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八上Unit4話題寫作指導-動物保護一
動物保護
寫作任務
動物是人類的朋友。假如你是李華，你們學校打算舉行一個有關“保護野生動物”的征文比賽，請根據(jù)下面提示，用英語寫一篇文章，呼吁大家保護動物。演講稿不少于80詞。
1. 野生動物的現(xiàn)狀；
2. 野生動物處于危機中的原因；
3. 保護野生動物的措施。
題型分析
該篇體裁為議論文。要求根據(jù)提示，介紹保護野生動物的必要性及相關措施。以第一人稱復數(shù)為主，時態(tài)主要為一般現(xiàn)在時。
思路點撥
本文可以分為三個層次來寫：
1. 第一層，講述野生動物的現(xiàn)狀，如：數(shù)量越來越少，甚至有些瀕臨滅絕。
as we know, be important to
the number of…is smaller and smaller
die out
2. 第二層，闡述野生動物為何遇到危機，如：人類的捕殺、破壞環(huán)境等等。
kill…for…
3. 第三層，呼吁大家愛護動物，具體要如何做。如：保護它們的家園，宣傳重要性等等。
first, second, then…
should/had better/must/need to…
the importance of

范文參考
As we know, the animals are our friends. But the number of them is becoming smaller and smaller, some of them are even dying out, such as blue whales and Chinese tigers. Why Because some people often kill wild animals for their meat, fur and bones. For another, people destroy their living places.(另一方面，人類破壞了它們的棲居地)
It's time for us to protect the wild animals. We should make people know the importance of doing so. We must prevent people from killing animals. What's more(此外), we shouldn't buy the fur or eat the meat of wild animals.
I'm sure that saving wild animals is saving ourselves.
話題一拓展
保護植物、自然、森林
寫作任務
若要求以“保護森林”、“保護自然”等為題進行書面表達，其實結(jié)構與上文”保護野生動物“類似，只是細節(jié)要進行修改。如下題:
森林對人類非常重要，它不僅能凈化空氣，調(diào)節(jié)氣候，還能給我們提供木材、藥材和水果等，同時，森林也是許多動物的棲居地，是人類放松自我的好去處。然而，由于人們的肆意砍伐，森林面積在減少。請根據(jù)提示寫一篇短文，不少于80詞。
1. 森林對人類和動物都很重要；
2. 森林面積減少，如何保護森林。
范文參考
As we know, forests are important to humans and animals. They're the lungs of the earth. They help to make the air fresher and cleaner. They provide us with wood, medicine, fruite and so on. They also play an important part in controlling the climate. Meanwhile(同時), we can enjoy the beauty of nature there.
But the forests are becomig smaller and smaller. It's time for us to protect them. First, we should make some people know about the importance of protecting forests, and ask them not to cut down trees without plans. As for us, we need to use less paper and don't waste it. When we have meals, we had better not use disposable chopsticks(一次性筷子).
I'm sure that saving forests is saving ourselves.
災害發(fā)生時如何自救
寫作任務
福建多臺風。當臺風即將來臨時，我們應該怎么做呢？請根據(jù)下列提示，寫一篇短文。適當拓展，不少于80詞。
1. 儲備食物和水，關好門窗，盡量呆在室內(nèi)。
2. 若在室外，要遠離大樹和電線桿等；
3. 小心被臺風吹落的物品。
題型分析
本寫作是一篇描述在臺風來臨時應如何應對的說明文。寫作時可用第一人稱或第二人稱，主要時態(tài)為一般現(xiàn)在時。
思路點撥
本文可分為兩段來寫：
1. 第一段可引出主題，臺風很危險，所以要懂得自我保護的措施；
… is dangerous, so…
2. 第二段根據(jù)提示，依次描述自我保護的措施，并在文末加以總結(jié)；
first, second, third…
the most important thing is stay calm
范文參考
Typhoon is a big, strong storm. It can be very dangerous. So knowing some ways to protect ourselves will help us to keep safe in a typhoon.
First, we need to prepare enough food and water before the typhoon comes. Second, we should close the windows and doors. When the typhoon strikes, the wind blows strongly and sometimes it can knock down the windows or trees, so we must keep away from them. We should also be careful of power lines or anything that may fall on us. Third, we had better stay at home. Home is the safest place for us. Last but not least, we should stay calm. That is the most important thing to do in a typhoon or other disaster.
火災或其它自然災害中如何自救
寫作任務
火對于人們非常重要，但有時又很危險。倘若家中不慎發(fā)生火災，我們應該采取怎樣的自救措施呢？請根據(jù)你的常識，寫一篇短文，不少于80詞。
范文參考
Fire plays an important part in our everyday life, but sometimes it can be very dangerous. knowing some ways to protect yourself will help you to keep safe in a fire.
First, you should stay calm. That is the most important thing to do when a fire breaks out. Next, call 119 as soon as possible. If you don't have a phone, you need to open the window and ask your neighbors for help. But don't try to jump out of the window. Then, you should cover your nose and mouth with the wet cloth(濕布). It can protect you from fire smoke. What's more(此外), if you can run out of the house on fire, never take the lift.
互聯(lián)網(wǎng)的利弊
寫作任務
如今，互聯(lián)網(wǎng)如水和空氣，已然成為了我們生活不可或缺的一部分。但任何事物都有利與弊，互聯(lián)網(wǎng)也不例外。它就像一把雙刃劍，利用得好，當能帶來很多便利，但若利用不好，它也如洪水猛獸。請根據(jù)表格提示，寫一篇短文，談談互聯(lián)網(wǎng)的利弊以及我們應該如何正確對待它。不少于80詞。開頭已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)。
The Internet is becoming more and more popular. However, everything has its advantages and disadvantages and the Internet is not an exception.（互聯(lián)網(wǎng)正變得越來越流行。然而，一切事物都有利有弊，互聯(lián)網(wǎng)也不例外。）
題型分析
該篇體裁為議論文，要求探討互聯(lián)網(wǎng)的利與弊，以及正確利用互聯(lián)網(wǎng)。寫作時可用第一人稱，時態(tài)主要為一般現(xiàn)在時。
思路點撥
本文寫作時要將表內(nèi)所有的提示都用上，并進行適當發(fā)揮，增加一些過渡性的句子，使文章更加流暢。建議分為兩段來寫：
1. 第一段接著句首，闡述互聯(lián)網(wǎng)的利處與弊端；
on one hand…, on the other hand…
play an important part in…/ be useful
however…
2. 第二段談論如何利用好互聯(lián)網(wǎng)，使其發(fā)揮積極的作用；總結(jié)全文。
make good use of…
I believe/ I'm sure…
范文參考
The Internet is becoming more and more popular. However, everything has its advantages and disadvantages and the Internet is not an exception. On one hand(一方面), the Internet plays an important part in our daily life. We can do a lot of things on the Internet, such as studying, watching movies, finding information and chatting with our friends. We can also do some shopping without leaving home. The Internet provides us with a colorful world and makes our lives easier. On the other hand(另一方面), the Internet isn't perfect. There are a lot of bad things on the Internet. It's easy for teenagers to be cheated(青少年容易被騙). And some students spend too much time playing computer games and stay up late. It's bad for their study and health.
We should make good use of the Internet. I believe it will be our helper as long as we know how to control ourselves. （我們要利用好互聯(lián)網(wǎng)。我相信，只要我們懂得如何控制自己，它就將會是我們的好幫手。）

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