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讀后續寫素材
技法一　人物肖像描寫
[常用詞塊]
1．a graceful figure優美的身段
2．a slim figure苗條的身材
3．have a good figure(人)形體很好
4．a well built man體格健美的人
5．an average build中等身材
6．improve one's figure改善形體
7．a tall figure in black一個黑衣高個子人影
8．a man with a beard留著胡須的人
9．a serious young man嚴肅的年輕人
10．a good looking woman 一個漂亮的女人
11．show off her lovely figure顯露出她優美的身段
12．wear round glasses戴著圓框眼鏡
13．a girl in her early twenties 20歲出頭的姑娘
[常用語句]
1．He had a wide mouth and grey eyes.他有一張大嘴和灰色的眼睛。
2．Her face lit up with surprise.她一臉驚詫。
3．He has two big eyes under a pair of thick eyebrows.
在一對濃密的眉毛下是他兩只大大的眼睛。
4．I'd noticed that his eyes were black—coal black.
我注意到他的眼睛是黑色的——炭黑色的。
5．She'd arrived late for class，her hair wet and messy.
她上課遲到了，頭發又濕又亂。
6．She was fair skinned，having reddish hair and long fingers.
她皮膚白皙，有著紅發和修長的手指。
7．His strongly built body and sun tanned skin make him look like a sportsman.
強壯的身體和曬得黝黑的皮膚使他看起來像一個運動員。
8．Everything about him was old except his eyes and they were the same color as the sea and were cheerful and undefeated.
他身上的一切都顯得古老，除了那雙眼睛，它們像海水一般藍，是愉快而不肯認輸的。
9．He has blue eyes，and silver hair that spills onto his forehead.
他有著藍色的眼睛和散落在前額的銀發。
10．The young woman was tall，with grace and elegance.She had a great amount of dark hair and a face more beautiful than any other，with dark，mysterious eyes.She was polite and well mannered，with a tender look.
這個年輕的女人很高，且很優雅。她有一頭烏黑的頭發，她的臉比其他任何人的都漂亮，她有一雙黑而神秘的眼睛。她彬彬有禮，舉止文雅，目光溫柔。
技法二　人物神態描寫
[常用詞塊]
1．a satisfied look滿意的表情
2．an encouraging expression一個令人鼓舞的表情
3．be in high spirits精神高漲
4．be wild with delight欣喜若狂
5．cry one's heart out悲痛欲絕
6．be seized with panic驚慌失措
7．come as something of a surprise有點驚訝
8．be speechless with anger氣得說不出話
9．get mad/cross at sb.對某人勃然大怒
10．in a polite and friendly manner以禮貌友好的方式
11．jump with joy高興地跳起來
12．on top of the world心滿意足，非常幸福
13．be keen on喜愛，對……著迷
[常用語句]
1．A look of surprise came over her face.她露出一副驚訝的表情。
2．Mom's face was full of pain.媽媽的臉上寫滿了痛苦。
3．He turned to me，with his eyes full of horror.
他轉身望著我，眼里充滿了恐懼。
4．Her eyes gleamed and her fragile face broke into a smile.
她的眼睛閃爍著光芒，精致的臉龐展露出微笑。
5．Color glowed in his face and his strange eyes widened with joyfulness.
他的臉漲得通紅，那雙奇怪的眼睛瞪得大大的，充滿了歡樂。
6．Aleey became happy now and a gentle smile spread across her face.
阿利變得很開心，整張臉洋溢著溫和的微笑。
7．She rode the rest of the way home wearing a smile of peace and grace.
她帶著平和優雅的微笑，騎行完回家剩余的路。
8．He was glaring down at me，his black eyes full of disgust.
他怒視著我，黑色眼瞳里充滿了厭惡。
9．His eyes lit up when she walked into the room.A smile lit up her face.The smile spread across her face，which lit up his gloomy afternoon.
看見她走進房間，他兩眼一亮。她笑了，臉上露出了喜色。她滿臉的微笑點亮了他陰郁的下午。
技法三　人物個性描寫
[常用詞塊]
1．a sense of responsibility責任感
2．a good tempered woman脾氣隨和的女人
3．a man of great personality極有個性的人
4．an ambitious person有抱負的人
5．a promising young man有前途的青年
6．an attractive girl迷人的姑娘
7．a talkative guy一個健談的人
8．a woman of fine character品性良好的女子
9．have a weak character個性不強
10．be optimistic and confident樂觀自信
11．an outspoken man說話直率的人
12．look good natured看上去和藹可親
13．stand out from the crowd脫穎而出
[常用語句]
1．He has bright eyes，making people feel that he is so smart，playful and lively.
他有一雙明亮的眼睛，讓人感到是那樣的機靈、俏皮、活潑。
2．Indeed，I grew up to be strong and fearless.
的確，我從小到大就是一副天不怕、地不怕的性格。
3．She is very clear about her goal，and is fighting for it firmly.
她對自己的奮斗目標很明確，并且在堅定地為此拼搏。
4．He is a man of extraordinary will power and never admits being defeated.
他具有非凡的意志，永不言敗。
5．My grandfather loves to be clean and tidy，always keeping his room spotless.
爺爺特別愛整潔，總是把自己的房間打掃得一塵不染。
6．I am eager for independence，so I dislike it when mom does everything for me.
我渴望自立，所以不喜歡媽媽凡事都替我做好。
7．She always likes to split hairs about whose turn it is to wash the dishes.
關于該誰洗碗這個問題，她總是喜歡較真。
8．My grandma，aged 80，is still young at heart and likes to dress up in style.
我80歲的奶奶人老心不老，穿著打扮可時髦了。
9．She looks serious and is seldom seen to smile.She seems to be difficult to get along with.
她看上去很嚴肅，很少見她笑，似乎不好相處。
10．She has a cheerful character，like a man，and nothing difficult makes her frown.
她性格爽朗，像個男子漢，任何困難都難使她愁眉不展。
技法四　人物情感描寫
[常用詞塊]
1．be greatly moved極為感動
2．be content with對……感到滿意
3．be excited with joy at the success為成功而欣喜
4．be delighted at對……很高興
5．yell with delight快樂得大喊
6．fall into despair陷入絕望
7．a strong sense of loss強烈的失落感
8．with a heavy heart懷著沉重的心情
9．lose one's spirits心灰意懶
10．be down in spirits情緒低落
11．complain constantly不斷地抱怨
12．run out of the room in a burst of anger怒氣沖沖地跑出房間
13．express one's complaint about對……表示不滿
14．feel inspired/encouraged感到鼓舞的
15．be displeased with one's conduct對某人的行為感到不滿
[常用語句]
1．He put it back into his pack，rose to his feet and staggered on.He was too tired to move on.
他把它放回背包里，站起身來，硬撐著向前。他累得走不動了。
2．She began to yawn，stretching her arms.She was so tired that she could hardly concentrate on her work.
她開始打呵欠，伸懶腰。她太累了，幾乎無法專心工作。
3．Instead of obeying，Jim dropped onto the couch，put his hands under the back of his head，and smiled.吉姆沒有服從，而是坐到沙發上，雙手放在腦后，微笑著。
4．She sat on a chair in her ball dress，without strength to go to bed.
她穿著舞會禮服坐在椅子上，沒有力氣去床上睡覺。
5．Mariam sat on her bed，embarrassed and confused.She cupped her face with her hands and closed her eyes.She breathed and breathed until she felt calmer.瑪利亞姆尷尬又困惑地坐在她的床上。她用雙手捂著臉，閉上了眼睛。她深呼吸著，直到她平靜下來。
6．There was clearly nothing left to do but drop herself onto the shabby little couch and weep.
很明顯，除了坐在破舊的小沙發上哭泣，她什么也做不了。
7．Matthew groaned as he turned about and walked slowly down the platform towards her.
馬修呻吟著轉過身來，慢慢地下臺朝她走去。
8．He trembled slightly，shaking his head and turned to the girl to give her a look of pity.
他微微顫抖著，搖著頭，轉頭憐憫地看向那個女孩。
9．There was silence.I realized I did not want to listen to any more，and started to move softly away from the door，grumbling in a low voice.
屋里一片沉默。我意識到我不想再聽下去了，于是開始輕輕地從門口走出去，小聲地嘟囔著。
10．All the air seemed to disappear from the room in a rush.Someone coughed.I stood up，and wiped my hands on my jeans.所有的空氣似乎都迅速地從房間里消失了。有人咳嗽。我站起來，在我的牛仔褲上擦拭著我的手。
技法五　人物行為描寫
[常用詞塊]
1．keep up one's spirits振作精神
2．flame with anger氣得滿臉通紅
3．have a worried look愁眉苦臉
4．walk gracefully優雅地行走
5．make one's first appearance首次露面
6．fail to carry out one's duties沒有履行職責
7．attract one's attention吸引某人的注意
8．with the hope of doing...希望做……
9．in the belief that...相信……
10．show no signs of tiredness毫無倦意
11．cast a glance at sb.朝某人瞥了一眼
12．eat one's words收回前言，承認說錯
13．make a remark upon sth.就某事發表意見
14．jump to one's feet一躍而起
[常用語句]
1．The smile froze on her lips.她嘴角的笑容僵住了。
2．Her eyes were fixed on the screen.她目不轉睛地盯著屏幕。
3．They stared at each other and came near to a breakdown.
他們看著對方，都快精神崩潰了。
4．She caught her breath in a short gasp and felt herself turn pale.
她猛吐一口氣，喘過氣，覺得自己臉色蒼白。
5．Diana stood there，white faced and breathless.
黛安娜站在那里，臉色蒼白，氣喘吁吁。
6．She turned to him with a frightened look.她害怕地看著他。
7．A look of surprise passed across Assef's face，briefly，and disappeared.
阿塞夫短暫地驚訝了一下，又恢復了原樣。
8．The eyes turned slowly and looked at her sharply and steadily.
那雙眼睛慢慢地轉過來，目光銳利而堅定地注視著她。
9．She hugged them to her chest，and at last she was able to look up with tearful eyes and a smile.
她把它們緊緊地抱在胸前，最后她終于抬起頭來，淚流滿面地微笑著。
10．One day she came into my room laughing merrily.Putting my hand on her face，she spelled l a u g h.Then she tickled me into a burst of laughter.
有一天，她愉快地笑著走進我的房間，把我的手放在她的臉上，拼出了l a u g h。然后她撓我，癢得我發出一陣大笑。
技法六　人物對話描寫
[常用詞塊]
1．say proudly/gently/softly/angrily/seriously/firmly/cheerfully自豪地/溫柔地/柔和地/生氣地/嚴肅地/堅定地/高興地說
2．add that補充說……
3．remind sb.that...提醒某人……
4．explain sth.clearly清楚地解釋某事
5．announce/declare that...宣布……
6．make an announcement/a declaration that...宣布……
7．whisper to sb.gently對某人溫柔耳語
8．yell out/cry out to sb.大聲朝某人喊叫
9．make a complaint about...抱怨……
10．comment on/make comments on評論……
11．object to/raise an objection to反對……
12．disagree with不同意……
13．claim that聲稱
14．reply directly to直接答復……
15．ask curiously好奇地問
技法七　背景場景描寫
[常用詞塊]
1．a room facing south一間朝南的房間
2．a village among the hills群山環抱的村莊
3．a well located city位置優越的城市
4．a remote village一個偏遠的村莊
5．the thinly populated rural area人煙稀少的農村地區
6．be situated in a quiet spot near the river坐落在河邊一個僻靜的地方
7．a fierce/heavy/violent storm狂風暴雨
8．in the warm spring sunshine在春天溫暖的陽光里
9．a stormy night暴風雨之夜
10．in the pouring rain在傾盆大雨中
11．clear up(天氣)放晴
12．continuous/constant rain連綿陰雨
13．be bathed in the sunshine沐浴陽光
14．a dark and rainy evening漆黑的雨夜
15．in a mess一片混亂
[常用語句]
1．The sun began to rise in the sky，bathing the mountain in golden light.
太陽開始緩緩升起，給山披上了一層金紗。
2．The sun rose over a quiet world and looked warmly down at the peaceful village.
太陽在一個寧靜的世界里升起，溫暖地俯視著這個寧靜的村莊。
3．The sky is clear blue now and the sun is shining on the meadow and the river bank.
此時已是晴空萬里，陽光灑在草原和河岸上。
4．The rose looks like an angel，swaying in the wind，dancing in the sun.
這朵玫瑰就像是在風中搖擺、在陽光下跳舞的天使。
5．The grounds were covered with dark green grass，through which stretched a straight stone path.
那兒處處是碧綠的芳草，綠草中延伸出一條筆直的石路。
6．The beautiful scenery is a feast for my eyes.
美麗的景色令我大飽眼福。
7．These magnificent scenes offered me the greatest comfort that I was capable of receiving.
這些壯美的景色給了我極大的安慰。
8．Nanjing，a famous historic city，is still vigorous in her new youth.
南京，這座歷史名城，依然充滿青春的活力。
9．It was so quiet in the classroom that the sound of a needle in the ground could be heard.
教室里靜得落針可聞。
10．When we reached the top of the hill，a magnificent view of the sea greeted us.
當我們到達山頂時，我們看到了一片壯麗的海景。
P115技法三　打造續寫的龍頭和鳳尾
1．巧用形容詞/副詞(短語)
①Happily and excitedly，they went to the supermarket for what they needed.
②Exhausted and hungry，I wondered if we could find our way back.
③Curious to know what was inside，he tiptoed into the dark cave.
④A few minutes later，the bear headed back to our camp.The bear roared at us，our frightened mouths wide open.(2020·浙江7月)
2．巧用分詞(短語)
①Seeing the mess in the kitchen，he immediately understood what had happened，but he wasn't upset.(2021·新高考全國Ⅰ卷)
②With everything ready，Bernard started out on his new business.Feeling shy，Bernard didn't dare to peddle(叫賣) his popcorn.(2020·新高考全國Ⅰ卷)
③A few weeks later the boy arrived home from university.Hurrying home，he couldn't wait to see his old friend Poppy.(2020·浙江1月)
④We had no idea where we were and it was getting dark.Wandering around，we were still stuck in the dilemma.(2018·浙江6月)
3．巧用高級句式
①I was stuck for five or six minutes though it felt much longer.My brother came up with an idea that he could cut the pumpkin with a knife.(同位語從句)(2021·浙江1月)
②When Mrs Meredith heard of John's idea，she thought it was a good one，too.So they took immediate action as John had proposed.(時間狀語從句)(2020·新高考全國Ⅰ卷)
③At the very moment，the helicopter arrived.It hovered over the camp，causing strong wind that blew the bear unsteady on his feet.(非謂語動詞＋定語從句) (2020·浙江7月)
4．巧用倒裝結構
①Dad opened the box and a sweet little dog appeared.Hardly had the little dog come out when Poppy came over to lick it as if it were a long lost friend.(2020·浙江1月)
②At the very moment，the helicopter arrived.So loud was the noise of the helicopter that the bear seemed to be disturbed for a while.(2020·浙江7月)
③Suddenly a little rabbit jumped out in front of my horse.I got a fright，so did my horse.
5．巧用強調句結構
①That video was posted the day before Halloween.It was my brother who did that for amusement.(2021·浙江1月)
②A few minutes later，the bear came back.It was with great strength that the bear shook and tore the fence.(2020·浙江7月)
二、漂亮結尾5法
1．畫面定格法
(1)人物動作的畫面定格
①Slowly，almost reluctantly，she placed her arm with apparently unaccustomed affection around her mother's shoulders and gently guided her back into the crowd.
慢慢地，幾乎不情愿地，她的胳膊摟住母親的肩膀，明顯帶著生疏，輕輕地引導她回到人群中。
②Never had Dora received such a gift.Speechless and happy，she held her son tightly into her arms，with tears welling up in her eyes.
朵拉從來沒有收到過這樣的禮物。她高興得說不出話來，把兒子緊緊地抱在懷里，淚水奪眶而出。
③Then the butterfly would stay together with her lover forever.On the top of the mountain，she seemed to enjoy the sunrise and the sunset happily with them.
然后蝴蝶就會和她的愛人永遠待在一起。在山頂上，她似乎和他們一起愉快地享受著日出和日落。
(2)特殊寓意的寫景畫面
①The sky was a billion pure eyes of light and the grass green underfoot；it was as if night and day had become one beautiful moment.Dawn had come.
天空像是十億只純凈的眼睛拼接在一起，腳下是青草，仿佛黑夜和白晝已成為一個美麗的時刻。黎明已經來臨。(黎明到來的畫面)
②The crystal and cerulean water was gentle as I waded through it，the sunset like orange paint on a blue canvas.
當我涉過水晶般天藍色的輕柔的水時，日落就像藍色畫布上的橙色顏料。 (日落時的美好畫面)
③The moon under siege by stars seemed to lighten the night，bringing forth stars that shone and hung in the blackness.The never ending blackness consumed everything.
被群星圍困的月亮似乎照亮了黑夜，帶來了在黑暗中閃耀和懸掛著的群星。無盡的黑暗吞噬了一切。(描寫夜空的畫面)
④Looking up，I saw the sun shine brighter than I ever knew before.
抬頭一看，我看到太陽比我以前所知道的還要明亮。(特殊寓意)
⑤A dense earthly sweet smell rises from the ground，enveloping everything within its soft embrace.
一股濃郁的泥土般的芬芳從地上升起，把一切都包裹在它柔軟的懷抱里。(雨后清新的畫面)
2．對話收尾法
(1)When asked how the reunion with his father will change his life，Chester said，“I got family everywhere，so it might lead to many more trips now.”
當被問及與父親團聚將如何改變他的生活時，切斯特說：“我到處都有家人，所以現在可能會導致更多的旅行?！?br/>(2)“Even now，I can hardly believe this dog traveled such a long distance to find us，” said Nina，“I would never give this kind of friend away again.I never grow tired of repeating this—animals are the most devoted and loving creatures.They need our love and care.”
“即使是現在，我也簡直不敢相信這只狗走了這么遠的距離尋找我們，”尼娜說，“我再也不會放棄這種朋友了。我從來沒有厭倦過重復這些話——動物是最忠誠和最可愛的生物。他們需要我們的愛和關心?！?br/>(3)They hung all the things back to the wall.Jack asked Paisley，“Are you really willing to lead a tough life with me？” She patted away the ashes on hands and looked at the walls with loads of stuff on them satisfactorily，saying，“Yes! For me，it is not a suffering to live.”
他們把所有的東西都掛在墻上。杰克問佩斯利：“你真的愿意和我一起過艱難的生活嗎？”她拍了拍手上的灰，滿意地看著掛滿東西的墻，說：“是的！對我來說，這樣生活并不是一種痛苦?！?br/>3．主題升華法
(1)Someday，when I am older and have children of my own，I hope I can be just as great a parent as my mom.
有一天，當我長大了，有了自己的孩子，我希望我能成為和我媽媽一樣偉大的父母。(母愛的深遠影響)
(2)In my opinion，money can't take the place of everything，such as your life，your time and your happiness.
在我看來，金錢不能取代一切，比如你的生活、你的時間和你的幸福。(表達自己的價值觀)
(3)As a proverb says，“Every coin has two sides.” Making full use of your strength is your achievement.Please remember that in no case will you give up especially in trouble.God is fair to everyone.
正如諺語所說，“事物都有兩面性?！背浞掷媚愕牧α烤褪悄愕某删?。請記住，無論如何你都不要放棄，尤其是在麻煩中。上帝對每個人都是公平的。(借用名言警句來升華主題)
4．結尾留白法
(1)“Would you be interested in joining me in a bite to eat？” I asked.“I'd love to，” she replied，her eyes sparkling like diamonds.And，this was the beginning of the end to my months of heartbreak following Betsy's death.“你有興趣和我一起吃點東西嗎？”我問道。“我很樂意去，”她回答，眼睛像鉆石一樣閃閃發光。我在貝特西死后幾個月的心碎終于開始慢慢愈合。(故事結尾留白，給予讀者想象空間)
(2)He unwrapped the white tissue paper，but to his surprise，there was no hard rock candy inside.Instead，into his fingers fell a shiny white pearl worth thousands of dollars.
他打開白色包裝紙，但令他驚訝的是，里面沒有硬糖果。相反，一顆價值數千美元的閃亮的白色珍珠落進了他的手指里。
5．首尾呼應法
(1)開頭：I had an interesting childhood.It was filled with surprises and amusements，all because of my mother—loving，sweet，yet absent minded and forgetful.One strange family trip we took when I was eleven tells a lot about her.
結尾：Despite mom's being absent minded and forgetful，she was still a kind and nice mom.
(2)開頭：It was summer，and my dad wanted to treat me to a vacation like never before.He decided to take me on a trip to the Wild West.
結尾：Never had I had such a thrilling yet dangerous vacation before.The special trip to the Wild West was deeply engraved in my mind.
(3)開頭：A funny thing happened to Arthur when he was on the way to work one day.
結尾：What a funny day！Arthur couldn't stop laughing whenever he looked back on this funny experience.

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