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中考英語寫作培優課程講義 第七講
季節天氣類作文
進步目標
★★★★Level ④
通過學習和訓練，你能夠：
［1］識記季節天氣類主題寫作的重點詞匯、短語和句型，達到★☆☆☆級別；
［2］理解重點詞匯、短語的使用語境，達到★★☆☆級別；
［3］解答相關重點詞匯、短語和句型的題目，達到★★★☆級別；
［4］解答季節天氣類主題寫作真題，達到★★★★級別。
第一關 真題重現
★★★★Level 4
本關進步目標
解答季節天氣類主題寫作真題，達到★★★★級別。
過關練習
根據要求，完成短文寫作。
某中學生英文報正舉辦“The Season I Like Best”的征文活動，請用英文寫一篇100詞左右的短文用于投稿，內容包括：
你最喜歡的季節；
你喜歡該季節的理由（如氣候、景色、活動、感受……）。
The Season I Like Best
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第二關 文章精講
★★★☆Level 3
本關進步目標
［1］識記季節天氣類主題寫作的重點詞匯、短語和句型，達到★☆☆臺級別；
［2］理解重點詞匯、短語的使用語境，達到★★☆☆級別；
［3］解答相關重點詞匯、短語和句型的題目，達到★★★☆級別。
過關指南1
季節天氣類文章寫作框架
The Season I Like Best There is no doubt that I like spring best. In spite of the fact that it's rainy sometimes in spring, it can still bring us a lot of fun. What attracts me most about spring is that it's regarded as a symbol of life. As an old saying goes, “A year's plan starts with spring.” With spring coming, everything on the earth looks very fresh and is full of energy, which shows us a new look of the earth. When it comes to the activities in spring, there are a lot of things to do. The weather in spring is neither too hot nor too cold, which makes us very comfortable. Therefore, when spring comes, I prefer to go traveling and relax myself. Appreciating the beautiful scenery of spring, I can easily forget my tiredness and enjoy myself completely. In a word, spring is so wonderful that I think it's the most beautiful season in a year. So I like spring best. 文章點評：這是一篇季節天氣類主題寫作。 第一部分 1.天氣介紹:介紹該季節的天氣情況以及主要景色。 2.常見要點一:該季節的非凡意義。 第二部分 1.活動介紹:介紹在該季節可以進行的活動。 2.常見要點二:該季節的常見活動。 3.具體要求和注意事項:注意和上文的連貫性。 第三部分 個人觀點陳述。
參考譯文：
我最喜歡的季節
毫無疑問我最喜歡春天。盡管有偶爾下雨的事實，春天還是可以給我們帶來很多快樂。春天最吸引我的是它被認為是生命的象征。老話說：“一年之計在于春。”春天到了，大地上萬物都看起來
很清新，充滿能量，向我們展現大地的新風貌。
談及春天的活動，有很多事情可以做。春天的天氣既不太熱也不太冷，這讓我們很舒服。因此，春天一到，我更喜歡去旅行來放松自己。欣賞著春天的美景，我能夠輕松地忘記疲憊，自得其樂。
總之，春天是如此美妙，以至于我認為春天是一年中最美的季節。因此我最喜歡春天。
過關指南2
重點語塊
已掌握請打√ 中文釋義 英文語塊
毫無疑問 there is no doubt
吸引我 attract me
生命的象征 a symbol of life
老話；諺語 old saying
看起來很清新 look very fresh
讓我們舒服 make us comfortable
更喜歡做某事 prefer to do
開闊我的眼界 broaden my horizons
語塊升級
已掌握請打√ 中文釋義 常見語塊 升級語塊
盡管 although in spite of
被認為是 be seen as be regarded as
充滿能量 be full of power be full of energy
春天的活動 the things in Spring the activities in Spring
欣賞美景 enjoy the beautiful views appreciate the beautiful scenery
待在家 stay at home stay in doors
很多種 many kinds of a variety of
Exercise
請結合括號內給出的提示信息，轉換句子表達。
Red leaves are seen as a symbol of autumn. (be regarded as)
Red leaves are regarded as a symbol of autumn.
Although it’s raining heavily, mailmen are still working. (in spite of)
In spite of the heavy rain, mailmen are still working.
I would like to go to the mountains to enjoy the beautiful views during the holiday. (appreciate the beautiful scenery)
I would like to go to the mountains to appreciate the beautiful views during the holiday.
When it’s raining outside, people can only stay at home. (indoors)
When it’s raining outside, people can only stay indoors.
In autumn, we can harvest many kinds of fruits. (a variety of)
In autumn, we can harvest a variety of fruits.
過關指南3
句型升級——參照高級句型仿寫句子
句型1：毫無疑問我最喜歡春天。
There is no doubt that I like spring best.
使用場景：句型“There is no doubt that...”表示“毫無疑問·····”，通常位于表達的觀點之前，用于強調力度。that后為一個完整的句子，即需要強調的內容。
句型2：盡管有偶爾下雨的事實，春天還是可以給我們帶來很多快樂。
In spite of the fact that it's rainy sometimes in spring, it can still bring us a lot of fun.
使用場景：句型“In spite of the fact that.......”表示“盡管有······的事實，······”，通常用來表達轉折前的讓步，突出后半句。that后接完整的句子，為讓步的條件，與fact為同位成分，是事實的內容；逗號后接完整的句子，為句子真正強調的內容。
句型3：春天最吸引我的是它被認為是生命的象征。
What attracts me most about spring is that it's regarded as a symbol of life.
使用場景：句型＂What attracts me most about...is...”表示“……最吸引我的是······”，通常用于內容的引入，介紹吸引自己的點。is之后接名詞結構或that從句，內容為吸引“我”的具體內容；about后接名詞結構，即吸引人的點的歸屬對象。
Exercise
運用下列句型仿寫句子。
句型1：There is no doubt that...
毫無疑問，秋天是我最喜愛的季節。
There is no doubt that autumn is my favorite season.
毫無疑問，冬天人們在戶外需要穿大衣。
There is no doubt that people need to wear coats outside in winter.
毫無疑問，夏天降雨最多。
There is no doubt that there is the most rainfall in summer.
毫無疑問，昆明四季如春。
There is no doubt that the weather is spring all the year round in Kunming.
毫無疑問，春天是生命的象征。
There is no doubt that spring is the symbol of life.
句型2：In spite of the fact that……
盡管冬天寒冷，戶外活動也是必要的。
In spite of the fact that winter is cold, outdoor activities are necessary.
盡管夏天炎熱，還是有很多理由讓我們喜歡夏天。
In spite of the fact that summer is hot, there are still many reasons for us to love it.
盡管沙漠干燥，但還是有一些植物在那里生長。
In spite of the fact that the desert is dry, some plants grow there.
盡管驕陽似火，但工人們依然在工作。
In spite of the fact that the sun is scorching, workers are still working.
盡管天氣轉涼，但松葉依然翠綠。
In spite of the fact that the weather turns cold, pine leaves are still green.
句型3：What attracts me most about...is...
夏天最吸引我的是長假。
What attracts me most about summer is the long vacation.
冬天最吸引我的是堆雪人。
What attracts me most about winter is making snowmen.
春天最吸引我的是蝴蝶的翩翩起舞。
What attracts me most about spring is the dancing of butterflies.
秋天最吸引我的是漫天的落葉。
What attracts me most about autumn is the falling leaves in the air.
冬天最吸引我的是在冰封的湖面上滑冰的快樂。
What attracts me most about winter is the joy of skating on the frozen lake.
過關指南4
句型升級——運用擴句技巧擴寫句子
擴句技巧：擴引入
原句：有很多事情可以做。
There are a lot of things to do.
擴寫：談及春天的活動，有很多事情可以做。
When it comes to the activities in spring, there are a lot of things to do.
Exercise
請根據題干提示，擴寫句子。
原句：我最喜歡夏天。
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擴解釋：談到我最愛的季節，我最喜歡夏天。
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原句：I like summer best.
擴解釋：When it comes to my favorite season, I like summer best.
原句：有一個有趣的對比。
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擴解釋：談到人們的衣著，有一個有趣的對比。
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原句：There’s an interesting contrast.
擴解釋：When it comes to people’s clothes, there’s an interesting contrast.
原句：我認為秋天最美。
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擴解釋：談到季節，我認為秋天最美。
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原句：I think autumn is the most beautiful.
擴解釋：When it comes to seasons, I think autumn is the most beautiful.
原句：我完全是個門外漢。
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擴解釋：當談到音樂，我完全是個門外漢。
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原句：I’m a complete stranger.
擴解釋：When it comes to music, I'm a complete stranger.
原句：化工產業污染最嚴重的產業之一。
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擴解釋：當談到環境污染問題，化工產業是污染最嚴重的產業之一。
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原句：The chemical industry is one of the most polluting industries．
擴原因：When it comes to pollution, the chemical industry is one of the most polluting industries.
第三關 真題演練
★★★★Level 4
本關進步目標
解答季節天氣類主題寫作真題，達到★★★★級別。
過關練習1
根據要求，完成短文寫作。
以“Summer—My Favorite Season”為題寫一篇關于夏天的短文。
要求：
（1）說明你喜歡夏天的原因（包括天氣、景色、戶外活動等）；
（2）80詞左右。
Summer—My Favorite Season
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【范文】
Summer-My Favorite Season
When it comes to my favorite season, there is no doubt that I like summer best.In spite of the fact that summer is a little hot,there are so many reasons to love it. With the sunny weather most of the time, summer is regarded as a symbol of passion. Beautiful flowers and green trees make it even more enjoyable.
What attracts me most about summer is the long vacation, because I can do a variety of outdoor activities without worrying about my homework, such as camping, swimming, going to the beach and so on. Every summer, I go traveling here and there, which can not only relax myself, but also broaden my horizons.
In short， summer is so meaningful for me and I like it best.
【參考譯文】
說到我最愛的季節，毫無疑問我最喜歡夏天。盡管夏天有點熱，但我還是有很多理由去愛它。由于大部分時間天氣晴朗，夏天被認為是熱情的象征。美麗的鮮花和翠綠的樹木讓它更加怡人。
夏天最吸引我的是長假，因為我不用擔心作業，可以進行很多種戶外活動，例如露營、游泳、
去海灘等等。每年夏天，我都會到處旅行，這樣不僅可以放松自己，還可以開闊我的眼界。
總之，對我而言夏天很有意義，我最喜歡夏天。
過關練習2
根據要求，完成短文寫作。
在冬季，你家鄉的天氣怎么樣？人們在這樣的天氣里都干什么？請根據提示詞寫一篇介紹你家鄉冬天的短文。
提示詞：winter n. 冬天；ski v. 滑雪；skate v. 滑冰；windy and cold 多風寒冷； wear coats and scarves穿大衣、戴圍巾；do exercise 鍛煉；in the park在公園；make snowmen堆雪人
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【范文】
Winter is usually windy and cold in my hometown. The temperature can reach 20 degrees below zero. It snows heavily sometimes, and that's when people can appreciate the greatest scenery around the year.
When it comes to people's clothes in winter, there's an interesting contrast.There's no doubt that people wear coats and scarves outdoors, but when they stay indoors, T-shirts and shorts are fairly comfortable.
People still need to go out to enjoy the fresh air, especially when the sun comes out.
There are a variety of outdoor activities in winter. Elder people like going out to do exercise in the park while children like skiing and skating. When it snows,people prefer making snowmen or having a snow fight. The ice festival is another way to enjoy yourselves,which attracts not only local people, but also tourists from far away.
【參考譯文】
在我的家鄉，冬天通常多風寒冷。溫度可以低至零下二十度。有時會下大雪，這時人們可以欣賞到一年中最美的景色。
談到冬天人們的衣著，有一個有趣的對比。毫無疑問人們在戶外會穿大衣、戴圍巾，但是當他們待在家時，穿體恤和短褲就很舒服了。不過人們還是需要出門感受新鮮空氣，尤其是在太陽出來的時候。
冬天的戶外活動豐富多彩。老年人喜歡到公園鍛煉，孩子則喜歡滑雪和滑冰。下雪時，人們喜歡堆雪人或打雪仗。冰雪節是另外一種消遣的方式，它不僅吸引了本地人，也吸引了很多遠方的游客。中考英語寫作培優課程講義 第七講
季節天氣類作文
進步目標
★★★★Level ④
通過學習和訓練，你能夠：
［1］識記季節天氣類主題寫作的重點詞匯、短語和句型，達到★☆☆☆級別；
［2］理解重點詞匯、短語的使用語境，達到★★☆☆級別；
［3］解答相關重點詞匯、短語和句型的題目，達到★★★☆級別；
［4］解答季節天氣類主題寫作真題，達到★★★★級別。
第一關 真題重現
★★★★Level 4
本關進步目標
解答季節天氣類主題寫作真題，達到★★★★級別。
過關練習
根據要求，完成短文寫作。
某中學生英文報正舉辦“The Season I Like Best”的征文活動，請用英文寫一篇100詞左右的短文用于投稿，內容包括：
你最喜歡的季節；
你喜歡該季節的理由（如氣候、景色、活動、感受……）。
The Season I Like Best
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第二關 文章精講
★★★☆Level 3
本關進步目標
［1］識記季節天氣類主題寫作的重點詞匯、短語和句型，達到★☆☆臺級別；
［2］理解重點詞匯、短語的使用語境，達到★★☆☆級別；
［3］解答相關重點詞匯、短語和句型的題目，達到★★★☆級別。
過關指南1
季節天氣類文章寫作框架
The Season I Like Best There is no doubt that I like spring best. In spite of the fact that it's rainy sometimes in spring, it can still bring us a lot of fun. What attracts me most about spring is that it's regarded as a symbol of life. As an old saying goes, “A year's plan starts with spring.” With spring coming, everything on the earth looks very fresh and is full of energy, which shows us a new look of the earth. When it comes to the activities in spring, there are a lot of things to do. The weather in spring is neither too hot nor too cold, which makes us very comfortable. Therefore, when spring comes, I prefer to go traveling and relax myself. Appreciating the beautiful scenery of spring, I can easily forget my tiredness and enjoy myself completely. In a word, spring is so wonderful that I think it's the most beautiful season in a year. So I like spring best. 文章點評：這是一篇季節天氣類主題寫作。 第一部分 第二部分 第三部分
過關指南2
重點語塊
已掌握請打√ 中文釋義 英文語塊
毫無疑問
吸引我
生命的象征
老話；諺語
看起來很清新
讓我們舒服
更喜歡做某事
開闊我的眼界
語塊升級
已掌握請打√ 中文釋義 常見語塊 升級語塊
盡管 although
被認為是 be seen as
充滿能量 be full of power
春天的活動 the things in Spring
欣賞美景 enjoy the beautiful views
待在家 stay at home
很多種 many kinds of
Exercise
請結合括號內給出的提示信息，轉換句子表達。
Red leaves are seen as a symbol of autumn. (be regarded as)
Although it’s raining heavily, mailmen are still working. (in spite of)
I would like to go to the mountains to enjoy the beautiful views during the holiday. (appreciate the beautiful scenery)
When it’s raining outside, people can only stay at home. (indoors)
In autumn, we can harvest many kinds of fruits. (a variety of)
過關指南3
句型升級——參照高級句型仿寫句子
句型1：毫無疑問我最喜歡春天。
There is no doubt that I like spring best.
使用場景：句型“There is no doubt that...”表示“毫無疑問·····”，通常位于表達的觀點之前，用于強調力度。that后為一個完整的句子，即需要強調的內容。
句型2：盡管有偶爾下雨的事實，春天還是可以給我們帶來很多快樂。
In spite of the fact that it's rainy sometimes in spring, it can still bring us a lot of fun.
使用場景：句型“In spite of the fact that.......”表示“盡管有······的事實，······”，通常用來表達轉折前的讓步，突出后半句。that后接完整的句子，為讓步的條件，與fact為同位成分，是事實的內容；逗號后接完整的句子，為句子真正強調的內容。
句型3：春天最吸引我的是它被認為是生命的象征。
What attracts me most about spring is that it's regarded as a symbol of life.
使用場景：句型＂What attracts me most about...is...”表示“……最吸引我的是······”，通常用于內容的引入，介紹吸引自己的點。is之后接名詞結構或that從句，內容為吸引“我”的具體內容；about后接名詞結構，即吸引人的點的歸屬對象。
Exercise
運用下列句型仿寫句子。
句型1：There is no doubt that...
毫無疑問，秋天是我最喜愛的季節。
毫無疑問，冬天人們在戶外需要穿大衣。
毫無疑問，夏天降雨最多。
毫無疑問，昆明四季如春。
毫無疑問，春天是生命的象征。
句型2：In spite of the fact that……
盡管冬天寒冷，戶外活動也是必要的。
盡管夏天炎熱，還是有很多理由讓我們喜歡夏天。
盡管沙漠干燥，但還是有一些植物在那里生長。
盡管驕陽似火，但工人們依然在工作。
盡管天氣轉涼，但松葉依然翠綠。
句型3：What attracts me most about...is...
夏天最吸引我的是長假。
冬天最吸引我的是堆雪人。
春天最吸引我的是蝴蝶的翩翩起舞。
秋天最吸引我的是漫天的落葉。
冬天最吸引我的是在冰封的湖面上滑冰的快樂。
過關指南4
句型升級——運用擴句技巧擴寫句子
擴句技巧：擴引入
原句：有很多事情可以做。
There are a lot of things to do.
擴寫：談及春天的活動，有很多事情可以做。
When it comes to the activities in spring, there are a lot of things to do.
Exercise
請根據題干提示，擴寫句子。
原句：我最喜歡夏天。
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擴解釋：談到我最愛的季節，我最喜歡夏天。
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原句：有一個有趣的對比。
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擴解釋：談到人們的衣著，有一個有趣的對比。
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原句：我認為秋天最美。
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擴解釋：談到季節，我認為秋天最美。
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原句：我完全是個門外漢。
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擴解釋：當談到音樂，我完全是個門外漢。
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原句：化工產業污染最嚴重的產業之一。
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擴解釋：當談到環境污染問題，化工產業污染最嚴重的產業之一。
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第三關 真題演練
★★★★Level 4
本關進步目標
解答季節天氣類主題寫作真題，達到★★★★級別。
過關練習1
根據要求，完成短文寫作。
以“Summer—My Favorite Season”為題寫一篇關于夏天的短文。
要求：
（1）說明你喜歡夏天的原因（包括天氣、景色、戶外活動等）；
（2）80詞左右。
Summer—My Favorite Season
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過關練習2
根據要求，完成短文寫作。
在冬季，你家鄉的天氣怎么樣？人們在這樣的天氣里都干什么？請根據提示詞寫一篇介紹你家鄉冬天的短文。
提示詞：winter n. 冬天；ski v. 滑雪；skate v. 滑冰；windy and cold 多風寒冷； wear coats and scarves穿大衣、戴圍巾；do exercise 鍛煉；in the park在公園；make snowmen堆雪人
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