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Susan had a secret: she loved robots. She had helped her dad in his workshop and knew a lot about motors, but her friends didn’t know this.
One day, she heard Alex and Jacob talking about their robot, Robbie. They were preparing for a big competition but Robbie wasn’t working properly. Susan was surprised by their courage, as they always seemed unpopular among the boys. She felt bad for them and wanted to help.
On the school bus home, Susan sat behind Alex and Jacob, who were still trying to fix their robot. “This is impossible! The legs move before you press the switch and stop after you press the switch!” Alex said, looking at Robbie’s legs, which were not moving right. “The competition is only eight days away!” Jacob looked sad. He thought they were going to lose.
“Umm, how did you connect the wires from the switch ” Susan asked quietly over their shoulders. Alex turned and gave her a cautious look. Susan smiled and asked, “Did you connect the NO wire or the NC wire to the motor ” The boys stared at her as if she had just landed from Mars.
Susan gently took the robot and pointed out the wire connected to the motor. “Here’s the problem!” She explained that it was the NC wire. It means the circuit (電路)is Normally Closed. She then pulled a loose wire out of the robot and explained that it was the NO wire, which means Normally Open.
“If you connect this wire instead, Robbie will walk when you press the switch.” Susan handed the robot back to Alex, who was staring at her with his mouth open.
“Change the wires and see,” she said before getting off the bus. Ten minutes later, her phone rang. It was Jacob: “Your idea worked, and we’re wondering if you could come over and help improve our Robbie.” Susan smiled. She knew she had made the right choice.
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After dinner, Susan walked cheerfully to Jacob's house.
……
Finally, the competition day came, and the new team was ready.
文章大意：Susan 熱愛機器人但不為人知，偶然聽到 Alex 和 Jacob 的機器人 Robbie 出故障，她主動幫忙指出電路連接問題，隨后受邀去幫忙改進。在比賽當天，他們的團隊表現出色并獲得第三名，從此 Susan 不再隱藏愛好，三人也成為好友。
故事山分析：
開端：Susan 聽到 Alex 和 Jacob 談論故障機器人，想幫忙。
發展：Susan 在公交上指出問題，后去幫忙改進。
高潮：比賽日到來，機器人出色表現。
結局：獲獎，三人成為好友。
伏筆及續寫回應：
伏筆：Susan 熱愛機器人且懂電機知識（為她能解決機器人問題做鋪墊）。
回應：在后續幫助中充分展現其專業知識，解決各種技術難題。
伏筆：Alex 和 Jacob 準備比賽但機器人故障（引出 Susan 幫忙情節）。
回應：Susan 的幫助使機器人恢復正常并不斷改進，最終參賽。
伏筆：Susan 詢問電線連接問題（暗示她能解決問題的能力）。
回應：通過更換電線解決了機器人腿部運動異常的問題。
伏筆：Jacob 打電話邀請 Susan 幫忙（推動故事發展，加深合作）。
回應：Susan 積極參與，進一步改進機器人，為比賽做準備。
伏筆：三人共同努力改進機器人（預示團隊合作的成果）。
回應：比賽中團隊協作，機器人表現出色，獲得名次。
續寫要點：
第一段：可以描述 Susan 到 Jacob 家后，他們如何進一步調試和優化 Robbie，比如檢查程序、調試傳感器等細節，以及遇到新問題時如何共同解決，突出三人合作的緊密和努力。
第二段：比賽現場，詳細描寫 Robbie 的精彩表現，如動作的流暢性、任務的完成情況等，以及三人的緊張心情和最終獲獎后的激動反應，包括觀眾的歡呼、評委的認可等場景。
情感線：Susan 從最初對自己熱愛機器人但因朋友不知而有所隱藏的狀態，轉變為勇敢展現自我并與 Alex 和 Jacob 建立深厚友誼。Alex 和 Jacob 從因機器人故障而沮喪焦慮，到對 Susan 提供幫助的驚訝與感激，再到與 Susan 合作成功后的喜悅和自豪，整個過程中團隊情感逐漸升溫，彼此信任與依賴增強，體現了友情在共同興趣和努力下的升華。
故事線：
Susan 熱愛機器人卻瞞著朋友。
聽到 Alex 和 Jacob 的機器人故障，主動詢問。
在公交上指出電線連接問題，機器人初步修復。
應邀請去 Jacob 家幫忙進一步改進機器人。
比賽日三人帶著 Robbie 參賽。
最終獲獎，Susan 不再隱藏愛好，三人成為好友。
主旨升華句：
True friendship is not only about sharing joys and sorrows but also about discovering and supporting each other's hidden passions.（真正的友誼不僅在于分享喜怒哀樂，還在于發現并支持彼此隱藏的熱情。）
In the journey of pursuit, the power of unity and the courage to reveal oneself can lead to unexpected achievements and precious friendships.（在追求的旅程中，團結的力量和展現自我的勇氣能夠帶來意想不到的成就和珍貴的友誼。）
Sometimes, a helping hand extended in secrecy can unlock the potential of friendship and success that lies beneath the surface.（有時，暗中伸出的援手能夠開啟隱藏在表面之下的友誼和成功的潛力。）
The beauty of friendship blossoms when we embrace our true selves and join hands with those who share our dreams, regardless of the initial differences.（當我們接納真實的自己并與那些懷有共同夢想的人攜手共進時，友誼之花便會綻放，無論最初有何差異。）
Hidden talents and kind hearts, when combined with the spirit of cooperation, can create a symphony of victory and a bond that lasts a lifetime.（隱藏的才能和善良的心，與合作精神相結合，能夠奏響勝利的交響曲和建立一生的紐帶。）
寫作示范：
范文一
After dinner, Susan walked cheerfully to Jacob's house. Once inside, they huddled around Robbie, checking every detail meticulously. Susan adjusted the motor speed while Alex fine-tuned the control panel. Jacob double-checked the connections, and they tested Robbie's movements again and again. When a new glitch emerged with the sensor, Susan calmly analyzed the problem and found a solution. Their teamwork was seamless, and as the night grew late, they felt confident and ready for the competition.
Finally, the competition day came, and the new team was ready. Standing on the stage, Susan, Alex, and Jacob held their breaths as Robbie powered on. The audience watched in anticipation. Robbie smoothly navigated through the obstacle course, performing each task with precision. The cheers grew louder with every successful move. When the final scores were tallied, they had achieved an impressive third place. The boys rushed to Susan, hugging her tightly. Their friendship had been forged through the love of robotics, and Susan knew she had found a place where she could be herself.
范文二
After dinner, Susan walked cheerfully to Jacob's house. The moment she arrived, they got down to business. Susan examined Robbie's programming, finding several areas for improvement. She patiently explained the changes to Alex and Jacob, and together they worked to implement them. They faced challenges with the battery life, but Susan's quick thinking led to a makeshift solution. As the hours passed, Robbie became more advanced and reliable.
Finally, the competition day came, and the new team was ready. The stage was set, and the tension was palpable. When Robbie started its performance, it was like a well-choreographed dance. The judges were impressed by its fluid movements and accurate responses. The crowd erupted in applause. At the end of the competition, the team's hard work paid off with a well-deserved third-place finish. Susan, Alex, and Jacob beamed with pride. Their shared passion had not only led to success but also to a friendship that would last, proving that when we embrace our interests and help others, wonderful things can happen.
參考例文：
After dinner, Susan walked cheerfully to Jacob’s house. On arriving, she was greeted by the curious inquiries from Alex and Jacob, who were busy trying out ways to make Robbie stand out. “The way you fix the problem! That’s awesome! How would you know it ” Smilingly, Susan explained how she loved and helped her dad with robots, and offered to join them. Excited, Jacob exclaimed, “Let’s get started!” The new team worked tirelessly, experimenting with wires and adjusting Robbie’s arms and legs. Within a week, they made Robbie walk, run, and perform additional moves, even giving him a voice! On the seventh day, they completed their masterpiece.
Finally. the competition day arrived, and the new team was ready. As they displayed Robbie, they noticed robots of various kinds were presented. Few paid attention to their work until Jacob pressed the switch on Robbie. Robbie moved flexibly, sped up as directed, and even made a bounce and landed steadily. Amazed, people began to gather. When Robbie suddenly took a bow, introducing himself with a human-like voice, “Hi! I am Robbie. Nice to meet you!” the crowed erupted, clapping and cheering for the team’s creativity. They won a big prize, along with the joy of being seen and recognized. Seeing Alex and Jacob's beaming faces, Susan felt a sense of pride and delight, realizing she had made the right choice.

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