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We three were running down the path, shouting and laughing when our dog Rubby suddenly stopped in the distance. He turned around and eyed us, with his tail swinging up and down.
My little brother Toby immediately sped up and rushed to where Rubby was. He bent down. picked up something and ran back to us.
It was a bunch of keys. We gathered in a circle, examining the keys one by one. hoping to find some useful information about its owner. There were 3 keys — a house key, a mail key and a car key and a unique key fob (吊墜) very likely designed specially.
“Gosh, the owner might be in great trouble,” my sister sighed. She was right. We once lost our keys. Although we had an extra house key, it took our parents quite a long time to get a new mail key. let alone there was a car key.
Who might have lost them
Alter many wild guesses, we finally drew a conclusion. It might belong to someone in our neighborhood as only our neighbors wandered into the woods for a walk. But it was still impossible to figure out who it was. We had a very big neighborhood.
“The owner might come back to look for them,” Toby reminded.
So we decided to stay where we were, keeping a watchful eye on all passers-by. Our little dog ran in circles of excitement since we stayed so long in the wild. We remained in the woods for two hours, asking everyone we came across whether they lost their keys, but in vain.
It seemed we had to give up. But my sister wouldn’t, saying that she just couldn’t stop picturing the owner brushing aside tall grasses hoping to find the lost keys. “How anxious and upset the owner would be!”
I took a look at the bunch of keys again and quite by accident, found the key fob had the alarm button. “Look! If we press the alarm button, close enough of course, we can set off the owner’s car alarm.”
“That’s brilliant.”
注意：
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We rushed back to our neighborhood.
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The door opened and in front of us stood an old lady.
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文章大意：
“我們” 三人帶著小狗 Rubby 在小路上玩耍時，小狗撿到一串鑰匙，上面有三把鑰匙和一個獨特的鑰匙扣。想到失主可能會很著急，“我們” 猜測鑰匙可能是鄰居的，便在原地等了兩個小時詢問路人但無果。后來 “我” 發現鑰匙扣上有警報按鈕，于是決定回小區通過按警報來找車，進而找到失主。
伏筆以及在續寫中的回應：
伏筆：“There were 3 keys — a house key, a mail key and a car key and a unique key fob (吊墜) very likely designed specially.”（有三把鑰匙 —— 一把房門鑰匙、一把信箱鑰匙和一把汽車鑰匙，還有一個很可能是特別設計的獨特鑰匙扣。）
回應：續寫中通過鑰匙扣上的警報按鈕找到了汽車，進而確定了失主，體現出鑰匙扣這個獨特設計的重要性，推動了情節發展。
伏筆：“We had a very big neighborhood.”（我們的社區非常大。）
回應：這為 “我們” 在社區里尋找失主增加了難度，突出了 “我們” 堅持尋找的可貴，也使得找到失主后的成就感更強烈，同時呼應了按警報按鈕找車這一方法的必要性。
伏筆：“Our little dog ran in circles of excitement since we stayed so long in the wild.”（因為我們在野外待了這么久，我們的小狗興奮地跑來跑去。）
回應：在續寫中，小狗雖然沒有直接參與找失主的關鍵情節，但它的興奮狀態從側面反映出 “我們” 在等待和尋找過程中的堅持，與 “我們” 的行為形成一個整體氛圍，豐富了故事場景。
伏筆：“We remained in the woods for two hours, asking everyone we came across whether they lost their keys, but in vain.”（我們在樹林里待了兩個小時，問過我們遇到的每一個人是否丟了鑰匙，但都沒有結果。）
回應：突出了 “我們” 一開始尋找失主的困難，與后面通過按警報按鈕找到失主形成對比，體現出 “我們” 不放棄的精神，同時也為后面的情節轉折做了鋪墊。
伏筆：“It might belong to someone in our neighborhood as only our neighbors wandered into the woods for a walk.”（它可能是我們社區里的某個人的，因為只有我們的鄰居會到樹林里散步。）
回應：為 “我們” 回社區找失主提供了合理的理由，限定了尋找范圍，使故事的發展更具邏輯性，也讓讀者更容易理解 “我們” 的行為動機。
續寫要點（兩段）：
第一段：描述 “我們” 回到小區后，小心翼翼地按警報按鈕，仔細聽辨周圍車輛的反應，同時緊張又期待地觀察著周圍的動靜。當聽到警報聲后，如何興奮地循聲而去，最終確定是哪輛車，過程中可以增加一些對小區環境和 “我們” 心情的細節描寫，比如心跳加速、眼睛緊緊盯著周圍等，突出緊張刺激的氛圍。
第二段：重點刻畫老婦人開門后的反應，從她最初的疑惑到看到鑰匙后的驚喜和感激，通過語言、表情和動作等細節展現出來?！拔覀儭?看到她的反應后的內心感受，以及雙方簡單的交流互動，體現出幫助他人后的快樂和滿足，升華故事的情感。
情感線：
起初發現鑰匙時，“我們” 對失主充滿擔憂；在樹林等待失主無果后，有些失落但仍不想放棄；回到小區尋找時，心情緊張又期待；找到失主后，看到老婦人的感激，“我們” 內心充滿喜悅和成就感，完成了從擔憂到喜悅、從失落想放棄到堅持成功的情感轉變，突出了幫助他人所帶來的積極情感體驗。
故事線：
“我們” 玩耍時小狗撿到鑰匙，猜測是鄰居的并在樹林等待失主，無果后回小區利用鑰匙扣警報按鈕找車，最終確定失主是一位老婦人，歸還鑰匙后收獲感激，完整地講述了一個尋找失主歸還鑰匙的溫暖故事，情節緊湊且合理。
主旨升華句（5 句英文）：
A small act of kindness can be a big ray of hope in someone's cloudy day.（一個小小的善舉可能是某人陰霾日子里的一大束希望之光。）
In the journey of helping others, we often find the true meaning and value of our own existence.（在幫助他人的過程中，我們常常能找到自身存在的真正意義和價值。）
The warmth of kindness spreads like a wildfire, lighting up not only the receiver's heart but also our own.（善良的溫暖像野火一樣蔓延，不僅照亮了接受者的心，也照亮了我們自己的心。）
Sometimes, the simplest actions carry the most profound impact, teaching us the power of empathy and compassion.（有時，最簡單的行動卻有著最深遠的影響，讓我們懂得了同理心和同情心的力量。）
Every act of kindness is a seed sown in the garden of humanity, growing into a beautiful flower of connection and love.（每一個善舉都是在人性的花園里播下的一顆種子，成長為一朵連接與愛的美麗花朵。）
兩篇寫作示范：
第一篇：
We rushed back to our neighborhood. Toby clutched the keys, his face flushed with excitement. As we walked, I pressed the alarm button at short intervals, my ears straining to catch the faintest sound. The sun was beginning to set, casting long shadows on the pavement. Our steps quickened with every press, the anticipation building. Suddenly, a shrill beeping pierced the air. We dashed towards the sound, hearts pounding. There, in a driveway, was a blue car with its lights flashing. We had found it!
The door opened and in front of us stood an old lady. Her eyes widened in disbelief as she saw the keys in Toby's hand. "Oh, my goodness! I've been searching high and low. You dear children, how can I ever thank you " she exclaimed, her voice trembling with emotion. We smiled shyly, telling her it was no trouble at all. She insisted on giving us some homemade cookies, and as we munched on them, the sweetness filled not only our mouths but our hearts. It was in that moment that we realized the power of a simple act of kindness, and how it could turn a stranger's distress into a shared moment of joy.
第二篇：
We rushed back to our neighborhood. With bated breath, I pressed the alarm button, my eyes scanning every car we passed. The neighborhood was quiet, the only sound being our hurried footsteps and the intermittent beeping. My sister held Rubby's leash tightly, as if drawing strength from our furry friend. As we turned a corner, a loud alarm echoed through the street. We saw a white car with its hazard lights blinking. Relief washed over us as we knew we were close.
The door opened and in front of us stood an old lady. She looked at us with a mixture of surprise and gratitude. "I thought I'd lost them forever. You angels have saved me so much trouble," she said, tears glistening in her eyes. We handed her the keys, and she hugged us one by one. In that embrace, we felt a connection, a bond formed through kindness. This experience taught us that even the smallest gestures can have a profound impact, and that the kindness we give away always finds its way back to us in the most unexpected and beautiful ways.
讀后續寫參考答案
We rushed back to our neighborhood. We found a lot of cars in the neighborhood. We tried to pass each car, pressing the alarm button. But in vain. Just as we were about to give up when we suddenly discovered an old car parked in a nearby corner. When we pressed the button, the car’s lights were on and the car made a beep. We jumped with joy and at the same time, we recognized that that car belongs to an old lady near our house. She often drives this old car to go shopping.
The door opened and in front of us stood an old lady. The old lady looked unhappy. She said “hello, kids”. We took out the present and asked her if they were her keys. The old woman suddenly brightened up with surprise. The old woman said “God. It is you that find my keys.” She was very grateful to us and gave us the dessert she had made herself. We didn’t refuse it .We smiled to each other. It was a wonderful day.

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