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Lucas had always prided himself on being the go-to guy for fixing things. Whether it was a leaky faucet ora broken toy, his friends knew he could tackle any problem that came his way.But today was different—he faced a challenge that made his palms sweat.
It was Saturday morning, and Lucas had promised his younger sister, Mia, that they would spend the day working on her science project—amodel of the solar system. The night before, they had gone to the local craft store, excitedly picking out paints, foam ( 泡 沫 ) balls, and a varietyof materials. Mia could hardly contain her eagerness to present the project at school onMonday, and Lucas was determined to help her make it impressive.
However, disasters struck as they began putting together the model. Lucas had intended to use a thin piece of wood for the base, but he accidentally dropped it, and the wood ended up in two pieces. At the sight of the broken base, Lucas felt as if his heartmissed a beat. Mia's face fell, and her enthusiasm faded like a distant star.
"Lucas! What are we going to do " she exclaimed, her eyes wide with disappointment.
“Okay, let's not panic,” he replied, striving to keep his voice steady. “We can fix this. Let's just think it through.”
Lucas surveyed the mess on the floor. The broken pieces lay scattered next to the colorful foam balls they had painted with care. They needed a stable base for the model, but there was no extra wood on hand. Unfortunately, the craft store was closed for the weekend, and there was no way he could ask their parents for help—Mom and Dad were still at work.
"Mia," Lucas suddenly said, a spark of inspiration flashing into his mind," how about we use that old coffee table in the garage "
注意 ：
1.續(xù)寫(xiě)詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150個(gè)左右；
2.請(qǐng)按如下格式在答題卡的相應(yīng)位置作答。
第一段：Mia was confusedby her brother's suggestion
第二段：“Now we can start building the model!” Mia cheered.
文章大意：
Lucas 向來(lái)擅長(zhǎng)修理東西，周六他答應(yīng)幫妹妹 Mia 做太陽(yáng)系模型用于學(xué)校展示。然而在制作過(guò)程中，用于做底座的薄木板意外斷裂，而工藝品店周末關(guān)門，父母也在上班無(wú)法求助。關(guān)鍵時(shí)刻，Lucas 提議用車庫(kù)里的舊咖啡桌，這讓 Mia 感到困惑，但 Lucas 已有計(jì)劃將其改造為合適的底座，隨后兩人便著手行動(dòng)，最終完成了一個(gè)漂亮的模型。
伏筆以及在續(xù)寫(xiě)中的回應(yīng)：
伏筆：“Lucas had always prided himself on being the go-to guy for fixing things.”（Lucas 一直為自己是修理東西的能手而自豪。）
回應(yīng)：為后文他面對(duì)木板斷裂的困境時(shí)積極想辦法解決問(wèn)題做鋪墊，體現(xiàn)出他不輕易放棄的性格特點(diǎn)，盡管遇到困難，依然憑借自己的能力去克服，回應(yīng)了他 “修理能手” 的人設(shè)。
伏筆：“The night before, they had gone to the local craft store, excitedly picking out paints, foam (泡沫) balls, and a variety of materials.”（前一天晚上，他們興奮地去當(dāng)?shù)氐墓に嚻返晏暨x了顏料、泡沫球和各種材料。）
回應(yīng)：這些材料在后續(xù)制作模型過(guò)程中被再次提及和使用，如用顏料給代表行星的泡沫球上色，以及用這些材料裝飾改造后的咖啡桌底座，使故事前后連貫，突出了他們?yōu)橹谱髂Ｐ退龅臏?zhǔn)備工作沒(méi)有白費(fèi)。
伏筆：“Unfortunately, the craft store was closed for the weekend, and there was no way he could ask their parents for help—Mom and Dad were still at work.”（不幸的是，工藝品店周末關(guān)門了，而且他沒(méi)辦法向父母求助 —— 爸爸媽媽還在上班。）
回應(yīng)：這就迫使 Lucas 必須想其他辦法解決底座問(wèn)題，從而引出用舊咖啡桌這一解決方案，推動(dòng)了故事情節(jié)的發(fā)展，增加了故事的波折性。
伏筆：“Mia could hardly contain her eagerness to present the project at school on Monday, and Lucas was determined to help her make it impressive.”（Mia 迫不及待地想在周一在學(xué)校展示這個(gè)項(xiàng)目，Lucas 決心幫她把它做得令人印象深刻。）
回應(yīng)：在續(xù)寫(xiě)中，通過(guò)兩人努力克服困難完成模型，滿足了 Mia 想要展示的愿望，同時(shí)也體現(xiàn)出 Lucas 對(duì)妹妹的承諾和幫助，呼應(yīng)了兩人的初始目標(biāo)和情感動(dòng)機(jī)。
伏筆：“Lucas had intended to use a thin piece of wood for the base, but he accidentally dropped it, and the wood ended up in two pieces.”（Lucas 原本打算用一塊薄木板做底座，但他不小心把它弄掉了，木板斷成了兩塊。）
回應(yīng)：這直接導(dǎo)致了故事的矛盾沖突，引出后面尋找替代底座的情節(jié)，而用舊咖啡桌替代木板成為解決這一沖突的關(guān)鍵，使故事圍繞解決底座問(wèn)題展開(kāi)，情節(jié)更加緊湊。
續(xù)寫(xiě)要點(diǎn)：
第一段：詳細(xì)描述 Mia 對(duì)使用舊咖啡桌的困惑和質(zhì)疑，如她認(rèn)為咖啡桌太大太丑，不適合做模型底座。接著 Lucas 耐心地向她解釋自己的改造計(jì)劃，包括如何拆卸咖啡桌、選取合適的部分、用砂紙打磨使其光滑以及用顏料將其漆成與太陽(yáng)系模型相匹配的顏色，通過(guò)兩人的對(duì)話和動(dòng)作展現(xiàn)出他們解決問(wèn)題的思考過(guò)程和決心。
第二段：重點(diǎn)描寫(xiě)兩人按照計(jì)劃動(dòng)手改造咖啡桌并制作模型的過(guò)程。可以描述他們分工合作，Lucas 負(fù)責(zé)切割和打磨，Mia 幫忙準(zhǔn)備工具和顏料，以及在這個(gè)過(guò)程中遇到的小困難和如何克服它們。最后展現(xiàn)完成后的模型的樣子，突出其精美和獨(dú)特，體現(xiàn)出他們的努力得到了回報(bào)，兩人的喜悅之情溢于言表。
情感線：
起初，Lucas 和 Mia 對(duì)制作模型充滿期待和興奮；當(dāng)木板斷裂時(shí)，Mia 感到失望，Lucas 則有些緊張但仍保持鎮(zhèn)定；在提出用舊咖啡桌的方案后，Mia 從困惑轉(zhuǎn)為信任，Lucas 則充滿信心；最后完成模型時(shí)，兩人都無(wú)比喜悅和自豪，完成了從期待到失望再到喜悅自豪的情感轉(zhuǎn)變，突出了在困難面前通過(guò)努力和合作獲得成功的情感體驗(yàn)。
故事線：
Lucas 答應(yīng)幫 Mia 做太陽(yáng)系模型，制作中木板底座斷裂，因店鋪關(guān)門和父母不在無(wú)法求助，Lucas 提議用舊咖啡桌，Mia 雖困惑但同意，兩人改造咖啡桌并完成模型，完整地講述了一個(gè)面對(duì)困難解決問(wèn)題完成任務(wù)的故事，情節(jié)跌宕起伏，引人入勝。
主旨升華句：
In the face of difficulties, creativity and determination are the keys that unlock the door to success.（面對(duì)困難時(shí)，創(chuàng)造力和決心是開(kāi)啟成功之門的鑰匙。）
Every setback is an opportunity in disguise, leading us to discover new solutions and grow stronger.（每一次挫折都是偽裝的機(jī)會(huì)，引領(lǐng)我們發(fā)現(xiàn)新的解決方案并變得更強(qiáng)大。）
When we put our minds together and persevere, even the most unlikely materials can be transformed into something wonderful.（當(dāng)我們齊心協(xié)力并堅(jiān)持不懈時(shí)，即使是最不可能的材料也能變成美妙的東西。）
The journey of solving problems is not just about the destination, but also about the valuable lessons and unbreakable bonds we form along the way.（解決問(wèn)題的過(guò)程不僅在于結(jié)果，還在于我們?cè)谕局行纬傻膶氋F經(jīng)驗(yàn)和牢不可破的紐帶。）
True ingenuity lies in finding beauty and functionality in the most unexpected places, turning challenges into triumphs.（真正的獨(dú)創(chuàng)性在于在意想不到的地方發(fā)現(xiàn)美和功能，將挑戰(zhàn)轉(zhuǎn)化為勝利。）
兩篇寫(xiě)作示范：
第一篇：
Mia was confused by her brother's suggestion. She wrinkled her nose and stared at the old, dusty coffee table in the garage. "How can we use that It's so old and dirty. It'll ruin my project!" she cried. Lucas smiled reassuringly. "Trust me, Mia. We'll take it apart and cut out just the right piece. Then we'll sand it until it's smooth as silk and paint it to look like outer space. It'll be perfect!" Mia still looked doubtful, but she nodded. Lucas fetched some tools, and they got to work. With a bit of effort, they managed to detach a suitable section of the tabletop. As Lucas sanded, Mia watched in amazement as the rough wood began to transform.
“Now we can start building the model!” Mia cheered. She eagerly grabbed the painted foam balls while Lucas continued to prepare the base. They glued the planets in place, carefully arranging them according to their relative sizes and distances. Mia added some glitter to represent the stars, and Lucas used a thin wire to hang a small styrofoam sun at the center. When they finally stepped back to admire their creation, it was a sight to behold. The coffee table base now looked like a beautiful cosmic backdrop, and the model was even better than they had hoped. Mia hugged Lucas tightly. "You're the best brother ever! We did it!" This experience taught them that with a little creativity and a lot of determination, they could overcome any obstacle and turn it into something amazing.
第二篇：
Mia was confused by her brother's suggestion. She crossed her arms and eyed the dilapidated coffee table with suspicion. "That thing It's falling apart! How will it work for my project " Lucas chuckled. "We'll salvage the good parts, Mia. We'll cut it down to size, sand off the rough edges, and paint it a deep black with some silver swirls to look like the galaxy. It'll be unique!" Mia's eyes widened a bit as she imagined it. She hesitantly agreed, and together they dragged the table into the yard. Lucas carefully dismantled it, selecting the sturdiest piece. They spent the next hour sanding and painting, their hands getting dirty but their spirits high.
“Now we can start building the model!” Mia cheered. She handed Lucas the painted planets one by one as he attached them to the newly transformed base. They added some small plastic astronauts and satellites to enhance the display. As they worked, they laughed and shared ideas, forgetting about the initial setback. When the model was complete, it was a work of art. The coffee table had been reborn as a stunning platform for the solar system. Mia beamed with pride. "Thanks to you, Lucas, this project is going to be a huge hit!" This adventure showed them that setbacks are just stepping stones to greater achievements, and that with teamwork and innovation, they could make the impossible possible.
參考答案
Mia was confused by her brother's suggestion, Lucas continued, “We need to cut the table down to the size of the base." At his words, Mia's eyes lit up with excitement. He led her to the garage, where the coffee table stood, dusty but solid. Once they dragged the table into the sunlight and gave it a quick wipe, they set about measuring and marking the dimensions they needed carefully. It was quite a challenge, but through some efforts, they finally had a flat piece that would work perfectly for the model.
“Now we can start building the model!” Mia cheered. They spent the next few hours attaching the foam balls each representing a planet to the base, painting them brilliant colors, and adding labels. By late afternoon, the model was completed, and they had turned a disaster into a memorable experience of problem-solving. Mia stood back, hands on her hips admiring their work, “It looks fantastic! Thanks, Lucas!” He smiled, a sense of satisfaction welling up inside him. It was their resolve and teamwork that saved the day.

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