資源簡介

八上Unit1話題寫作指導
描述我最喜愛的運動項目My Favorite Sport
寫作任務
假設你是李華，請以“My Favorite Sport”為題，寫一篇不少于80詞的短文。要求如下：
1. 你今年14歲，最喜歡的運動是游泳；
2. 你每周游泳兩次，每次游一小時；
3. 你認為游泳能使你的心肺健康，并且是保持健康的好方法；
4. 你最喜歡的運動員是孫楊，將來，你也想成為像他那樣的運動員。
題型分析
該作文是一篇說明文，介紹自己最喜歡的運動。故用一般現(xiàn)在時。
思路點撥
本文可以分為三段來寫，提示詞僅供參考：
1. 第一段介紹自己的基本信息，姓名，年齡及最喜歡的運動；
My favorite sport is…
I like doing sports, but I like…best.
2. 第二段介紹自己游泳的頻次，以及游泳的好處，可適當補充；
help to keep…h(huán)ealthy;
be good for; a good way to
3. 介紹自己最喜歡的運動員，表達對將來的期許。
My favorite player is…
I hope…；I'm going to be…
grow up; in the future
范文參考
I'm Li Hua. I'm fourteen years old. I like doing sports, but my favorite sport is swimming.
I often go swimming with my best friend. I swim twice a week. I think swimming can help to keep my heart and lungs healthy. It's also a good way to keep fit.
My favorite player is Sun Yang. He is a famous swimming player. He is cool. I am going to be a player like him in the future.
School Sports Meet
寫作任務
請根據(jù)以下提示材料，寫一篇不少于80詞的短文。
1. 假如你是李華。你的學校將于下周舉行運動會；
2. 你們將會帶上運動衣、運動鞋；
3. 舉例幾個參加運動會的同學以及他們的優(yōu)勢項目；
4. 其他同學會去為你們加油；
5. 表達你對運動會的祝愿、期許。
題型分析
該作文是一篇記敘文。應用第一人稱和第三人稱。該文的主要時態(tài)為一般將來時。
思路點撥
本文可以分為三段來寫，提示詞僅供參考：
1. 第一段交代事件，及準備工作；
There is going to be…;
take; look forward to; be excited about
2. 第二段介紹參加運動會的同學，及所參加項目，可拓展；
take part in; will be in;
be good at; try/do one's best;
first time to…；cheer…on
3. 表達對運動會的期許，希望自己班能贏。
I'm sure… I hope…
范文參考
There is going to be a school sports meet next week. We will take our sports clothes and sports shoes. Everyone is excited about it. / Everyone is looking forward to it.
Jim is good at running. He will take part in the boys' 800-meter race. Lin Yu doesn't like running, but she likes jumping. So she will be in the long jump and the high jump. Mary is going to be in the relay race. It's her first time to take part in the sports meet. She will do her best. I'm preparing for the girls' 400-meter race. I won't lose. Other classmates will come to cheer us on.
I'm sure the sports meet will be exciting, and I hope our class will win.
寫一篇關于校運會的日記
寫作任務
請根據(jù)以下提示材料，寫一篇不少于80詞的日記。
1. 你們學校上周舉辦了運動會，每個人都很激動，因為你們班贏了；
2. 介紹你同學及你自己參加比賽的情況；
3. 你更愛運動了，并希望有一天能參加奧運會。
題型分析
該作文為日記體裁，要注意格式。且時態(tài)主要為一般過去時，個別句子會用到一般現(xiàn)在時或一般將來時，要注意把握。
思路點撥
1. 日記格式，要在第一行寫明日期，天氣；
2. 第一段可交代基本信息，運動會的舉辦，贏得了第一名；
hold a sports meet; win first place;
3. 第二段可介紹一下你同學，你自己參加運動會的具體情況；
run fast; do well in;
cross the finish line;
be sorry that; do better
4. 第三段表達你更加熱愛運動了，并期待有一天能參加奧運會。
some day; in the future;
can; be able to
范文參考
Friday, November 1st Sunny
Our school held a sports meet last week. Everyone in our class felt excited because we won first place.
Lin Yu did well in the high jump and she won. Jim ran very fast and he was the first to cross the finish line. We are sorry that we did badly in the relay race because one of our classmates fell down. We are sure we'll do better next time.
I took part in the boys' 400-meter race. I did my best and won the first prize. Now I love sports more. I will practice more and I hope some day I can take part in the Olympic Games.

展開更多......

收起↑