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八下Unit6話題寫作指導
寫作任務
假設你是李華，上周末你和父母去廈門度假。請根據表格信息，以My trip to Xiamen為題，寫一篇不少于80詞的短文，回顧一下你們的旅行經歷。要求：開頭已給出，不計入詞數。
題型分析
該寫作是一篇游記。時態通常用一般過去在時，描述感受時可用一般現在時；常用第一人稱。
思路點撥
本文可以分為三段來寫：
1. 第一段緊接著已給句子，交代如何到達廈門，可描述一下當時的天氣情況；
2. 第二段著重寫在廈門所游覽的景點、做了什么；
3. 第三段寫印象，感受。
范文參考
My trip to Xiamen
I had a two-day trip to Xiamen with my parents last weekend. We went there by train. The weather was really nice.
We visited many places, such as Xiamen University and Horticulture Expo Garden. Everything was as beautiful as I imagined. We also went to the museum by subway. There we learnt a lot about Xiamen. What's more, we took the ferryboat to Gulang Island. There were many kinds of delicious food on the island. After dinner, we walked along the beach and enjoyed the soft sand and the blue sea. We took a lot of photos and had a good time.
Xiamen is a fantastic city. The seafood is wonderful. The local people is very friendly. I hope one day I can visit there again.引申
寫作任務
“五一”勞動節就要來了，你打算和好朋友去上海旅游。請根據思維導圖，寫一篇短文介詞此次旅行計劃。要求：80詞左右；開頭已給出，不計入詞數。
題型分析
該寫作主要是寫未來的旅行計劃，故時態通常用一般將來時，描述當下心情時可用一般現在時；常用第一人稱。
思路點撥
本文可以分為兩段來寫，提示詞僅供參考：
1. 第一段緊接著已給句子，結合思維導圖，寫旅行計劃；
plan to…；be going to…；decide to…
2. 第二段寫對這次旅行的期待、心情。
have fun; can't wait to
范文參考
I'm very excited because May Day is coming. I'm going on a three-day visit to Shanghai with my good friend. We will go there by plane. We are going to visit the Disneyland. I'd like to take some photos with Mickey Mouse. We also plan to visit the museum and the Oriental Pearl Tower. When the night falls, we can take a ship to travel around Huangpu River. After that, we decide to do some shopping. There are many kinds of food in Shanghai, we can enjoy the local food and buy some for our friends.
I think we will have fun in Shanghai. We can't wait to go there.
寫作任務
假如你是李華，你的筆友Ben計劃來你的家鄉——一個福建東部的海濱小城旅行。你建議他騎自行車游城。請結合以下內容，寫一封信向他介紹自行車旅行的好處，以及騎車時該如何保證安全。要求：80詞左右。作文要包含以下要點，并適當拓展。
1. 自行車方便好停，不擁擠；
2. 自行車環保，不導致空氣污染；
3. 騎車時要戴頭盔，靠右行駛；
4. 遵守交規，注意安全。
題型分析
該寫作任務，要求敘述騎行的優點，另一方面，還要闡述交通安全事項。應用一般現在時寫作。
思路點撥
本文可以分為四段來寫，提示詞僅供參考：
1. 第一段接著已給句子，簡單介紹自己的家鄉：
lie in
be famous for
2. 第二段寫騎行的優勢：
It's better to…
You don't need to…
What's more,
3. 第三段寫騎行時應注意的事項,并總結：
pay attention to
it's necessary to
in a word
4. 最后一段為書信結語。
I'm looking forward to meeting you.
范文參考
Dear Ben,
I'm really excited to know that you will come to my hometown for your holiday. My hometown lies in the east of Fujian. It's famous for its beach.
My hometown is not very big, and the buses are often crowded with passengers. So it's better to travel by bike. You don't need to worry about the parking lot because a bicycle is easy to park. What's more, it's good for environment and does not cause air pollution.
But when you ride a bike on the road, you should pay attention to the traffic around you. It's necessary to wear a helmet. It can protect your head. Remember to ride on the right side of the road. In a word, the most important way to keep safe is that you must obey the traffic rules and be careful.
I'm looking forward to meeting you soon!
Yours,
Li Hu
寫作任務
隨著生活質量的提高，越來越多的家庭都擁有了小汽車。在汽車給生活帶來便利的同時，交通事故的發生也越來越頻繁。那我們要注意哪些問題，如何保證自身的安全呢？根據下列材料，寫一篇80詞左右的短文。開頭已給出，不計入總詞數。
1. 不在馬路上玩耍，走人行道（sidewalk）；
2. 遵守交規，看清信號燈；
3. 騎行要戴好頭盔，靠右行駛；
4. 其它建議。
題型分析
該作文是一篇提綱作文，寫作思路清晰。通常用第一人稱和一般現在時進行寫作。
思路點撥
本文可以分為三段來寫，提示詞僅供參考：
1. 第一段接著已給出的現狀描述，拋出問題，為下文做鋪墊；
How do we keep safe…？
What should we do to keep safe…？
2. 第二段寫具體的建議，在路上要注意的事項；
First…Second…What's more…Finally
3. 第三段進行總結，呼吁大家遵守交規。
In a word…
If we obey the traffic rules, we can…
范文參考
Now there are more and more vehicles on the road, so the traffic accidents happen more often. As students, how do we keep safe on the way to school or home
First, we mustn't play on the road. It's quite dangerous. Second, we should walk on the sidewalk and pay attention to the traffic lights. Never run the red light. What's more, we should wear helmets when riding. If we ride at night, we had better wear light-colored clothes. We should remember to ride on the right-hand side of the road.
In a word, if we are careful and obey the traffic rules, we can keep safe.

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