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高中英語
應用文寫作-建議信
01
PART1
Dear Jack,
I am sorry to hear that you’re having trouble adjusting to your high school life. I’m writing to offer you some useful suggestions.
Actually, many freshmen are confused about high school life, so there is no need to worry about it too much. To begin with, I suggest that you sign up for extra-curricular activities, which can help you make more new friends. In this way you won’t feel lonely and your school life will become colorful and interesting. Besides, it would be wise if you make a good schedule and focus on improving your study. As a teenager, it is necessary to study well.
I hope my suggestions will be of great benefit to you.
應用文寫作
思
1.詞匯積累
做某事有困難：
have difficulty (in) doing sth.→ have trouble (in) doing sth.
困惑的：puzzled→confused
有用的，有幫助的：helpful →useful
專注于：concentrate on→ focus on
思
句型亮點
簡單句變復合句
簡單句：Secondly, you should make a good schedule and focus on improving your study.
升級復合句：Besides, I suggest that you make a good schedule and focus on improving your study.
句式拓展
1.I am sorry to hear that you’re having trouble adjusting to your high school life.
(運用了that 引導的賓語從句)
To begin with, I suggest that you sign up for extra-curricular activities, which can help you make more new friends.
(運用了that 引導的賓語從句和which引導的非限制性定語從句)
高分句型
思
讀后續寫
02
PART1
Step 1
Read the text
1. 閱讀下面材料，根據其內容和所給段落開頭語續寫兩段，使之構成一篇完整的短文。
Monday started out great. I woke up on time, ate breakfast and did some last minute studying for my first hour math test. I was confident of getting good grades. Then I left my house. Ten minutes later, I was settled with my friends on the school bus. We were busy chatting about how we spent our weekend. At one stop, Fat Ryan got on hurriedly. He tripped over someone's foot accidentally and THUMP! He fell flat onto the floor.
Every one of us on the bus looked on and laughed crazily. Ryan struggled to his feet, dusted the jacket and made his way to an empty seat. He tried to laugh with us, but his face was burning with embarrassment. The rest of the morning flew by. I did well in my math test. I read two more chapters of To Kill a Mockingbird in English class. It wasn't long before there went the lunch bell. I met my friends from the cheerleading team(啦啦隊) in the dining hall. Then I couldn't help but notice Ryan a few tables away, sitting all alone. He caught me looking. I smiled at him quickly and looked away.
When we finished eating, we headed out to the courtyard to practice a cheer we would do at that night's football game. After a little practice, we nailed the cheer, so we decided we only needed to go through it one last time. Again, just like the rest of my day so far, the cheer was going great. I raised my leg for one last toe touch. RIIIPPP! I felt my jeans split down the middle of my backside.
I froze. I had no idea what to do but stand still. Then I heard people burst out laughing, and I saw them pointing at my torn jeans. Trying to cover myself with my hands, I tried to laugh too, but I felt tears began to well up in my eyes.
注意：
1. 續寫詞數應為150左右；
2. 請按如下格式在答題卡的相應位置作答。
Paragraph 1:
Then I saw Ryan running towards me.
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That night, after the cheer at the football game, I found Ryan.
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Step 2
Summary
【分析】本文以人物為線索展開，講述了同學Ryan由于被絆倒而遭到作者和其他同學的嘲笑，而后來作者也遇到了尷尬事，牛仔褲從中間裂開了，這時，Ryan迅速過來幫助，令作者非常感激的故事。
Step 3
Read the ending
【詳解】
①由第一段首句內容“然后我看到Ryan朝我跑過來。”可知，第一段可描寫作者擔心Ryan會報復，事實是，Ryan是來幫忙的。
②由第二段首句內容“那天晚上，在足球比賽的歡呼聲過后，我找到了Ryan。”可知，第二段可描作者找到Ryan后，向他道歉并致謝，并成為好朋友。
Step 4
Find the clues
續寫線索：
擔心報復——幫助解決——致歉感謝——
成為好友——開心
Step 5
Write the ending
Paragraph 1:
Then I saw Ryan running towards me. Suddenly the scene struck me where he fell flat and I laughed at him crazily. I thought this would be his chance to shame me. I lowered my head, my face burning with embarrassment. But unexpectedly Ryan didn‘t laugh. Instead, he approached me from behind, took off his jacket swiftly and offered it to me, signaling to me to cover my torn jeans. Without any delay, I did it. Struggling against my tears, I did want to express my gratitude to him but courage failed me. In total silence, I left the courtyard.（承上啟下）
Paragraph 2:
That night, after the cheer at the football game, I found Ryan. I thanked him, giving the jacket back to him and telling him the cheer went great. Then gathering my courage, I sincerely apologized to him for my misconduct on the bus and thanked him again for his helping me out of the desperate situation. Ryan, with a broad smile, patted me on the shoulder and told me to forget about that, joking he fell like that a lot. Hearing that, I was amused and convinced that he was someone I would be friends with. Honestly, Monday was a great day indeed!（呼應前文）
詞匯亮點
struck
shame
unexpectedly
approached
signal sb. to do...
Without any delay
Struggling against my tears
express my gratitude to him
courage failed me
with a broad smile
patted me on the shoulder
1. I lowered my head, my face burning with embarrassment. (運用了獨立主格)
2.Then gathering my courage, I sincerely apologized to him for my misconduct .（運用了現在分詞做狀語)
高分句型
思
謝謝觀看
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