that I would always be there for my brother, no matter what silly situations we might get into. Because that's what true friendship and family are all about.
第二篇
My mother was back!
The moment she saw me with the vase attached to my hair, her eyes widened. I quickly explained the whole story. To my surprise, she didn't scold me. Instead, she gently removed the vase from my head, saying, “Your intention to protect your brother is sweet, but next time, come to me first.” I nodded, feeling grateful for her understanding.
While I was lying on my bed, I realized what I had done was an act of friendship.
I understood that the bond between my brother and me was unbreakable. My act was driven by love and a desire to keep him out of trouble. I realized that sometimes, our actions for the ones we love may lead to unexpected consequences, but the love itself is what truly matters. I closed my eyes, content with my decision to protect my brother.
【答案】
My mother was back! My brother rushed to his room and quickly pretended to be asleep, leaving me to deal with Mum all by myself. Before I could explain, my mother shouted angrily at me and grounded me because she thought I had broken the vase. I went to my room to think about what had happened. I was grounded and I was also going to have to go to school looking like a fool!
While I was lying on my bed, I realized what I had done was an act of friendship. I knew that even though my brother and I fought a lot, what I had done was absolutely selfless. I had paid a great price for this–my hair and my freedom! “Knock, knock,” sounded someone at my door. “Who is it ” I asked. My brother walked in and gave me a big hug. “Thank you,” he said gratefully. “You’re welcome,” I replied. I guess that’s what a big sister is for, to be a friend when you need one.

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