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【期末復習（上）】Unit 1—Unit 5話題寫作指南（含范文+點評）【人教八年級上冊英語】
【典例導引】
【剖析】
假日活動是本單元涉及的話題內容，也是大家非常熟悉的一個寫作話題。寫這種記敘文時要根據事情發生的順序展開。此類話題作文寫作的
【常用表達】
(1).I went to...
(2).We took quite a few photos.
(3).It was wonderful.
(4).We all had a good time.
【典例】
假如上周末你和班上的同學到方山玩,你們玩得很快樂。請以“My happy weekend”為題，根據下面的提示寫一篇短文。
時間:星期天早上8點 集合地點:學校門口
路程:騎自行車到達目的地約 30分鐘 活動:拍照,玩游戲，野餐
感受:大家都度過了一個快樂的周末 ... ...
要求:1.詞數:80左右(短文開頭已給出,不計人總詞數);
2.短文必須包含所給提示,但不得逐條翻譯。
參考詞匯:get together, ride, photo, games, picnic
My happy weekend
Last weekend, my classmates and I went to Fangshan. We enjoyed ourselves very much.
【模板】這是一篇表格提示類作文,時態為一般過去時，根據題目要求及提示可考慮采用下面的模板。
【范文】
My happy weekend
Last weekend, my classmates and I went to Fangshan. We enjoyed ourselves very much.①
At 8:00 on Sunday morning②, we got together③ at the school gate. When all of us arrived, we started. We liked riding, so we went there by bike. After about 30 minutes' ride, we got there. We found a beautiful place to have a rest. And we took quite a few photos and played games together. When we felt a little hungry, we took out our food to have a picnic. Everyone ate a lot.
All in all We all had a good time④.
【點評】
①文章開門見山,提出了上周末做的事情。
②以時間為主線敘述了上個周末發生的事情。
③get together, by bike,take ...photos 等詞組的運用讓行文更加流暢。
④文章結尾表達了對本次活動的感受。
【期末復習】Unit 2話題寫作指南（含范文+點評）【人教八年級上冊英語】
【典例導引】
【剖析】
本單元的話題是“日常及課余活動”,與之相關的話題作文常常與“生活習慣”或“健康生活”有關。圍繞鍛煉、飲食等方面談論活動頻率。寫這類話題作文時最好開篇就點題,提出自己的觀點,然后再闡述自己的理由。
【常用表達】
(1)... is good for ..
(2).It is healthy for the mind and the body..
(3).It's good to do sth.
(4).It's+adj.+for sb.+to do ..
【典例】
請根據下面提示寫一篇論述“早起(early rising)”重要性的文章。
1.早起有益健康。
2.早起的具體好處:(1)可以做早操來鍛煉身體;(2)對學習有好處。
3.大家都應該養成早起的習慣。
要求:1.短文中應包含上面提示內容,但是不能逐條翻譯,可適當增加細節,以使行文連貫;
2.詞數:80 詞左右。
【模板】這是一篇提綱式作文,話題與本單元相符,根據題目要求及提示可考慮采用下面的模板。
【范文】
Early rising is important
Early rising is good for us in many ways.①
First②, it is healthy for the mind and the body. We can do morning exercises to keep us healthy③. It's also good to take a walk along the street.
Second②, early rising helps us with studies. When we get up very early in the morning , everything around is quiet. In the morning we can learn more quickly and memorize what we have learned easily.
Third②, early rising gives us enough time, so that③ we can have a relaxing breakfast.
So I think it's important for us to form the habit of getting up early.④
【點評】
①開門見山地提出了本文的論點——早起有益。
②first，second，third 分層次論證使得文章清晰、條理。
③be good for, keep sb.healthy，so that 的運用讓行文更加流暢。
④文章結尾作者表達了自已的看法給出了結論，既照應了開頭也重申了自己的觀點。
【期末復習】Unit 3話題寫作指南（含范文+點評）【人教八年級上冊英語】
【典例導引】
【剖析】
談論人的個性特征是本單元涉及的話題內容,也是大家非常熟悉的一個寫作話題。寫這種說
明文時要先確定說明的順序,一般會按照從外貌到性格,再到愛好等方面的順序對人物的個性特征進行描述。
【常用表達】
(1).I think ...
(2).She/He is ...than...
(3).A good friend likes to do the same things as me.
(4).It's (not) necessary to be the same.
【典例】
請你比較一下你和你的好朋友Alice之間的異同,可以從外貌、性格、愛好及學習等方面進行對
比。詞數不少于80。
【模板】這是一篇開放式作文,話題與本單元相符,根據題目要求及提示可考慮采用下面的模板。
【范文】
I have a good friend. Her name is Alice.①We are in the same class. In some ways, we are the same, but in some ways, we are different.②
I am as tall as③ Alice. But she is heavier than me. We both have black hair. But my hair is longer than③ hers. Alice is more outgoing than③ me. She likes sports. But I like music. She exercises every day and she is stronger than③ me. I am smarter than her. And I am better at English than③ her.
All in all,I don't think differences are important in a friendship.④
【點評】
①開門見山介紹朋友的姓名。
②巧妙過渡，介紹與朋友的相同和不同之處。
③as...as 和比較級的應用使文章更加自然、流暢。
④文章最后一句闡述了作者的朋友觀。
【期末復習】Unit 4話題寫作指南（含范文+點評）【人教八年級上冊英語】
【典例導引】
【剖析】
本單元以“你居住的城鎮”為話題,寫作時要求我們運用形容詞或副詞的原級、比較級和最高級
對比不同的事物,并表達自己喜歡的事物。
【常用表達】
(1).It has the best ..
(2).It's the most expensive.
(3).It's worse than Blue Moon.
【典例】
假如你是Tom,經常到學校附近的三家餐館吃飯,請根據表格中的內容,對這三家餐館進行對比,作一下簡單介紹。80詞左右。
Restaurants Prices Quality(質量) Service
Jason's cheapest worst not friendly
Miller's cheaper better friendly
Ham's expensive best friendliest
【模板】這是一篇表格提示類作文,文章須從價格、質量和服務三個方面對三家餐館進行對比,可考慮采用下面的模板。
【范文】
There are three restaurants near our school.
Of the three restaurants, I like Ham's best.①Because it has the best food. And it has the friendliest service of the three. However, people don't often eat there because the food there is the most expensive.②
I also like Miller's. The food there is cheaper than that in Ham's. And it has better food than Jason's.③ It also has friendly service. It is the most popular restaurant near our school.
As for Jason's, I don't like it. Though it's the cheapest, it has the worst food.④ And it doesn't have friendly service at all.
All in all,of the three restaurants,Ham's is my favorite.
【點評】
①開門見山,直接引出話題,并介紹自己最喜歡的一家餐館。
②運用however巧妙地轉折,使行文更流暢。
③形容詞比較級的運用為文章增加了亮點。
④though引導的讓步狀語從句的使用使文章句式靈活,體現了作者扎實的語言功底。
【期末復習】Unit 5話題寫作指南（含范文+點評）【人教八年級上冊英語】
【典例導引】
【剖析】
本單元的話題是“娛樂”,寫作要求學生能夠表達自己喜歡的電視節目,并發表自己的見解。在寫此類話題的作文時要掌握表達自己喜好或觀點的短語和句型,明確對某一事物的看法,并說明原因。
【常用表達】
(1).What do you think of ...
(2).I don't mind.
(3).I like to watch
(4).I can't stand
【典例】
你對朋友最喜歡的電視節目作了一次調查,以下是調查結果。請你就此調查結果寫一篇80詞
左右的短文,并闡述你自己的觀點。(開頭已給出,不計人總詞數)
Name Favorite TV shows Reasons
Judy soap operas 有趣,浪漫(romantic)
Alex sports shows 喜歡運動
Susan English shows 想學好英語;想提高聽力
I ... ... ... ...
【模板】這是一篇表格提示類作文,話題與本單元相符,根據題目要求及提示可考慮采用下面的模板。
【范文】
I asked some of my friends about their favorite TV shows. Here are their answers.①
Judy likes soap operas best because she thinks they are very funny and romantic. Alex's favorite TV shows are sports shows.② He likes doing sports and he wants to know more about sports. Susan likes to watch English shows. She likes English very much. She wants to learn it well and improve her listening.
As for③ me, I like talent shows. I don't mind③ English shows or sports shows but I can't stand③ soap operas because they are too boring.
【點評】
①開篇引出話題,簡潔明了。
②Judy likes ...best, Alex's favorite ...等句式的變化,避免了表達句式單一，增強了文章的可讀性。
③as for, don't mind, can't stand等短語的運用,體現了作者能學以致用，使文章意思連貫,表達準確。
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