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八上Unit3話題寫作指導
描述興趣愛好
寫作任務
不同的人有不同的興趣愛好。愛好可以是單一的，也可以是多元的。它還會隨著時間，甚至隨著季節的變化而變化。假設你是李華，請根據表格的提示，介紹一下你和朋友們現在及過去的興趣愛好。不少于80詞。開頭已給出，不計入總詞數。
題型分析
該篇體裁為記敘文，要求根據表格的內容，寫自己和兩位朋友過去及現在的興趣愛好。寫作時要注意不同人稱的轉化，時態主要為一般過去時和一般現在時。
思路點撥
1. 根據表格提示，可知本文主要從“過去”和“現在”兩個方面來寫。這里要注意不同時態的轉換，也要注意使用過渡詞匯，避免單調乏味。
used to do sth. (過去)
be interested in, be fond of, like/enjoy/love/prefer…
as for me, but, however…
2. 可根據表內所列愛好進行拓展，如某愛好帶來了什么益處，使自己收獲了什么。這樣可以彰顯文章層次，也使內容更加豐富。
3. 結尾可以進行總結點題。如：愛好能使我們的生活更美好；愛好給我們帶來快樂與安慰。
Hobbies make our life colorful and interesting.
Hobbies bring us happiness and comfort.
范文參考
Different people have different hobbies. We students also have our own hobbies, and they can change with time. As for me, I used to collect stamps. But now I like reading books. Good books bring me peace of mind, and I can learn a lot from them. Jane and Mike are my good friends. Jane used to like watching movies at home or at the movie theater. Now she is interested in playing the violin. She thinks violin music is wonderful. Mike used to play computer games. Then his parents advised him to do some outdoor activities. Now he is fond of playing basketball. It is great fun for him.
Hobbies make our life colorful and interesting.
去除開頭，共99詞
介紹一位音樂家
寫作任務
郎朗（Lang Lang）是一位享譽中外的鋼琴演奏家，甚至被西方媒體贊譽為“中國的莫扎特”。請根據以下提示，以“Lang Lang——A Famous Musician”為題，向大家簡要地介紹一下這位著名的音樂家。不少于80詞。
1. 郎朗是世界著名的音樂家之一。他于1982年6月14日出生于遼寧省沈陽市。他不怎么創作曲子，但卻極其擅長演奏鋼琴。
2. 兩歲時，由于一部動畫片《貓和老鼠》（cartoon: Tom and Jerry），郎朗對鋼琴產生了濃厚的興趣，并于三歲正式學習鋼琴。五歲時第一次參加鋼琴比賽，就獲得了第一名。1996年，他去美國繼續學習(continue his study)。2005年，他被邀請至白宮(White House)開演奏會。
3. 他的成功離不開他的努力以及永不言棄。我們可以從他身上學到很多。
題型分析
該篇為人物介紹。一般用第三人稱，主要時態為一般過去時及一般現在時。難度較之前的寫作任務，略有提升。
思路點撥
根據材料提示，本文可以分為三段來寫。
1. 第一段介紹郎朗的基本情況；
one of，be good at，do well in
2. 第二段按照時間線，簡要介紹郎朗學習鋼琴的經歷；
Because of a cartoon, he became/was interested in…
When he was… at the age of…
It was his first time to…
be invited to the White House to… 被邀請至白宮……
3. 第三段進行總結，我們可以從他身上學習到很多。
work hard, never give up, learn a lot from him
范文參考
Lang Lang is one of famous musicians in the world today. He was born on June 14th, 1982 in Shenyang, Liaoning. He is not good at writing music, but he does well in playing the piano.
Because of a cartoon called Tom and Jerry, he was interested in piano. After one year when he was three, he began to learn to play it. He took part in a piano competition at the age of five. It was his first time to join in the competition and he got the first prize. In 1996, he went to America to continue his study. In 2005, he was invited to the White House to give a concert.
Lang Lang always works hard and never gives up. We can learn a lot from him.
共130詞，也可根據具體情況改成“My Favorite Musician”
用過去進行時進行寫作
寫作任務
假設你是李華，上星期六，你度過了充實的一天。請根據下面表格，介紹自己一天的活動。不少于80詞。開頭已給出，不計入總詞數。
題型分析
該篇體裁為記敘文，要求介紹自己在過去的一天所做的事情。寫作時應使用第一人稱，主要時態為過去進行時和一般過去時。
思路點撥
本文寫作時要將表內所有的提示都用上，并進行適當發揮，增加一些過渡性的句子，使文章更加流暢。注意過去進行時的結構為 was/were+動詞的現在分詞形式。
范文參考
I had a busy day last Saturday. I got up at 7:00 a.m. and then I had a breakfast with my parents. From 7:30 a.m. to 9:00 a.m., I was reading a book. From 9:00 a.m. to 11:30 a.m., I was doing my homework. And I was having a rest from 1:00 p.m. to 2:00 p.m. From 2:30 to 4:30 in the afternoon, I was playing soccer with my friends on the school playground. We were very happy. From 7:30 p.m. to 9:00 p.m., I was watching a movie. It was an interesting movie and I wanted to watch it again. I went to bed at 9:30 p.m.
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