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Environmental Protection單元話題微寫作 Name：
以下是關于環保類讀后續寫的分步寫作指導：
明確故事背景：了解故事發生的時間、地點、人物以及他們與環保主題的初始關聯。例如，故事可能發生在一個被污染的小鎮，主人公是一群熱愛家鄉的學生；或者是在一片即將被砍伐的森林，主角是護林員等。
梳理情節線索：確定已有的關鍵事件，如主人公發現了某種嚴重的環境問題，像河流被污染魚兒大量死亡、野生動物棲息地因城市擴張而遭破壞等；同時留意人物的情感態度，他們可能一開始是震驚、憤怒，或者是無奈，這些情緒將推動后續情節發展。
確定續寫方向與主題深化。如果前文是孩子們發現家鄉河流污染，那么后續可以寫他們決定組織起來，向社區宣傳環保知識，發起清理河流行動；若主角是科學家，發現森林生態失衡，后續就可寫他如何尋找解決辦法，聯合各方力量開展生態修復工程。
主題上要進一步升華，不僅僅停留在解決表面環境問題，可探討人與自然和諧共生的深層意義，如人們在環保過程中心靈得到凈化，重新認識到大自然的價值，從而改變生活方式，長久守護家園等。
規劃段落結構
第一段：開頭要自然承接上文，比如使用過渡性語句 “He/She/They decided to take action immediately after seeing...”（他 / 她 / 他們在看到…… 之后決定立即采取行動），延續故事的緊張感與連貫性。
描述主人公為環保采取的具體初步行動，如成立環保小組，制定初步計劃，包括分工、行動時間和地點等。例如：“Tom and his friends quickly gathered in the schoolyard and formed an environmental protection group. Tom, being good at public speaking, took on the role of spokesperson to spread the word. Meanwhile, Lucy, with her artistic skills, was tasked with designing eye-catching posters to attract more people's attention.”（湯姆和他的朋友們迅速在校園里集合，成立了一個環保小組。湯姆擅長演講，便擔當起發言人的角色去宣傳；與此同時，有著藝術才能的露西負責設計醒目的海報，吸引更多人的關注。）
展現人物在行動過程中的心理變化，從最初的擔憂、焦慮轉向充滿干勁與希望，為下一段深入行動鋪墊，如：“With every step they took, their confidence grew, knowing that they were making a difference for their beloved environment.”（隨著他們一步步前行，他們的信心也在增長，因為他們知道自己正在為心愛的環境做出改變。）
第二段：開頭承接第一段結尾的積極氛圍，進一步推進情節，可以寫行動遇到的困難，如資金短缺、部分居民不配合等，增加故事的曲折性：“However, just as things were starting to look up, they encountered a major setback. The local factory, which was one of the main polluters, was reluctant to make changes due to high costs.”（然而，就在情況開始好轉之際，他們遇到了一個重大挫折。當地一家作為主要污染源之一的工廠，由于成本高昂，不愿做出改變。）
描述主人公如何克服困難，體現他們的堅韌與智慧，這是展現人物性格、深化主題的關鍵環節，比如：“Undeterred, the group launched a public campaign, appealing to the factory owners' sense of social responsibility. They also organized a boycott of the factory's products until changes were made.”（小組毫不氣餒，發起了一場公開運動，呼吁工廠主的社會責任感。他們還組織了對該工廠產品的抵制活動，直到工廠做出改變。）
結尾要收束整個故事，達成環保目標，營造美好愿景，讓讀者感受到環保行動的力量與希望，如：“In the end, through their combined efforts, the river was restored to its former clarity, the fish returned, and the community came together to protect their environment for good. The children's dreams of a clean and green world had finally come true.”（最后，通過他們的共同努力，河流恢復了往日的清澈，魚兒回來了，社區也團結起來永久地...
Appreciate and Review:（山東省青島市2022-2023學年高三下學期一模英語試題）
兩姐妹海灘撿垃圾
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“So many plastic bags around! The beach is dirty and messy! It’s so terrible! We have lost the clean and beautiful beach. Can’t we do something to get it back ” Melati said heartily. Isabel felt a bit puzzled at what to do, but she also had a strong desire to do something. Picturing a beach as fascinating as before in mind, the pair jumped with joy.
They talked a lot, anxious to know how Dad and Mom would respond to their ideas. That night when the family sat by the dinner table, the sisters eagerly got their ideas across. While Mom and Dad listened to the girls carefully, their eyes shone. “How amazing that would be! We are so proud of you!” Dad exclaimed. Mom came up, gave them a thumb up and hugged the sisters.
Para 1: Melati and Isabel decided to make a positive impact straight away.
Para 2 One month later, Melati received a call from the local newspaper.
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Melati and Isabel decided to make a positive impact straight away. With the help of their parents, the sisters started an activity named "Bye Bye Plastic Bags". Designing posters, printing leaflets, they hoped to remind people of the previous fascinating beach and stop them from littering(v. 扔垃圾). Initially, it seemed like no one was listening. However, the sisters refused to give up. Days turned into weeks and the activity gradually gathered momentum(勢頭). More and more people in their community started to join in.
梅拉蒂和伊莎貝爾決定立刻產生積極的影響。在父母的幫助下，姐妹倆發起了一項名為 “再見，塑料袋” 的活動。她們設計海報、印制傳單，希望能讓人們想起昔日迷人的海灘，并阻止人們亂扔垃圾。起初，似乎沒人理會。然而，姐妹倆拒絕放棄。日子一天天過去，幾周時間過去了，這項活動逐漸有了聲勢。她們社區里越來越多的人開始加入進來。
One month later, Melati received a call from the local newspaper. The editor was excited to tell her that their activity had gone viral on social media. People from over the world devoted themselves to "Bye Bye Plastic Bags" activity. As a result, more beaches were cleaned and got their fascinating scenery back. Melati and Isabel could hardly believe that their small action did make a difference. What they initially wanted was just a cleaner beach, but what they got might be a cleaner earth.
一個月后，梅拉蒂接到了當地報社打來的電話。編輯興奮地告訴她，她們的活動在社交媒體上迅速走紅。來自世界各地的人們都投身到 “再見，塑料袋” 這項活動中。結果，更多的海灘得到了清理，又恢復了迷人的景色。梅拉蒂和伊莎貝爾幾乎不敢相信，她們小小的行動竟然產生了影響。她們最初想要的只是一個更干凈的海灘，但最終收獲的可能是一個更清潔的地球。
Exercise（拉布拉多海邊撿垃圾）：
Everyone in the seaside town knows that Fliss has a special bond with her dog Molly. They work together, live together, and play together. The Labrador is literally at Fliss’s side all the time. If a person spent this much time with a friend, they would probably have fallen out by now, but the bond between Molly and her owner just gets stronger over time.
Fliss grew up in a city. In 2017, she moved to the seaside where she opened a bath and skincare shop. Upon arrival, she couldn’t believe how much litter was left “senselessly” on the beach. In fact, she was shocked by the “unavoidable” amount of litter she found while taking Molly for walks. Being a person who cares a lot about her surroundings, Fliss decided that she had to do something about it before the tide carried the litter into the sea, threatening marine life.
One day, while collecting litter on the beach, Fliss saw Molly running towards her with an empty water bottle in her mouth. As Molly drew near, she dropped the bottle at Fliss’s feet and set out to find other waste. This gave Fliss an idea: what if she could train Molly to find all those plastic bottles and bags, and make good use of them
The training started and Fliss was surprised at how fast Molly learned. Before long, the clever girl would venture to the seaside on her own and come home with her “prize”. She had soon filled Fliss’s house with pieces of rubbish from the local beach. At one point, Fliss’s garage was 60% filled with beach litter waiting to be distributed to local artists for use in their artworks.
When Fliss heard paws on the door the other day, she went to greet her good girl as usual. To her surprise, she saw Molly carrying a small plastic purse in her mouth. Fliss opened the purse and gasped (倒抽氣). Inside was a passport, several credit cards, and a bunch of keys.
注意：1. 續寫詞數應為150左右； 2. 請按如下格式作答。
Fliss immediately took the purse to the local police station. ______________________________
When the joumalist came, the two were on the beach. ________________________________
Possible version for paragraphy 1：
Fliss immediately took the purse to the local police station with Molly. She explained how Molly had found the purse and the police officers were amazed by Molly's cleverness.Shortly afterwards, the officers managed to track down the owner, who was a jounalist on vacation and had accidentally dropped the purse on the beach. Overwhelmed with gratitude when the police returned the lost items, the owner kept thanking Fliss and Molly for their honesty and kindness. Moreover, he extended sincere requirement to interview Fliss. Without hesitation, Fliss made an appointment with him.
弗利斯立刻帶著莫莉前往當地警察局。她解釋了莫莉是如何在海灘上發現錢包的，警察們對莫莉的發現感到驚訝，并稱贊她聰明。不久之后，警察設法找到了失主，失主是一位記者，他在這個海濱小鎮度假時不小心弄丟了錢包。當警察歸還失物時，失主感激萬分，不停地感謝弗利斯和莫莉的誠實和善良。此外，他真誠地請求采訪弗利斯。弗利斯毫不猶豫地與他約好了時間。
Possible version for paragraphy 2：
When the journalist came, they two were on the beach. Fliss told the journalist it was on the way to collecting litterthat Molly had found the purse. Hearing this, Molly stopped, wagging hertail as if she understood the whole situation. Having learned about the whole story, especially Molly's extraordinary skill, the journalist felt a strong sense of duty arising---If a dog could care for the environment,why not people The camera clicked, capturing the scene of a dog who had become a symbol of environmental change. Fliss smiled, knowing that their journey was far from over, but the impact they had made would resonate far and wide.
記者到來時，他們倆正在海灘上。弗利斯告訴記者，莫莉是在去撿垃圾的路上發現這個錢包的。聽到這話，莫莉停了下來，搖著尾巴，好像它明白整個情況似的。了解了整個故事，尤其是莫莉的非凡技能后，記者涌起了強烈的責任感 —— 如果一只狗都能關心環境，為什么人不行呢？相機咔嚓作響，拍下了這只已成為環境變化象征的狗的場景。弗利斯微笑著，知道她們的征程遠未結束，但她們所產生的影響將深遠地回蕩。
原文鏈接--
Labrador Molly becomes 'celebrity' in seaside town thanks to her unique talent
A determined dog has become famous for picking up litter on her local beach with its proud owner Fliss
A littler-picking labrador has proved she's a true retriever after collecting 250,000 pieces of rubbish from her local beach.
Pooch Molly has developed such a special bond with owner Fliss she has been able to train her to find plastic bottles, ropes, spades, buckets, and toys. And the inseparable duo have become famous in Scarborough for their ongoing efforts cleaning up the coastline 365 days a year.
Hailing her furry friend, Fliss, 35, said: "I can’t take credit for her great work, she’s the best dog and it’s really just the way she is."She’s my best bud, we work together, live together, play together, she’s at my side literally all the time. If I spent this much time with a human we would have fallen out by now, but the bond between a dog and their owner just gets stronger over time.
"She’s super chilled, always up for an adventure and has to say hello to every single person and dog she meets. Molly is just a brilliant dog, I often wonder how I got so lucky, she has a beautiful, happy soul and has changed my life for the better.
"The funny thing is she still doesn’t know the difference between an empty discarded bottle and a bottle that is still full which has led to some interesting situations. "She’ll sometimes come back to me with a full bottle and I’ll look across the beach and there’ll be a confused person wondering why this dog has just stolen their drink. "Her intentions are good though, and she’s just trying to do the right thing. Thankfully no one ever gets angry because she’s so cute!"
Fliss said Molly picks up so many pieces of litter every day, the items have started to take over her home and workplace. She explained: "I could probably fill a wheelie bin every week or two with what we collect. At one point my garage was probably 60% filled with beach litter waiting to be distributed to local artists for use in artwork/sculptures etc.
"I also save any buckets/spades/beach toys that can be reused, and let tourists borrow them for the day - so my shop also has a couple of hundred of these which takes up quite a bit of space."Fliss has shared her inspiring story as part of IAMS' latest campaign celebrating the magic of pets and the individuality of each animal. She said Molly loves tucking into her breakfast bowl before a busy day doing her extra special job for the community. "It's so important to give dogs a healthy, nutritious and balanced diet, which will keep them going all day!" she told us.
"Molly needs it when she's up and down the beach - the exercise is great for her as well."
IAMS champion the joy of your pet’s healthy vitality. It's not simply visible health or your dog’s happiness; it is a powerful combination of the two together. And that’s why IAMS want to help the nation’s pets live healthy, active and happy lives through the expert nutrition they truly enjoy. No compromise.
Fliss moved to the seaside in 2017 where she opened a bath and skincare shop - but she couldn’t believe how much litter she found left "senselessly" on the beach and said she was shocked and appalled by the “unavoidable” amount of litter she found while taking Molly for walksShe added: "Molly's such a good girl and she’s never had any issues unless she spots a tennis ball - tennis balls take precedence over everything."It’s particularly alarming on the beach because people will drop rubbish in the sand, and then it’s a battle against the tides to beat them to it.
"Once the tide comes in the litter is gone and will make its way into the sea and threaten our marine life."If you’re a business here, who relies on people coming to the beach, I think you’ve got a responsibility to protect it." "We get stopped all the time by people who think it’s adorable that she’s cleaning. She gets so much attention and she loves it, she knows she’s a bit of a star. "Unfortunately Molly can’t clean the beach on her own, but she’s trying."We want to get people involved or at least make them think twice before disposing of their litter so carelessly.
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(2024·江蘇蘇北二模)每年的3月22日是“世界水日”(World Water Day)，上周日上午你校學生會組織部分青年志愿者走上街頭開展公益宣傳活動。假定你是李華，請你為校英文報寫一篇報道。內容包括：1.活動目的；2.活動內容；3.活動反響。
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A Youth Volunteer Activity Celebrating World Water Day
World Water Day falls on March 22 every year. Last Sunday，some young student volunteers，organized by the Student Union，took to the streets to celebrate and advertise World Water Day.
Firstly，they handed out leaflets to the citizens to lecture about World Water Day. Later，public speeches about the importance of protecting water resources were given by some volunteers.
This activity turned out to be a huge success.Not only did these activities arouse people’s great interest in World Water Day，but also they raised their awareness of water resources protection.
練習：單元話題作文(倡議書——創建綠色和諧校園)
1.根據提示，利用本單元所學知識完成作文
①我們都渴望生活在一個綠色和諧的校園里。(starving，harmonious)
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②我們學校正在開展一項運動來喚起學生的低碳生活意識。(campaign，carbon)
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③毫無疑問，我們學生應該為建設美麗的校園貢獻自己的一份力。(contribute to，there is no/little doubt that)
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④在食堂時，排隊買食物是有禮貌的，我們不應該容忍浪費食物。(tolerate，it作形式主語)
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⑤為了保持校園整潔，不隨地亂扔垃圾或隨地吐痰，否則會造成校園臟亂。(lead to/contribute to，不定式作狀語，非限制性定語從句)
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⑥我們應該對不同種類的垃圾進行分類，以減少污染。(garbage)
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Keys：
①我們都渴望生活在一個綠色和諧的校園里。(starving，harmonious)
We are all starving to live in a green and harmonious campus.
②我們學校正在開展一項運動來喚起學生的低碳生活意識。(campaign，carbon)
Our school is launching a campaign to arouse students’ awareness of living a low carbon life.
③毫無疑問，我們學生應該為建設美麗的校園貢獻自己的一份力。(contribute to，there is no/little doubt that)
There is no/little doubt that we students should do our bit to contribute to a beautiful campus.
④在食堂時，排隊買食物是有禮貌的，我們不應該容忍浪費食物。(tolerate，it作形式主語)
While in the canteen，it’s good manners to queue up for food and we should never tolerate wasting food.
⑤為了保持校園整潔，不隨地亂扔垃圾或隨地吐痰，否則會造成校園臟亂。(lead to/contribute to，不定式作狀語，非限制性定語從句),
To keep a clean campus，never litter anywhere or spit around，which will otherwise lead to/contribute to a messy campus.
⑥我們應該對不同種類的垃圾進行分類，以減少污染。(garbage)
We should classify different kinds of garbage to reduce pollution.

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